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''Orderly'' can be found at [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31282358/chapters/77585990 AO3 here]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si-soft-au.1041178/ SpaceBattles here]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si.93983/ Sufficient Velocity here]] .
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''Orderly'' can be found at [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31282358/chapters/77585990 org/works/31282358/chapters/77333588 AO3 here]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si-soft-au.1041178/ SpaceBattles here]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si.93983/ Sufficient Velocity here]] .
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''Orderly'' can be found at [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31282358/chapters/77585990 AO3 here]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si.93983/ Sufficient Velocity here]].
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''Orderly'' can be found at [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31282358/chapters/77585990 AO3 here]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si-soft-au.1041178/ SpaceBattles here]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si.93983/ Sufficient Velocity here]].here]] .
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''Orderly'' can be found at [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31282358/chapters/77585990 AO3 here]].
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''Orderly'' can be found at [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31282358/chapters/77585990 AO3 here]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/orderly-worm-semi-si.93983/ Sufficient Velocity here]].
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* NoOSHACompliance: With the number of underlings Bakuda has killed by apparent negligence, her latest minion figures she either doesn't care about safety at all, or else is actively making the work environment more dangerous for her own amusement.
--> OSHA would have to send at least a dozen inspectors, in hazmat gear, to sort through all the violations.
--> OSHA would have to send at least a dozen inspectors, in hazmat gear, to sort through all the violations.
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* LargeHam: Even Bakuda's minions are thoroughly fed up with her monologuing, although no-one dares to tell her so, since she would, without question or hesitation, kill whoever tried it.
--> "Tremble before the ingenuity of my ingenious creation, and know that my genius transcends all that you pitiful wretches will ever know" was ''mild'' by her standards.
--> "Tremble before the ingenuity of my ingenious creation, and know that my genius transcends all that you pitiful wretches will ever know" was ''mild'' by her standards.
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* TrackingDevice: After being blindsided by a string of unexpected dangers and problems, Jacqueline specifically ''requests'' a PRT tracking bracelet. Danny is shocked, but Taylor was already doing something similar with her bugs.
--> The beads (and "bead") were in a rather attractive very dark purple and very dark blue swirl pattern, and the string was in a shade of black that complimented the beads rather well, but I was mostly interested in the safety it represented.
--> The beads (and "bead") were in a rather attractive very dark purple and very dark blue swirl pattern, and the string was in a shade of black that complimented the beads rather well, but I was mostly interested in the safety it represented.
