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** Occasionally passes into PainfulRhyme. Okay, ''usually'' goes into that territory.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: By the author's own admission, the second bonus chapter. It has nothing to do with the story and serves only as a look into a universe where Twilight became [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Simon]] instead of Ryuko.
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The story currently has 8 chapters; 6 following the events of one episode of Kill la Kill each, and 2 bonus chapters.
The story is currently undergoing a massive rewrite to the six Episodic chapters. The first four revised episodes are up.
The story is currently undergoing a massive rewrite to the six Episodic chapters. The first four revised episodes are up.
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The story currently has 8 7 chapters; 6 following the events of one episode of Kill la Kill each, and 2 a bonus chapters.
The story is currently undergoing a massive rewrite to the six Episodic chapters. The first four revised episodes are up.
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* ObviousJudas: The [[RememberTheNewGuy out-of-nowhere]] no-stone named Lula [[spoiler: is actually this universe's Trixie Lulamoon.]]
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Twilight wields the Bearer's Blade. Doubles as a BFS, especially after Episode 3. Also, [[spoiler: Cadenza's]] Chimera Blade.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Twilight wields the Bearer's Blade. Doubles as a BFS, {{BFS}}, especially after Episode 3. Also, [[spoiler: Cadenza's]] Chimera Blade.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Twilight's Star/Magic Blade. Also, [[spoiler: Cadenza's]] Chimera Blade.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Twilight's Star/Magic Blade.Twilight wields the Bearer's Blade. Doubles as a BFS, especially after Episode 3. Also, [[spoiler: Cadenza's]] Chimera Blade.
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* CaptainObviousReveal: *Gasp* You mean that student who we've never seen before [[spoiler:is evil]]? And I know that it said she had blue fur, silver hair, and her name is Lula, but I'm still supposed to be surprised she's [[spoiler: Trixie Lulamoon]]?
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The story is currently undergoing a massive rewrite to the six Episodic chapters. The first two four revised episodes are up.
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-> '''Old Enemies, New Friends'''
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-> '''Old Enemies, New Friends'''
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* [[{{Fartillery}} Fartillery]]: Snip's friends distracts Shining Armor with a Fart Spell in the first chapter.
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* [[{{Fartillery}} Fartillery]]: Snip's friends friend distracts Shining Armor with a Fart Spell in the first chapter.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, Spike, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
* BadassBoast: Twilight delivers a pretty epic one towards the end of episode 3.
* BadassBookworm: As usual for Twilight Sparkle.
* BadassBoast: Twilight delivers a pretty epic one towards the end of episode 3.
* BadassBookworm: As usual for Twilight Sparkle.
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* BigEater: ''Everyone'' in Derpy's family.
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* BloodBrothers: Seems to be the variation of TrueCompanions Twilight and [[spoiler: Celestia]] need to become to succeed.
* BloodierAndGorier: Than the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic original show;]] mostly it comes down to mentioning that a character is bleeding when it would normally be animated as just an abrasion. No actual blood and guts (yet).
* BloodierAndGorier: Than the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic original show;]] mostly it comes down to mentioning that a character is bleeding when it would normally be animated as just an abrasion. No actual blood and guts (yet).
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* FurryReminder: Used occasionally (words like ''everypony'' not counting do to their common usage within the show itself).
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* IncomingHam: [[spoiler: Trixie. ''Trixie''. '''''Trixie!''''']] Princess Cadenza, too.
* LesYay: Derpy is very [[InsistentTerminology insistent]] on her being Twilight's ''best friend''. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E9SliceOfLife Slice of Life]] had a pretty similar use of the words for fan-favorite ship Lyra-Bon.
* LesYay: Derpy is very [[InsistentTerminology insistent]] on her being Twilight's ''best friend''. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E9SliceOfLife Slice of Life]] had a pretty similar use of the words for fan-favorite ship Lyra-Bon.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Hinted to apply to Derpy in chapter 4. May instead be ObfuscatingInsanity.
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* StepfordSmiler: Considering what a CrapsackWorld she lives in, Cheerilee sure seems this way.
* TheReveal: Twilight's mysterious teacher is actually this universe's version of [[spoiler: Zecora, hiding using potions and the like]].
* TookALevelInJerkass: Pretty much everyone under the AdaptationalVillainy trope. Twilight, but WordOfGod states it to be caused by stress. Guess travelling to other worlds can take it out of you.
* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming 'YEAH!'.
* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: Princess Cadenza]] views Twilight as a worthy threat. Though still inferior.
** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
* TheReveal: Twilight's mysterious teacher is actually this universe's version of [[spoiler: Zecora, hiding using potions and the like]].
* TookALevelInJerkass: Pretty much everyone under the AdaptationalVillainy trope. Twilight, but WordOfGod states it to be caused by stress. Guess travelling to other worlds can take it out of you.
* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming 'YEAH!'.
* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: Princess Cadenza]] views Twilight as a worthy threat. Though still inferior.
** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
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* TheReveal: Twilight's mysterious teacher is actually this universe's version of [[spoiler: Zecora, hiding using potions and the like]].
* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming
* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: Princess Cadenza]] views Twilight as a worthy threat. Though still inferior.
** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: By the author's own admission, the second bonus chapter. It has nothing to do with the story and serves only as a look into a universe where Twilight became [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Simon]] instead of Ryuko.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, Spike, as well as possibly Pinkie Pie and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, Spike, as well as possibly Pinkie Pie Pie, and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: Slightly more than the original show; mostly it comes down to mentioning that a character is bleeding when it would normally be animated as just an abrasion. No actual blood and guts (yet).
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* BloodierAndGorier: Slightly more than Than the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic original show; show;]] mostly it comes down to mentioning that a character is bleeding when it would normally be animated as just an abrasion. No actual blood and guts (yet).
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* FurryReminder: All over the place. The author seems to be using as many pony-isms as possible.
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* FurryReminder: All over Used occasionally (words like ''everypony'' not counting do to their common usage within the place. The author seems to be using as many pony-isms as possible.show itself).
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* NoIndoorVoice: Shining Armor replaces Ira Gamagoori.
** Also, Bulk Biceps.
** Also, Bulk Biceps.
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* NoIndoorVoice: Shining Armor replaces Ira Gamagoori.
** Also,Bulk Biceps.
** Also,
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** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
* WorldOfHam: It's based on Kill la Kill. The only way it could be worse is if it were based on Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann.
* WorldOfHam: It's based on Kill la Kill. The only way it could be worse is if it were based on Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann.
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** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
* WorldOfHam: It's based on Kill la Kill. The only way it could be worse is if it were based on Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann.mentality.
* WorldOfHam: It's based on Kill la Kill. The only way it could be worse is if it were based on Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann.
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Note that this story, while marked as an '[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]' story, does not take place in a humanized world.
The story currently has 4 chapters, each following the events of one episode of Kill la Kill.
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* LesYay: Derpy is very [[InsistentTerminology insistent]] on her being Twilight's ''best friend''. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E9SliceOfLife Slice of Life]] had a pretty similar use of the words for fan-favorite ship Lyra-Bon.
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** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
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** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.mentality.
* WorldOfHam: It's based on Kill la Kill. The only way it could be worse is if it were based on Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann.
* WorldOfHam: It's based on Kill la Kill. The only way it could be worse is if it were based on Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann.
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* IncomingHam: [[spoiler: Trixie. ''Trixie''. '''''Trixie!''''']] Princess Cadenza, too.
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* MagicKnight: Twilight is an alicorn and therefore powerfully magical; but she still uses her sword to fight and needs to wear her armor to unlock her TruePotential.
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* MagicKnight: Twilight is an alicorn and therefore powerfully magical; but she still uses her sword to fight and needs to wear her armor to unlock her TruePotential.true potential.
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* MagicKnight: Twilight is an alicorn and therefore powerfully magical; but she still uses her sword to fight and needs to wear her armor to unlock her TruePotential.
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* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming 'YEAH!'.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Pretty much everyone under the AdaptationalVillainy trope. Twilight, but WordOfGod states it to be caused by stress. Guess travelling to other worlds can take it out of you.
* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming'YEAH!'.'YEAH!'.
* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: Princess Cadenza]] views Twilight as a worthy threat. Though still inferior.
** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming
* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: Princess Cadenza]] views Twilight as a worthy threat. Though still inferior.
** Played straighter with Shining Armor: as of episode 4, he has great respect for Twilight and seems headed for a 'TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou' type mentality.
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* BigEater: ''Everyone'' in Derpy's family.
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* BadassBoast: Twilight delivers a pretty epic one towards the end of episode 3.
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* BloodBrothers: Seems to be the variation of TrueCompanions Twilight and [[spoiler: Celestia]] need to become to succeed.
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* HardDrinkingPartyGirl: Berry Punch is either this or a LadyDrunk.
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* StepfordSmiler: Considering what a CrapsackWorld she lives in, Cheerilee sure seems this way.
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[[BadassBookworm Twilight Sparkle]] is on an adventure in an AlternateUniverse, tracking the pony who has stolen her [[McGuffin Element of Harmony.]] She's made her way to Canterlot High School, run by its AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil, and must fight her way to the top. Something that she... isn't really used to.
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[[BadassBookworm Twilight Sparkle]] is on an adventure in an AlternateUniverse, tracking the pony who has stolen her [[McGuffin [[PlotDevice Element of Harmony.]] She's made her way to Canterlot High School, run by its AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil, and must fight her way to the top. Something that she... isn't really used to.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Twilight's Star Blade. Also, [[spoiler: Cadenza's]] Chimera Blade.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, as well as possibly Pinkie Pie and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, as well as possibly Pinkie Pie and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Twilight's Star Star/Magic Blade. Also, [[spoiler: Cadenza's]] Chimera Blade.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, Spike, as well as possibly Pinkie Pie and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, Spike, as well as possibly Pinkie Pie and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
* BadassLongcoat: Twilight wears one for most of the first chapter.
* BloodierAndGorier: Slightly more than the original show; mostly it comes down to mentioning that a character is bleeding when it would normally be animated as just an abrasion. No actual blood and guts (yet).
* CaptainObviousReveal: *Gasp* You mean that student who we've never seen before [[spoiler:is evil]]? And I know that it said she had blue fur, silver hair, and her name is Lula, but I'm still supposed to be surprised she's [[spoiler: Trixie Lulamoon]]?
*CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Bulk Biceps tries to fry Derpy in hot oil.
* BloodierAndGorier: Slightly more than the original show; mostly it comes down to mentioning that a character is bleeding when it would normally be animated as just an abrasion. No actual blood and guts (yet).
* CaptainObviousReveal: *Gasp* You mean that student who we've never seen before [[spoiler:is evil]]? And I know that it said she had blue fur, silver hair, and her name is Lula, but I'm still supposed to be surprised she's [[spoiler: Trixie Lulamoon]]?
*CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Bulk Biceps tries to fry Derpy in hot oil.
* FurryReminder: All over the place. The author seems to be using as many pony-isms as possible.
* GenkiGirl: Derpy Hooves, aka Muffins, is replacing Mako Mankanshoku. Doubles as being a CloudCuckooLander.
* GenkiGirl: Derpy Hooves, aka Muffins, is replacing Mako Mankanshoku. Doubles as being a CloudCuckooLander.
** Also, Bulk Biceps.
* ObviousJudas: The [[RememberTheNewGuy out-of-nowhere]] no-stone named Lula [[spoiler: is actually this universe's Trixie Lulamoon.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Hinted to apply to Derpy in chapter 4. May instead be ObfuscatingInsanity.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Hinted to apply to Derpy in chapter 4. May instead be ObfuscatingInsanity.
* PowerCrystal: Twilight's Element of Harmony, naturally. Also the basis for the Mage Armor's abilities.
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** Occasionally passes into PainfulRhyme. Okay, ''usually'' goes into that territory.territory.
* TheReveal: Twilight's mysterious teacher is actually this universe's version of [[spoiler: Zecora, hiding using potions and the like]].
* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming 'YEAH!'.
* TheReveal: Twilight's mysterious teacher is actually this universe's version of [[spoiler: Zecora, hiding using potions and the like]].
* VerbalTic: Bulk Biceps can't seem to go more than two sentences without screaming 'YEAH!'.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Cadence, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, as well as possibly Pinkie Pie and Rarity are all antagonists in this universe.]]
* BadassBookworm: As usual for Twilight Sparkle.
* DeathByAdaptation: The Celestia and Luna of the Alternate World are both long dead when the story begins. [[spoiler: Celestia ends up as a character anyways.]]
* [[{{Fartillery}} Fartillery]]: Snip's friends distracts Shining Armor with a Fart Spell in the first chapter.
* HighSchoolAU: Sort of. Canterlot High is technically a High School, but since it's based on Honnouji Academy, it isn't run like one.
* NoIndoorVoice: Shining Armor replaces Ira Gamagoori.
* NoSell: Pretty much any time someone gets an armor upgrade, this happens.
* PowerArmor: More literally than the Goku Uniforms, the 'Mage Armors' seem to be based on the uniform of the ponies' Royal Guard.
* RhymesOnADime: Zecora, naturally.
** Occasionally passes into PainfulRhyme. Okay, ''usually'' goes into that territory.
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-> '''Old Enemies, New Friends'''
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-> '''Old Enemies, New Friends'''
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A crossover WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction based on the anime Anime/KillLaKill, written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Flash+Notion Flash Notion]] on [=FIMFiction=]. The story is more-or-less Kill la Kill with ponies.
[[BadassBookworm Twilight Sparkle]] is on an adventure in an AlternateUniverse, tracking the pony who has stolen her [[McGuffin Element of Harmony.]] She's made her way to Canterlot High School, run by its AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil, and must fight her way to the top. Something that she... isn't really used to.
Note that this story, while marked as an '[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]' story, does not take place in a humanized world.
The story currently has 4 chapters, each following the events of one episode of Kill la Kill.
[[BadassBookworm Twilight Sparkle]] is on an adventure in an AlternateUniverse, tracking the pony who has stolen her [[McGuffin Element of Harmony.]] She's made her way to Canterlot High School, run by its AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil, and must fight her way to the top. Something that she... isn't really used to.
Note that this story, while marked as an '[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]' story, does not take place in a humanized world.
The story currently has 4 chapters, each following the events of one episode of Kill la Kill.
