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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, and he seems to have recovered admirably, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently had such a [[http://www.pishoque.net/soulriders/ECB%20Files/ECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm reverse-scaled focus in their counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, and he seems to have recovered admirably, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently had such a [[http://www.pishoque.net/soulriders/ECB%20Files/ECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm reverse-scaled focus in their counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it.that... it depends whether [[DueNotFunny your like him]] or [[CrowningMomentOfFunny hate him]].
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** [[{{Understatement}} Yes]], [[ItGotWorse yes it does]]
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* CharacterDerailment: Everyone, due to Lionheart's absolute hatred of canon Harry Potter.
* CompleteMonster: Dumbledore is made into this, but eventually his crimes become so many and so laughable he [[JumpingTheShark jumps the shark]]. Due to the sheer amount of MoralDissonance, though, a good number of readers consider ''Harry'' to be this.
* CompleteMonster: Dumbledore is made into this, but eventually his crimes become so many and so laughable he [[JumpingTheShark jumps the shark]]. Due to the sheer amount of MoralDissonance, though, a good number of readers consider ''Harry'' to be this.
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* CharacterDerailment: Everyone, due to Lionheart's absolute hatred of canon Harry Potter.
* CompleteMonster: Dumbledore is made into this, but eventually his crimes become so many and so laughable he [[JumpingTheShark jumps the shark]]. Due to the sheer amount of MoralDissonance, though, a good number of readers consider ''Harry'' to be this.
* CompleteMonster: Dumbledore is made into this, but eventually his crimes become so many and so laughable he [[JumpingTheShark jumps the shark]]. Due to the sheer amount of MoralDissonance, though, a good number of readers consider ''Harry'' to be this.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: Totally and one hundred percent subverted.
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* CharacterDerailment: Everyone, due to Lionheart's absolute hatred of canon Harry Potter.
* CompleteMonster: Dumbledore is made into this, but eventually his crimes become so many and so laughable he [[JumpingTheShark jumps the shark]]. Due to the sheer amount of MoralDissonance, though, a good number of readers consider ''Harry'' to be this.
* CompleteMonster: Dumbledore is made into this, but eventually his crimes become so many and so laughable he [[JumpingTheShark jumps the shark]]. Due to the sheer amount of MoralDissonance, though, a good number of readers consider ''Harry'' to be this.
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* BetterThanItSounds: A common claim by the fic's fandom, and it's indisputable that its plot develops in ways that could not have been predicted merely by reading the initial premise. [[LoveItOrHateIt As ever with this work, though, opinions on actual quality tend to vary wildly from reader to reader.]]
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* ArcFatigue: The author interrupted his own narrative to dive into a series of side-plots and digressions that had ''absolutely nothing to do with the central story'', including time travel, the space race, and now a fight with vampires. Several of the story's reviewers have used the phrase "gone off the rails", while other reviewers have said things along the lines of "lost sight of the original plot" about the author. With all this digression, the story is now ninety-plus chapters long, and ''still'' hasn't returned to the original plot, which was the overthrow of the Dark Lord Dumbledore.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Dumbledore is a CompleteMonster, Snape is a lesser monster and a magical pimp, Ron is just shy of being brain dead, etc.
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\'Reasonable\' is in the eye of the beholder.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, and he seems to have recovered admirably, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently had such a [[http://www.pishoque.net/soulriders/ECB%20Files/ECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm reverse-scaled focus in their counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it, and he seems more reasonable nowadays.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, and he seems to have recovered admirably, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently had such a [[http://www.pishoque.net/soulriders/ECB%20Files/ECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm reverse-scaled focus in their counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it, and he seems more reasonable nowadays.it.
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* HollywoodTactics: Pretty much the entirety of chapter 99, but the grand prize has to go to Russia invading Canada by ''[[YouFailGeographyForever marching an army across the North Pole]].
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* HollywoodTactics: Pretty much the entirety of chapter 99, but the grand prize has to go to Russia invading Canada by ''[[YouFailGeographyForever marching an army across the North Pole]].Pole]]''.
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* HollywoodTactics: Pretty much the entirety of chapter 99, but the grand prize has to go to Russia invading Canada by ''[[YouFailGeographyForever marching an army across the North Pole]].
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** In fairness, the fic starts with Harry absorbing all of Voldemort's memories, thus being able to (for one) take out all but the missing one of his horcruxes offscreen, and Dumbledore is able to destroy him effortlessly in a fight and is a consummate PuppetMaster--so his marginalization makes some story sense given his huge disadvantages to both the other parties.
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* BruceLee: [[WallBanger Is saved by Trelawney's time meddling and trains Harry Potter]]
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heh. I like the fic. BTW, does anybody read these blurbs? If so, Hiya, peeps!.
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** This seems to be a theme for PL. His earlier fic Chunin Exam Day had essentially the exact same things used for wooing women, just flip 'really shiny things' with 'really great massages, hand-made clothes, and really good food'. Come to think of it, at least those things are a bit more believable as reasons to fall in love. Also Chunin exam day doesn't feature a VillainProtagonist.
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* GuiltyPleasure: It's a GodModeSue fic, true. It's got a DesignatedHero VillainProtagonist, true. It's got horrific levels of AuthorAppeal, true. But, for all those reasons, it's also really, really fun to read, as long as you can avoid thinking about it as SeriousBusiness and just enjoy the fic. The JumpingTheShark done by Dumbledore is good ComicRelief, as well.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, and he seems to have recovered admirably, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made such an [[http://www.pishoque.net/soulriders/ECB%20Files/ECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm reverse-focused counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it, and he seems more reasonable nowadays.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, and he seems to have recovered admirably, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made had such an a [[http://www.pishoque.net/soulriders/ECB%20Files/ECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm reverse-focused reverse-scaled focus in their counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it, and he seems more reasonable nowadays.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4240771/1/ Partially Kissed Hero]] is a HarryPotter story by longtime RanmaOneHalf fanfiction writer Jared Ornstead, originally using the handle Skysaber, and most recently [[AwesomeMcCoolName Perfect Lionheart]]; among other things known as the author of the "Mirrors Multiplied" SelfInsert; and more recently the controversial Naruto Fanfiction "Chunin Exam Day". It is, like Chunin Exam Day, a highly reviewed (11,000+ and counting) and very long (98 chapters and counting) fanfiction arc.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4240771/1/ Partially Kissed Hero]] is a HarryPotter story by longtime RanmaOneHalf fanfiction writer Jared Ornstead, originally using the handle Skysaber, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/40569/Skysaber Skysaber]], and most recently [[AwesomeMcCoolName Perfect Lionheart]]; among other things known as the author of the "Mirrors Multiplied" SelfInsert; and more recently the controversial Naruto Fanfiction "Chunin Exam Day". It is, like Chunin Exam Day, a highly reviewed (11,000+ and counting) and very long (98 chapters and counting) fanfiction arc.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, and he seems to have recovered admirably, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made such an [[http://www.google.se/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=10&ved=0CG0QFjAJ&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.pishoque.net%2Fsoulriders%2FECB%2520Files%2FECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm&rct=j&q=Jared%20ornstead%20skysaber&ei=qRInTcGzL9GZOs__vbYC&usg=AFQjCNH2iq6mhvdcsuC1bhdkz9cNu9tdvg&cad=rja net/soulriders/ECB%20Files/ECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm reverse-focused counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it, and he seems more reasonable nowadays.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made such an [[http://www.google.se/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=10&ved=0CG0QFjAJ&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.pishoque.net%2Fsoulriders%2FECB%2520Files%2FECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm&rct=j&q=Jared%20ornstead%20skysaber&ei=qRInTcGzL9GZOs__vbYC&usg=AFQjCNH2iq6mhvdcsuC1bhdkz9cNu9tdvg&cad=rja reverse-focused counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made such an [[http://www.google.se/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=10&ved=0CG0QFjAJ&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.pishoque.net%2Fsoulriders%2FECB%2520Files%2FECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm&rct=j&q=Jared%20ornstead%20skysaber&ei=qRInTcGzL9GZOs__vbYC&usg=AFQjCNH2iq6mhvdcsuC1bhdkz9cNu9tdvg&cad=rja reverse-focused counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it.it, and he seems more reasonable nowadays.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a text that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made such an [[http://www.google.se/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=10&ved=0CG0QFjAJ&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.pishoque.net%2Fsoulriders%2FECB%2520Files%2FECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm&rct=j&q=Jared%20ornstead%20skysaber&ei=qRInTcGzL9GZOs__vbYC&usg=AFQjCNH2iq6mhvdcsuC1bhdkz9cNu9tdvg&cad=rja reverse-focused counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a text goodbye message that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him about some story to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made such an [[http://www.google.se/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=10&ved=0CG0QFjAJ&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.pishoque.net%2Fsoulriders%2FECB%2520Files%2FECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm&rct=j&q=Jared%20ornstead%20skysaber&ei=qRInTcGzL9GZOs__vbYC&usg=AFQjCNH2iq6mhvdcsuC1bhdkz9cNu9tdvg&cad=rja reverse-focused counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it.
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* CreatorBreakdown: Obviously just a temporary and minor one, but people who previously didn't have anything in particular against him found it quite disturbing to read a text that sounded like he wanted to condemn anybody who had ever disagreed with him to eternal torture, in archaic speech no less. Of course, some of his former acquaintances apparently made such an [[http://www.google.se/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=10&ved=0CG0QFjAJ&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.pishoque.net%2Fsoulriders%2FECB%2520Files%2FECB_v_The_Life_of_Skysaber.htm&rct=j&q=Jared%20ornstead%20skysaber&ei=qRInTcGzL9GZOs__vbYC&usg=AFQjCNH2iq6mhvdcsuC1bhdkz9cNu9tdvg&cad=rja reverse-focused counter-reaction]] that you couldn't help but feel sorry for him when you saw it.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4240771/1/ Partially Kissed Hero]] is a story by longtime former RanmaOneHalf fanfiction writer Jared Ornstead, originally using the handle Skysaber, and most recently [[AwesomeMcCoolName Perfect Lionheart]]; among other things known as the author of the "Mirrors Multiplied" SelfInsert; and more recently the controversial Naruto Fanfiction Chunin Exam Day. It is, like Chunin Exam Day, a highly reviewed (11,000+ and counting) and very long (98 chapters and counting) fanfiction.
The story is set just at the start of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, and immediately deviates from the storyline when Harry is partially kissed by a Dementor aboard the Hogwarts Express, prompting his soul to absorb the Horcrux Voldemort created inside him. Oh, and Dumbledore's [[RonTheDeathEater evil]].
The story is set just at the start of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, and immediately deviates from the storyline when Harry is partially kissed by a Dementor aboard the Hogwarts Express, prompting his soul to absorb the Horcrux Voldemort created inside him. Oh, and Dumbledore's [[RonTheDeathEater evil]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4240771/1/ Partially Kissed Hero]] is a HarryPotter story by longtime former RanmaOneHalf fanfiction writer Jared Ornstead, originally using the handle Skysaber, and most recently [[AwesomeMcCoolName Perfect Lionheart]]; among other things known as the author of the "Mirrors Multiplied" SelfInsert; and more recently the controversial Naruto Fanfiction Chunin "Chunin Exam Day. Day". It is, like Chunin Exam Day, a highly reviewed (11,000+ and counting) and very long (98 chapters and counting) fanfiction.
fanfiction arc.
The story is set just at the start ofHarry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban, and immediately deviates from the storyline when Harry is partially kissed by a Dementor aboard the Hogwarts Express, prompting his soul to absorb the Horcrux Voldemort created inside him. Oh, and Dumbledore's [[RonTheDeathEater evil]].
The story is set just at the start of
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4240771/1/ Partially Kissed Hero]] is a fanfiction by Perfect Lionheart, the author of the controversial Naruto Fanfiction Chunin Exam Day. It is, like Chunin Exam Day, a highly reviewed (11,000+ and counting) and very long (98 chapters and counting) fanfiction.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4240771/1/ Partially Kissed Hero]] is a story by longtime former RanmaOneHalf fanfiction by writer Jared Ornstead, originally using the handle Skysaber, and most recently [[AwesomeMcCoolName Perfect Lionheart, Lionheart]]; among other things known as the author of the "Mirrors Multiplied" SelfInsert; and more recently the controversial Naruto Fanfiction Chunin Exam Day. It is, like Chunin Exam Day, a highly reviewed (11,000+ and counting) and very long (98 chapters and counting) fanfiction.
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* HowUnscientific: Chapter 72. Trelawney pushes the space programs of Earth to colonize the moon, Mars, and other worlds in the solar system with dryad trees to make them effectively invulnerable (as as long as their trees are safe, they can't die) with Orion-type Nuclear pulse propulsion ships that can get out to Pluto and back within a year.[[DidNotDoTheResearch]]
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* HowUnscientific: Chapter 72. Trelawney pushes the space programs of Earth to colonize the moon, Mars, and other worlds in the solar system with dryad trees to make them effectively invulnerable (as as long as their trees are safe, they can't die) with Orion-type Nuclear pulse propulsion ships that [[DidNotDoTheResearch can get out to Pluto and back within a year.[[DidNotDoTheResearch]]]]
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* {{MST}}: Done, [[http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=18521&st=0 Link.]]
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* {{MST}}: Done, Done by members of [[http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=18521&st=0 Link.]]The Fanfiction Forum.]] Viewing requires registration.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Dumbledore is way past this apparently from the start to the point of ridiculousness. Harry crosses it in chapter 9 when he kills Snape for the first time. By the latest chapters, Harry is so far over the MoralEventHorizon he can't see it with a telescope.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Dumbledore is way past this apparently from the start to the point of ridiculousness. Harry crosses it in chapter 9 Chapter 9, when he kills Snape for the first time. By the latest chapters, Harry is so far over the MoralEventHorizon he can't see it with a telescope.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4240771/1/ Partially Kissed Hero]] is a fanfiction by Perfect Lionheart, the author of the controversial Naruto Fanfiction Chunin Exam Day. It is, like Chunin Exam Day, a highly reviewed (10,400+ (11,000+ and counting) and very long (92 (98 chapters and counting) fanfiction.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Dumbledore = CompleteMonster.
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* AuthorFilibuster: Every chapter has at least one of these. Some chapters are nothing BUT these.
* ArcFatigue: The author interrupted his own narrative to dive into a series of side-plots and digressions that had ''absolutely nothing to do with the central story'', including time travel, the space race, and now a fight with vampires. Several of the story's reviewers have used the phrase "gone off the rails", while other reviewers have said things along the lines of "lost sight of the original plot" about the author. With all this digression, the story is now ninety-plus chapters long, and '''''still''''' hasn't returned to the original plot, which was the overthrow of the Dark Lord Dumbledore.
* ArcFatigue: The author interrupted his own narrative to dive into a series of side-plots and digressions that had ''absolutely nothing to do with the central story'', including time travel, the space race, and now a fight with vampires. Several of the story's reviewers have used the phrase "gone off the rails", while other reviewers have said things along the lines of "lost sight of the original plot" about the author. With all this digression, the story is now ninety-plus chapters long, and '''''still''''' hasn't returned to the original plot, which was the overthrow of the Dark Lord Dumbledore.
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* AuthorFilibuster: Every chapter has at least one of these. Some chapters are nothing BUT ''but'' these.
* ArcFatigue: The author interrupted his own narrative to dive into a series of side-plots and digressions that had ''absolutely nothing to do with the central story'', including time travel, the space race, and now a fight with vampires. Several of the story's reviewers have used the phrase "gone off the rails", while other reviewers have said things along the lines of "lost sight of the original plot" about the author. With all this digression, the story is now ninety-plus chapters long, and'''''still''''' ''still'' hasn't returned to the original plot, which was the overthrow of the Dark Lord Dumbledore.
* ArcFatigue: The author interrupted his own narrative to dive into a series of side-plots and digressions that had ''absolutely nothing to do with the central story'', including time travel, the space race, and now a fight with vampires. Several of the story's reviewers have used the phrase "gone off the rails", while other reviewers have said things along the lines of "lost sight of the original plot" about the author. With all this digression, the story is now ninety-plus chapters long, and
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* CharacterDerailment: Everyone. No, I'm serious. Probably the only character who isn't changed all that much is Tonks, but only because she's shown up in the latest chapter.
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* CharacterDerailment: Everyone. No, I'm serious. Probably the only character who isn't changed all that much is Tonks, but only because she's shown up in the latest chapter.Everyone, due to Lionheart's absolute hatred of canon Harry Potter.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Chapter 9. [[spoiler: Snape tries Legilimency on Harry, only for Harry to rebound the effects on him, making him claw out his own eyes, breaking his mind, and finally making Snape's head explode, while he's screaming in complete agony the entire time. This is in front of a class full of third years.]]
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* Polyamory: Harry has four wives, in addition to the aforementioned sex slaves. [[AuthorAppeal Sadly, this trope is pretty common in these kinds of fanfics.]]
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* TenchiSolution: Harry has four wives, in addition to the aforementioned sex slaves. [[AuthorAppeal This trope is pretty common in these kinds of fanfics.]]
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* TenchiSolution: Harry has four wives, in addition to the aforementioned sex slaves. [[AuthorAppeal This trope is pretty common in these kinds of fanfics.]]
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Again, just noting the rather... controversial nature of the fic. It totally deserves props for the lack of grammarfail, though.
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* BetterThanItSounds: Reading this page might give one the idea that this is a defilement of canon on the level of MyImmortal. Regardless of its flaws, it's technically competent and fun to read.
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* BetterThanItSounds: Reading this page might give one A common claim by the idea that this is a defilement of canon on the level of MyImmortal. Regardless of its flaws, fic's fandom, and it's technically competent and fun indisputable that its plot develops in ways that could not have been predicted merely by reading the initial premise. [[LoveItOrHateIt As ever with this work, though, opinions on actual quality tend to read.vary wildly from reader to reader.]]
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: [[AvertedTrope Remarkably absent]], given both the size of the story and the fact that [[SturgeonsLaw it's a fanfic]].
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Chopping Your Mileage May Vary. The sheer polarity of opinions regarding this fic better fits Love It Or Hate It, and we already have that trope here.
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* YourMileageMayVary: Is it a HarryPotter fic InNameOnly, or is it an epic reimagining of canon if everything was dialed up to eleven?