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* CatchPhrase: Several. Snape, for example is rather fond of: 'Optimism is for idiots.' Harry, on the other hand gets the opportunity to use the phrase: 'I misplaced myself again.' at least once a year, not counting the times several other characters have used it on him, including, but not limited to Snape and the Dark Lord.

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The higher-ranked people in Britain are inevitably Inner Circle Death Eaters who did well during the war. The best example is, naturally, Voldemort which makes you wonder why...

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: The higher-ranked people in Britain are inevitably Inner Circle Death Eaters who did well during the war. The best example is, naturally, Voldemort which makes you wonder why...



* KeepingSecretsSucks: Harry sincerely believes so.

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* OedipusComplex: Tom has one towards Harry and Voldemort. He outright calls Harry, his mother and Voldemort, his father and competitor.



* PetTheDog: Voldemort
** When he is not busy with KickTheDog.

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* PetTheDog: Voldemort
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Voldemort. When he is not busy with KickTheDog.
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* HasTwoMommies: Natalie Cypher has two mommies, while [[spoiler: Harry]] has two godfathers.
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* BalanceBetweenGoodandEvil: What Voldemort wants to create because [[spoiler: the Earth]] likes balance with Harry as "[[spoiler:An angel to stand beside her devil]]".

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* {{Grammar}}: The writing is fluent, but there are lots of simple mistakes like typos, missing words and incomplete run-on sentences. Your/you're, than/then and accept/except confusions are more serious errors, because they are so elementary. Additionally, sudden switches between past and present tense [[SelfDemonstratingArticle were]] jarring.



* WeaksauceWeakness: The fanfic's greatest flaw is something as simple as lack of proper proofreading. See {{Grammar}} above.

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* WeaksauceWeakness: The fanfic's greatest flaw is something as simple as lack of proper proofreading. See {{Grammar}} above.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3766574/1/Prince_of_the_Dark_Kingdom Prince of the Dark Kingdom]]'' is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' ForWantOfANail fanfic under the premise that [[BigBad Voldemort]] won the first Wizarding War. The nail is that Harry's parents fled the country instead of staying at Godric's Hollow. Not being defeated by Harry, Voldemort wins the Wizarding War and takes over the country as its new ruler. Instead of killing all the Muggleborns, he implements a series of policies to better integrate them into wizarding society. When Muggleborns first display signs of magic, an official from the Wizarding Youth Reclaimant Agency is dispatched to relocate them to wizarding orphanages, wiping their Muggle parents of their memories of their child.

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''[[http://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3766574/1/Prince_of_the_Dark_Kingdom net/s/3766574/1/Prince-of-the-Dark-Kingdom Prince of the Dark Kingdom]]'' is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' ForWantOfANail fanfic under the premise that [[BigBad Voldemort]] won the first Wizarding War. The nail is that Harry's parents fled the country instead of staying at Godric's Hollow. Not being defeated by Harry, Voldemort wins the Wizarding War and takes over the country as its new ruler. Instead of killing all the Muggleborns, he implements a series of policies to better integrate them into wizarding society. When Muggleborns first display signs of magic, an official from the Wizarding Youth Reclaimant Agency is dispatched to relocate them to wizarding orphanages, wiping their Muggle parents of their memories of their child.
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A DEAD FIC. However, Books/Years 1-6 are complete, and make for good reading.

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A DEAD FIC. However, So far, Books/Years 1-6 are complete, and make for good reading.the author promised in June 2021 to re-master the story and [[AscendedFanfic adapt the story into an original work]].



* CatchPhrase: Several. Snape, for example is rather fond of: 'Optimism is for idiots.' Harry, on the other hand gets the oportunity to use the phrase: 'I misplaced myself again.' at least once a year, not counting the times several other characters have used it on him, including, but not limited to Snape and the Dark Lord.
* CharacterDevelopment: Not a single character is a static one, but especially Harry and his friends [[AndZoidberg and Ron]] evolve during the story.

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* CatchPhrase: Several. Snape, for example is rather fond of: 'Optimism is for idiots.' Harry, on the other hand gets the oportunity opportunity to use the phrase: 'I misplaced myself again.' at least once a year, not counting the times several other characters have used it on him, including, but not limited to Snape and the Dark Lord.
* CharacterDevelopment: Not a single character is a static one, but especially Harry and his friends [[AndZoidberg [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Ron]] evolve during the story. story.



** Ultimately {{Subverted|Trope}} and {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by Harry who he points out that many of the muggleborns left magical Britain based on the assumption that Voldemort would kill them all off, if they stayed. Then due to the embargo on the magical UK, its likely that none of the British refugees know about its current state, and never returned. Its also pointed out that their societies aren't any better, although some of them like to pretend to be.

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** Ultimately {{Subverted|Trope}} and {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by Harry who he points out that many of the muggleborns left magical Britain based on the assumption that Voldemort would kill them all off, if they stayed. Then due to the embargo on the magical UK, its it's likely that none of the British refugees know about its current state, and never returned. Its It's also pointed out that their societies aren't any better, although some of them like to pretend to be.



** Lucius Malfoy in a very round about way. He adopted Hermione for reasons that aren't explained, but still sees her as an Mudblood and treats her as such. In the 6th year he engages her to someone who will ruin her life, because she attacked him, because of the abuse. Hermione than gets Harry to help her escape Lucius's trap. When Lucius finds out about it he confronts Harry and is killed because of it by a 3rd party.
* IllegalGuardian: The Dursleys initially forced Harry to paint and sold his creations, while also starving him and allowing Dudley to bully Harry.

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** Lucius Malfoy in a very round about way. He adopted Hermione for reasons that aren't explained, but still sees her as an a Mudblood and treats her as such. In the 6th year he engages her to someone who will ruin her life, because she attacked him, because of the abuse. Hermione than gets Harry to help her escape Lucius's trap. When Lucius finds out about it he confronts Harry and is killed because of it by a 3rd party.
* IllegalGuardian: The Dursleys initially forced Harry to paint and sold his creations, while also starving him and allowing Dudley to bully Harry.
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* CrapsackWorld: PlayedWith: In the first book The Magical Britain is introduced as being under the totalitarian rule of ''You-Know-Who'', of course it's a CrapsackWorld with an elitist hierarchy based on magical prowess, blood lines and sucking up to Voldemort. Harry and friends are crème de la crème of exclusive Hogwarts and even they can see past the FalseUtopia. However, the farther you get into the series, the more you find out about magical Britain, and that it is in fact much better off much than it was before, with many of the problems introduced in original canon, either have already been addressed or in the process of being addressed.

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* CrapsackWorld: PlayedWith: In the first book The Magical Britain is introduced as being under the totalitarian rule of ''You-Know-Who'', of course it's a CrapsackWorld with an elitist hierarchy based on magical prowess, blood lines and sucking up to Voldemort. Harry and friends are crème de la crème of exclusive Hogwarts and even they can see past the FalseUtopia. However, the farther you get into the series, the more you find out about magical Britain, and that it is in fact much better off much than it was before, with many of the problems introduced in original canon, either have already been addressed or in the process of being addressed.
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* CrapsackWorld: PlayedWith: In the first book The Magical Britain is introduced as being under the totalitarian rule of ''You-Know-Who'', of course it’s a CrapsackWorld with an elitist hierarchy based on magical prowess, blood lines and sucking up to Voldemort. Harry and friends are crème de la crème of exclusive Hogwarts and even they can see past the FalseUtopia. However, the farther you get into the series, the more you find out about magical Britain, and that it is in fact much better off much than it was before, with many of the problems introduced in original canon, either have already been addressed or in the process of being addressed.

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* CrapsackWorld: PlayedWith: In the first book The Magical Britain is introduced as being under the totalitarian rule of ''You-Know-Who'', of course it’s it's a CrapsackWorld with an elitist hierarchy based on magical prowess, blood lines and sucking up to Voldemort. Harry and friends are crème de la crème of exclusive Hogwarts and even they can see past the FalseUtopia. However, the farther you get into the series, the more you find out about magical Britain, and that it is in fact much better off much than it was before, with many of the problems introduced in original canon, either have already been addressed or in the process of being addressed.



* {{Grammar}}: The writing is fluent, but there are lots of simple mistakes like typos, missing words and incomplete run-on sentences. Your/you’re, than/then and accept/except confusions are more serious errors, because they are so elementary. Additionally, sudden switches between past and present tense [[SelfDemonstratingArticle were]] jarring.

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* {{Grammar}}: The writing is fluent, but there are lots of simple mistakes like typos, missing words and incomplete run-on sentences. Your/you’re, Your/you're, than/then and accept/except confusions are more serious errors, because they are so elementary. Additionally, sudden switches between past and present tense [[SelfDemonstratingArticle were]] jarring.



* WeaksauceWeakness: The fanfic’s greatest flaw is something as simple as lack of proper proofreading. See {{Grammar}} above.

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* WeaksauceWeakness: The fanfic’s fanfic's greatest flaw is something as simple as lack of proper proofreading. See {{Grammar}} above.



* WouldHurtAChild: Voldemort’s EstablishingCharacterMoment is crucioing 11-year-old Harry.

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* WouldHurtAChild: Voldemort’s Voldemort's EstablishingCharacterMoment is crucioing 11-year-old Harry.

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''Prince of the Dark Kingdom'' is a Franchise/HarryPotter ForWantOfANail fanfic under the premise that [[BigBad Voldemort]] won the first Wizarding War. The nail is that Harry's parents fled the country instead of staying at Godric's Hollow. Not being defeated by Harry, Voldemort wins the Wizarding War and takes over the country as its new ruler. Instead of killing all the Muggleborns, he implements a series of policies to better integrate them into wizarding society. When Muggleborns first display signs of magic, an official from the Wizarding Youth Reclaimant Agency is dispatched to relocate them to wizarding orphanages, wiping their Muggle parents of their memories of their child.

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''Prince ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3766574/1/Prince_of_the_Dark_Kingdom Prince of the Dark Kingdom'' Kingdom]]'' is a Franchise/HarryPotter ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' ForWantOfANail fanfic under the premise that [[BigBad Voldemort]] won the first Wizarding War. The nail is that Harry's parents fled the country instead of staying at Godric's Hollow. Not being defeated by Harry, Voldemort wins the Wizarding War and takes over the country as its new ruler. Instead of killing all the Muggleborns, he implements a series of policies to better integrate them into wizarding society. When Muggleborns first display signs of magic, an official from the Wizarding Youth Reclaimant Agency is dispatched to relocate them to wizarding orphanages, wiping their Muggle parents of their memories of their child.



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* AcademyOfAdventure: Hogwarts
* TheAlcatraz: Naturally, Azkaban. [[spoiler: Moody]] manages to escape in Harry's third year.

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** BodyguardingABadass: ...this is needed for him.
* BadassInDistress: Harry. Quite frequently, much to the consternation (and frustration) of Voldemort and Snape.

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* EvilOverlord: Voldemort
** GloriousLeader
** TheGeneralissimo

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* WouldHurtAChild: Voldemort’s EstablishingCharacterMoment is crucioing 11-year-old Harry.

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* WouldHurtAChild: Voldemort’s EstablishingCharacterMoment is crucioing 11-year-old Harry.Harry.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: In Chapter 7, Hermione tells Harry Voldemort is "almost sixty and doesn't look a day older than twenty-five".
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* ExactWords: When Snape takes Harry from the Dursleys, he promises to consider returning Harry's sketchbook in exchange for his cooperation. Harry cooperates and Snape, after ''considering'' the possibility, decides ''not'' to return it.
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* BiTheWay: Voldemort casually mentions having slept with both Bellatrix and Rodolphus when the latter was still alive. And yes, 'with both' means 'at the same time'...
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* BalanceBetweenGoodandEvil: What Voldemort wants to create because [[spoiler: the Earth]] likes balance with Harry as " [[spoiler: An angel to stand beside her devil]]."
* {{Beware The Nice Ones}}: Harry is generally kind and polite to those he meets and will go to great lengths to help those he cares about [[AndZoidberg and Ron]]. But if pushed into a corner [[CurbStompBattle he has no issues with wrecking all kinds of shit]] [[TheDeterminator no matter what the cost to himself]].

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* BalanceBetweenGoodandEvil: What Voldemort wants to create because [[spoiler: the Earth]] likes balance with Harry as " [[spoiler: An "[[spoiler:An angel to stand beside her devil]]."
devil]]".
* {{Beware The Nice Ones}}: BewareTheNiceOnes: Harry is generally kind and polite to those he meets and will go to great lengths to help those he cares about [[AndZoidberg [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Ron]]. But if pushed into a corner [[CurbStompBattle he has no issues with wrecking all kinds of shit]] [[TheDeterminator [[{{Determinator}} no matter what the cost to himself]].



* CharacterizationMarchesOn: Several examples, most notably Sirius and Lupin were clearly depicted as a gay couple but later chapters and [[WordofGod Word of God]] have since changed them to [[HeterosexualLifePartners very close friends]]
* CrapSackWorld: PlayedWith: In the first book The Magical Britain is introduced as being under the totalitarian rule of ''You-Know-Who'', of course it’s a CrapSackWorld with an elitist hierarchy based on magical prowess, blood lines and sucking up to Voldemort. Harry and friends are crème de la crème of exclusive Hogwarts and even they can see past the FalseUtopia. However, the farther you get into the series, the more you find out about magical Britain, and that it is in fact much better off much than it was before, with many of the problems introduced in original canon, either have already been addressed or in the process of being addressed.

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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: Several examples, most notably Sirius and Lupin were clearly depicted as a gay couple but later chapters and [[WordofGod Word of God]] WordOfGod have since changed them to [[HeterosexualLifePartners very close friends]]
friends]].
* CrapSackWorld: CrapsackWorld: PlayedWith: In the first book The Magical Britain is introduced as being under the totalitarian rule of ''You-Know-Who'', of course it’s a CrapSackWorld CrapsackWorld with an elitist hierarchy based on magical prowess, blood lines and sucking up to Voldemort. Harry and friends are crème de la crème of exclusive Hogwarts and even they can see past the FalseUtopia. However, the farther you get into the series, the more you find out about magical Britain, and that it is in fact much better off much than it was before, with many of the problems introduced in original canon, either have already been addressed or in the process of being addressed.



** Ultimately {{Subverted}} and {{Lampshaded}} by Harry who he points out that many of the muggleborns left magical Britain based on the assumption that Voldemort would kill them all off, if they stayed. Then due to the embargo on the magical UK, its likely that none of the British refugees know about its current state, and never returned. Its also pointed out that their societies aren't any better, although some of them like to pretend to be.

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** Ultimately {{Subverted}} {{Subverted|Trope}} and {{Lampshaded}} {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by Harry who he points out that many of the muggleborns left magical Britain based on the assumption that Voldemort would kill them all off, if they stayed. Then due to the embargo on the magical UK, its likely that none of the British refugees know about its current state, and never returned. Its also pointed out that their societies aren't any better, although some of them like to pretend to be.



* {{Fantastic Racism}}: Werewolves receive plenty of this. To the point where [[spoiler: the government of Magical Germany ends up targeting their own werewolf population with something of a holocaust]].

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* {{Fantastic Racism}}: FantasticRacism: Werewolves receive plenty of this. To the point where [[spoiler: the government of Magical Germany ends up targeting their own werewolf population with something of a holocaust]].



* {{Friend to All Children}}: Harry often gets roped into regaling young children with heavily edited tales of his own exploits. He does not seem to mind.

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* {{Friend to All Children}}: FriendToAllChildren: Harry often gets roped into regaling young children with heavily edited tales of his own exploits. He does not seem to mind.



* OriginalCharacter: A ton of them, and [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] by different people living and dying due to a change in victors.

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* OriginalCharacter: A ton of them, and [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] {{Justified|Trope}} by different people living and dying due to a change in victors.



* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Water]]: Harry keeps almost drowning, made more ironic by the fact that it is his element.

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* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To to Be Water]]: Water?]]: Harry keeps almost drowning, made more ironic by the fact that it is his element.
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* BalanceBetweenGoodandEvil: What Voldemort wants to create because [[spoiler: the Earth]] likes balance with Harry as " [[spoiler: An angel to stand beside her devil]] "

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* BalanceBetweenGoodandEvil: What Voldemort wants to create because [[spoiler: the Earth]] likes balance with Harry as " [[spoiler: An angel to stand beside her devil]] devil]]."
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A DEAD FIC. However, Books/Years 1-5 are complete, and make for good reading.

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A DEAD FIC. However, Books/Years 1-5 1-6 are complete, and make for good reading.
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A DEAD FIC. However, Books/Years 1-5 are complete, and make for good reading.
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''Prince of the Dark Kingdom'' is a Franchise/HarryPotter ForWantOfANail fanfic under the premise that [[BigBad Voldemort]] won the first Wizarding War. The nail [[spoiler: seems to be]] is that Harry's parents fled the country instead of staying at Godric's Hollow. Actually,[[spoiler: the prophecy differs in wording]], prompting a different response from Harry's parents, and the [[spoiler: difference in wording]] apparently happened, because [[spoiler: Carrigan became Voldemorts mentor, teaching him control and stopping him from becoming the Madman he was in canon]]. Not being defeated by Harry, Voldemort wins the Wizarding War and takes over the country as its new ruler. Instead of killing all the Muggleborns, he implements a series of policies to better integrate them into wizarding society. When Muggleborns first display signs of magic, an official from the Wizarding Youth Reclaimant Agency is dispatched to relocate them to wizarding orphanages, wiping their Muggle parents of their memories of their child.

Harold James Potter, aka. Harry, is [[OrphansOrdeal forced to live with the Dursleys]] when his parents are killed by addicts robbing their home in Germany. When Harry's {{Jerkass}} cousin Dudley mocks a portrait of his mother, Harry uses Accidental Magic in a fit of anger. Two days later, the WYRA arrives to reintroduce him to the Wizarding World and join the life his parents left behind, making new friends while meeting old relations and slowly carving out a place in the Wizarding World.

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''Prince of the Dark Kingdom'' is a Franchise/HarryPotter ForWantOfANail fanfic under the premise that [[BigBad Voldemort]] won the first Wizarding War. The nail [[spoiler: seems to be]] is that Harry's parents fled the country instead of staying at Godric's Hollow. Actually,[[spoiler: the prophecy differs in wording]], prompting a different response from Harry's parents, and the [[spoiler: difference in wording]] apparently happened, because [[spoiler: Carrigan became Voldemorts mentor, teaching him control and stopping him from becoming the Madman he was in canon]].Hollow. Not being defeated by Harry, Voldemort wins the Wizarding War and takes over the country as its new ruler. Instead of killing all the Muggleborns, he implements a series of policies to better integrate them into wizarding society. When Muggleborns first display signs of magic, an official from the Wizarding Youth Reclaimant Agency is dispatched to relocate them to wizarding orphanages, wiping their Muggle parents of their memories of their child.

Harold James Potter, aka. aka Harry, is [[OrphansOrdeal forced to live with the Dursleys]] when his parents are killed by addicts robbing their home in Germany. When Harry's {{Jerkass}} cousin Dudley mocks a portrait of his mother, Harry uses Accidental Magic in a fit of anger. Two days later, the WYRA arrives to reintroduce him to the Wizarding World and join the life his parents left behind, making new friends while meeting old relations and slowly carving out a place in the Wizarding World.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Happens several time with various degrees of complication and finality
** Umbridge tries to betray Tom, who kills her for it.
** Tom in order to better control Harry opens the Chamber of Secrets, which leads to him being killed by Voldemort for endangering Harry.
** Harry abuses a drug that gets him possessed by a god which nearly gets him killed.
** Lucius Malfoy in a very round about way. He adopted Hermione for reasons that aren't explained, but still sees her as an Mudblood and treats her as such. In the 6th year he engages her to someone who will ruin her life, because she attacked him, because of the abuse. Hermione than gets Harry to help her escape Lucius's trap. When Lucius finds out about it he confronts Harry and is killed because of it by a 3rd party.

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