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* FooledByTheSound: In ''Thweet Geniuth'': "Caught In The Act": [[NobodyHereButUsBirds Bird sound imitation]] is suggested by Scootaloo as signalling the presence of guards, for her friends who want to stay undetected, but Scootaloo is really bad at being a crow, while Sweetie Belle and Dinky Doo are good enough to be mistaken for birds.
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* UnspokenRetort: ''Thweet Geniuth'': From "The Trial of Quizzical Greystone": Twilight's [[DeadpanSnarker snarking]] to an irritated mob at her door, in ThinkInText italics:
--> "We ''insist'',Twilight, Dear," said Rarity, with a smile that looked like the prelude to somepony getting bitten.
--> ''Well, at least you left your torches and pitchforks at home'', thought Twilight.
--> "We ''insist'',Twilight, Dear," said Rarity, with a smile that looked like the prelude to somepony getting bitten.
--> ''Well, at least you left your torches and pitchforks at home'', thought Twilight.
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** ''Thweet Geniuth'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]]
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/15/thweet-geniuth/what-the-hay-was-that What The Hay Was That?!]].
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/14/thweet-geniuth/thow-time Thow Time]], where the site's chapter title has no exclamation mark, but the in-chapter title is called "Chapter 14 Thow Time!".
** ''Basements of Doom'':
*** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
** ''Thweet Geniuth'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]]
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/15/thweet-geniuth/what-the-hay-was-that What The Hay Was That?!]].
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/14/thweet-geniuth/thow-time Thow Time]], where the site's chapter title has no exclamation mark, but the in-chapter title is called "Chapter 14 Thow Time!".
** ''Basements of Doom'':
*** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
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* EyelashFluttering: In ''Thweet Geniuth'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/11/thweet-geniuth/the-hard-part "The Hard Part"]]:
--> ''Quiz needs back up'', thought Dinky, time to bring the cute! Dinky stepped forward, cocked her head and fluttered her eye lashes. "Please, Rarity!"
--> Applebloom and Scootaloo knew this trick, and they were quite good at it. They fell in line next to Dinky and repeated her performance. "Please, Rarity!"
--> Then Quiz glimpsed out of the corner of her eye what the other fillies were doing. She decided to give it a try herself.
--> "Yes... well... um... please, Miss Rarity."
--> What happened next might partially be explained by the sudden release of the tremendous tension of the moment.
--> But really, it was because of Quiz's attempt at an eyelash flutter.
--> Rarity fought bravely. But eventually [[spoiler:a little snort of laughter escaped, and once that was out]] she was lost. Soon Rarity was [[spoiler:on the ground at her door step, laughing uncontrollably]].
--> ''Quiz needs back up'', thought Dinky, time to bring the cute! Dinky stepped forward, cocked her head and fluttered her eye lashes. "Please, Rarity!"
--> Applebloom and Scootaloo knew this trick, and they were quite good at it. They fell in line next to Dinky and repeated her performance. "Please, Rarity!"
--> Then Quiz glimpsed out of the corner of her eye what the other fillies were doing. She decided to give it a try herself.
--> "Yes... well... um... please, Miss Rarity."
--> What happened next might partially be explained by the sudden release of the tremendous tension of the moment.
--> But really, it was because of Quiz's attempt at an eyelash flutter.
--> Rarity fought bravely. But eventually [[spoiler:a little snort of laughter escaped, and once that was out]] she was lost. Soon Rarity was [[spoiler:on the ground at her door step, laughing uncontrollably]].
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* DramaPanes: ''Adventures in Cake Sitting'': Quizzical looks out at the weather at the end of the first chapter:
--> Quiz watched the heavy snow flakes flying almost horizontally past the window. This was clearly not the work of the Weather Patrol. To Quiz it looked neither natural nor good. Admittedly, Quiz was a natural born pessimist. The sight filled her with a sense of dread.
--> "I hope the [First Snow] Festival is the most we have to worry about, Miss Pinkie."
--> Quiz watched the heavy snow flakes flying almost horizontally past the window. This was clearly not the work of the Weather Patrol. To Quiz it looked neither natural nor good. Admittedly, Quiz was a natural born pessimist. The sight filled her with a sense of dread.
--> "I hope the [First Snow] Festival is the most we have to worry about, Miss Pinkie."
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--> If that is your wish, Princess Luna.
--> You just now called Us "Princess Luna".
--> Did I, Princess Luna?
--> If that is your wish, Princess Luna.
--> You just now called Us "Princess Luna".
--> Did I, Princess Luna?
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--> Let us give it a try anyway. You no longer need call Us "Princess". You shall call Us "Luna."
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If that is your wish, PrincessLuna.
-->Luna.\\
You just now called Us "PrincessLuna".
-->Luna".\\
Did I, Princess Luna?
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* {{Adorkable}}: Quiz primarily, although Twilight has some moments.
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* CharacterActionTitle: The chapter, [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/68414/7/quizzical/diamond-tiara-strikes-back "Diamond Tiara Strikes Back"]].
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* PrefersProperNames:
** When Princess Luna first meets Quizzical in ''I'll take that one'':
--> Let us give it a try anyway. You no longer need call Us "Princess". You shall call Us "Luna."
--> If that is your wish, Princess Luna.
--> You just now called Us "Princess Luna".
--> Did I, Princess Luna?
** Pinkie Pie always calls Quizzical by that name, because she likes the sound of it, instead of the InSeriesNickname of "Quiz".
** When Princess Luna first meets Quizzical in ''I'll take that one'':
--> Let us give it a try anyway. You no longer need call Us "Princess". You shall call Us "Luna."
--> If that is your wish, Princess Luna.
--> You just now called Us "Princess Luna".
--> Did I, Princess Luna?
** Pinkie Pie always calls Quizzical by that name, because she likes the sound of it, instead of the InSeriesNickname of "Quiz".
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* FlagpoleChallenge: Lampshaded. "All the books agree on this," said Scootaloo. "When you begin training you should have what looks like an impossible goal. When you figure out how to achieve your goal you've completed your training." Quizzical manages to retrieve the arrow by kicking the flagpole until the arrow falls out.
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* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quizzical is trying to irritate people, everyone she meets that doesn't understand what is going on, is worried:
--> “Your hat, Miss Applejack. I think it is stupid. It looks very, very stupid and I do not like it.”\\
Applejack could just gape at Quiz, so Rarity answered.\\
“Quizzical, this is very unlike you. Is there something the matter?”\\
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“Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”\\
“A little miffed, maybe,” said Applejack. “But mostly you have me puzzled.”\\
“Yes, miffed and puzzled, that describes it perfectly,” said Rarity. “Please tell us what is wrong, Quizzical.”\\
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“Hmmm,” mused Spike, watching Quiz go. “You gotta give the kid this much - when she freaks out it’s a lot quieter than with Twilight.”\\
--> “Your hat, Miss Applejack. I think it is stupid. It looks very, very stupid and I do not like it.”\\
Applejack could just gape at Quiz, so Rarity answered.\\
“Quizzical, this is very unlike you. Is there something the matter?”\\
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“Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”\\
“A little miffed, maybe,” said Applejack. “But mostly you have me puzzled.”\\
“Yes, miffed and puzzled, that describes it perfectly,” said Rarity. “Please tell us what is wrong, Quizzical.”\\
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“Hmmm,” mused Spike, watching Quiz go. “You gotta give the kid this much - when she freaks out it’s a lot quieter than with Twilight.”\\
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* OurSphinxesAreDifferent: In ''Quizzical Greystone and the Basements of Doom'', the characters encounter a sphinx named Alexander with a lion body, the head and torso of an unidentified creature (implied to be human, with which the characters aren't familiar) and floor-length beard and hair among the creatures captured by the diamond dogs. Sphinxes are compelled to ask riddles before they give out information, and if their riddle is answered incorrectly they're magically bound to [[spoiler:throw the answerer off the nearest cliff]]. However, they can choose how hard or easy to make a given riddle. There are also rumors of a potion that boosts intelligence but requires a sphinx's [[spoiler:brain]]. However, [[spoiler:it doesn't work]].
* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quizzical is trying to irritate people, everyone she meets that doesn't understandwhat is what's going on, on is worried:
--> “Your hat, Miss Applejack. I think it is stupid. It looks very, very stupid and I do not like it.”\\
Applejack could just gape at Quiz, so Rarity answered.\\
“Quizzical, this is very unlike you. Is there something the matter?”\\
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“Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”\\
“A little miffed, maybe,” said Applejack. “But mostly you have me puzzled.”\\
“Yes, miffed and puzzled, that describes it perfectly,” said Rarity. “Please tell us what is wrong, Quizzical.”\\
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“Hmmm,” mused Spike, watching Quiz go. “You gotta give the kid this much - when she freaks out it’s a lot quieter than with Twilight.”\\worried about her seemingly out-of-nowhere antagonism.
* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quizzical is trying to irritate people, everyone she meets that doesn't understand
--> “Your hat, Miss Applejack. I think it is stupid. It looks very, very stupid and I do not like it.”\\
Applejack could just gape at Quiz, so Rarity answered.\\
“Quizzical, this is very unlike you. Is there something the matter?”\\
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“Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”\\
“A little miffed, maybe,” said Applejack. “But mostly you have me puzzled.”\\
“Yes, miffed and puzzled, that describes it perfectly,” said Rarity. “Please tell us what is wrong, Quizzical.”\\
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“Hmmm,” mused Spike, watching Quiz go. “You gotta give the kid this much - when she freaks out it’s a lot quieter than with Twilight.”\\
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--> Bon Bon turned to the nearest camerapony, held up her frying pan, and smiled. "The secret is to turn it on edge. You don't want to hit them with the flat; you want to chop like it's a cleaver. Puts 'em down every time."
--> Bon Bon turned to the nearest camerapony, held up her frying pan, and smiled. "The secret is to turn it on edge. You don't want to hit them with the flat; you want to chop like it's a cleaver. Puts 'em down every time."
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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: From ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164296/a-little-fixerupper A Little Fixer-Upper]]'', during a summary of Quizzical's training:
--> She balanced stacks of books on her head. She balanced on stacks of books. She did both at the same time.
* BookOnTheHead:''A ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164296/a-little-fixerupper A Little Fixer-Upper'':Fixer-Upper]]'':
--> She balanced stacks of books on her head. She balanced on stacks of books. She did both at the same time.
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** The ProtagonistTitle's Quizzical Greystone is a very intelligent pony.
** From ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/thweet-geniuth Thweet Geniuth]]'', Bitter Almond is a Queen of Mean for a show.
** The ProtagonistTitle's Quizzical Greystone is a very intelligent pony.
** From ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/thweet-geniuth Thweet Geniuth]]'', Bitter Almond is a Queen of Mean for a show.
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* TrainingMontage: As said in the long description of ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164296/a-little-fixerupper A Little Fixer-Upper]]'':
--> To prepare a friend to face her greatest challenge, the Cutie Mark Crusaders put her through a training montage stew that might just kill her.
--> To prepare a friend to face her greatest challenge, the Cutie Mark Crusaders put her through a training montage stew that might just kill her.
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* AlliterativeList: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz talks about Spike's cooking:
--> “Your cooking is disgusting. Your pancakes in particular are frightfully bad. They are horrific, horrendous, and horrible. Um, do I need to go on?”
--> “Your cooking is disgusting. Your pancakes in particular are frightfully bad. They are horrific, horrendous, and horrible. Um, do I need to go on?”
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* AlliterativeList: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz talks about Spike's cooking:
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--> “Awful, appalling, atrocious, abominable… do I really never use any of these words? Dreadful, frightful, ghastly…”\\
“Hi, Quiz,” called Spike. Quiz stopped just in time to avoid stumbling over him. “Whatcha doing?”\\
“Oh, hello, Spike. I was just... um… looking up some worlds I rarely use.”\\
[...]\\
“Your cooking is disgusting. Your pancakes in particular are frightfully bad. They are horrific, horrendous, and horrible. Um, do I need to go on?”
--> “Awful, appalling, atrocious, abominable… do I really never use any of these words? Dreadful, frightful, ghastly…”\\
“Hi, Quiz,” called Spike. Quiz stopped just in time to avoid stumbling over him. “Whatcha doing?”\\
“Oh, hello, Spike. I was just... um… looking up some worlds I rarely use.”\\
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“Your cooking is disgusting. Your pancakes in particular are frightfully bad. They are horrific, horrendous, and horrible. Um, do I need to go on?”
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** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz and the Cake Twins meet a Wendigo, Quiz references ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108294/adventures-in-cake-sitting Adventures In Cake Sitting]]'' where Wendigos were responsible for a enormous blizzard that dangerously snowed in Ponyville.
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz and the Cake Twins meet a Wendigo, Quiz references ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108294/adventures-in-cake-sitting Adventures In Cake Sitting]]'' where Wendigos were responsible for a enormous blizzard that dangerously snowed in Ponyville.
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**CallBack: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz and the Cake Twins meet a Wendigo, Quiz references ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108294/adventures-in-cake-sitting Adventures In Cake Sitting]]'' where Wendigos were responsible for a enormous blizzard that dangerously snowed in Ponyville.
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* LiteralMetaphor: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain The Quality of Mercy]]'', where "literally screaming bloody murder" means screams of descriptions of bloody murder, from an enraged [[spoiler:Diamond Tiara, boosted by Wendigo magic of negativity]].
* OnceMoreWithClarity: Sunflower and Quizzical have a meeting first in ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/205662/1/ill-take-that-one/actually-extraordinary "I'll Take That One."]]'', and published later, is ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/234899/3/wonderful/part-three-sunflower Sunflower's titular chapter]]'' of ''Wonderful'', which expands on that meeting.
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*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracyConspiracy!]], and Conspiracy!]]
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]]
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quizzical is trying to irritate people, everyone she meets that doesn't understand what is going on, is worried:
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/234899/wonderful Wonderful]] (The Hearth's Warming story).
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* CallBack: CallBack:
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz and the Cake Twins meet a Wendigo, Quiz references ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108294/adventures-in-cake-sitting Adventures In Cake Sitting]]'' where Wendigos were responsible for a enormous blizzard that dangerously snowed in Ponyville.
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz and the Cake Twins meet a Wendigo, Quiz references ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108294/adventures-in-cake-sitting Adventures In Cake Sitting]]'' where Wendigos were responsible for a enormous blizzard that dangerously snowed in Ponyville.
** We see Sunflower and Quizzical meeting, first in ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/205662/1/ill-take-that-one/actually-extraordinary "I'll Take That One."]]'', and expanded on in ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/234899/3/wonderful/part-three-sunflower Sunflower's titular chapter]]'' of ''Wonderful''.
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--> During a very bad week Quizzical Greystone comes to believe her whole life has been a failure. Three strange mares travel a long way, just to show her that she's wrong.
--> During a very bad week Quizzical Greystone comes to believe her whole life has been a failure. Three strange mares travel a long way, just to show her that she's wrong.
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* ExcitedShowTitle: A few exist, such as:
** ''Thweet Geniuth'''s [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]], and [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/15/thweet-geniuth/what-the-hay-was-that What The Hay Was That?!]].
** There's also ''Thweet Geniuth'''s [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/14/thweet-geniuth/thow-time Thow Time]], where the site's chapter title has no exclamation mark, but the in-chapter title is called "Chapter 14 Thow Time!".
** ''Thweet Geniuth'''s [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]], and [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/15/thweet-geniuth/what-the-hay-was-that What The Hay Was That?!]].
** There's also ''Thweet Geniuth'''s [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/14/thweet-geniuth/thow-time Thow Time]], where the site's chapter title has no exclamation mark, but the in-chapter title is called "Chapter 14 Thow Time!".
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* ExcitedShowTitle: Well, Chapter Title: A few exist, such as:
** ''ThweetGeniuth'''s Geniuth'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disasterDisaster!]], and Disaster!]]
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/15/thweet-geniuth/what-the-hay-was-that What The Hay Was That?!]].
** There's also ''Thweet Geniuth'''s *** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/14/thweet-geniuth/thow-time Thow Time]], where the site's chapter title has no exclamation mark, but the in-chapter title is called "Chapter 14 Thow Time!".Time!".
** ''Basements of Doom'':
*** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
** ''Thweet
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/15/thweet-geniuth/what-the-hay-was-that What The Hay Was That?!]].
** ''Basements of Doom'':
*** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
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* AFriendInNeed: Indy for Quizzical
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* MiddleChildSyndrome: Quiz's older brother and younger sister are both more attractive and successful than her. As she is quick to point out to Princess Celestia, in .
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* MiddleChildSyndrome: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/68414/1/quizzical/a-drab-little-pony Quizzical's first chapter]] as noted by Cheerilee. Quiz's older brother and younger sister are both more attractive and successful than her. As she Quiz is quick to point out to Princess Celestia, in .Celestia.
--> “My older brother, Chisel, will be taking over our family business. He has a very good head, and the quarries will be in good hands with my brother,” said Quiz.\\
The stallion could also pose for the cover of a romance novel, thought Cheerilee. She had to admit that she would buy that book.\\
“My baby sister, Delight, is still very young, but she has the potential to accomplish anything. We expect she will marry well, but I strongly doubt that will be all she does,” said Quiz.\\
And she is the prettiest foal I have ever seen, and this isn’t even a very good photo, thought Cheerilee.\\
“You sound very proud of them, Quiz,” she said.\\
“Oh, yes, I am very proud,” said Quiz. “My siblings are extraordinary ponies, Miss Cheerilee.”\\
And you are the middle child between these two extraordinary ponies, thought Cheerilee.
--> “My older brother, Chisel, will be taking over our family business. He has a very good head, and the quarries will be in good hands with my brother,” said Quiz.\\
The stallion could also pose for the cover of a romance novel, thought Cheerilee. She had to admit that she would buy that book.\\
“My baby sister, Delight, is still very young, but she has the potential to accomplish anything. We expect she will marry well, but I strongly doubt that will be all she does,” said Quiz.\\
And she is the prettiest foal I have ever seen, and this isn’t even a very good photo, thought Cheerilee.\\
“You sound very proud of them, Quiz,” she said.\\
“Oh, yes, I am very proud,” said Quiz. “My siblings are extraordinary ponies, Miss Cheerilee.”\\
And you are the middle child between these two extraordinary ponies, thought Cheerilee.
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** Chapter 2: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/2/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-2-pony-napped Pony-napped]]''.
** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
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** ''Thweet Geniuth'''s [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/7/thweet-geniuth/busted Busted]], and [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]]
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** ''Thweet Geniuth'''s [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/3/thweet-geniuth/conspiracy Conspiracy!]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/7/thweet-geniuth/busted Busted]], and [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/8/thweet-geniuth/disaster Disaster!]]
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“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”
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“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”angry?”\\
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** ''Thweet Geniuth'': ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/7/thweet-geniuth/busted Busted]]''.
** ''Basements of Doom'':
** Chapter 2: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/2/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-2-pony-napped Pony-napped]]''.
** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
** ''Thweet Geniuth'': ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72475/7/thweet-geniuth/busted Busted]]''.
** ''Basements of Doom'':
** Chapter 2: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/2/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-2-pony-napped Pony-napped]]''.
** Chapter 7: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/6/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-6-zapped Zapped!]]''.
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* MiddleChildSyndrome: Quiz' older brother and younger sister are both more attractive and successful than her. As she is quick to point out to Princess Celestia.
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* MiddleChildSyndrome: Quiz' Quiz's older brother and younger sister are both more attractive and successful than her. As she is quick to point out to Princess Celestia.Celestia, in .
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* MythologyGag: The Diamond Dogs make a return appearance. And they're still terrified of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E19ADogAndPonyShow Rarity.]]
** Quizzical and Sweetie Belle sing the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve The Heart Carol.]]
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Twilight still can't dance.]]
* NerdGlasses: Quizz wears a pair.
** Quizzical and Sweetie Belle sing the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve The Heart Carol.]]
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Twilight still can't dance.]]
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** From ''Quizzical'':
*** The Diamond Dogs make a return appearance. And they're still terrified of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E19ADogAndPonyShow Rarity.]]
** *** Quizzical and Sweetie Belle sing the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve The Heart Carol.]]
** *** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Twilight still can't dance.]]
** From ''Basements of Doom'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/13/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-13-thrill-ride Chapter 13]], references [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48L49Jb1nqw Pinkie Pie's loud bell ringing]] that was shown in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E3CastleManeia:
----> '''Quizzical''': I feel much as the clapper must feel when Miss Pinkie is the bellringer.”
* NerdGlasses:Quizz Quiz, a bookish pony, wears a pair.pair of glasses.
** From ''Quizzical'':
*** The Diamond Dogs make a return appearance. And they're still terrified of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E19ADogAndPonyShow Rarity.]]
** From ''Basements of Doom'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/79894/13/quizzical-greystone-and-the-basements-of-doom/chapter-13-thrill-ride Chapter 13]], references [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48L49Jb1nqw Pinkie Pie's loud bell ringing]] that was shown in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E3CastleManeia:
----> '''Quizzical''': I feel much as the clapper must feel when Miss Pinkie is the bellringer.”
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* AlphaBitch: Diamond TiaraCallBack: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz and the Cake Twins meet a Wendigo, Quiz references ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108294/adventures-in-cake-sitting Adventures In Cake Sitting]]'' where Wendigos were responsible for a enormous blizzard that dangerously snowed in Ponyville.
--> “I would have thought you had enough of windigos after the last time.”\\
The twins shuddered. Then Pumpkin shook her head and smiled. “Wispy not like that. He’s not scary, he’s cute!”
--> “I would have thought you had enough of windigos after the last time.”\\
The twins shuddered. Then Pumpkin shook her head and smiled. “Wispy not like that. He’s not scary, he’s cute!”
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68414/quizzical Quizzical]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/JMac JMac]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68414/quizzical Quizzical]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/JMac JMac]].
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* CallBack: The Diamond Dogs make a return appearance. And they're still terrified of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E19ADogAndPonyShow Rarity.]]
** Quizzical and Sweetie Belle sing the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve The Heart Carol.]]
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Twilight still can't dance.]]
** Quizzical and Sweetie Belle sing the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve The Heart Carol.]]
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Twilight still can't dance.]]
* MythologyGag: The Diamond Dogs make a return appearance. And they're still terrified of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E19ADogAndPonyShow Rarity.]]
** Quizzical and Sweetie Belle sing the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve The Heart Carol.]]
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Twilight still can't dance.]]
** Quizzical and Sweetie Belle sing the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve The Heart Carol.]]
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Twilight still can't dance.]]
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--> “Hmmm,” mused Spike, watching Quiz go. “You gotta give the kid this much - when she freaks out it’s a lot quieter than with Twilight.”\\
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* AlliterativeList: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain The Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quiz talks about Spike's cooking:
--> “Your cooking is disgusting. Your pancakes in particular are frightfully bad. They are horrific, horrendous, and horrible. Um, do I need to go on?”
--> “Your cooking is disgusting. Your pancakes in particular are frightfully bad. They are horrific, horrendous, and horrible. Um, do I need to go on?”
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--> “Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
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--> “Your hat, Miss Applejack. I think it is stupid. It looks very, very stupid and I do not like it.”\\
Applejack could just gape at Quiz, so Rarity answered.\\
“Quizzical, this is very unlike you. Is there something the matter?”\\
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“Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
Applejack could just gape at Quiz, so Rarity answered.\\
“Quizzical, this is very unlike you. Is there something the matter?”\\
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“Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164296/a-little-fixerupper A Little Fixer-Upper]] (which might be of particular interest to tropers, as the entire story is a tribute to training montages)
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/168568/pen-and-paper-hearts Pen And Paper Hearts]] (again, perhaps interesting to tropers for it's tribute to tabletop gaming)
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/168568/pen-and-paper-hearts Pen And Paper Hearts]] (again, perhaps interesting to tropers for it's tribute to tabletop gaming)
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164296/a-little-fixerupper A Little Fixer-Upper]] (which might be of particular interest to tropers, as the (the entire story is a tribute to training montages)
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/168568/pen-and-paper-hearts Pen And Paper Hearts]](again, perhaps interesting to tropers for it's (it's a tribute to tabletop gaming)
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/168568/pen-and-paper-hearts Pen And Paper Hearts]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quizzical is trying to irritate people, everyone she meets that doesn't understand what is going on, is worried:
--> “Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”
“A little miffed, maybe,” said Applejack. “But mostly you have me puzzled.”\\
“Yes, miffed and puzzled, that describes it perfectly,” said Rarity. “Please tell us what is wrong, Quizzical.”\\
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--> “Hmmm,” mused Spike, watching Quiz go. “You gotta give the kid this much - when she freaks out it’s a lot quieter than with Twilight.”\\
Spike hurried home to the library to find a parchment and a quill. He had to send a letter.
--> “Quiz, what has gotten into you?” demanded Applejack. “You did not stop us just to insult our personal styles.”\\
“Actually, I have apparently just done exactly that,” said Quiz. “How does that make you feel? Does it make you angry?”
“A little miffed, maybe,” said Applejack. “But mostly you have me puzzled.”\\
“Yes, miffed and puzzled, that describes it perfectly,” said Rarity. “Please tell us what is wrong, Quizzical.”\\
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--> “Hmmm,” mused Spike, watching Quiz go. “You gotta give the kid this much - when she freaks out it’s a lot quieter than with Twilight.”\\
Spike hurried home to the library to find a parchment and a quill. He had to send a letter.
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/234899/wonderful Wonderful]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]
And this crossover with ''Fanfic/EquestrianFanfiction'':
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396563 When Jenny met Molly]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/the-quality-of-mercy The Quality of Mercy]]
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396563 When Jenny met Molly]]
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