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* GuiltTripping: When Mrs. Cake is trying to [[ToiletTrainingPlot toilet train her two-year-old son Pound]], but he isn't keen, she combines this with ReversePsychology by saying that he doesn't need to use his potty... but then, she follows it up with "I only..." followed by a LongList of everything she's ever done for him.
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* AccidentalGoodOutcome: In "Silly Sweetie Belle", Sweetie Belle accidentally ends up with [[WearingItAllWrong Pumpkin Cake's pull-up on her head]], but it makes Pumpkin laugh.
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* MistakenForToilet:
** Inverted in "Fluttershy and the Case of the Missing Potty", in which [[AnimalLover Fluttershy]]'s pets wonder if Pumpkin's potty chair is a well (Beaverton), food dish (Hummingway), pet bed (Angel), trash bin (a raccoon), fishing bowl (an otter), hat (Harry), milk bowl (a flamingo), acorn bowl (a squirrel), flowerpot (a wasp) or Zecora's cauldron (a deer).
** Another inversion occurs throughout the fanfic where the twins wonder if the toilet is a living creature, at first thinking it's a monster, and then later, when it breaks, thinking it's sick.
** Inverted in "Fluttershy and the Case of the Missing Potty", in which [[AnimalLover Fluttershy]]'s pets wonder if Pumpkin's potty chair is a well (Beaverton), food dish (Hummingway), pet bed (Angel), trash bin (a raccoon), fishing bowl (an otter), hat (Harry), milk bowl (a flamingo), acorn bowl (a squirrel), flowerpot (a wasp) or Zecora's cauldron (a deer).
** Another inversion occurs throughout the fanfic where the twins wonder if the toilet is a living creature, at first thinking it's a monster, and then later, when it breaks, thinking it's sick.
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* BaffledByOwnBiology: When Pound Cake, a two-year-old Pegasus boy, catches the "feather flu" (a Pegasus disease) for the first time, he's confused and wonders if there's something [[LiteralMinded wrong with his feathers]], then wonders how his nose can be clogged if it isn't a toilet.
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* CorrectiveLecture: In "The Streak", Pinkie Pie gives the Cake twins a tongue-lashing for [[FunWithFlushing flushing themselves and Gummy down the toilet]].
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: Pound Cake initially didn't believe in ghosts when he first encountered the "[[JokeOfTheButt Butt]] Ghost". This is despite being in a world full of unicorns, time travel, spirits of disharmony, etc.
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* SwearWordPlot: In "Scootaloo the Potty Mouth", the two-year-old Cake twins overhear Scootaloo saying the word "peeved" (which isn't swearing in reality, but apparently is in the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' universe) and learn not to say it.
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* ExcitedShowTitle: Not the actual fanfic, but there are chapters called "What's That Noise?!", "Down the Hooooole!", "You Can't Take Your Potty With You!", "Missed!", "That's Not a Potty!", "When Tickle Monster Attacks!", "The Wrong Potty!" and "Beware the Butt Ghost!" that all end in exclamation points.
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* InnocentAwkwardQuestion: In "Scootaloo the Potty Mouth", the twins, who are two, overhear Scootaloo using the word "peeved", which, [[PardonMyKlingon in the My Little Pony universe]], is a cuss word. They then ask their mother, "What does 'peeved' mean?", shocking her.
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* SneezeOfDoom: When Starlight sneezes with unstable magic, it turns the twins into deer.
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* RevelingInTheNewForm: In "Diamond the Dazzling Foal", Diamond gets [[FountainOfYouth zapped into a toddler]] by Pumpkin Cake's [[PowerIncontinence uncontrollable magic]], but she enjoys it since she likes getting to have a toddlerhood without her [[AbusiveParents abusive mother]].
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* ComedicWorkSeriousScene: This is generally a comedy fanfic, but the end of the chapter "Diaper Shortage?" reveals that [[spoiler:Apple Bloom has been stealing Pound's diapers and [[GooGooGetup putting them on]] as a desperate attempt to remember her parents, who died when she was a toddler.]]
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* DeadlySparring: One chapter has the twins play-fighting with some stuffed animals. Pumpkin accidentally [[EyeScream hits Pound in the eye]], requiring her to go to the doctor and leaving Pumpkin wracked with guilt and fear.
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* FaintInShock:
** Mr Cake apparently faints when surprised.
** In "Starlight the Foalsitter" Starlight Glimmer faints when the Cake twins prank her into thinking they've [[FunWithFlushing flushed themselves down the toilet]]. The twins regret their prank, since they weren't expecting her response to be ''that'' extreme.
** Mr Cake apparently faints when surprised.
** In "Starlight the Foalsitter" Starlight Glimmer faints when the Cake twins prank her into thinking they've [[FunWithFlushing flushed themselves down the toilet]]. The twins regret their prank, since they weren't expecting her response to be ''that'' extreme.
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**FaintInShock: Mr Cake apparently faints when surprised.
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** In "Starlight the Foalsitter" Starlight Glimmer faints when the Cake twins prank her into thinking they've [[FunWithFlushing flushed themselves down the toilet]]. The twins regret their prank, since they weren't expecting her response to be ''that'' extreme.
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* FlashForwardFic: Takes place a year after "Baby Cakes," when Pound and Pumpkin are old enough to be toilet trained.
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--> ''WARNING!: The content of this chapter may be disturbing to some viewers, reader discretion is advised! This is the very chapter that led me to giving this fic a Teen rating instead of an Everyone rating. If [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes grown ponies in diapers is outside your comfort zone]], know that you don't have to read this chapter.''
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--> ''WARNING!: This chapter will contain light disciplinary spanking. I know some people may have a problem with that, but it's solely an act of discipline done briefly to the twins, and that is not going to be the focus of this chapter. I'm not going to get into a debate about whether spanking a child is ever okay, and I will delete any (the word 'any' is underlined) [[FlameBait comments that lead to a]] FlameWar. So please be civil and leave the debate out of this and all chapters.''
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* GrossoutFakeout: The chapter "The Exploding Diaper" begins with Scootaloo asking Mr. and Mrs. Cake if they've ever heard of an exploding diaper. The Cakes are shocked, but then Scootaloo explains that it only exploded because the twins tried to inflate it with helium.
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* WearingItAllWrong: When Sweetie Belle babysits the Cake twins, they put a pull-up on her head.
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* ToiletDrinkingDogGag: When Pumpkin Cake is staying with Applejack and her family, Winona drinks out of the toilet.
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* OwMyBodyPart: Pound shouts "My eye!" when he gets hit in the eye during the play fight.
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* OutSick: In "Flurry Heart's Royal Flush", the reason the Cakes are babysitting Flurry Heart is because Sunburst, her normal foal-sitter, has the flu.
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* PottyEmergency: Happens A character really needing to go to the bathroom happens a ''lot''.
