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* HatesBaths / ThePigPen: Moto and (at first) Sarafina.
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** To elaborate, Moto basically doesn't bathe at all (at one point, it's implied he's gone several weeks without one at the very least), but Sarafina is forced to take one by TPYMK when they first meet. He forces her to stand against a wall as he sprays her with a hose to clean her off, and she panics, begging him to stop.
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* HatesBaths / ThePigPen: Moto and (at first) Sarafina.
** To elaborate,HatesBaths: Moto basically doesn't bathe at all (at one point, it's implied he's gone several weeks without one at the very least), but least). Sarafina shares his attitude bu is forced to take one by TPYMK when they first meet. He forces her to stand against a wall as he sprays her with a hose to clean her off, and she panics, begging him to stop.
** To elaborate,
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After finishing [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], ([[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]]) decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
Poison's first series lasted 13 stories, and the second series contained another 13.
Poison's first series lasted 13 stories, and the second series contained another 13.
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After finishing [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], ([[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]]) decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
series. Poison's first series lasted 13 stories, and the second series contained another 13.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Sarafina.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Sarafina.
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* FakeDefector: [[spoiler: Sarafina]] pulls this off in the first series.
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After finishing [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], ([[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]]) decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a sassy drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
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* DistaffCounterpart: Sarafina is basically a female [[Series/BreakingBad Jesse Pinkman]].
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* HeelRealization: Sarafina realizes just how vile the Sumu trade really is after [[spoiler: Moto reveals how he became hooked on drugs, as well as after dealing Sumu to a pair of cubs]].
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[[caption-width-right:198: The cover, featuring TPYMK and Sarafina]]
After the success of [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], ([[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]]) decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a sassy drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
[[caption-width-right:198: The cover, featuring TPYMK and Sarafina]]
After the success of [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], ([[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]]) decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a sassy drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
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* FakeDefector: [[spoiler: Sarafina]] pulls this off in the first series. Notable in that nobody, including the reader, knew about this plan beforehand.
* HatesBaths / ThePigPen: Moto and (at first) Sarafina.
** To elaborate, Moto basically doesn't bathe at all (at one point, it's implied he's gone several weeks without one at the very least), but Sarafina is forced to take one by TPYMK when they first meet. He forces her to stand against a wall as he sprays her with a hose to clean her off, and she panics, begging him to stop.
* HatesBaths / ThePigPen: Moto and (at first) Sarafina.
** To elaborate, Moto basically doesn't bathe at all (at one point, it's implied he's gone several weeks without one at the very least), but Sarafina is forced to take one by TPYMK when they first meet. He forces her to stand against a wall as he sprays her with a hose to clean her off, and she panics, begging him to stop.
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* FakeDefector: [[spoiler: Sarafina]] pulls this off in the first series. Notable in that nobody, including the reader, knew about this plan beforehand.\n* HatesBaths / ThePigPen: Moto and (at first) Sarafina.\n** To elaborate, Moto basically doesn't bathe at all (at one point, it's implied he's gone several weeks without one at the very least), but Sarafina is forced to take one by TPYMK when they first meet. He forces her to stand against a wall as he sprays her with a hose to clean her off, and she panics, begging him to stop.
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* SpinOff: Of ''[[Fanfic/TheLionKingAdventures The Lion King Adventures,]]''.
* TheCameo: Mufasa appears as a doctor.
* TheTeetotaler: TPYMK doesn't drink alcohol, but rather chocolate milk.
* UncleanlinessIsNextToUngodliness: Moto is the embodiment of this trope.
* TheCameo: Mufasa appears as a doctor.
* TheTeetotaler: TPYMK doesn't drink alcohol, but rather chocolate milk.
* UncleanlinessIsNextToUngodliness: Moto is the embodiment of this trope.
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* SpinOff: Of ''[[Fanfic/TheLionKingAdventures The Lion King Adventures,]]''.
* TheCameo: Mufasa appears as a doctor.
* TheTeetotaler: TPYMK doesn't drink alcohol, but rather chocolate milk.
* UncleanlinessIsNextToUngodliness: Moto is the embodiment of this trope.Adventures,]]''.
* TheCameo: Mufasa appears as a doctor.
* TheTeetotaler: TPYMK doesn't drink alcohol, but rather chocolate milk.
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After the success of [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], author Anthony Barletta ([[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]]) decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a sassy drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
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* UncleanlinessIsNextToUngodliness: Moto is the embodiment of this trope.
* XMeetsY: Best described as ''[[Disney/TheLionKing The Lion King]]'' meets ''[[Series/BreakingBad Breaking Bad]]''.trope.
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** To elaborate, Moto basically doesn't bathe at all (at one point, it's implied he's gone several weeks without one at the very least), but Sarafina is forced to take one by TPYMK when they first meet. He forces her to stand against a wall as he sprays her with a hose to clean her off, and she panics, begging him to stop.
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* FakeDefector: [[spoiler: Sarafina]] pulls this off in the first series. Notable in that nobody, including the reader, knew about this plan beforehand.
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After the success of [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], author [[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]] Anthony Barletta ([[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]]) decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a sassy drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
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[[caption-width-right:198: The cover, featuring TPYMK and Sarafina]]
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* XMeetsY: Best described as ''[[Disney/TheLionKing The Lion King]]'' meets [[Series/BreakingBad Breaking Bad]].
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* XMeetsY: Best described as ''[[Disney/TheLionKing The Lion King]]'' meets [[Series/BreakingBad ''[[Series/BreakingBad Breaking Bad]].Bad]]''.
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* XMeetsY: Best described as ''[[Disney/TheLionKing The Lion King]]'' meets [[Series/BreakingBad Breaking Bad]].
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** Even Moto gets a moment:
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-->'''Bora:''' You don't have a lawyer.
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* HeelRealization: Sarafina realizes just how vile the Sumu trade really is after [[spoiler: Moto reveals how he became hooked on drugs, as well as after dealing Sumu to a pair of cubs]].
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Poison's first series lasted 13 stories, and the second series is currently in progress.
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Poison's first series lasted 13 stories, and the second series is currently contained another 13.
!!''Poison'' provides examples of:
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Death]] inprogress.the first series, and [[spoiler: Zira]] in the second.
* DeadpanSnarker: Sarafina, oh so very much.
** Bora in the second series.
* DrugsAreBad: One of the main themes of the series.
* HatesBaths: Moto and (at first) Sarafina.
* SpinOff: Of ''[[Fanfic/TheLionKingAdventures The Lion King Adventures,]]''.
* TheTeetotaler: TPYMK doesn't drink alcohol, but rather chocolate milk.
!!''Poison'' provides examples of:
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Death]] in
* DeadpanSnarker: Sarafina, oh so very much.
** Bora in the second series.
* DrugsAreBad: One of the main themes of the series.
* HatesBaths: Moto and (at first) Sarafina.
* SpinOff: Of ''[[Fanfic/TheLionKingAdventures The Lion King Adventures,]]''.
* TheTeetotaler: TPYMK doesn't drink alcohol, but rather chocolate milk.
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After the success of [[Fanfic/TheHaibaMystery The Haiba Mystery]], author [[Creator/ThatPersonYouMightKnow ThatPersonYouMightKnow]] decided to continue it with a longer series chronicling the further adventures of Detective TPYMK, alongside a sassy drug-addicted lioness named Sarafina.
Poison's first series lasted 13 stories, and the second series is currently in progress.
Poison's first series lasted 13 stories, and the second series is currently in progress.
