History Fanfic / PinkPersonalHellAndAlteringFate

* {{Hikkikomori}}: Dominic is only shown leaving his house to go to school apart from the one occasion. Nickel Steel begins as this, flat out being afraid to leave his bedroom. [[ItGetsBetter They get better.]]

** Pinkie Pie says "Laughter is the very best medicine". Dominic responds with, [[WeirdAlYankovic "I'll remember that when my appendix bursts next week."]]

* CharacterDevelopment: The "Altering Fate" narrative shows Nickel Steel being somewhat shy, but he opens up to the rest of Ponyville. [[spoiler: Revealed to be Dominic from "Pink Personal Hell"]]

* UnreliableNarrator: Dominic is likely to be one. He describes a group cutting him off and making him do the work, but when he gives the presentation (With an alligator stuck to his finger) they don't seem to be reacting with hatred.

* InformedFlaw: Nickel Steel doesn’t think himself to be too capable with magic. Everyone else tries to tell him otherwise since his cutie mark is supposed to be a magic symbol not unlike Trixie or Twilight's. He seems to get better later on, no longer telling himself that it's

A bizarre mixture – an [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP]] [[FanWorks/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fanfic]] featuring two different narratives, “Pink Personal Hell”, an OddCouple story where Pinkie Pie appears to be temporarily living with a human while getting on his nerves, and “Altering Fate”, a SliceOfLife story where a blue unicorn named Nickel Steel is being sent to Ponyville to live and his attempts to fit in. At first, it seems almost like the two have nothing to do with each other apart from ponies but it eventually blends in.

* BrickJoke: In one scene, a Prank Bit that bounces away whenever she tries to catch it temporarily distracts Pinkie Pie. Then at the end of the scene, it bounces into the magic shop…followed by Pinkie Pie herself.

* InformedFlaw: Nickel Steel doesn’t think himself to be too capable with magic. Everyone else tries to tell him otherwise since his cutie mark is supposed to be a magic symbol not unlike Trixie or Twilight's. He seems to get better later on.
* [[spoiler: InMediasRes: "Pink Personal Hell" is revealed to be this to "Altering Fate".]]

* Shapeshifting: Draco Scales, who apparently is able to [[ScaledUp turn into a dragon.]] It's not technically explained how it is possible for him to do so, but the above mentioned prequel explains it.

* [[spoiler: TwoAliasesOneCharacter: Dominic is Nickel Steel.]]

** [[{{Dilbert}} Must...control...fist of death]].

* BerserkButton: Do ‘’not’’ break a Pinkie Promise! Even if she doesn’t –have- pinkies!

* ButtMonkey: Dominic. Potentially may be an UnreliableNarrator.

** [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie seems to know Nickel Steel in Altering Fate…and she’s making a new friend in Pink Personal Hell. Gee, I wonder who that can be...]]

* Idiot Ball: Yes, Dominic, great idea to try to wash flour off with WATER.
* InformedFlaw: Nickel Steel doesn’t think himself to be too capable with magic. Everyone else tries to tell him otherwise since his cutie mark is supposed to be a magic symbol not unlike Trixie or Twilight's.

* TwoLinesNoWaiting: The big gimmick.

* RhymesOnADime: Zecora.

* OddCouple

A bizarre mixture – a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP]] [[FanWorks/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fanfic]] featuring two different narratives, “Pink Personal Hell”, an OddCouple story where Pinkie Pie appears to be temporarily living with a human while getting on his nerves, and “Altering Fate”, a SliceOfLife story where a blue unicorn named Nickel Steel is being sent to Ponyville to live and his attempts to fit in. At first, it seems almost like the two have nothing to do with each other apart from ponies but it eventually blends in.

A bizarre mixture – a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP]] [[FanWorksMyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fanfic]] featuring two different narratives, “Pink Personal Hell”, an OddCouple story where Pinkie Pie appears to be temporarily living with a human while getting on his nerves, and “Altering Fate”, a SliceOfLife story where a blue unicorn named Nickel Steel is being sent to Ponyville to live and his attempts to fit in. At first, it seems almost like the two have nothing to do with each other apart from ponies but it eventually blends in.

So it's like ''HardBoiledWonderlandAndTheEndOfTheWorld''...only with the {{Unicorn}}s being [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP]] unicorns. May be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8765927/1/Pink-Personal-Hell-and-Altering-Fate here]] or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68209/Pink-Personal-Hell-and-Altering-Fate here]].

So it's like ''HardBoiledWonderlandAndTheEndOfTheWorld''...only with the {{Unicorn}}s being [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP]] unicorns. May be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8765927/1/Pink-Personal-Hell-and-Altering-Fate here]] or flm if it is approved.

* TwoLinesNoWaiting: The big gimmick.

A bizarre mixture – a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP]] Fanfic featuring two different narratives, “Pink Personal Hell”, an OddCouple story where Pinkie Pie appears to be temporarily living with a human while getting on his nerves, and “Altering Fate”, a SliceOfLife story where a blue unicorn named Nickel Steel is being sent to Ponyville to live and trying to fit in. At first, it seems almost like the two have nothing to do with each other apart from ponies but it eventually blends in.

So it's ''HardBoiledWonderlandAndTheEndOfTheWorld''...only with the {{Unicorn}}s being [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP]] unicorns.

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!!''Pink Personal Hell And Altering Fate'' provides examples of:

* BrickJoke: in one scene, a Prank Bit that bounces away whenever she tries to catch it temporarily distracts Pinkie Pie. Then at the end of the scene, it bounces into the magic shop…followed by Pinkie Pie.
* CharacterDevelopment: The "Altering Fate" narrative shows Nickel Steel being somewhat shy, but he opens up to the rest of Ponyville. [[spoiler: Revealed to be Dominic from "Pink Personal Hell"]]
* FisherKingdom: [[spoiler: Equestria, Pinkie Pie is safe from the other side.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several things seem to be playing towards the main twist. Among them:
** [[spoiler: Nickel Steel playing with the sign]]
** [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie seems to know Nickel Steel.]]
* FoodPorn: Dominic describes Pinkie Pie’s delicacies as “Softcore Food Porn”. Not to mention, the meal of waffles….
* HiddenDepths: Full Beats is actually highly competent with music.
* [[HumansThroughAlienEyes Humans through Pony eyes]]: Pinkie Pie says humans are like “Minotaurs” and finds the TV so amusing.
* [[spoiler: IChooseToStay]]
* Idiot Ball: Yes, Dominic, great idea to try to wash flour off with WATER.
* [[spoiler: InMediasRes: "Pink Personal Hell" is revealed to be this to "Altering Fate".]]
* GenkiGirl: Pinkie Pie…oh so much.
* OddCouple
* RuleOfFunny: This is ''Pinkie Pie'' we're talking about!
** It’s also implied Luna has a sense of humour and likes to correct people by using her royal voice..just because she finds it funny.
** Plus, the “Pink Personal Hell” was called this simply because Pinkie Pie would move a little too fast for most people – and subsequently drive them crazy!
* RunningGag: Full beats eating large amounts of food or stealing it when people aren’t looking.
** Gummy likes to bite onto Dominic.
** Nickel Steel having problems with stairs.
* Sequel Hook: [[spoiler: Implied at the end that there will be future adventures in Ponyville, as well as relief that the mirror was not discovered by someone else who did not have interests as altruistic as the princesses.]]
* ShoutOut: The style of narrative is a ShoutOut to ''HardBoiledWonderlandAndTheEndOfTheWorld'' by HarukiMurakami. The term "Altering Fate" is a shout-out to VisionOfEscaflowne.
** The ''Escaflowne'' shout-outs continue when he assumes Dilandau is going to tackle him.
** Pinkie Pie says "Laughter is the very best medicine". Dominic responds with, [[WeirdAlYankovic "I'll remember that when my appendix bursts next week."]]
** [[{{Dilbert}} Must...control...fist of death]].
* SliceOfLife
* TwoLinesNoWaiting
* [[spoiler: TheUntwist: Okay...Dominic is Nickel Steel.]]

!!''PinkPersonalHellAndAlteringFate'' provides examples of:

* It’s also implied luna has a sense of humour and likes to correct people by using her royal voice..just cause it’s funny.

** Pinkie Pie says "Laughter is the very best medicine". Dominic responds with, [[WeirdAlYankovic I'll remember that when my appendix bursts next week.]]

* [[spoiler: InMediaRes: "Pink Personal Hell" is revealed to be this to "Altering Fate".]]

TwoLinesNoWaiting
* [[spoiler: {{Untwist}}: Okay...Dominic is Nickel Steel.]]

* CharacterDevelopment: The "AlteringFate" narrative shows Nickel Steel being somewhat shy, but he opens up to the rest of Ponyville. [[spoiler: Revealed to be Dominic from "Pink Personal Hell"]]

Sequel Hook: [[spoiler: Implied at the end that there will be future adventures in Ponyville, as well as relief that the mirror was not discovered by someone else who did not have interests as altruistic as the princesses.]]
ShoutOut: The style of narrative is a ShoutOut to ''HardBoiledWonderlandAndTheEndOfTheWorld'' by HarukiMurakami. The term "Altering Fate" is a shout-out to VisionOfEscaflowne.

** PInkie Pie says "Laughter is the very best medicine". Dominic responds with, [[WeirdAlYankovic I'll remember that when my appendix bursts next week.]]

* [[spoiler: IChoseToStay]]

* [[spoiler: InMediaRes: "Pink Personal Hell" is revealed to be this to "Altering Fate".