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* StrongButUnskilled: It takes a couple of years until Jane can get proper training in the use of her power, but she kills nore than enough people by then.
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* StrongButUnskilled: It takes a couple of years until Jane can get proper training in the use of her power, but she kills nore more than enough people by then.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* MagicKnight: Any Vanguard Shepard is this, but Jane in this story takes it UpToEleven, beyond even the Multiplayer N7 Slayer, fighting with guns, dual wielded swords and near-nuclear level biotics.
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* MagicKnight: Any Vanguard Shepard is this, but Jane in this story takes it UpToEleven, up to eleven, beyond even the Multiplayer N7 Slayer, fighting with guns, dual wielded swords and near-nuclear level biotics.
