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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Remember what Weiss said towards the end of Volume 1 of the series proper, that due to the White Fang's actions, her father came home angry and that made for a very difficult childhood? Well, it turns out that the White Fang aren't to blame, as Vlad is only using Weiss and Winter to serve a role in his grand scheme. He's not only responsible for giving Weiss her scar, but also made her and Winter fight Grimm, fight each other, and even injected them with what could be the Dust/Aura equivalent of ''steroids''! What seals his fate as this is that his plan for Weiss is for her to be basically a ''human sacrifice'' to awaken Giranarok!]]
** [[spoiler: If that's not enough, when it turned out Winter wasn't capable of expanding her Aura capabilities, Vlad used mind control in order to turn her into an assassin in order to dispose of his enemies, possibly including SDC board members that knew too much.]]
* AccidentallyAccurate: InUniverse example. In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]
* AlternateContinuity: The events of Volume 3 (mainly the vol.'s endgame) of the [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} series proper]] effectively makes the events of ''Grimm Darkness'' impossible to coexist alongside them. ''Grimm Darkness'' will either exist parallel to Volume 3 or take Volume 3 in BroadStrokes and happen before Vol. 3. The author does not like to alter events in the series itself unless they ''absolutely'' conflict with the events of the fanfic, but this happens to be a case where the retcons are seen as necessary.
** That said, however, anything from Volume 3 that harshly goes against events established in ''Grimm Darkness'' and some other things are changed to make the two more compatible with one another. See {{Retcon}} for more details.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Vlad Schnee, Weiss and Winter's father.]]
* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: After realizing how evil her father is, what he's planning, and how he only used her as a pawn for his plans, Weiss delivers one:]]
--> [[spoiler: "Weiss: This whole time, it wasn't the White Fang that caused me pain growing up, it was you! You used me for your sick delusions! I'm ashamed to be your daughter!"]]
* CerebusSyndrome: [[spoiler: Once Weiss's father is revealed to be the story's [[BigBad main villain]] and his plans start moving forward, the story throws out all comical moments and becomes downright serious.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Junior is shown to be disgusted when he sees Weiss's father put the mysterious girl back under his complete control by pressing the Dust-based device on her chest, causing her excruciating pain in Chapter 8.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Cardin Winchester goes full on bad guy after making a deal with Vlad, although he was already quite the {{Jerkass}} to begin with.]]
* FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler: More like fighting your sister. Late in the story, it's revealed that the mysterious girl is Winter Schnee, Weiss's sister, who's then forced to fight her. Naturally, Weiss finds herself unable to harm her own sister.]]
* HeKnowsTooMuch: [[spoiler: The truth behind the disappearance of several Schnee Dust Company board members, as brought up by Weiss in Volume 1, Episode 15, is revealed to be her father that orchestrated them due to them finding out about his plans.]]
* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 8, after discovering that her father is the BigBad and the one responsible of all the events on the story, including the worldwide Dust shortage, Weiss suffers this. Not wanting Ruby, Blake, or Yang to get hurt, she breaks off from Team RWBY and leaves Beacon. Fortunately, Weiss returns one chapter later.]]
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler: The battle between Weiss and the Mysterious Girl after being revealed to be her sister Winter. Refusing to actually attack Winter, Weiss tries to get her to come to her senses and break her out of her mind control. It's not until Ruby intervenes and the two of them manage to break Winter's brainwashing.]]
* RedShirtArmy: Countless Atlesian soldiers become this at the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler: when Weiss's father is revealed to be the main villain and has every soldier aboard his ship mercilessly slaughtered by the Dark Trinity and Neo. ''Then'' he has a whole military base of them killed off by combat mechs he commissioned for the military, ''[[UpToEleven and then]]'' has his ship open fire on the two escorting it, killing all soldiers aboard them!]]
** MauveShirt: [[spoiler: The two soldiers that guarded the outside of Princess Aurina's room at Beacon, who were seen a few times beforehand, end up killed by Vlad himself.]]
* {{Retcon}}: Due to unfortunate complications between the two, ''Grimm Darkness'' ends up having to change a number of things from Volume 3 of the [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} series proper]]. To clarify:
** [[spoiler: Winter Schnee leads a double life, one as a member of the Atlesian military and the other as the Mysterious Girl; her look and fighting style are what was established in Vol. 3. Instead of meeting up with Team RWBY at the entrance to Beacon, Winter meets them in a secret location. Qrow does the same, leading to the sparring match. In addition, Winter doesn't meet up with Ironwood since she's considered a traitor to the military. Dialogue between Weiss, Winter, and the others is altered to reflect events from ''Grimm Darkness''. Winter, however, reappears during the endgame in a BigDamnHeroes moment to save Weiss from the Atlesian Paladin, but ends up captured by Ironwood to be tried for her crimes as the Mysterious Girl]].
** Team NAMA (and Minamizato Kanon) took part in the Vytal Festival Tournament and [[spoiler: helped fight the Grimm during the Vol. 3 finale]].
** [[spoiler: When fighting the Atlesian Paladin, Velvet Scarletina also uses constructs of weapons from Team NAMA, mainly Nived's gunblade, Makoto's flechettes, and Kanon's ribbon. She even uses the Mysterious Girl's ring blades. It's likely she took pictures of them in order to do this.]]
** [[spoiler: Instead of her father, a group of SDC representatives are the ones to escort Weiss back to Atlas (as she'll inherit the company when she gets older).]]
** Cardin Winchester does not appear at all during Vol. 3's events, [[spoiler: Kanon having been given his place as Team CRDL's (now KRDL) leader by Ozpin]].
* TykeBomb: [[spoiler: It turns out that Vlad did this to Weiss and Winter in order to benefit his plans. While he didn't succeed with Weiss, he managed to turn Winter into a brainwashed assassin.]]

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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Remember what Weiss said towards the end of Volume 1 of the series proper, claimed that due to the White Fang's actions, actions caused her father came to always come home angry and that made for angry, giving her a very difficult childhood? Well, it turns out that the White Fang aren't to blame, as Vlad childhood. He is only using Weiss and Winter to serve a role in his grand scheme. He's not only responsible for giving Weiss her scar, but also made scar and forced her and Winter to fight Grimm, fight Grimm and each other, and even injected them with what could be the Dust/Aura equivalent of ''steroids''! What seals his fate as this is that his plan for other.
%% * BigBad: [[spoiler:Vlad Schnee,
Weiss is for her to be basically a ''human sacrifice'' to awaken Giranarok!]]
** [[spoiler: If that's not enough, when it turned out Winter wasn't capable of expanding her Aura capabilities, Vlad used mind control in order to turn her into an assassin in order to dispose of his enemies, possibly including SDC board members that knew too much.
and Winter's father.]]
* AccidentallyAccurate: InUniverse example. In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]
* AlternateContinuity: The events of Volume 3 (mainly the vol.'s endgame) of the [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} series proper]] effectively makes the events of ''Grimm Darkness'' impossible to coexist alongside them. ''Grimm Darkness'' will either exist parallel to Volume 3 or take Volume 3 in BroadStrokes and happen before Vol. 3. The author does not like to alter events in the series itself unless they ''absolutely'' conflict with the events of the fanfic, but this happens to be a case where the retcons are seen as necessary.
** That said, however, anything from Volume 3 that harshly goes against events established in ''Grimm Darkness'' and some other things are changed to make the two more compatible with one another. See {{Retcon}} for more details.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Vlad Schnee, Weiss and Winter's father.]]
* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: After realizing how evil her father is, what he's planning, and how he only used her as a pawn for his plans, Weiss delivers one:]]
--> [[spoiler: "Weiss: This whole time, it wasn't the White Fang that caused me pain growing up, it was you! You used me for your sick delusions! I'm ashamed to be your daughter!"]]
* CerebusSyndrome: [[spoiler: Once Weiss's father is revealed to be the story's [[BigBad main villain]] and his plans start moving forward, the story throws out all comical moments and becomes downright serious.]]
%% * EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Junior [[spoiler:Junior is shown to be disgusted when he sees Weiss's father put the mysterious girl back under his complete control by pressing the Dust-based device on her chest, causing her excruciating pain in Chapter 8.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Cardin Winchester goes full on bad guy after making a deal with Vlad, although he was already quite the {{Jerkass}} to begin with.]]
* FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler: More like fighting your sister. Late in the story, it's revealed that the mysterious girl is Winter Schnee, Weiss's sister, who's then forced to fight her. Naturally, Weiss finds herself unable to harm her own sister.]]
* HeKnowsTooMuch: [[spoiler: The truth behind the disappearance of several Schnee Dust Company board members, as brought up by Weiss in Volume 1, Episode 15, is revealed to be her father that orchestrated them due to them finding out about his plans.]]
* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 8, after discovering that her father is the BigBad and the one responsible of all the events on the story, including the worldwide Dust shortage, Weiss suffers this. Not wanting Ruby, Blake, or Yang to get hurt, she breaks off from Team RWBY and leaves Beacon. Fortunately, Weiss returns one chapter later.]]
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler: The battle between Weiss and the Mysterious Girl after being revealed to be her sister Winter. Refusing to actually attack Winter, Weiss tries to get her to come to her senses and break her out of her mind control. It's not until Ruby intervenes and the two of them manage to break Winter's brainwashing.
]]
* RedShirtArmy: Countless Atlesian soldiers become this at the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler: when Weiss's father is revealed to be the main villain and has every soldier aboard his ship mercilessly slaughtered by the Dark Trinity and Neo. ''Then'' he He has a whole military base of them killed off by combat mechs he commissioned for the military, ''[[UpToEleven and then]]'' then has his ship open fire on the two escorting it, killing all soldiers aboard them!]]
** MauveShirt: [[spoiler: The two soldiers that guarded the outside of Princess Aurina's room at Beacon, who were seen a few times beforehand, end up killed by Vlad himself.]]
* {{Retcon}}: Due to unfortunate complications between the two, ''Grimm Darkness'' ends up having to change a number of things from Volume 3 of the [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} series proper]]. To clarify:
** [[spoiler: Winter Schnee leads a double life, one as a member of the Atlesian military and the other as the Mysterious Girl; her look and fighting style are what was established in Vol. 3. Instead of meeting up with Team RWBY at the entrance to Beacon, Winter meets them in a secret location. Qrow does the same, leading to the sparring match. In addition, Winter doesn't meet up with Ironwood since she's considered a traitor to the military. Dialogue between Weiss, Winter, and the others is altered to reflect events from ''Grimm Darkness''. Winter, however, reappears during the endgame in a BigDamnHeroes moment to save Weiss from the Atlesian Paladin, but ends up captured by Ironwood to be tried for her crimes as the Mysterious Girl]].
** Team NAMA (and Minamizato Kanon) took part in the Vytal Festival Tournament and [[spoiler: helped fight the Grimm during the Vol. 3 finale]].
** [[spoiler: When fighting the Atlesian Paladin, Velvet Scarletina also uses constructs of weapons from Team NAMA, mainly Nived's gunblade, Makoto's flechettes, and Kanon's ribbon. She even uses the Mysterious Girl's ring blades. It's likely she took pictures of them in order to do this.]]
** [[spoiler: Instead of her father, a group of SDC representatives are the ones to escort Weiss back to Atlas (as she'll inherit the company when she gets older).]]
** Cardin Winchester does not appear at all during Vol. 3's events, [[spoiler: Kanon having been given his place as Team CRDL's (now KRDL) leader by Ozpin]].
* TykeBomb: [[spoiler: It turns out that Vlad did this to Weiss and Winter in order to benefit his plans. While he didn't succeed with Weiss, he managed to turn Winter into a brainwashed assassin.
them.]]
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* BerserkButton: Melanie and Miltiades definitely don't like being called bimbos, as Weiss finds out in Chapter 6.
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!!NOTE: There are a number of spoilers present here for things that have yet to be written down in the fanfic but are already planned. All such tropes are marked in bold, so read them at your own risk.

* '''AbusiveParents''': [[spoiler: Remember what Weiss said towards the end of Volume 1 of the series proper, that due to the White Fang's actions, her father came home angry and that made for a very difficult childhood? Well, it turns out that the White Fang aren't to blame, as Vlad is only using Weiss and Winter to serve a role in his grand scheme. He's not only responsible for giving Weiss her scar, but also made her and Winter fight Grimm, fight each other, and even injected them with what could be the Dust/Aura equivalent of ''steroids''! What seals his fate as this is that his plan for Weiss is for her to be basically a ''human sacrifice'' to awaken Giranarok!]]

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!!NOTE: NOTE: There are a number of spoilers present here for things that have yet to be written down in the fanfic but are already planned. All such tropes are marked in bold, so read Read them at your own risk.

* '''AbusiveParents''': AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Remember what Weiss said towards the end of Volume 1 of the series proper, that due to the White Fang's actions, her father came home angry and that made for a very difficult childhood? Well, it turns out that the White Fang aren't to blame, as Vlad is only using Weiss and Winter to serve a role in his grand scheme. He's not only responsible for giving Weiss her scar, but also made her and Winter fight Grimm, fight each other, and even injected them with what could be the Dust/Aura equivalent of ''steroids''! What seals his fate as this is that his plan for Weiss is for her to be basically a ''human sacrifice'' to awaken Giranarok!]]



* '''CallingTheOldManOut''': [[spoiler: After realizing how evil her father is, what he's planning, and how he only used her as a pawn for his plans, Weiss delivers one:]]

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* '''CallingTheOldManOut''': CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: After realizing how evil her father is, what he's planning, and how he only used her as a pawn for his plans, Weiss delivers one:]]



* '''FightingYourFriend''': [[spoiler: More like fighting your sister. Late in the story, it's revealed that the mysterious girl is Winter Schnee, Weiss's sister, who's then forced to fight her. Naturally, Weiss finds herself unable to harm her own sister.]]
* '''HeKnowsTooMuch''': [[spoiler: The truth behind the disappearance of several Schnee Dust Company board members, as brought up by Weiss in Volume 1, Episode 15, is revealed to be her father that orchestrated them due to them finding out about his plans.]]
* '''HeroicBSOD''': [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 8, after discovering that her father is the BigBad and the one responsible of all the events on the story, including the worldwide Dust shortage, Weiss suffers this. Not wanting Ruby, Blake, or Yang to get hurt, she breaks off from Team RWBY and leaves Beacon. Fortunately, Weiss returns one chapter later.]]
* '''IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight''': [[spoiler: The battle between Weiss and the Mysterious Girl after being revealed to be her sister Winter. Refusing to actually attack Winter, Weiss tries to get her to come to her senses and break her out of her mind control. It's not until Ruby intervenes and the two of them manage to break Winter's brainwashing.]]

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* '''FightingYourFriend''': FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler: More like fighting your sister. Late in the story, it's revealed that the mysterious girl is Winter Schnee, Weiss's sister, who's then forced to fight her. Naturally, Weiss finds herself unable to harm her own sister.]]
* '''HeKnowsTooMuch''': HeKnowsTooMuch: [[spoiler: The truth behind the disappearance of several Schnee Dust Company board members, as brought up by Weiss in Volume 1, Episode 15, is revealed to be her father that orchestrated them due to them finding out about his plans.]]
* '''HeroicBSOD''': HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 8, after discovering that her father is the BigBad and the one responsible of all the events on the story, including the worldwide Dust shortage, Weiss suffers this. Not wanting Ruby, Blake, or Yang to get hurt, she breaks off from Team RWBY and leaves Beacon. Fortunately, Weiss returns one chapter later.]]
* '''IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight''': IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler: The battle between Weiss and the Mysterious Girl after being revealed to be her sister Winter. Refusing to actually attack Winter, Weiss tries to get her to come to her senses and break her out of her mind control. It's not until Ruby intervenes and the two of them manage to break Winter's brainwashing.]]



** [[spoiler: '''Winter Schnee leads a double life, one as a member of the Atlesian military and the other as the Mysterious Girl; her look and fighting style are what was established in Vol. 3. Instead of meeting up with Team RWBY at the entrance to Beacon, Winter meets them in a secret location. Qrow does the same, leading to the sparring match. In addition, Winter doesn't meet up with Ironwood since she's considered a traitor to the military. Dialogue between Weiss, Winter, and the others is altered to reflect events from ''Grimm Darkness''. Winter, however, reappears during the endgame in a BigDamnHeroes moment to save Weiss from the Atlesian Paladin, but ends up captured by Ironwood to be tried for her crimes as the Mysterious Girl''']].

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** [[spoiler: '''Winter Winter Schnee leads a double life, one as a member of the Atlesian military and the other as the Mysterious Girl; her look and fighting style are what was established in Vol. 3. Instead of meeting up with Team RWBY at the entrance to Beacon, Winter meets them in a secret location. Qrow does the same, leading to the sparring match. In addition, Winter doesn't meet up with Ironwood since she's considered a traitor to the military. Dialogue between Weiss, Winter, and the others is altered to reflect events from ''Grimm Darkness''. Winter, however, reappears during the endgame in a BigDamnHeroes moment to save Weiss from the Atlesian Paladin, but ends up captured by Ironwood to be tried for her crimes as the Mysterious Girl''']].Girl]].



** [[spoiler: Instead of her father, a group of SDC representatives are the ones to escort Weiss back to Atlas]] [[spoiler: ('''as she'll inherit the company when she gets older''').]]
** Cardin Winchester does not appear at all during Vol. 3's events, [[spoiler: '''Kanon having been given his place as Team CRDL's (now KRDL) leader by Ozpin''']].
* '''TykeBomb''': [[spoiler: It turns out that Vlad did this to Weiss and Winter in order to benefit his plans. While he didn't succeed with Weiss, he managed to turn Winter into a brainwashed assassin.]]

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** [[spoiler: Instead of her father, a group of SDC representatives are the ones to escort Weiss back to Atlas]] [[spoiler: ('''as Atlas (as she'll inherit the company when she gets older''').older).]]
** Cardin Winchester does not appear at all during Vol. 3's events, [[spoiler: '''Kanon Kanon having been given his place as Team CRDL's (now KRDL) leader by Ozpin''']].
Ozpin]].
* '''TykeBomb''': TykeBomb: [[spoiler: It turns out that Vlad did this to Weiss and Winter in order to benefit his plans. While he didn't succeed with Weiss, he managed to turn Winter into a brainwashed assassin.]]
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* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: What Weiss said about her father in Volume 1 of the series proper is revealed to be far worse than we were led on, as well as the Schnee Dust Company being cited for its "controversial labor force and questionable business partners"]] [[spoiler: '''and the truth about her sister'''.]]
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Has a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/RWBYGrimmDarkness Characters page]] as well.

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** That said, however, anything from Volume 3 that doesn't harshly go against events established in ''Grimm Darkness'' and some other things are changed to make the two more compatible with one another. See {{Retcon}} for more details.

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** That said, however, anything from Volume 3 that doesn't harshly go goes against events established in ''Grimm Darkness'' and some other things are changed to make the two more compatible with one another. See {{Retcon}} for more details.
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** [[spoiler: Instead of her father, a group of SDC representatives are the ones to escort Weiss back to Atlas ]][[spoiler: ('''as she'll inherit the company when she gets older''').]]

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** [[spoiler: Instead of her father, a group of SDC representatives are the ones to escort Weiss back to Atlas ]][[spoiler: Atlas]] [[spoiler: ('''as she'll inherit the company when she gets older''').]]

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RWBY: Grimm Darkness is a fanfic created by [[http://sunflorazumarill.deviantart.com/ Sunflorazumarill]] of Website/{{DeviantArt}} taking place in the world of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}. Taking place anytime after Volume 2, the story involves a Dust shortage that is happening throughout all of Remnant. As the crisis thickens, there are also outbreaks of Grimm attacks, except these Grimm are being controlled by a MadScientist, a new trio of bad guys that are carrying out the plans of [[BigBad their master]], and a mysterious girl in a gray cloak that seems to know Weiss Schnee. To top things off, the father of Weiss and president of the Schnee Dust Company, Vlad, also appears, knowing all too well what has befallen Remnant, although he's hiding something.

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RWBY: ''RWBY: Grimm Darkness Darkness'' is a fanfic created by [[http://sunflorazumarill.deviantart.com/ Sunflorazumarill]] of Website/{{DeviantArt}} ''Website/{{DeviantArt}}'' taking place in the world of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}.''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''. Taking place anytime after Volume 2, the story involves a Dust shortage that is happening throughout all of Remnant. As the crisis thickens, there are also outbreaks of Grimm attacks, except these Grimm are being controlled by a MadScientist, a new trio of bad guys that are carrying out the plans of [[BigBad their master]], and a mysterious girl in a gray cloak that seems to know Weiss Schnee. To top things off, the father of Weiss and president of the Schnee Dust Company, Vlad, also appears, knowing all too well what has befallen Remnant, although he's hiding something.


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* AlternateContinuity: The events of Volume 3 (mainly the vol.'s endgame) of the [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} series proper]] effectively makes the events of ''Grimm Darkness'' impossible to coexist alongside them. ''Grimm Darkness'' will either exist parallel to Volume 3 or take Volume 3 in BroadStrokes and happen before Vol. 3. The author does not like to alter events in the series itself unless they ''absolutely'' conflict with the events of the fanfic, but this happens to be a case where the retcons are seen as necessary.
** That said, however, anything from Volume 3 that doesn't harshly go against events established in ''Grimm Darkness'' and some other things are changed to make the two more compatible with one another. See {{Retcon}} for more details.


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* {{Retcon}}: Due to unfortunate complications between the two, ''Grimm Darkness'' ends up having to change a number of things from Volume 3 of the [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} series proper]]. To clarify:
** [[spoiler: '''Winter Schnee leads a double life, one as a member of the Atlesian military and the other as the Mysterious Girl; her look and fighting style are what was established in Vol. 3. Instead of meeting up with Team RWBY at the entrance to Beacon, Winter meets them in a secret location. Qrow does the same, leading to the sparring match. In addition, Winter doesn't meet up with Ironwood since she's considered a traitor to the military. Dialogue between Weiss, Winter, and the others is altered to reflect events from ''Grimm Darkness''. Winter, however, reappears during the endgame in a BigDamnHeroes moment to save Weiss from the Atlesian Paladin, but ends up captured by Ironwood to be tried for her crimes as the Mysterious Girl''']].
** Team NAMA (and Minamizato Kanon) took part in the Vytal Festival Tournament and [[spoiler: helped fight the Grimm during the Vol. 3 finale]].
** [[spoiler: When fighting the Atlesian Paladin, Velvet Scarletina also uses constructs of weapons from Team NAMA, mainly Nived's gunblade, Makoto's flechettes, and Kanon's ribbon. She even uses the Mysterious Girl's ring blades. It's likely she took pictures of them in order to do this.]]
** [[spoiler: Instead of her father, a group of SDC representatives are the ones to escort Weiss back to Atlas ]][[spoiler: ('''as she'll inherit the company when she gets older''').]]
** Cardin Winchester does not appear at all during Vol. 3's events, [[spoiler: '''Kanon having been given his place as Team CRDL's (now KRDL) leader by Ozpin''']].
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'''Tropes that apply to RWBY: Grimm Darkness:'''

NOTE: There are a number of spoilers present here for things that have yet to be written down in the fanfic but are already planned. All such tropes are marked in bold, so read them at your own risk.

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'''Tropes !'''Tropes that apply to RWBY: Grimm Darkness:'''

NOTE: !!NOTE: There are a number of spoilers present here for things that have yet to be written down in the fanfic but are already planned. All such tropes are marked in bold, so read them at your own risk.
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* '''EvenEvilHasStandards''': [[spoiler: Junior is shown to be disgusted when he sees Weiss's father put the mysterious girl back under his complete control by pressing the Dust-based device on her chest, causing her excruciating pain in Chapter 8.]]

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* '''EvenEvilHasStandards''': EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Junior is shown to be disgusted when he sees Weiss's father put the mysterious girl back under his complete control by pressing the Dust-based device on her chest, causing her excruciating pain in Chapter 8.]]
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* '''HeroicBSOD''': [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 8, after discovering that her father is the Big Bad and the one responsible of all the events on the story, including the worldwide Dust shortage, Weiss suffers this. Not wanting Ruby, Blake, or Yang to get hurt, she breaks off from Team RWBY and leaves Beacon. Fortunately, Weiss returns one chapter later.]]

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* '''HeroicBSOD''': [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 8, after discovering that her father is the Big Bad BigBad and the one responsible of all the events on the story, including the worldwide Dust shortage, Weiss suffers this. Not wanting Ruby, Blake, or Yang to get hurt, she breaks off from Team RWBY and leaves Beacon. Fortunately, Weiss returns one chapter later.]]
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* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: What Weiss said about her father in Volume 1 of the series proper is revealed to be far worse than we were led on, as well as the Schnee Dust Company being cited for its "controversial labor force and questionable business partners" '''and the truth about her sister'''.]]

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* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: What Weiss said about her father in Volume 1 of the series proper is revealed to be far worse than we were led on, as well as the Schnee Dust Company being cited for its "controversial labor force and questionable business partners" partners"]] [[spoiler: '''and the truth about her sister'''.]]
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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Vlad Schnee, Weiss '''and Winter''''s father.]]

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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Vlad Schnee, Weiss '''and Winter''''s and Winter's father.]]



* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: What Weiss said about her father in Volume 1 of the series proper is revealed to be far worse than we were led on, as well as the Schnee Dust Company being cited for its "controversial labor force and questionable business partners".]]

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* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: What Weiss said about her father in Volume 1 of the series proper is revealed to be far worse than we were led on, as well as the Schnee Dust Company being cited for its "controversial labor force and questionable business partners".partners" '''and the truth about her sister'''.]]

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NOTE: There are a number of spoilers present here for things that have yet to be written down in the fanfic but are already planned. All such tropes are marked in bold, so read them at your own risk.

* '''AbusiveParents''': [[spoiler: Remember what Weiss said towards the end of Volume 1 of the series proper, that due to the White Fang's actions, her father came home angry and that made for a very difficult childhood? Well, it turns out that the White Fang aren't to blame, as Vlad is only using Weiss and Winter to serve a role in his grand scheme. He's not only responsible for giving Weiss her scar, but also made her and Winter fight Grimm, fight each other, and even injected them with what could be the Dust/Aura equivalent of ''steroids''! What seals his fate as this is that his plan for Weiss is for her to be basically a ''human sacrifice'' to awaken Giranarok!]]
** [[spoiler: If that's not enough, when it turned out Winter wasn't capable of expanding her Aura capabilities, Vlad used mind control in order to turn her into an assassin in order to dispose of his enemies, possibly including SDC board members that knew too much.]]



* BigBad: [[spoiler: Vlad Schnee, Weiss's father.]]

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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Vlad Schnee, Weiss's Weiss '''and Winter''''s father.]]]]
* '''CallingTheOldManOut''': [[spoiler: After realizing how evil her father is, what he's planning, and how he only used her as a pawn for his plans, Weiss delivers one:]]
--> [[spoiler: "Weiss: This whole time, it wasn't the White Fang that caused me pain growing up, it was you! You used me for your sick delusions! I'm ashamed to be your daughter!"]]



* '''EvenEvilHasStandards''': [[spoiler: Junior is shown to be disgusted when he sees Weiss's father put the mysterious girl back under his complete control by pressing the Dust-based device on her chest, causing her excruciating pain in Chapter 8.]]



* '''FightingYourFriend''': [[spoiler: More like fighting your sister. Late in the story, it's revealed that the mysterious girl is Winter Schnee, Weiss's sister, who's then forced to fight her. Naturally, Weiss finds herself unable to harm her own sister.]]
* '''HeKnowsTooMuch''': [[spoiler: The truth behind the disappearance of several Schnee Dust Company board members, as brought up by Weiss in Volume 1, Episode 15, is revealed to be her father that orchestrated them due to them finding out about his plans.]]
* '''HeroicBSOD''': [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 8, after discovering that her father is the Big Bad and the one responsible of all the events on the story, including the worldwide Dust shortage, Weiss suffers this. Not wanting Ruby, Blake, or Yang to get hurt, she breaks off from Team RWBY and leaves Beacon. Fortunately, Weiss returns one chapter later.]]
* '''IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight''': [[spoiler: The battle between Weiss and the Mysterious Girl after being revealed to be her sister Winter. Refusing to actually attack Winter, Weiss tries to get her to come to her senses and break her out of her mind control. It's not until Ruby intervenes and the two of them manage to break Winter's brainwashing.]]



** MauveShirt: [[spoiler: The two soldiers that guarded the outside of Princess Aurina's room at Beacon, who were seen a few times beforehand, end up killed by Vlad himself.]]

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** MauveShirt: [[spoiler: The two soldiers that guarded the outside of Princess Aurina's room at Beacon, who were seen a few times beforehand, end up killed by Vlad himself.]]
* '''TykeBomb''': [[spoiler: It turns out that Vlad did this to Weiss and Winter in order to benefit his plans. While he didn't succeed with Weiss, he managed to turn Winter into a brainwashed assassin.
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RWBY: Grimm Darkness is a fanfic created by [[http://sunflorazumarill.deviantart.com/ Sunflorazumarill]] of {{DeviantArt}} taking place in the world of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}. Taking place anytime after Volume 2, the story involves a Dust shortage that is happening throughout all of Remnant. As the crisis thickens, there are also outbreaks of Grimm attacks, except these Grimm are being controlled by a MadScientist, a new trio of bad guys that are carrying out the plans of [[BigBad their master]], and a mysterious girl in a gray cloak that seems to know Weiss Schnee. To top things off, the father of Weiss and president of the Schnee Dust Company, Vlad, also appears, knowing all too well what has befallen Remnant, although he's hiding something.

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RWBY: Grimm Darkness is a fanfic created by [[http://sunflorazumarill.deviantart.com/ Sunflorazumarill]] of {{DeviantArt}} Website/{{DeviantArt}} taking place in the world of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}. Taking place anytime after Volume 2, the story involves a Dust shortage that is happening throughout all of Remnant. As the crisis thickens, there are also outbreaks of Grimm attacks, except these Grimm are being controlled by a MadScientist, a new trio of bad guys that are carrying out the plans of [[BigBad their master]], and a mysterious girl in a gray cloak that seems to know Weiss Schnee. To top things off, the father of Weiss and president of the Schnee Dust Company, Vlad, also appears, knowing all too well what has befallen Remnant, although he's hiding something.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: [[invoked]] In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]

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* AccidentallyAccurate: [[invoked]] InUniverse example. In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]
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* AccidentallyAccurate: [InUniverse] In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]

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* AccidentallyAccurate: [InUniverse] [[invoked]] In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]
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* AccidentallyAccurate: InUniverse example. In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]

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* AccidentallyAccurate: InUniverse example. [InUniverse] In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]
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* RedShirtArmy: Countless Atlesian soldiers become this at the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler: when Weiss's father is revealed to be the main villain and has every soldier aboard his ship mercilessly slaughtered by the Dark Trinity and Neo. ''Then'' he has a whole military base of them killed off by combat mechs he commissioned for the military, ''[[UpToEleven and then]]'' has his ship open fire on the two escorting it, killing all soldiers board them!]]

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* RedShirtArmy: Countless Atlesian soldiers become this at the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler: when Weiss's father is revealed to be the main villain and has every soldier aboard his ship mercilessly slaughtered by the Dark Trinity and Neo. ''Then'' he has a whole military base of them killed off by combat mechs he commissioned for the military, ''[[UpToEleven and then]]'' has his ship open fire on the two escorting it, killing all soldiers board aboard them!]]
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* AccidentallyAccurate: In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]

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* AccidentallyAccurate: InUniverse example. In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]
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* AccidentlyAccurate: In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]

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* AccidentlyAccurate: AccidentallyAccurate: In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]



* RedShirtArmy: Countless Atlesian soldiers become this at the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler: when Weiss's father is revealed to be the main villain and has every soldier aboard his ship mercilessly slaughtered by the Dark Trinity and Neo. Then he has a whole military base of them killed off by combat mechs he commissioned for the military, and then has his ship open fire on the two escorting it, killing all soldiers board them!]]

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* RedShirtArmy: Countless Atlesian soldiers become this at the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler: when Weiss's father is revealed to be the main villain and has every soldier aboard his ship mercilessly slaughtered by the Dark Trinity and Neo. Then ''Then'' he has a whole military base of them killed off by combat mechs he commissioned for the military, ''[[UpToEleven and then then]]'' has his ship open fire on the two escorting it, killing all soldiers board them!]]
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** MauveShirt: [[spoiler: The two soldiers that guarded the outside of Princess Aurina's room at Beacon, who were seen a few time beforehand, end up killed by Vlad himself.]]

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** MauveShirt: [[spoiler: The two soldiers that guarded the outside of Princess Aurina's room at Beacon, who were seen a few time times beforehand, end up killed by Vlad himself.]]
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RWBY: Grimm Darkness is a fanfic created by [[http://sunflorazumarill.deviantart.com/ Sunflorazumarill]] of {{DeviantArt}} taking place in the world of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}. Taking place anytime after Volume 2, the story involves a Dust shortage that is happening throughout all of Remnant. As the crisis thickens, there are also outbreaks of Grimm attacks, except these Grimm are being controlled by a MadScientist, a new trio of bad guys that are carrying out the plans of [[BigBad their master]], and a mysterious girl in a gray cloak that seems to know Weiss Schnee. To top things off, the father of Weiss and president of the Schnee Dust Company, Vlad, also appears, knowing all too well what has befallen Remnant, although he's hiding something.

You can [[http://sunflorazumarill.deviantart.com/art/RWBY-Grimm-Darkness-Chapter-1-477417900 read the fanfic here]], although it's far from finished.

'''Tropes that apply to RWBY: Grimm Darkness:'''

* AccidentlyAccurate: In Chapter 6, when encountered by the Malachite Sisters, Weiss assumes that [[spoiler: her father sent them to capture her. Although she's right about her father being the one who hired them, she believed it was because he wanted her to return home to Atlas with him and not as a part of his plans.]]
* BerserkButton: Melanie and Miltiades definitely don't like being called bimbos, as Weiss finds out in Chapter 6.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Vlad Schnee, Weiss's father.]]
* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: What Weiss said about her father in Volume 1 of the series proper is revealed to be far worse than we were led on, as well as the Schnee Dust Company being cited for its "controversial labor force and questionable business partners".]]
* CerebusSyndrome: [[spoiler: Once Weiss's father is revealed to be the story's [[BigBad main villain]] and his plans start moving forward, the story throws out all comical moments and becomes downright serious.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Cardin Winchester goes full on bad guy after making a deal with Vlad, although he was already quite the {{Jerkass}} to begin with.]]
* RedShirtArmy: Countless Atlesian soldiers become this at the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler: when Weiss's father is revealed to be the main villain and has every soldier aboard his ship mercilessly slaughtered by the Dark Trinity and Neo. Then he has a whole military base of them killed off by combat mechs he commissioned for the military, and then has his ship open fire on the two escorting it, killing all soldiers board them!]]
** MauveShirt: [[spoiler: The two soldiers that guarded the outside of Princess Aurina's room at Beacon, who were seen a few time beforehand, end up killed by Vlad himself.]]

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