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* RatedMForManly: The author makes a point out of describing how "masculine" Ash's shouting is (mainly to try to convince viewers that Ash is definitely not effeminate in any way.) But because it's coming from a prepubescent 10-year-old boy, it falls into TestosteronePoisoning instead.
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* DownerEnding: The final chapter of the story, [[ThirteenIsUnlucky the thirteenth one]], ends poorly for Ash. Not only does [[spoiler:N marry Misty before Ash can save her, but Colress wins the election and Ash is shot dead for protesting the results (though since Ash is a DesignatedHero, you probably won't be feeling too bad for him).]]
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* DownerEnding: The final chapter of the story, [[ThirteenIsUnlucky the thirteenth one]], story ends poorly for Ash. Not only does [[spoiler:N marry Misty before Ash can save her, but Colress wins the election and Ash is shot dead for protesting the results (though since Ash is a DesignatedHero, you probably won't be feeling too bad for him).]]
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: The Christian characters' Pokemon are supposed to be angels, while the non-Christian characters' Pokemon are referred to as "daemons."
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* MadScientist: The final chapter reveals that Nurse Joy is creating {{Artificial Human}}s in the Pokémon Center's basement to serve as Christian missionaries.
* OnlySaneMan: Colress is very much this, being incredulous and confused as to why the main characters have it out for him so badly when he doesn't even know them.
* OurAngelsAreDifferent: The Christian characters'Pokemon Pokémon are supposed to be angels, while the non-Christian characters' Pokemon Pokémon are referred to as "daemons."
* OnlySaneMan: Colress is very much this, being incredulous and confused as to why the main characters have it out for him so badly when he doesn't even know them.
* OurAngelsAreDifferent: The Christian characters'
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* AgeInappropriateDress: Iris is a "scantily-clad [=TikTok=] dancer". But because the story doesn't say if she's older than her canon counterpart, that means she's dressed that way despite being ''a prepubescent girl''.
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* AgeInappropriateDress: Iris is a "scantily-clad [=TikTok=] dancer". But because the The story doesn't say if she's makes no mention of her being older here than her canon counterpart, she is in canon, implying that means she's dressed that way despite being ''a prepubescent girl''.
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* AuthorAvatar: Throughout the story, Colress has been writing a satire story about an atheist professor who rewrites Lord of the Rings to be more scientific, but the characters take this story seriously. This is possibly a hint that Gospel Version itself is satire.
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* AuthorAvatar: Throughout Colress is implied to be this: throughout the story, Colress he has been writing a satire story about an atheist professor who rewrites Lord of the Rings to be more scientific, but the characters which Ash and crew take this story seriously. This is possibly seriously as a hint that Gospel Version itself is satire.proof of his malice against Christians, much to his irritation.
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* {{Chickification}}: Misty goes from a tsundere tomboy to a girly girl who only wants to be Ash's future submissive wife.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In the final chapter, [[spoiler:Nurse Joy has been keeping Iris tied up without food or water, until Iris memorizes entire Bible books.]]
* DownerEnding: The final chapter of the story, [[ThirteenIsUnlucky the thirteenth one]], ends poorly for Ash. Not only does [[spoiler:N marry Misty before Ash can save her, but Colress wins the election and Ash is shot dead for protesting the results.]]
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In the final chapter, [[spoiler:Nurse Joy has been keeping Iris tied up without food or water, until Iris memorizes entire Bible books.]]
* DownerEnding: The final chapter of the story, [[ThirteenIsUnlucky the thirteenth one]], ends poorly for Ash. Not only does [[spoiler:N marry Misty before Ash can save her, but Colress wins the election and Ash is shot dead for protesting the results.]]
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* {{Chickification}}: Misty goes from a tsundere {{tsundere}} tomboy to a girly girl who only wants to be Ash's future submissive wife.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In the final chapter, [[spoiler:Nurse Joy has been keeping Iris tied up without food orwater, water until Iris she memorizes entire books of the Bible books.as punishment for her "sins".]]
* DownerEnding: The final chapter of the story, [[ThirteenIsUnlucky the thirteenth one]], ends poorly for Ash. Not only does [[spoiler:N marry Misty before Ash can save her, but Colress wins the election and Ash is shot dead for protesting theresults.results (though since Ash is a DesignatedHero, you probably won't be feeling too bad for him).]]
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In the final chapter, [[spoiler:Nurse Joy has been keeping Iris tied up without food or
* DownerEnding: The final chapter of the story, [[ThirteenIsUnlucky the thirteenth one]], ends poorly for Ash. Not only does [[spoiler:N marry Misty before Ash can save her, but Colress wins the election and Ash is shot dead for protesting the
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* [[spoiler:TheHeroDies]]: The very last sentence of the fic confirms this.
* HollywoodAtheist: Everyone on Team Plasma is one of these to varying degrees.
* InNameOnly: Basically everyone in the book. Ash is an evangelical, Misty is submissive and enabling of Ash's behavior, Iris is an overtly sexual [=TikTok=] dancer.
* HollywoodAtheist: Everyone on Team Plasma is one of these to varying degrees.
* InNameOnly: Basically everyone in the book. Ash is an evangelical, Misty is submissive and enabling of Ash's behavior, Iris is an overtly sexual [=TikTok=] dancer.
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* [[spoiler:TheHeroDies]]: TheHeroDies: [[spoiler: The very last sentence of ending has Ash be shot dead by the fic confirms this.
National Guard during a failed attempt to assassinate President-elect Colress.]]
* HollywoodAtheist: Everyoneon in Team Plasma is one of these to varying degrees.
* InNameOnly: Basically everyone in the book. Ash is an evangelical, Misty is submissive and enabling of Ash's behavior, and Iris is an overtly sexual [=TikTok=] dancer.
* HollywoodAtheist: Everyone
* InNameOnly: Basically everyone in the book. Ash is an evangelical, Misty is submissive and enabling of Ash's behavior, and Iris is an overtly sexual [=TikTok=] dancer.
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* WouldHurtAChild: In the last chapter, it is revealed that [[spoiler: Nurse Joy has been keeping Iris tied up, without food or water, until Iris memorizes entire books of the Bible. Ash is also shot dead in the same chapter for attempting to assassinate Colress.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: In the last chapter, it is revealed that [[spoiler: Nurse Joy has been keeping Iris tied up, without food or water, until Iris memorizes can memorize entire books of the Bible. Ash is also shot dead in the same chapter for attempting to assassinate Colress.Colress, though he had it coming.]]
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* BecomeARealBoy: In the last chapter, it is revealed that [[spoiler:Mewtwo performed an experiment on himself to turn himself into a human, in order for people to stop judging his marriage to Nurse Joy.]]
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* PinocchioSyndrome: In the last chapter, it is revealed that [[spoiler:Mewtwo performed an experiment on himself to turn himself into a human, in order for people to stop judging his marriage to Nurse Joy.]]
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* ShoutOut: The story repeatedly quotes lines from [[WebAnimation/NyanNekoSugarGirls Nyan~ Neko Sugar Girls]]... in ways that don't entirely make sense in context.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The story repeatedly quotes lines from [[WebAnimation/NyanNekoSugarGirls Nyan~ Neko Sugar Girls]]... in ways that don't entirely make sense incontext.context.
** The movie Brycen is shooting is about him [[WebVideo/JennyNicholson getting trapped "in" an island with Josh Hutcherson]]. The prequel also has the author mention attending one of the Easter pageants at the Church of the Rock.
** The story repeatedly quotes lines from [[WebAnimation/NyanNekoSugarGirls Nyan~ Neko Sugar Girls]]... in ways that don't entirely make sense in
** The movie Brycen is shooting is about him [[WebVideo/JennyNicholson getting trapped "in" an island with Josh Hutcherson]]. The prequel also has the author mention attending one of the Easter pageants at the Church of the Rock.
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* AgeInappropriateDress: Iris is a "scantily-clad [=TikTok=] dancer". But because the story doesn't say if she's older than her canon counterpart, that means she's dressed that way despite being ''a prepubescent girl''.
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* RatedMForManly: The author makes a point out of describing how "masculine" Ash's shouting is (mainly to try to convince viewers that Ash is definitely not effeminate in any way.) But because it's coming from a prepubescent 10-year-old boy, it falls into TestosteronePoisoning instead.
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* ShoutOut: The story repeatedly quotes lines from [[WebAnimation/NyanNekoSugarGirls]]... in ways that don't entirely make sense in context.
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* ShoutOut: The story repeatedly quotes lines from [[WebAnimation/NyanNekoSugarGirls]]...[[WebAnimation/NyanNekoSugarGirls Nyan~ Neko Sugar Girls]]... in ways that don't entirely make sense in context.
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* ShoutOut: The story repeatedly quotes lines from [[WebAnimation/NyanNekoSugarGirls]]... in ways that don't entirely make sense in context.
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In this version of Pokemon, Ash Ketchum has become old enough to get an angel from Reverend Oak. Along with Reverend Oak's daughter, Misty, Ash decides to convert the gym leaders of Unova to Christianity by battling the gym leaders' demons with the Christian's angels. However, an atheist named Colress is trying to run for champion, and so Ash and Misty, later joined by Brock, try to stop Colress from winning the election while on their journey.
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In this version of Pokemon, Ash Ketchum has become old enough to get an angel from Reverend Oak. Along with Reverend Oak's daughter, Misty, Ash decides to convert the gym leaders of Unova to Christianity by battling the gym leaders' demons with the Christian's Christians' angels. However, an atheist named Colress is trying to run for champion, and so Ash and Misty, later joined by Brock, try to stop Colress from winning the election while on their journey.
