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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: While Rainbow Dash is openly brash and boastful, her inability to perform the sonic rainboom and the pressures of living up to being Celestia's student makes her very insecue.

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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: While Rainbow Dash is openly brash and boastful, her inability to perform the sonic rainboom and the pressures of living up to being Celestia's student makes her very insecue.insecure. [[spoiler: Celestia's choice not to confide in Rainbow about Nightmare Moon's return strikes her to core, causing her to wonder (partly, at least) if she did something to make Celestia doubt her, vastly undermining her sense of self-worth and damaging their relationship.]]
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* TheFinalTemptation: Like in the show, Nightmare Moon tempts Rainbow Dash. It is much darker, however, in this story. Rather than offer her the captaincy of the Shadowbolts, Nightmare Moon commiserates with her, pointing out that [[NotSoDifferent she too knows how it feels that have one's self and achievements overlooked in favor of another]]. She tries to plant seeds of doubt in Rainbow's mind about whether Celestia truly cared for her or even understood her, or whether she was just using Rainbow as a weapon. Nightmare Moon then offers all of Rainbow's goals and fondest desires to her, namely a spot on the Wonderbolts and Shining Armor's love. And not just that, but she offers to fulfill all of her friends' wishes as well if Rainbow would proclaim loyalty to her. Finally, she points out that with Celestia gone, she was the only one capable of controlling the sun and the moon, and was thus indispensable to Equestria. Despite heavy temptation and inner turmoil, Rainbow resists with a simple realization: Celestia loved her, and all Nightmare Moon cared about was her own self-gratification.

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* TheFinalTemptation: Like in the show, Nightmare Moon tempts Rainbow Dash. It is much darker, however, in this story. Rather than offer her the captaincy of the Shadowbolts, Nightmare Moon commiserates with her, pointing out that [[NotSoDifferent she too knows how it feels that to have one's self and achievements overlooked in favor of another]]. She tries to plant seeds of doubt in Rainbow's mind about whether Celestia truly cared for her or even understood her, or whether she was just using Rainbow as a weapon. Nightmare Moon then offers all of Rainbow's goals and fondest desires to her, namely a spot on the Wonderbolts and Shining Armor's love. And not just that, but she offers to fulfill all of her friends' wishes as well if Rainbow would proclaim loyalty to her. Finally, she points out that with Celestia gone, she was the only one capable of controlling the sun and the moon, and was thus indispensable to Equestria. Despite heavy temptation and inner turmoil, Rainbow resists with a simple realization: Celestia loved her, and all Nightmare Moon cared about was her own self-gratification.
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** Rainbow Dash, ironically, is not as altered as Twilight Sparkle by the change of events, but her InferioritySuperiorityComplex is magnified by being Celestia's student. Not very studious, not from a prestigious family, and certainly not given to following the etiquette of high society, she constantly struggles to prove to Equestria and herself that she is worthy of being Celestia's student. She's also upset by the fact that her own achievements are marginalized by being recognized as "Celestia's student", rather than for her own accomplishments. Coupled with her inability to repeat the sonic rainboom despite Celestia's promise to help her in doing so, as well as her competitive nature, Dash often feels like she's incapable of winning, and she ''hates'' to lose. Another difference is that when Rainbow and the Mane Cast (plus Zecora) head out to confront Nightmare Moon, Rainbow Dash is reluctant, like mainstream Twilight, to bring them with her. But whereas Twilight was reluctant because she had to realize the value of having friends, Rainbow is reluctant out of a desire to keep her new friends safe and a distorted sense of taking Nightmare Moon down being her personal responsibility.

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** Rainbow Dash, ironically, is not as altered as Twilight Sparkle by the change of events, but her InferioritySuperiorityComplex is magnified by being Celestia's student. Not very studious, not from a prestigious family, and certainly not given to following the etiquette of high society, she constantly struggles to prove to Equestria and herself that she is worthy of being Celestia's student. She's also upset by the fact that her own achievements are marginalized by being recognized as "Celestia's student", rather than for her own accomplishments. Coupled with her inability to repeat the sonic rainboom despite Celestia's promise to help her in doing so, as well as her competitive nature, Dash often feels like she's incapable of winning, and she ''hates'' to lose. Another difference is that when Rainbow and the Mane Cast (plus Zecora) head out to confront Nightmare Moon, Rainbow Dash is reluctant, like mainstream Twilight, to bring them with her. But whereas Twilight was reluctant because she had yet to realize the value of having friends, Rainbow is reluctant out of a desire to keep her new friends safe and a distorted sense of taking Nightmare Moon down being her personal responsibility.
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* SadisticChoice: Nightmare Moon hurls Twilight, Fluttershy (whose wings are restrained), Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Applejack to her deaths, challenging Rainbow to choose which ones to save, as even she is not fast enough to save all of them. [[spoiler: Rainbow finally manages to achieve a sonic rainboom again and does in fact save all of them]].


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* TakeAThirdOption: Rather than choosing which of her friends to save, [[spoiler: Rainbow pulls off a sonic rainboom and saves all of them.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Ditzy Doo's relationship with Rainbow Dash, for the most part.

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* CoolBigSis: Ditzy Doo's relationship with Rainbow Dash, for the most part. In return, Dash acts like one toward Dinky.
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'''Tropes pertaining to "May the Best Friends Win"
CompositeCharacter: Trixie combines her personality from "Boast Busters" with Gilda's role in "Griffon the Brush-Off" as Rainbow Dash's abrasive friend.
HardWorkHardlyWorks: The main source of contention between Rainbow Dash and Raindrops of the weather team.
[[TeachHimAnger Teach Her Anger]]: When Twilight and Trixie tutor Dinky Doo in basic levitation, this is Trixie's method.
VitriolicBestBuds[=/=]FriendlyRivalry: Rainbow Dash and Trixie. Especially evident when Dash heckles Trixie's show, only for Trixie to incorporate it into her performance to create a real spectacle.

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'''Tropes pertaining to "May the Best Friends Win"
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CompositeCharacter: Trixie combines her personality from "Boast Busters" with Gilda's role in "Griffon the Brush-Off" as Rainbow Dash's abrasive friend.
* HardWorkHardlyWorks: The main source of contention between Rainbow Dash and Raindrops of the weather team.
* [[TeachHimAnger Teach Her Anger]]: When Twilight and Trixie tutor Dinky Doo in basic levitation, this is Trixie's method.
* VitriolicBestBuds[=/=]FriendlyRivalry: Rainbow Dash and Trixie. Especially evident when Dash heckles Trixie's show, only for Trixie to incorporate it into her performance to create a real spectacle.

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'''Tropes pertaining to "May the Best Friends Win"
CompositeCharacter: Trixie combines her personality from "Boast Busters" with Gilda's role in "Griffon the Brush-Off" as Rainbow Dash's abrasive friend.
HardWorkHardlyWorks: The main source of contention between Rainbow Dash and Raindrops of the weather team.
[[TeachHimAnger Teach Her Anger]]: When Twilight and Trixie tutor Dinky Doo in basic levitation, this is Trixie's method.
VitriolicBestBuds[=/=]FriendlyRivalry: Rainbow Dash and Trixie. Especially evident when Dash heckles Trixie's show, only for Trixie to incorporate it into her performance to create a real spectacle.
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* CoolBigSis: Ditzy Doo's relationship with Rainbow Dash, for the most part.



* ParentalSubstitute: Celestia and Ditzy are both motherly figures to Rainbow Dash.

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* ParentalSubstitute: Celestia and Ditzy are both motherly figures to Rainbow Dash. Celestia in particular is more of an adoptive mother to Dash than a mentor.
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* BringIt: After Rainbow Dash's refusal of Nightmare Moon's [[TheFinalTemptation offer]], the latter quotes Darseid's response to Superman's WorldOfCardboardSpeech and kicks off the FinalBattle.



* ShoutOut: There are too may too count in this fic, but the most notable is Twilight's paraphrasing Superman's WorldOfCardboardSpeech.

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* ShoutOut: There are too may too count in this fic, but the most notable is Twilight's paraphrasing Superman's WorldOfCardboardSpeech. Similarly, Nightmare Moon quotes Darkseid's response right before kicking off the FinalBattle.

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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Rainbow Dash's crush on Shining Armor.



* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Fluttershy proves herself worthy of bearing the Element of Kindness by treating the gargoyles, who had sworn loyalty to Nightmare Moon a thousand years ago, with compassion rather than reviling them. So touched were they that they swore loyalty to ''her'', rather than serve Nightmare Moon.

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Fluttershy proves herself worthy of bearing the Element of Kindness by treating the gargoyles, who had sworn loyalty to Nightmare Moon a thousand years ago, with compassion rather than reviling them. So touched were they that they swore loyalty to ''her'', rather than serve Nightmare Moon. [[spoiler: This comes into play during the FinalBattle, as they show up to help the Mane Six (and Zecora and Ditzy) against Nightmare Moon's Shadowbolt army.]]
** Similarly, Rarity proved herself worthy of being the Element of Generosity when she gave the necklace she inherited from her grandmother to the Diamond Dogs as payment to let them pass. The Dogs are so stunned by such selflessness that [[spoiler: they also show up during the FinalBattle to help fight Nightmare Moon to repay the kindness.]]



* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Shining Armor, Ditzy/Derpy, and the two pegasus guards are all corrupted to serve Nightmare Moon.]]



* DarkerAndEdgier: While this fic doesn't swerve into a [[DarkFuture Dark]] AlternateUniverse fic, the general situation and trials of the Elements are much more serious. Ditzy Doo and Shining Armor are brainwashed into serving as Nightmare Moon's minions before their horrified loved ones, and Nightmare Moon is very explicit in her attempts to kill the Mane Cast. The trial of laughter involves the Mane Cast and Zecora falling victim to the Swamp of Despair, in which they are forced to relive their most painful memories, paralyzing them with sadness while they sink into the swamp. Only Pinkie Pie's reminder that sadness doesn't last forever and to find laughter in any situation saves them. In Rarity's trial, she gives up a precious gift from her grandmother to appease the Diamond Dogs. Applejack honestly admits fault after accidentally disrupting a school of seaponies' spawning journey, knowing that they were contemplating killing the transgressor. Fluttershy interrupts a pitched battle between the other ponies (and Zecora) and gargoyles to extend kindness to said gargoyles. Twilight Sparkle duels [[spoiler: a corrupted Shining Armor]]. Rainbow Dash [[spoiler: very nearly sacrifices her life to save the other ponies, and resists a temptation much more seductive then the one seen in the show]].

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* DarkerAndEdgier: While this fic doesn't swerve into a [[DarkFuture Dark]] AlternateUniverse fic, the general situation and trials of the Elements are much more serious. Ditzy Doo and Shining Armor are [[spoiler: brainwashed into serving as Nightmare Moon's minions minions]] before their horrified loved ones, and Nightmare Moon is very explicit in her attempts to kill the Mane Cast. The trial of laughter involves the Mane Cast and Zecora falling victim to the Swamp of Despair, in which they are forced to relive their most painful memories, paralyzing them with sadness while they sink into the swamp. Only Pinkie Pie's reminder that sadness doesn't last forever and to find laughter in any situation saves them. In Rarity's trial, she gives up a precious gift from her grandmother to appease the Diamond Dogs. Applejack honestly admits fault after accidentally disrupting a school of seaponies' spawning journey, knowing that they were contemplating killing the transgressor. Fluttershy interrupts a pitched battle between the other ponies (and Zecora) and gargoyles to extend kindness to said gargoyles. Twilight Sparkle duels [[spoiler: a corrupted Shining Armor]]. Rainbow Dash [[spoiler: very nearly sacrifices her life to save the other ponies, ponies]], and resists a temptation much more seductive then the one seen in the show]].show.



* TheDragon: Blackened Armor [[spoiler: (the brainwashed Shining Armor)]]



* FullNameUltimatum: Ditzy calls Rainbow Dash by her full name (Rainbow ''Miriam'' Dash) whenever she's angry at her and wants her attention. Dash finds this annoying.



* LikeBrotherAndSister: How Shining Armor feels about himself and Rainbow Dash. This causes her a bit of {{angst}}, obviously.



* MythologyGag: The bullies Rainbow Dash deals with in Canterlot are based on the G1 Princess Ponies.



** Nightmare Moon tries to invoke this during TheFinalTemptation. It doesn't work.



* ParentalSubstitute: Celestia and Ditzy are both motherly figures to Rainbow Dash.



* ShipTease: Forced to recognize that her crush on Shining Armor will remain unrequited, Rainbow Dash can't help but notice how attractive Big Macintosh is. Applejack is quick to notice and tease her about it.



* ShipTease: Forced to recognize that her crush on Shining Armor will remain unrequited, Rainbow Dash can't help but notice how attractive Big Macintosh is. Applejack is quick to notice and tease her about it.

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* ShipTease: Forced ** And most of the rest are to recognize that her crush on Shining Armor will remain unrequited, Rainbow Dash can't help ''Series/DoctorWho''.
* ShrinkingViolet: Obviously Fluttershy,
but notice how attractive Big Macintosh is. Applejack Twilight is quick presented almost as one as well, due to notice and tease her about it.the BreakTheCutie she went through.
* SixthRanger: Zecora. [[spoiler: And Ditzy during the FinalBattle.]]


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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: As noted above, Twilight paraphrases Superman's TropeNamer during the fight with Blackened Armor.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash is enraged when she discovers how Celestia manipulated her and her friends behind the scenes since their foalhood in her plan to redeem her sister. Interestingly, she's not upset about being used, she's upset that Celestia did not trust her enough to be forthright about her intentions, because she would have [[UndyingLoyalty gladly aided Celestia]]. She says that she still loves Celestia, but she cannot forgive her yet. Fortunately, after both the princess and Rainbow have a chance to talk with other ponies, they reconcile quickly.

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* WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash is enraged when she discovers how Celestia manipulated her and her friends behind the scenes since their foalhood in her plan to redeem her sister. Interestingly, she's not upset about being used, she's upset that Celestia did not trust her enough to be forthright about her intentions, because she would have [[UndyingLoyalty gladly aided Celestia]]. She's also incensed that Celestia was willing to risk her and her friends to redeem Luna, rather than confronting Luna herself, and, if necessary, banishing her again. She says that she still loves Celestia, but she cannot forgive her yet. Fortunately, after both the princess and Rainbow have a chance to talk with other ponies, they reconcile quickly.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Fluttershy proves herself worthy of bearing the Element of Kindness by treating the gargoyles, who had sworn loyalty to Nightmare Moon a thousand years ago, with compassion rather than reviling them. So touched were they that they swore loyalty to ''her'', rather than serve Nightmare Moon.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: When Fluttershy thinks Nightmare Moon killed Rainbow Dash, she flies into a rage and manages to strike the dark pony!


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* NoSocialSkills: Twilight.
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* GondorCallsForAid: [[spoiler: The Diamond Dogs, Seaponies and Gargoyles that the Mane 6 had befriended along the way show up to save the Mane 6 from an army of Shadowbolts, allowing the ponies to go after Nightmare Moon.]]
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* HighAltitudeCombat: Rainbow Dash vs. the Shadowbolts.

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* HopelessSuitor: Rainbow Dash has a crush on Shining Armor, but he sees her as a second little sister.


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* TheFinalTemptation: Like in the show, Nightmare Moon tempts Rainbow Dash. It is much darker, however, in this story. Rather than offer her the captaincy of the Shadowbolts, Nightmare Moon commiserates with her, pointing out that [[NotSoDifferent she too knows how it feels that have one's self and achievements overlooked in favor of another]]. She tries to plant seeds of doubt in Rainbow's mind about whether Celestia truly cared for her or even understood her, or whether she was just using Rainbow as a weapon. Nightmare Moon then offers all of Rainbow's goals and fondest desires to her, namely a spot on the Wonderbolts and Shining Armor's love. And not just that, but she offers to fulfill all of her friends' wishes as well if Rainbow would proclaim loyalty to her. Finally, she points out that with Celestia gone, she was the only one capable of controlling the sun and the moon, and was thus indispensable to Equestria. Despite heavy temptation and inner turmoil, Rainbow resists with a simple realization: Celestia loved her, and all Nightmare Moon cared about was her own self-gratification.


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* NotSoDifferent: Celestia, after an emotional argument with Rainbow Dash, upon which she learns that Rainbow chafes about being overshadowed by her, she soberly reflects that Rainbow's hurt reminds her of another pony, long, long ago...
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Celestia becomes one with the sun to prevent Nightmare Moon from severing her connection to it, and thus making the sun irretrievable. She loses her distinct identity in the process, and does not expect be able to come back. [[spoiler: Fortunately, she's wrong about the last part.]] This explains the whole "where-is-Celestia-during-all-this" question that many fans have about the canon.


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* MindRape: Not nearly as damaging and traumatic as in other fanfics, but Rainbow Dash experiences this when Nightmare Moon invades her mind to discover Celestia's whereabouts.


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* ShipTease: Forced to recognize that her crush on Shining Armor will remain unrequited, Rainbow Dash can't help but notice how attractive Big Macintosh is. Applejack is quick to notice and tease her about it.


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* VitriolicBestBuds: Rainbow Dash and Applejack.
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* DemotedToExtra: Spike only gets a brief mention as the dragon Twilight had to hatch for her entrance exam.
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* AscendedExtra: Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves plays a major role in the story. Zecora, while not an extra in the show, plays a much expanded role in this fic.
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* TheObiWan: Zecora, who guides the Mane Cast in retrieving the Elements and fighting Nightmare Moon.
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** Spike is not entrusted to Twilight's care, as she does not become Celestia's student as is seen as a potential danger rather than a prodigy.

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** Spike is not entrusted to Twilight's care, as she does not become Celestia's student as student, and is thus seen as a potential danger rather than a prodigy.
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*WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash is enraged when she discovers how Celestia manipulated her and her friends behind the scenes since their foalhood in her plan to redeem her sister. Interestingly, she's not upset about being used, she's upset that Celestia did not trust her enough to be forthright about her intentions, because she would have [[UndyingLoyalty gladly aided Celestia]]. She says that she still loves Celestia, but she cannot forgive her yet. Fortunately, after both the princess and Rainbow have a chance to talk with other ponies, they reconcile quickly.
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* ShoutOut: There are too may too count in this fic, but the most notable is Twilight's paraphrasing Superman's WorldOfCardboardSpeech.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While this fic doesn't swerve into a [[[[DarkFuture Dark]] AlternateUniverse]] fic, the general situation and trials of the Elements are much more serious. Ditzy Doo and Shining Armor are brainwashed into serving as Nightmare Moon's minions before their horrified loved ones, and Nightmare Moon is very explicit in her attempts to kill the Mane Cast. The trial of laughter involves the Mane Cast and Zecora falling victim to the Swamp of Despair, in which they are forced to relive their most painful memories, paralyzing them with sadness while they sink into the swamp. Only Pinkie Pie's reminder that sadness doesn't last forever and to find laughter in any situation saves them. In Rarity's trial, she gives up a precious gift from her grandmother to appease the Diamond Dogs. Applejack honestly admits fault after accidentally disrupting a school of seaponies' spawning journey, knowing that they were contemplating killing the transgressor. Fluttershy interrupts a pitched battle between the other ponies (and Zecora) and gargoyles to extend kindness to said gargoyles. Twilight Sparkle duels [[spoiler: a corrupted Shining Armor]]. Rainbow Dash [[spoiler: very nearly sacrifices her life to save the other ponies, and resists a temptation much more seductive then the one seen in the show]].

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* DarkerAndEdgier: While this fic doesn't swerve into a [[[[DarkFuture [[DarkFuture Dark]] AlternateUniverse]] AlternateUniverse fic, the general situation and trials of the Elements are much more serious. Ditzy Doo and Shining Armor are brainwashed into serving as Nightmare Moon's minions before their horrified loved ones, and Nightmare Moon is very explicit in her attempts to kill the Mane Cast. The trial of laughter involves the Mane Cast and Zecora falling victim to the Swamp of Despair, in which they are forced to relive their most painful memories, paralyzing them with sadness while they sink into the swamp. Only Pinkie Pie's reminder that sadness doesn't last forever and to find laughter in any situation saves them. In Rarity's trial, she gives up a precious gift from her grandmother to appease the Diamond Dogs. Applejack honestly admits fault after accidentally disrupting a school of seaponies' spawning journey, knowing that they were contemplating killing the transgressor. Fluttershy interrupts a pitched battle between the other ponies (and Zecora) and gargoyles to extend kindness to said gargoyles. Twilight Sparkle duels [[spoiler: a corrupted Shining Armor]]. Rainbow Dash [[spoiler: very nearly sacrifices her life to save the other ponies, and resists a temptation much more seductive then the one seen in the show]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30097/Rainbooms-and-Royalty Rainbooms and Royalty]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Trinary Trinary]] with a rather simple premise: [[WhatIf What if]] rather than being in Canterlot the the day the Mane Cast earned their cutie marks, Princess Celestia was in Cloudsdale? And instead of taking on Twilight Sparkle as her personal protégé, she took on Rainbow Dash (despite knowing the Pegasus was more inclined to athletics rather academics)? How would things change? How would they stay the same? What happens when Nightmare Moon returns?

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30097/Rainbooms-and-Royalty Rainbooms and Royalty]] Royalty]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Trinary Trinary]] with a rather simple premise: [[WhatIf What if]] rather than being in Canterlot the the day the Mane Cast earned their cutie marks, Princess Celestia was in Cloudsdale? And instead of taking on Twilight Sparkle as her personal protégé, she took on Rainbow Dash (despite knowing the Pegasus was more inclined to athletics rather academics)? How would things change? How would they stay the same? What happens when Nightmare Moon returns?
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While this fic doesn't swerve into a [[[[DarkFuture Dark]] AlternateUniverse]] fic, the general situation and trials of the Elements are much more serious. The trial of laugher involves the Mane Cast and Zecora falling victim to the Swamp of Despair, in which they are forced to relive their most painful memories, paralyzing them with sadness while they sink into the swamp. Only Pinkie Pie's reminder that sadness doesn't last forever and to find laughter in any situation saves them. In

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* DarkerAndEdgier: While this fic doesn't swerve into a [[[[DarkFuture Dark]] AlternateUniverse]] fic, the general situation and trials of the Elements are much more serious. Ditzy Doo and Shining Armor are brainwashed into serving as Nightmare Moon's minions before their horrified loved ones, and Nightmare Moon is very explicit in her attempts to kill the Mane Cast. The trial of laugher laughter involves the Mane Cast and Zecora falling victim to the Swamp of Despair, in which they are forced to relive their most painful memories, paralyzing them with sadness while they sink into the swamp. Only Pinkie Pie's reminder that sadness doesn't last forever and to find laughter in any situation saves them. In Rarity's trial, she gives up a precious gift from her grandmother to appease the Diamond Dogs. Applejack honestly admits fault after accidentally disrupting a school of seaponies' spawning journey, knowing that they were contemplating killing the transgressor. Fluttershy interrupts a pitched battle between the other ponies (and Zecora) and gargoyles to extend kindness to said gargoyles. Twilight Sparkle duels [[spoiler: a corrupted Shining Armor]]. Rainbow Dash [[spoiler: very nearly sacrifices her life to save the other ponies, and resists a temptation much more seductive then the one seen in the show]].

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* BreakTheCutie: Twilight Sparkle after her disastrous entrance exam, to the point that she feels that her cutie mark represents her potential to harm other ponies, rather than her talent with magic. Rainbow and Applejack soon set her straight. [[spoiler: Rainbow is broken more than once. First, after Nightmare Moon forces Rainbow Dash, reeling from the loss of Celestia, to publicly plead with her to not brainwash Shining Armor, Ditzy Doo, and two Pegasus royal guards, only to do so anyway and reveal that she only wanted to humiliate the proud Pegasus before Ponyville. Second

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* BreakTheCutie: Twilight Sparkle after her disastrous entrance exam, to the point that she feels that her cutie mark represents her potential to harm other ponies, rather than her talent with magic. Rainbow and Applejack soon set her straight. [[spoiler: Rainbow is broken more than once. First, after Nightmare Moon forces Rainbow Dash, reeling from the loss of Celestia, to publicly plead with her to not brainwash Shining Armor, Ditzy Doo, and two Pegasus royal guards, only to do so anyway and reveal that she only wanted to humiliate the proud Pegasus before Ponyville. Second The second break occurs when the corrupted Shining Armor reveals that he knew all about Rainbow Dash's crush on him, and that there was never any chance of him reciprocating his feelings, as she was little more than a child to him and because he was already spoken for.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While this fic doesn't swerve into a [[[[DarkFuture Dark]] AlternateUniverse]] fic, the general situation and trials of the Elements are much more serious. The trial of laugher involves the Mane Cast and Zecora falling victim to the Swamp of Despair, in which they are forced to relive their most painful memories, paralyzing them with sadness while they sink into the swamp. Only Pinkie Pie's reminder that sadness doesn't last forever and to find laughter in any situation saves them. In
* [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Everypony Can See It]]: Rainbow Dash's crush on Shining Armor.



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** Another important change is that Shining Armor is introduced much earlier in this universe than in the canon universe, as Rainbow Dash meets Shining in Canterlot as a filly, subsequently developing a crush on him. When Rainbow Dash runs off to Ponyville, Shining is dispatched to follow her, and thus he is made known to the rest of the characters.
** Spike is not entrusted to Twilight's care, as she does not become Celestia's student as is seen as a potential danger rather than a prodigy.
* HopelessSuitor: Rainbow Dash has a crush on Shining Armor, but he sees her as a second little sister.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash very nearly performs this when she takes a magic blast from Nightmare Moon meant for the rest of the Mane Cast.]]
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: While Rainbow Dash is openly brash and boastful, her inability to perform the sonic rainboom and the pressures of living up to being Celestia's student makes her very insecue.
* PrecociousCrush: Rainbow Dash, being Celestia's personal student, meets, as a filly, Shining Armor when he starts his job as a royal guard, and begins to crush on him. Heavily.
* TakingTheBullet: Rainbow Dash knocks the rest of the Mane Cast out of the way of Nightmare Moon's magic blasts, taking it herself. She would have died, [[spoiler: had Ditzy not caught her]].
* TickleTorture: Rainbow Dash, after growing close to Princess Celestia, feels no compunctions in refraining from pranking her. Unfortunately, Rainbow Dash is extremely ticklish, leaving her helpless before Celestia's retaliatory tickles.

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* ForWantOfANail: While the whole story is this to a degree, it is most noticeable with Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash. In the show, Twilight Sparkle's disastrous entrance exam is salvaged by the arrival of Princess Celestia. She restrains Twilight's rampant magic, and praises her for her raw abilities, offering to become her personal teacher. Twilight thus views the entrance exam fiasco positively in the canon, and in her dedication to living up to Princess Celestia's expectations (and due to her inherent introverted nature) eschews friends as something [[ImNotHereToMakeFriends she doesn't have time for]]. But in ''Rainbooms and Royalty'', Celestia is not in Canterlot, and exam is much more traumatic.

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* BreakTheCutie: Twilight Sparkle after her disastrous entrance exam, to the point that she feels that her cutie mark represents her potential to harm other ponies, rather than her talent with magic. Rainbow and Applejack soon set her straight. [[spoiler: Rainbow is broken more than once. First, after Nightmare Moon forces Rainbow Dash, reeling from the loss of Celestia, to publicly plead with her to not brainwash Shining Armor, Ditzy Doo, and two Pegasus royal guards, only to do so anyway and reveal that she only wanted to humiliate the proud Pegasus before Ponyville. Second
* ForWantOfANail: While the whole story is this to a degree, it is most noticeable with Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash. Dash
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In the show, Twilight Sparkle's disastrous entrance exam for Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns is salvaged by the arrival of Princess Celestia.Celestia herself. She restrains Twilight's rampant magic, and praises her for her raw abilities, offering to become her personal teacher. Twilight thus views the entrance exam fiasco positively in the canon, and in her dedication to living up to Princess Celestia's expectations (and due to her inherent introverted nature) eschews friends as something [[ImNotHereToMakeFriends she doesn't have time for]]. But in ''Rainbooms and Royalty'', Celestia is not in Canterlot, and exam is much more traumatic. Without Celestia showing up to restrain her magic, Twilight's magic rages unchecked until she exhausts it all. While the damage is undone, the examiners only offer her entrance into the school because they feel she would be a danger to society if she was not rigorously instructed. This trauma ends up making Twilight as reclusive and introverted as she was at the beginning of the show, but rather than doing so out of a sense of aloofness and determination to prove herself worthy of Celestia's patronage, Twilight does so out of fear of harming others. While her characterization remains remarkably faithful to the show, there is this subtle difference.
** Rainbow Dash, ironically, is not as altered as Twilight Sparkle by the change of events, but her InferioritySuperiorityComplex is magnified by being Celestia's student. Not very studious, not from a prestigious family, and certainly not given to following the etiquette of high society, she constantly struggles to prove to Equestria and herself that she is worthy of being Celestia's student. She's also upset by the fact that her own achievements are marginalized by being recognized as "Celestia's student", rather than for her own accomplishments. Coupled with her inability to repeat the sonic rainboom despite Celestia's promise to help her in doing so, as well as her competitive nature, Dash often feels like she's incapable of winning, and she ''hates'' to lose. Another difference is that when Rainbow and the Mane Cast (plus Zecora) head out to confront Nightmare Moon, Rainbow Dash is reluctant, like mainstream Twilight, to bring them with her. But whereas Twilight was reluctant because she had to realize the value of having friends, Rainbow is reluctant out of a desire to keep her new friends safe and a distorted sense of taking Nightmare Moon down being her personal responsibility.
* TakingTheBullet: Rainbow Dash knocks the rest of the Mane Cast out of the way of
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30097/Rainbooms-and-Royalty Rainbooms and Royalty]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Trinary Trinary]] with a rather simple premise: [[WhatIf What if]] rather than being in Canterlot the the day the Mane Cast earned their cutie marks, Princess Celestia was in Cloudsdale? And instead of taking on Twilight Sparkle as her personal protégé, she took on Rainbow Dash (despite knowing the Pegasus was more inclined to athletics rather academics)? How would things change? How would they stay the same? What happens when Nightmare Moon returns?

A fantastic example of an AlternateUniverseFic done right. Despite the altered circumstances, all the ponies remain fantastically in-character, the story is not simply an examination of how things are different from the canon but actually has a well-developed plot, and the story in some cases expands upon and fleshes out the canon. This story can also be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8179465/1/Rainbooms-and-Royalty FanFiction.Net]] under the pen name [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1843988/Rowanoak23 Rowanoak23]]. Currently has a sequel in progress, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/55061/May-the-Best-Friends-Win May the Best Friends Win]].
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* ForWantOfANail: While the whole story is this to a degree, it is most noticeable with Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash. In the show, Twilight Sparkle's disastrous entrance exam is salvaged by the arrival of Princess Celestia. She restrains Twilight's rampant magic, and praises her for her raw abilities, offering to become her personal teacher. Twilight thus views the entrance exam fiasco positively in the canon, and in her dedication to living up to Princess Celestia's expectations (and due to her inherent introverted nature) eschews friends as something [[ImNotHereToMakeFriends she doesn't have time for]]. But in ''Rainbooms and Royalty'', Celestia is not in Canterlot, and exam is much more traumatic.
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