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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5423309/49/A-Star-to-Steer-Her-By Retribution]]'' is written by KCS Scribbler.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5423309/49/A-Star-to-Steer-Her-By Retribution]]'' is written by KCS Scribbler.Creator/{{KCS}}.
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Capitalization was fixed from Fan Fic.Retribution to Fanfic.Retribution. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Spock uses a question to get Kirk to give up his self-blame.
-->'''Kirk''': Spock, you weren't in your right mind!
-->'''Spock''': And today, Captain, ''today'' -- were you?
-->'''Kirk''': Spock, you weren't in your right mind!
-->'''Spock''': And today, Captain, ''today'' -- were you?
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* DroppingTheBombshell: As the conversation goes on and Kirk refuses to respond, Spock says something which shocks the captain.
-->Captain, no possible offense you could ever commit against my person could ever come close to equaling murder.
-->Captain, no possible offense you could ever commit against my person could ever come close to equaling murder.
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After the events of "[[Recap/StarTrekS2E12TheDeadlyYears The Deadly Years]]", Spock seeks out his captain to talk about an incident which hurt them both.
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After the events of "[[Recap/StarTrekS2E12TheDeadlyYears The Deadly Years]]", Spock seeks out his captain to talk about an incident which hurt them both. But the effort to repair their battered friendship may bring up disturbing events from the past.
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* SleepCute: Kirk falls asleep against Spock at the end of the fanfic.
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* SleepCute: Kirk falls asleep against Spock at the end as he meditates. Spock doesn't mind, until [=McCoy=] wanders in to check on them and snaps a picture of the fanfic.it.
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* DeathSeeker: Spock remembers "welcom[ing] death itself" after apparently murdering Kirk.
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* DeathSeeker: DrivenToSuicide: Spock remembers "welcom[ing] death itself" after apparently murdering Kirk.
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''[[http://kcscribbler.livejournal.com/374602.html Retribution]]'' is written by KCSScribbler.
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''[[http://kcscribbler.livejournal.com/374602.html Retribution]]'' is written by KCSScribbler.KCS Scribbler.
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After the events of "The Deadly Years", Spock seeks out his captain to talk about an incident which hurt them both.
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After the events of "The "[[Recap/StarTrekS2E12TheDeadlyYears The Deadly Years", Years]]", Spock seeks out his captain to talk about an incident which hurt them both.
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* InsultToRocks: Kirk comments that he isn't a coward; he's worse, because a coward wouldn't have been bold enough to call Spock a traitor to his face.
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* DeathSeeker: Spock remembers "welcom[ing] death itself" after apparently murdering Kirk.
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* FixFic: It was written to smooth over the hostile scene between Kirk and Spock during the episode.
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* StunnedSilence: Kirk is "surprised temporarily beyond words" by Spock's guilt confession, because he cannot see how Spock can take the blame for something he did while not himself.
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* NotSoStoic: Kirk spends most of the fic depressed. Spock actually ''raises his voice'', scaring his friend, just before mentioning his guilt over the ''kal-i-fee''.
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* NotSoStoic: Kirk spends most of the fic depressed. Spock actually ''raises his voice'', scaring intimidating his friend, just before mentioning his guilt over the ''kal-i-fee''.
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* SleepCute: Kirk falls asleep against Spock at the end of the fanfic.
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* SleepCute: Kirk falls asleep against Spock at the end of the fanfic.fanfic.
* SuddenlyShouting: Spock actually raises his voice in frustration.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Kirk is sitting "with his knees drawn up to his chest" when Spock enters the room.
* SuddenlyShouting: Spock actually raises his voice in frustration.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Kirk is sitting "with his knees drawn up to his chest" when Spock enters the room.
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* NotSoStoic: Kirk, who spends most of the fic depressed, and Spock, who admits his mental shields aren't up to snuff yet.
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* NotSoStoic: Kirk, who Kirk spends most of the fic depressed, and Spock, who admits depressed. Spock actually ''raises his mental shields aren't up to snuff yet.voice'', scaring his friend, just before mentioning his guilt over the ''kal-i-fee''.
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* HurtComfortFic: Kirk and Spock console each other over some of the lower points in their friendship.
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* {{Forgiveness}}: Spock forgives Kirk for his earlier accusations of treachery because he knows the captain was NotHimself and forces Kirk to forgive himself by reminding him that Kirk forgave him for much worse.
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* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Kirk seems determined to blame himself for his harsh words to Spock...only to find out that Spock has similar feelings about "Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime."
* CallBack: The events of "Amok Time" come up.
* CallBack: The events of "Amok Time" come up.
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* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Kirk seems determined to blame himself for his harsh words to Spock...only to find out that Spock has similar feelings about "Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime.nearly killing Kirk during "[[Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime Amok Time]]."
* CallBack:The events of Spock mentions the ''kal-i-fee'' from "Amok Time" come up. Time."
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''Retribution'' is written by KSCScribbler.
After the events of "The Deadly Years", Spock seeks out his captain to talk about an incident which hurt them both.
!! This fanfiction contains the following tropes:
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Kirk seems determined to blame himself for his harsh words to Spock...only to find out that Spock has similar feelings about "Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime."
* CallBack: The events of "Amok Time" come up.
* NotSoStoic: Kirk, who spends most of the fic depressed, and Spock, who admits his mental shields aren't up to snuff yet.
* NotHimself: Spock convinces Kirk to stop his self-blame by getting him to admit that he wasn't in his right mind.
* SleepCute: Kirk falls asleep against Spock at the end of the fanfic.
After the events of "The Deadly Years", Spock seeks out his captain to talk about an incident which hurt them both.
!! This fanfiction contains the following tropes:
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Kirk seems determined to blame himself for his harsh words to Spock...only to find out that Spock has similar feelings about "Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime."
* CallBack: The events of "Amok Time" come up.
* NotSoStoic: Kirk, who spends most of the fic depressed, and Spock, who admits his mental shields aren't up to snuff yet.
* NotHimself: Spock convinces Kirk to stop his self-blame by getting him to admit that he wasn't in his right mind.
* SleepCute: Kirk falls asleep against Spock at the end of the fanfic.
