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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=5600#p80479 Reconciliation]] is a VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic that takes place eight years after Hanako’s bad ending. Hanako, having cut ties with Lilly and Hisao over the shame of what she did, is now a best-selling author, but has no real friends apart from her publicist, Sho Yamane. But her past may not be completely behind her, and an unexpected phone call from Lilly gives her the chance to renew her ties with people from her past.
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* BigShutUp: [[spoiler:Lilly to Hanako, while consumed by anger and grief]]
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* CanNotSpitItOut: [[spoiler:Sho in the epilogue]].
* CooldownHug: [[spoiler:Hanako to Lilly]]
* DeathByChildbirth: [[spoiler:Sho's mother]]
* CooldownHug: [[spoiler:Hanako to Lilly]]
* DeathByChildbirth: [[spoiler:Sho's mother]]
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* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Hanako’s remark that Akira is wearing girls’ clothing.
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* LuminescentBlush: Julia after Hanako waves to her.
* MeaningfulFuneral: [[spoiler:For Hisao, in Chapter 7]]
* MenDontCry: Averted by [[spoiler:Lilly and Hisao's fathers]].
* MeaningfulFuneral: [[spoiler:For Hisao, in Chapter 7]]
* MenDontCry: Averted by [[spoiler:Lilly and Hisao's fathers]].
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* PosthumousCharacter: [[spoiler:Hisao]]
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* TakeThat: Sho does one to ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' as a means of lightening the mood, saying that telling off Stephanie Meyer is a perk of his job.
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* TakeThat: Sho does one to ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' as a means of lightening the mood, saying that telling off Stephanie Meyer is a perk of his job.
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* SweaterGirl: Hanako [[spoiler:at the funeral]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler: Poor Hisao’s parents have to attend his funeral.]]
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* DeathFic
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* DeathFicDeathFic: [[spoiler: Hisao’s heart gave out once again, and this time, it could not be restarted.]]
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* AuthorAvatar: {{Implied| Trope}} with Sho. Those more critical of the fic have noted that Sho seems to fill all of the 'necessary' roles for a replacement love interest; he acts as a close companion to Hanako for the beginning of the story and ends it alongside a subversion of the JustFriends trope. The fact that the author has Hanako as his forum avatar doesn't help.