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A RecursiveFanfiction inspired by ''[[Fanfic/TheLamentSeriesChaoticNeutral The Lament Series]]'' by [=ChaoticNeutral=], ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36067882/chapters/89912995 Recklessness]]'' explores the idea of Alya deciding to use the Wish to discover Hawkmoth's SecretIdentity.
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A RecursiveFanfiction inspired by ''[[Fanfic/TheLamentSeriesChaoticNeutral The Lament Series]]'' by [=ChaoticNeutral=], ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36067882/chapters/89912995 Recklessness]]'' explores the idea of Alya deciding to use the Wish to discover Hawkmoth's Hawk Moth's SecretIdentity.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Alya carelessly wishes to learn Hawkmoth's identity, and gets her answer... in the form of an AlternateUniverse that serves as LaserGuidedKarma for her.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Alya carelessly wishes to learn Hawkmoth's Hawk Moth's identity, and gets her answer... in the form of an AlternateUniverse that serves as LaserGuidedKarma for her.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: PlayedForDrama; Alya decides to use the Wish to uncover Hawkmoth's SecretIdentity, blithely ignoring the fact that this entails [[RealityWarper rewriting reality]].
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: PlayedForDrama; Alya decides to use the Wish to uncover Hawkmoth's Hawk Moth's SecretIdentity, blithely ignoring the fact that this entails [[RealityWarper rewriting reality]].
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* MundaneUtility: PlayedForDrama and [[PlayedForHorror Horror]]. Rather than discovering Hawkmoth's identity through investigative work, Alya decides to magically divine the answer through a Wish, blowing off the potential consequences.
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* MundaneUtility: PlayedForDrama and [[PlayedForHorror Horror]]. Rather than discovering Hawkmoth's Hawk Moth's identity through investigative work, Alya decides to magically divine the answer through a Wish, blowing off the potential consequences.
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* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Making a Wish on the combined Miraculi of Creation and Destruction completely rewrites reality in order to grant it. This is why Marinette refuses to even ''consider'' making one herself... but Alya dismisses the dangers as no big deal, assuming ''her'' Wish will give her ''exactly'' what she needs to stop Hawkmoth once and for all.
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* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Making a Wish on the combined Miraculi of Creation and Destruction completely rewrites reality in order to grant it. This is why Marinette refuses to even ''consider'' making one herself... but Alya dismisses the dangers as no big deal, assuming ''her'' Wish will give her ''exactly'' what she needs to stop Hawkmoth Hawk Moth once and for all.
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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: The plot is kicked off by Alya impulsively deciding to make a Wish to learn Hawkmoth's identity, brazenly barging ahead with her plan despite all it entails.
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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: The plot is kicked off by Alya impulsively deciding to make a Wish to learn Hawkmoth's Hawk Moth's identity, brazenly barging ahead with her plan despite all it entails.
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: {{Averted}}. While Hawkmoth congratulates Alya on doing his job for him, she doesn't even bat a lash, brushing off his comments.
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: {{Averted}}. While Hawkmoth Hawk Moth congratulates Alya on doing his job for him, she doesn't even bat a lash, brushing off his comments.
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:The Kwami give Ayla the biggest karmic backfire they can give her: she wished to know the true identity of Hawk Moth? In the reset reality, she ''is'' Hawk Moth.]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:The Kwami give Ayla Alya the biggest karmic backfire they can give her: she wished to know the true identity of Hawk Moth? In the reset reality, she ''is'' Hawk Moth.]]
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Alya sees herself as {{The Hero}}ine of this story, seeing the solution everybody else missed that was right in front of their noses. The notion that there might be a ''reason'' Marinette didn't want to use the Wish never occurs to her, or the dangers of [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor making Wishes]] that are granted by [[RealityWarpingIsNotAToy rewriting reality itself]].
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Alya sees herself as {{The Hero}}ine TheHeroine of this story, seeing the solution everybody else missed that was right in front of their noses. The notion that there might be a ''reason'' Marinette didn't want to use the Wish never occurs to her, or the dangers of [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor making Wishes]] that are granted by [[RealityWarpingIsNotAToy rewriting reality itself]].
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* JackassGenie: The Kwami, naturally quite pissed over Alya getting Marinette killed, decide to fulfil her wish to know Hawk Moth's identity in the way that screws her over most; [[spoiler:instead of creating a situation where she ''discovers'' Hawk Moth's identity, they make it so that she knew who Hawk Moth was all along... because of course she'd know about ''her own'' supervillain identity]].
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:The Kwami give Ayla the biggest karmic backfire they can give her: she wished to know the true identity of Hawk Moth? In the reset reality, she ''is'' Hawk Moth.]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Alya [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor gets her Wish]], [[spoiler:at the cost of Marinette dying and Adrien being her (quite unwilling) killer, and the Kwami make sure to get their revenge: in the rewritten reality, Gabriel Agreste is not Hawk Moth - it's Alya.]]
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* SimpleSolutionWontWork: Played for drama and horror. The whole plot happens because Ayla Cesaire decides, out of the blue, that the best way to finally discover who Hawk Moth is once and for all is to utilize the Wish that is granted to those who have both the Cat and Ladybug Miraculouses [[MundaneUtility to obtain the information]]. She was told that RealityWarpingIsNotAToy, but insists [[KnowNothingKnowItAll in her mind]] that such a simple wish should make for a low chance of backlash, and goes for it anyway. What makes this a horrific example is that in [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness her impulsive desire to apply said "simple solution"]] she [[NoSympathy casually dismisses]] [[spoiler:betraying her best friends to steal the Miraculouses, which leads to Adrien getting Akumatized and to him ''murdering'' Marinette, which will lead to the Kwami [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor making sure Ayla gets a huge karmic backfire as revenge]].]]
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* SimpleSolutionWontWork: Played for drama and horror. The whole plot happens because Ayla Alya Cesaire decides, out of the blue, that the best way to finally discover who Hawk Moth is once and for all is to utilize the Wish that is granted to those who have both the Cat and Ladybug Miraculouses [[MundaneUtility to obtain the information]]. She was told that RealityWarpingIsNotAToy, but insists [[KnowNothingKnowItAll in her mind]] that such a simple wish should make for a low chance of backlash, and goes for it anyway. What makes this a horrific example is that in [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness her impulsive desire to apply said "simple solution"]] she [[NoSympathy casually dismisses]] [[spoiler:betraying her best friends to steal the Miraculouses, which leads to Adrien getting Akumatized and to him ''murdering'' Marinette, which will lead to the Kwami [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor making sure Ayla Alya gets a huge karmic backfire as revenge]].]]
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* SimpleSolutionWontWork: Played for drama and horror. The whole plot happens because Ayla Cesaire decides, out of the blue, that the best way to finally discover who Hawk Moth is once and for all is to utilize the Wish that is granted to those who have both the Cat and Ladybug Miraculouses [[MundaneUtility to obtain the information]]. She was told that RealityWarpingIsNotAToy, but insists [[KnowNothingKnowItAll in her mind]] that such a simple wish should make for a low chance of backlash, and goes for it anyway. What makes this a horrific example is that in [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness her impulsive desire to apply said "simple solution"]] she [[NoSympathy casually dismisses]] [[spoiler:betraying her best friends to steal the Miraculouses, which leads to Adrien getting Akumatized and to him ''murdering'' Marinette, which will lead to the Kwami [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor making sure Ayla gets a huge karmic backfire as revenge]].]]
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* MundaneUtility: PlayedForDrama and horror. Rather than discovering Hawkmoth's identity through investigative work, Alya decides to magically divine the answer through a Wish, blowing off the potential consequences.
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* MundaneUtility: PlayedForDrama and horror.[[PlayedForHorror Horror]]. Rather than discovering Hawkmoth's identity through investigative work, Alya decides to magically divine the answer through a Wish, blowing off the potential consequences.
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* AdultFear: The Dupain-Chengs get a nasty dose of this when they wake up to discover [[spoiler:their daughter was just murdered]].
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: The Dupain-Chengs get a nasty dose of this when they wake up to discover [[spoiler:their daughter was just murdered]].
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* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Alya sincerely believes that she just knows ''better'' than Marinette, the kwami, and everyone else who knows about the dangers of the Wish.
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* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Alya sincerely believes that she just knows ''better'' than Marinette, the kwami, Kwami, and everyone else who knows about the dangers of the Wish.
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* ExpendableAlternateUniverse: In a variant, Alya figures that it doesn't matter how far she goes in order to secure the Earrings and Ring for herself, since reality will be rewritten once she makes her Wish. So she shrugs off [[spoiler:Adrien's akumatization and Marinette's death]] as no big deal.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Alya sees herself as {{The Hero}}ine of this story, seeing the solution everybody else missed that was right in front of their noses. The notion that there might be a ''reason'' Marinette didn't want to use the Wish never occurs to her, or the dangers of [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor making Wishes]] that are granted by [[RealityWarpingIsNotAToy rewriting reality itself]].
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* AccusationFic: The story takes Alya to task for her canonical tendency to betray Marinette's trust and force her into uncomfortable situations while claiming she knows what's best for her.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Alya goes ''careening'' over the edge when she decides to steal the Earrings and Ring to make her Wish, and shrugs off [[spoiler:Marinette's death]] as no big deal since reality's about to be rewritten anyway.
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* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Making a Wish on the combined Miraculi of Creation and Destruction completely rewrites reality in order to grant it. This is why Marinette refuses to even ''consider'' making one herself... but Alya dismisses the dangers as no big deal, assuming ''her'' Wish will give her ''exactly'' what she needs to stop Hawkmoth once and for all.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Alya carelessly wishes to learn Hawkmoth's identity, and gets her answer... in the form of an AlternateUniverse that serves as LaserGuidedKarma for her.
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* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Alya sincerely believes that she just knows ''better'' than Marinette, the kwami, and everyone else who knows about the dangers of the Wish.
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* MundaneUtility: PlayedForDrama and horror. Rather than discovering Hawkmoth's identity through investigative work, Alya decides to magically divine the answer through a Wish, blowing off the potential consequences.
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* FatalFlaw: Alya's come to the fore here and drive the plot: she's impulsive, leaping to conclusions and coming up with ZanySchemes while [[KnowNothingKnowItAll convinced of her own brilliance]]. Once she's set her mind to something, no amount of warning can break through to her -- after all, she knows better than everyone else!
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* FatalFlaw: Alya's come to the fore here and drive the plot: she's impulsive, leaping to conclusions and coming up with ZanySchemes {{Zany Scheme}}s while [[KnowNothingKnowItAll convinced of her own brilliance]]. Once she's set her mind to something, no amount of warning can break through to her -- after all, she knows better than everyone else!
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* CallBack: Marinette realizes that Alya has completely betrayed her trust before, such as her ShipperOnDeck antics during [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugSP01MiraculousWorldNewYork their trip to New York]], even though Alya knew that both she and Adrien were dating other people at the time and Marinette had specifically told her she wanted to get to know him ''as a friend''.
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* FatalFlaw: Alya's come to the fore here and drive the plot: she's impulsive, leaping before she looks, and so ''certain'' that she knows what's best that she steals the Ring and Earrings to make a Wish, dismissing the potential consequences and brushing off all resistance as Marinette just not knowing what's best for her.
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* FatalFlaw: Alya's come to the fore here and drive the plot: she's impulsive, leaping before she looks, to conclusions and so ''certain'' that coming up with ZanySchemes while [[KnowNothingKnowItAll convinced of her own brilliance]]. Once she's set her mind to something, no amount of warning can break through to her -- after all, she knows what's best that she steals the Ring and Earrings to make a Wish, dismissing the potential consequences and brushing off all resistance as Marinette just not knowing what's best for her.better than everyone else!
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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: The plot is kicked off by Alya impulsively deciding to make a Wish to learn Hawkmoth's identity, brazenly barging ahead with her plan despite all it entails.
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* AccidentalMurder: Thanks to Alya not thinking things through, [[spoiler:she sends a Bee-paralyzed Marinette off of her balcony and falling to her death]].
* AdultFear: The Dupain-Chengs get a nasty dose of this when they wake up to discover [[spoiler:their daughter just took a header off her balcony]].
* AdultFear: The Dupain-Chengs get a nasty dose of this when they wake up to discover [[spoiler:their daughter just took a header off her balcony]].
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* AccidentalMurder: Thanks to Alya not thinking things through, [[spoiler:she sends a Bee-paralyzed Marinette off of her balcony gets Adrien akumatized and falling forced to her death]].
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** After she inadvertently [[spoiler:murders Marinette]], Alya reassures herself that hey -- this'll make it easier to take the other Earring now!
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* LackOfEmpathy: Alya displays this, dismissing Marinette's reaction to her betrayal and [[spoiler:her parents sobbing over their daughter's corpse]] as 'needlessly dramatic'.
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* LackOfEmpathy: Alya displays this, dismissing Marinette's reaction to her betrayal and [[spoiler:her [[spoiler:Adrien and her parents sobbing over their daughter's corpse]] as 'needlessly dramatic'.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: PlayedForDrama; Alya decides to use the Wish to uncover Hawkmoth's SecretIdentity, blithely ignoring the fact that this entails [[RealityWarper rewriting reality]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: PlayedForDrama; Alya decides to use the Wish to uncover Hawkmoth's SecretIdentity, blithely ignoring the fact that this entails [[RealityWarper rewriting reality]]
** Alya ''realized'' that Marinette likely wouldn't approve of her plan... but instead of considering any of the potential reasons why, attempts to circumvent that by stealing the Earrings while she's sleeping.
* LackOfEmpathy: Alya displays this, dismissing Marinette's reaction to her betrayal and [[spoiler:her parents sobbing over their daughter's corpse]] as 'needlessly dramatic'.
* MoralMyopia: Alya, full stop. She's thoroughly convinced that everything she's doing is fine because ''she's'' the one doing it, and she ''knows'' what she's doing--!
* MoralMyopia: Alya, full stop. She's thoroughly convinced that everything she's doing is fine because ''she's'' the one doing it, and she ''knows'' what she's doing--!
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* SingleTear: Shed by Adrien while [[spoiler:akumatized, seeing the remains of Marinette]].
* WhatTheHellHero: Marinette is completely floored by Alya's betrayal, calling her out for even ''considering'' using the Wish and risking the lives of ''everyone in existence'' for the sake of her ill-considered plan.
* YoureJustJealous: Alya makes clear that she considers herself to be much smarter than Marinette, accusing her of not wanting anyone to outshine her.
* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: {{Averted}}. While Hawkmoth congratulates Alya on doing his job for him, she doesn't even bat a lash, brushing off his comments.
* WhatTheHellHero: Marinette is completely floored by Alya's betrayal, calling her out for even ''considering'' using the Wish and risking the lives of ''everyone in existence'' for the sake of her ill-considered plan.
* YoureJustJealous: Alya makes clear that she considers herself to be much smarter than Marinette, accusing her of not wanting anyone to outshine her.
* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: {{Averted}}. While Hawkmoth congratulates Alya on doing his job for him, she doesn't even bat a lash, brushing off his comments.
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A RecursiveFanfiction inspired by ''[[Fanfic/TheLamentSeriesChaoticNeutral The Lament Series]]'' by [=ChaoticNeutral=], ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36067882/chapters/89912995 Recklessness]]'' explores the idea of Alya deciding to use the Wish to discover Hawkmoth's SecretIdentity.
After all, it's not like that could ''possibly'' backfire, right? Surely the only reason ''Marinette'' hasn't done that already is because she simply didn't think of it. Good thing she's got a friend like Alya watching her back, ready to step in and save the day with her insight!
But wait... why is she resisting? Why is she so upset...? Why's she acting like this is a ''horrible'' idea? Well, no matter; all she has to do is get the Earrings, make her Wish, and ''prove'' she's right?
Right...?
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AccidentalMurder: Thanks to Alya not thinking things through, [[spoiler:she sends a Bee-paralyzed Marinette off of her balcony and falling to her death]].
* AdultFear: The Dupain-Chengs get a nasty dose of this when they wake up to discover [[spoiler:their daughter just took a header off her balcony]].
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint:
** When Marinette resists her attempts to take the Earrings, Alya doesn't understand why she's fighting back, accusing her of not wanting anyone to be more powerful than her.
** After she inadvertently [[spoiler:murders Marinette]], Alya reassures herself that hey -- this'll make it easier to take the other Earring now!
* FatalFlaw: Alya's come to the fore here and drive the plot: she's impulsive, leaping before she looks, and so ''certain'' that she knows what's best that she steals the Ring and Earrings to make a Wish, dismissing the potential consequences and brushing off all resistance as Marinette just not knowing what's best for her.
* RecursiveFanfiction: For ''[[Fanfic/TheLamentSeriesChaoticNeutral The Lament Series]]'', inspired by [=ChaoticNeutral's=] proposal for ''Alya's Lament''.
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After all, it's not like that could ''possibly'' backfire, right? Surely the only reason ''Marinette'' hasn't done that already is because she simply didn't think of it. Good thing she's got a friend like Alya watching her back, ready to step in and save the day with her insight!
But wait... why is she resisting? Why is she so upset...? Why's she acting like this is a ''horrible'' idea? Well, no matter; all she has to do is get the Earrings, make her Wish, and ''prove'' she's right?
Right...?
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AccidentalMurder: Thanks to Alya not thinking things through, [[spoiler:she sends a Bee-paralyzed Marinette off of her balcony and falling to her death]].
* AdultFear: The Dupain-Chengs get a nasty dose of this when they wake up to discover [[spoiler:their daughter just took a header off her balcony]].
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint:
** When Marinette resists her attempts to take the Earrings, Alya doesn't understand why she's fighting back, accusing her of not wanting anyone to be more powerful than her.
** After she inadvertently [[spoiler:murders Marinette]], Alya reassures herself that hey -- this'll make it easier to take the other Earring now!
* FatalFlaw: Alya's come to the fore here and drive the plot: she's impulsive, leaping before she looks, and so ''certain'' that she knows what's best that she steals the Ring and Earrings to make a Wish, dismissing the potential consequences and brushing off all resistance as Marinette just not knowing what's best for her.
* RecursiveFanfiction: For ''[[Fanfic/TheLamentSeriesChaoticNeutral The Lament Series]]'', inspired by [=ChaoticNeutral's=] proposal for ''Alya's Lament''.
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