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* DarkFic: Normally, Smile Precure is a very sugary sweet anime (considered to be a sugarized version of ''Anime/YesPrecureFive''). Given the amount of suffering Yayoi is forced to endure followed by her FaceHeelTurn and the deaths[=/=]imprisonment of so many characters, this was ''definitely'' a darker take on the show.
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* DarkFic: Normally, Smile Precure is a very sugary sweet anime (considered to be a sugarized version of ''Anime/YesPrecureFive'').''Anime/YesPrettyCure5''). Given the amount of suffering Yayoi is forced to endure followed by her FaceHeelTurn and the deaths[=/=]imprisonment of so many characters, this was ''definitely'' a darker take on the show.
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* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko and Migiko]]. [[spoiler:[[BecomingWhatYouHate Yayoi eventually becomes this herself]].]]
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* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko and Migiko]]. [[spoiler:[[BecomingWhatYouHate [[spoiler:[[HeWhoFightsMonsters Yayoi eventually becomes this herself]].]]
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* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko and Migiko]]. [[spoiler:Yayoi eventually becomes this herself.]]
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* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko and Migiko]]. [[spoiler:Yayoi [[spoiler:[[BecomingWhatYouHate Yayoi eventually becomes this herself.herself]].]]
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'', another Madoka CrossOver by the same author, and ''{{Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'', another Madoka CrossOver Above]]'' and ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkies Shattered Skies]]'', both unrelated MagicalGirl [[CrossOver CrossOvers]] by the same author, and ''{{Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Homura and Madoka at the end. It is literally the scene where Homura (in her {{Moe}}mura form) first found out about the Puellae Magi.]]
* CurbstompBattle: Yayoi[=/=]Sunder vs. ''anyone''; she wins hands down, even the Precures she was originally destined to fight with. [[spoiler:Mami vs. Yayoi[=/=]Sunder ends with the latter's {{Mook}}s being decimated in seconds by the former's [[MemeticMutation Unlimited Musket Works]] followed by Yayoi getting trapped in Mami's ribbons.]]
* DarkFic: AND HOW! Normally, Smile Precure is a very sugary sweet anime (considered to be a sugarized version of ''Anime/YesPrecureFive''). Given the amount of suffering Yayoi is forced to endure followed by her FaceHeelTurn and the deaths[=/=]imprisonment of so many characters, this was ''definitely'' a darker take on the show.
* CurbstompBattle: Yayoi[=/=]Sunder vs. ''anyone''; she wins hands down, even the Precures she was originally destined to fight with. [[spoiler:Mami vs. Yayoi[=/=]Sunder ends with the latter's {{Mook}}s being decimated in seconds by the former's [[MemeticMutation Unlimited Musket Works]] followed by Yayoi getting trapped in Mami's ribbons.]]
* DarkFic: AND HOW! Normally, Smile Precure is a very sugary sweet anime (considered to be a sugarized version of ''Anime/YesPrecureFive''). Given the amount of suffering Yayoi is forced to endure followed by her FaceHeelTurn and the deaths[=/=]imprisonment of so many characters, this was ''definitely'' a darker take on the show.
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* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Homura and Madoka at the end. It is literally the scene where Homura (in her {{Moe}}mura form) first found out about the Puellae Magi.]]
* CurbstompBattle: Yayoi[=/=]Sunder vs. ''anyone''; she wins hands down, even the Precures she was originally destined to fight with. [[spoiler:Mami vs. Yayoi[=/=]Sunder ends with the latter's {{Mook}}s being decimated in seconds by the former's[[MemeticMutation Unlimited Musket Works]] Works followed by Yayoi getting trapped in Mami's ribbons.]]
* DarkFic:AND HOW! Normally, Smile Precure is a very sugary sweet anime (considered to be a sugarized version of ''Anime/YesPrecureFive''). Given the amount of suffering Yayoi is forced to endure followed by her FaceHeelTurn and the deaths[=/=]imprisonment of so many characters, this was ''definitely'' a darker take on the show.
* CurbstompBattle: Yayoi[=/=]Sunder vs. ''anyone''; she wins hands down, even the Precures she was originally destined to fight with. [[spoiler:Mami vs. Yayoi[=/=]Sunder ends with the latter's {{Mook}}s being decimated in seconds by the former's
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* FromBadToWorse: '''AND HOW!''' [[spoiler: First, Arisu's bullying reaches a peak and Yayoi contracts with Kyubey to get the power to take revenge. Then she discovers the limits of her powers and accidentally kills Arisu. Next, her attempts at hero work only serve to drive her increasingly insane as she traps more and more people in her sketchbook. Finally, she has a massive MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes, from Mami, that she had become the very thing she hated: A bully and a villain. This all leads to her vanishing and eventually turning into the Witch Izabel.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: '''AND HOW!''' [[spoiler: First, Arisu's bullying reaches a peak and Yayoi contracts with Kyubey to get the power to take revenge. Then she discovers the limits of her powers and accidentally kills Arisu. Next, her attempts at hero work only serve to drive her increasingly insane as she traps more and more people in her sketchbook. Finally, she has a massive MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes, from Mami, that she had become the very thing she hated: A bully and a villain. This all leads to her vanishing and eventually turning into the Witch Izabel.]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: It was mentioned in passing that one of her victims was a harlequin who worked alongside Wolfrun for the Bad End Kingdom. He is clearly [[CompleteMonster Joker]]. Arisu doesn't count since she was killed before Yayoi hadn't started turning evil by then.
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]] [[CompleteMonster Joker]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]] [[CompleteMonster Joker]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: It was mentioned in passing that one of her victims was a harlequin who worked alongside Wolfrun for the Bad End Kingdom. He is clearly [[CompleteMonster Joker]].Joker. Arisu doesn't count since she was killed before Yayoi hadn't started turning evil by then.
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]][[CompleteMonster Joker]], Joker, many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], March, ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone Anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]]
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* ShrinkingViolet: Yayoi, of course. Her shyness and inability to stand up to Arisu's bullying is what drives her to contract with Kyubey.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Yayoi, of course.Yayoi. Her shyness and inability to stand up to Arisu's bullying is what drives her to contract with Kyubey.
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* GenreSavvy: Yayoi knows all about the superhero genre. [[spoiler:Overlaps with WrongGenreSavvy by the end.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: '''AND HOW!''' [[spoiler: First, Arisu's bullying reaches a peak and Yayoi contracts with Kyubey to get the power to take revenge. Then she discovers the limits of her powers and accidentally kills Arisu. Next, her attempts at hero work only serve to drive her increasingly insane as she traps more and more people in her sketchbook. Finally, she has a massive MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes, from Mami, that she had become the very thing she hated: A bully and a villain. This all leads to her vanishing and eventually turning into the Witch Izabel.]]
* GenreSavvy: Yayoi knows all about the superhero genre. To wit, she adopts an alias ([[MeaningfulName Sunder]]) while transformed, keeps track of emergency lines via radio, made maps of the city to appear where there's trouble, and attacks criminals. [[spoiler:Overlaps with WrongGenreSavvy by the end.]]
* GenreSavvy: Yayoi knows all about the superhero genre. To wit, she adopts an alias ([[MeaningfulName Sunder]]) while transformed, keeps track of emergency lines via radio, made maps of the city to appear where there's trouble, and attacks criminals. [[spoiler:Overlaps with WrongGenreSavvy by the end.]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: It was mentioned in passing that one of her victims was a harlequin who worked alongside Wolfrun for the Bad End Kingdom. He is clearly [[CompleteMonster Joker]]. Arisu doesn't count since she was killed before Yayoi hadn't started turning evil by the time she killed her.
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: It was mentioned in passing that one of her victims was a harlequin who worked alongside Wolfrun for the Bad End Kingdom. He is clearly [[CompleteMonster Joker]]. Arisu doesn't count since she was killed before Yayoi hadn't started turning evil by the time she killed her.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillainWolfrun]], Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]] [[CompleteMonster Joker]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When hersoul Soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her
* NothingIsScarier: It is unknown what happened and how Akane was killed, but the implications are still there and the horror remains.
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* PhantomZonePicture: The pages of Yayoi's sketchbook. [[spoiler:Arisu ([[KilledOffForReal formerly), her posse, Wolfrun, numerous robbers, cops, her own mother, Cure Beauty, Candy, and Cure March are all confirmed to be prisoners.]]
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* PhantomZonePicture: The pages of Yayoi's sketchbook. [[spoiler:Arisu ([[KilledOffForReal formerly), her posse, Wolfrun, Akaoni, Majorina, Joker, numerous robbers, cops, her own mother, Cure Beauty, Candy, and Cure March are all confirmed to be prisoners.]]]]]]
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* RichBitch: Arisu. She is the daughter of a wealthy man.
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* RichBitch: Arisu. She is the daughter of a wealthy man.man and is a cruel JerkAss.
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder felt a heavy amount of remorse for her actions toward the end. Mami offered her one last chance of redemption, but Yayoi's despair reached a peak. She vanished from the area, but it is implied she had just fled and turned into a Witch later...]]
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* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Homura and Madoka at the end. It is literally the scene where Homura (in her {{Moe}}mura form) first found out about the Puellae Magi.]]
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* PhantomZonePicture: The pages of Yayoi's sketchbook. [[spoiler:Arisu ([[KilledOffForReal formerly), her posse, Wolfrun, numerous robbers, cops, her own mother, Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, and Cure March all all confirmed to be prisoners.]]
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* PhantomZonePicture: The pages of Yayoi's sketchbook. [[spoiler:Arisu ([[KilledOffForReal formerly), her posse, Wolfrun, numerous robbers, cops, her own mother, Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, and Cure March all are all confirmed to be prisoners.]]
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* DarkMagicalGirl: [[spoiler:Yayoi becomes this after her FaceHeelTurn. She had a tormented life before the contract and it only got worse as she discovered her powers and what they ''couldn't'' do. Finally, she snapped and and her sense of justice vanished only to be replaced with a cold outlook on life. Her past feelings continue to haunt her, though.]]
* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Girl]]: Cure March described Yayoi[=/=]Sunder as being nearly impossible to hurt and that only Cure Happy was capable of at least damaging her. Otherwise, they were on the run with nowhere to hide, and with an insane girl, who was supposed to be their friend, wanting them dead.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: It was mentioned in passing that one of her victims was a harlequin who worked alongside Wolfrun for the Bad End Kingdom. He is clearly [[CompleteMonster Joker]]. Arisu doesn't count since she was killed before Yayoi hadn't started turning evil by the time she killed her.
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* MadArtist: Yayoi becomes this as she tries desperately to sketch her victims back into existence. All that did was make {{Mook}}s for her.
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...]]
* MadArtist: Yayoi becomes this as she tries desperately to sketch her victims back into existence. All that did was make {{Mook}}s for her. [[spoiler:Her Witch form, Izabel, is described as such to the point where the trope name itself is used.]]
* MadArtist: Yayoi becomes this as she tries desperately to sketch her victims back into existence. All that did was make {{Mook}}s for her. [[spoiler:Her Witch form, Izabel, is described as such to the point where the trope name itself is used.]]
* {{Mook}}s: The Familiars reprise this role for the Witches. [[spoiler:Yayoi discovers that she can make these in the form of Sketches by drawing them in her sketchbook. These were the failed results of her attempts to draw her victims back to life and are described as mindless copies.]]
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* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler:Yayoi does this when she sees her Sempai fall unconscious before Wolfrun. The fact that she was revealed dead of unknown causes and the fact the Wolfrun wasn't trying to kill her followed by a Barrier appearing greatly implies the Smepai was also a Puella Magi.]]
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* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler:Yayoi does this when she sees her Sempai fall the unconscious before Wolfrun. The fact that she was revealed female High School student in the barrier. She only realizes the girl is dead of unknown causes and after the fact the Wolfrun wasn't trying to kill her followed by a Barrier appearing greatly implies the Smepai was also a Puella Magi.fades.]]
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* UncannyValley: Invoked InUniverse. The Sketches Yayoi creates were described as looking human enough, but their jerking motions and other odd movements made them utterly horrifying and disturbing to view, let alone fight. [[spoiler:Miyuki described Kyubey as being unnerving when she met him for the first time.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Mami Tomoe arrives just in time to stop Yayoi[=/=]Sunder from making Cure Happy her latest on her list of victims, and it was all at the [[EvenEvilHasStandards behest of Kyubey]].]]
* CurbstompBattle: Yayoi[=/=]Sunder vs. ''anyone''; she wins hands down, even the Precures she was originally destined to fight with. [[spoiler:Mami vs. Yayoi[=/=]Sunder ends with the latter's {{Mook}}s being decimated in seconds by the former's [[MemeticMutation Unlimited Musket Works]] followed by Yayoi getting trapped in Mami's ribbons.]]
* FromACertainPointOfView: Once again, this is Kyubey's style of explaining things he doesn't want Yayoi to find out so soon. He he uses it once when Yayoi asked him about the Witch she just fought and Wolfrun's relation to it. [[spoiler:Wolfrun explained that he was trying to drain the sempai of her Bad End energy and was himself baffled by the appearance of the Barrier. His actions would cause a Puella Magi to fall into despair which causes their [[SoulJar Soul Gems]] to darken quickly and turn them into Witches. Thus, Kyubey explains that he, [[ExactWords in a way]], summoned the Witch. And Yayoi was none the wiser.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her PhantomZonePicture.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her PhantomZonePicture.[[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
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* ManipulativeBastard: Kyubey reprises this role, albeit to a lesser degree. He again uses FromACertainPointOfView to convince Yayoi that Wolfrun summoned the Witch and that she couldn't save her sempai from dying.
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* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu. She wouldn't be the AplhaBitch if she wasn't.
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* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu. She wouldn't be the AplhaBitch AlphaBitch if she wasn't.
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* SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:Yayoi, again.
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* SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:Yayoi, again. It becomes evident as she becomes increasingly paranoid about Arisu's father's attempts to find his daughter. This leads her to imprison every cop who comes to her house and eventually her own concerned mother.]]
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* AlphaBitch: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu Sato]].
* [[spoiler:[[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]: First [[SheWhoFightsMonsters symbolically]], and then literally. More specifically, Yayoi becomes Izabel, the Artist Witch seen early in episode 10 of Madoka.]]
* [[spoiler:[[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]: First [[SheWhoFightsMonsters symbolically]], and then literally. More specifically, Yayoi becomes Izabel, the Artist Witch seen early in episode 10 of Madoka.]]
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* AlphaBitch: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu Sato]].
Sato]]. She, along with her [[BuffySpeak henchgirls]], viciously bullies Yayoi, is wealthy, looks to be the type of girl who everyone wants to have, is class president, and is an outright JerkAss underneath.
*[[spoiler:[[AndThenJohnWasAZombie AndIMustScream: Anyone trapped in Yayoi's sketchbook is not going to be free any time soon. The only real way out is for her to kill you.
* [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]:First [[spoiler:First [[SheWhoFightsMonsters symbolically]], and then literally. More specifically, Yayoi becomes Izabel, the Artist Witch seen early in episode 10 of Madoka.]]
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* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko and Migiko]].
* DarkFic
* DealWithTheDevil
* [[spoiler:DespairEventHorizon]]
* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn: Yayoi, by the end.]]
* BreakTheCutie
* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko and Migiko]].
* DarkFic
* DealWithTheDevil
* [[spoiler:DespairEventHorizon]]
* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn: Yayoi, by the end.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes
AssholeVictim: Arisu was the first person Yayoi trapped and later killed. Considering how much torment she put Yayoi through, there is little sympathy for her.
*BreakTheCutie
BewareTheNiceOnes: Big time. Yayoi stated off nice, but when pushed too far (especially when she suddenly gains powers), she ''will'' make sure you regret bullying her.
* BreakTheCutie: Yayoi goes from being a shy Superhero fangirl to a KnightTemplar to being TheSociopath as she fails in her self-applied hero duties and does more harm than good.
* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko andMigiko]].
Migiko]]. [[spoiler:Yayoi eventually becomes this herself.]]
*DarkFic
DarkFic: AND HOW! Normally, Smile Precure is a very sugary sweet anime (considered to be a sugarized version of ''Anime/YesPrecureFive''). Given the amount of suffering Yayoi is forced to endure followed by her FaceHeelTurn and the deaths[=/=]imprisonment of so many characters, this was ''definitely'' a darker take on the show.
*DealWithTheDevil
DealWithTheDevil: As a crossover with ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'', this is a given. Yayoi makes a contract with Kyubey, wishing that her art would be respected.
*[[spoiler:DespairEventHorizon]]
DespairEventHorizon: Yayoi crosses it early on when she realizes just how far she had fallen.
*[[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn: Yayoi, FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Yayoi, by the end.end. She has all but snapped from everything she had done by then and was now actively destroying everything in her path, including her former friends who she was supposed to fight with as a Precure.]]
* FriendlessBackground: [[spoiler:Arisu is described as being the type who would have lots of friends. In reality, her cruel demeanor prevents her from ever having any. Indeed, she is described as not having friends, but subordinates.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Yayoi goes from being a shy Superhero fangirl to a KnightTemplar to being TheSociopath as she fails in her self-applied hero duties and does more harm than good.
* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu]] and her GirlPosse [[ThoseTwoGuys Hidariko and
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* FriendlessBackground: [[spoiler:Arisu is described as being the type who would have lots of friends. In reality, her cruel demeanor prevents her from ever having any. Indeed, she is described as not having friends, but subordinates.]]
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* [[spoiler:GhostTown: Nanairogaoka GhostTown: [[spoiler:Nanairogaoka becomes this, thanks to Yayoi[=/=]Sunder trapping most of the population in her sketchbook.]]
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JerkAss: Arisu, in spades. To wit, she and her posse forced Yayoi to watch as they destroy one of her sketches while giving her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech after toying around and overall tormenting her while she's begging for them to stop. ''And this is just the first scene.''
*MagicalGirlKickTheDog: Arisu does this every time she and her posse bullies Yayoi. [[spoiler:Yayoi eventually traps her own concerned mother inside her sketchbook out of paranoia.]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her PhantomZonePicture.
* MadArtist: Yayoi becomes this as she tries desperately to sketch her victims back into existence. All that did was make {{Mook}}s for her.
* MagicalGirl: Two different kinds, yet both are {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s; to be more precise, the Precure and Puellae Magi.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun]], many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, [[MoralEventHorizon Cure March]], ''the entire freaking town'', to name a few. Pretty much anyone who wound up trapped in her PhantomZonePicture.
* MadArtist: Yayoi becomes this as she tries desperately to sketch her victims back into existence. All that did was make {{Mook}}s for her.
* MagicalGirl: Two different kinds, yet both are {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s; to be more precise, the Precure and Puellae Magi.
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* RichBitch: Arisu.
* [[spoiler:SanitySlippage]]
* [[spoiler:[[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]: From superhero fangirl and bully victim, to MagicalGirl, to bully and notorious villain.]]
* PhantomZonePicture: The pages of Yayoi's sketchbook.
* [[spoiler:PleaseWakeUp]]
* RichBitch: Arisu.
* [[spoiler:SanitySlippage]]
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* [[spoiler:OffWithHerHead]]
MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:When she realizes she killed Arisu in cold blood. She gets this several more times as she slowly slips into evil.]]
* OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler:This is how Yayoi kills Arisu. This was unintended because Yayoi was only trying to erase Arisu's mouth to shut her up.]]
* PhantomZonePicture: The pages of Yayoi'ssketchbook.
sketchbook. [[spoiler:Arisu ([[KilledOffForReal formerly), her posse, Wolfrun, numerous robbers, cops, her own mother, Cure Beauty, Cure Sunny, Candy, and Cure March all all confirmed to be prisoners.]]
*[[spoiler:PleaseWakeUp]]
PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler:Yayoi does this when she sees her Sempai fall unconscious before Wolfrun. The fact that she was revealed dead of unknown causes and the fact the Wolfrun wasn't trying to kill her followed by a Barrier appearing greatly implies the Smepai was also a Puella Magi.]]
* RichBitch:Arisu.
Arisu. She is the daughter of a wealthy man.
*[[spoiler:SanitySlippage]]
SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:Yayoi, again.
*[[spoiler:[[HeWhoFightsMonsters TheSoCalledCoward: What Yayoi really wanted. She wanted to be respected for who she was. Being called a crybaby eventually becomes a BerserkButton for her, [[spoiler:as Cure March found out when she was trying to talk Yayoi into becoming good again.]]
* [[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]:From [[spoiler:From superhero fangirl and bully victim, to MagicalGirl, to bully and notorious villain.]]
* OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler:This is how Yayoi kills Arisu. This was unintended because Yayoi was only trying to erase Arisu's mouth to shut her up.]]
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* [[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]:
* ShownTheirWork: Most people pluralize "Puella Magi" as "Puella Magis". "Puella Magi" is Latin, so English pluralization doesn't really apply. In this fic, it's pluralized as "Puellae Magi", which is correct.
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* WeaselMascot: Kyubey.
* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu.
* [[spoiler:TheSoCalledCoward]]
* [[spoiler:ThouShaltNotKill: Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.]]
* WeaselMascot: Kyubey.
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* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu.
* [[spoiler:TheSoCalledCoward]]
* [[spoiler:ThouShaltNotKill: Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler:It officially began when she accidentally killed Arisu. It only got worse from there as her sanity slipped and her paranoia grew.]]
* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu. She wouldn't be the AplhaBitch if she wasn't.
* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After Yayoi [[DealWithTheDevil makes a contract with Kyubey]], one of the first things she does is get revenge on Arisu and her posse in the middle of their newest attempt to bully her.]]
* ThouShaltNotKill: [[spoiler:Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.]]
* WeaselMascot:Kyubey.
Kyubey, as per ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' tradition.
* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu.
* [[spoiler:TheSoCalledCoward]]
* [[spoiler:ThouShaltNotKill: Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.
* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu. She wouldn't be the AplhaBitch if she wasn't.
* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After Yayoi [[DealWithTheDevil makes a contract with Kyubey]], one of the first things she does is get revenge on Arisu and her posse in the middle of their newest attempt to bully her.]]
* ThouShaltNotKill: [[spoiler:Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.]]
* WeaselMascot:
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8134552/ Respect]]'' is a CrossOver FanFic between SmilePrettyCure ''Anime/SmilePrettyCure'' and PuellaMagiMadokaMagica, ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'', written by [[@/FringeBenefits BHS]].
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The story was loosely based on another fic called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8018294/1/ The Illustrator]]'', by Abicion.
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This fic is a DarkFic WhatIf story with a simple premise: what would happen if [[ShrinkingViolet Yayoi Kise]] met [[WeaselMascot Kyubey]] before becoming a Precure?
Precure?
[[spoiler:The short answer: BreakTheCutie, SanitySlippage, and HeWhoFightsMonsters, to name a few.]]
[[spoiler:The short answer: BreakTheCutie, SanitySlippage, and HeWhoFightsMonsters, to name a few.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes
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* BullyingADragon: Once Yayoi makes her contract, she makes sure the next time Arisu and her flunkies bully her is their last... [[spoiler:[[KilledOffForReal Lit]][[OffWithHerHead era]][[AndIMustScream lly]].]]
* MuggingTheMonster: Once Yayoi makes her contract, she makes sure the next time Arisu and her flunkies bully her is their last... [[spoiler:[[KilledOffForReal Lit]][[OffWithHerHead era]][[AndIMustScream lly]].]]
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* ShockAndAwe: As in her canon series, Yayoi has powers over electricity in her Puella Magi form.
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* ShockAndAwe: As in her [[SmilePrettyCure canon series, series]], Yayoi has powers over electricity in her Puella Magi form.
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* [[spoiler:[[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]: From superhero-fangirl superhero fangirl and bully-victim, bully victim, to MagicalGirl, to bully and notorious villain.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]: First [[YouAreWhatYouHate [[SheWhoFightsMonsters symbolically]], and then literally. More specifically, Yayoi becomes Izabel, the Artist Witch seen early in episode 10 of Madoka.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil
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* [[spoiler:GhostTown: Nanairogaoka becomes this, thanks to Yayoi[=/=]Sunder trapping most of the population in her sketchbook.]]
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* BullyingADragon: Once Yayoi makes her contract, she makes sure the next time Arisu and her flunkies bully her is their last... [[spoiler:[[KilledOffForReal Liter]][[OffWithHerHead a]][[AndIMustScream lly]].]]
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* BullyingADragon: Once Yayoi makes her contract, she makes sure the next time Arisu and her flunkies bully her is their last... [[spoiler:[[KilledOffForReal Liter]][[OffWithHerHead a]][[AndIMustScream Lit]][[OffWithHerHead era]][[AndIMustScream lly]].]]
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* BullyingADragon: Once Yayoi makes her contract, she makes sure the next time ArisuSato]], and her flunkies Hidariko and Migikobully her is their last... [[spoiler:[[KilledOffForReal Liter]][[OffWithHerHead a]][[AndIMustScream lly]].]]
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* GirlPosse: [[AlphaBitch Arisu]], Hidariko, and Migiko.
* RichBitch: Arisu.
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author, and ''{{Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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* GenreSavvy: Yayoi knows all about the superhero genre. [[spoiler:Overlaps with WrongGenreSavvy by the end.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8134552/ Respect]]'' is a CrossOver FanFic between SmilePrettyCure and PuellaMagiMadokaMagica, written by [[@/FringeBenefits BHS]].
This fic is a DarkFic WhatIf story with a simple premise: what if [[ShrinkingViolet Yayoi Kise]] met [[WeaselMascot Kyubey]] before becoming a Precure?
Also see ''[[FanFic/Stars Above]]'', another CrossOver by the same author.
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!!This work provides examples of:
* [[spoiler:AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]
* ArtAttacker: Part of Yayoi's powers as a Puella Magi.
* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu Sato]], and her flunkies Hidariko and Migiko
* DarkFic
* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn: Yayoi, by the end.]]
* [[spoiler:MadArtist]]
* [[spoiler:OffWithHerHead]]
* [[spoiler:PleaseWakeUp]]
* ShockAndAwe: As in her canon series, Yayoi has powers over electricity in her Puella Magi form.
* ShrinkingViolet: Yayoi, of course. Her shyness and inability to stand up to Arisu's bullying is what drives her to contract with Kyubey.
* [[spoiler:StartOfDarkness]]
* [[spoiler:ThouShaltNotKill: Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Arisu.]]
* WeaselMascot: Kyubey.
This fic is a DarkFic WhatIf story with a simple premise: what if [[ShrinkingViolet Yayoi Kise]] met [[WeaselMascot Kyubey]] before becoming a Precure?
Also see ''[[FanFic/Stars Above]]'', another CrossOver by the same author.
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!!This work provides examples of:
* [[spoiler:AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]
* ArtAttacker: Part of Yayoi's powers as a Puella Magi.
* TheBully: [[OriginalGeneration Arisu Sato]], and her flunkies Hidariko and Migiko
* DarkFic
* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn: Yayoi, by the end.]]
* [[spoiler:MadArtist]]
* [[spoiler:OffWithHerHead]]
* [[spoiler:PleaseWakeUp]]
* ShockAndAwe: As in her canon series, Yayoi has powers over electricity in her Puella Magi form.
* ShrinkingViolet: Yayoi, of course. Her shyness and inability to stand up to Arisu's bullying is what drives her to contract with Kyubey.
* [[spoiler:StartOfDarkness]]
* [[spoiler:ThouShaltNotKill: Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Arisu.]]
* WeaselMascot: Kyubey.
