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Hiding this because... well, Ezekiel, aka Saturn, REALLY is like that.


** At least three of the members of the mysterious Five Elders who have shown to be well-intentioned at best, [[spoiler: here, they're secretly members of the Underworld system with the dreadlocks named Ezekiel in the story is a MadScientist who experiments on countess victims, the samurai named Byakuo in the story is a [[BloodKnight warmongering instigator of countless wars]], and the youngest looking member named David runs an illegal market [[SapientEatSapient that thrives on turning sapient races like Fishmen, Minks, etc into food to attempt to gain immortality]]]].

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** %%** At least three of the members of the mysterious Five Elders who have shown to be well-intentioned at best, [[spoiler: here, they're secretly members of the Underworld system with the dreadlocks named Ezekiel in the story is a MadScientist who experiments on countess victims, the samurai named Byakuo in the story is a [[BloodKnight warmongering instigator of countless wars]], and the youngest looking member named David runs an illegal market [[SapientEatSapient that thrives on turning sapient races like Fishmen, Minks, etc into food to attempt to gain immortality]]]].
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* EyeScream: Luffy loses his right eye to [[spoiler: Shanks]] in their first serious fight, forcing Luffy to wear an eyepatch from them on.

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* EyeScream: Luffy loses his right eye to [[spoiler: Shanks]] in their first serious fight, forcing Luffy to wear an eyepatch from them then on.
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Cloning Blues has been renamed to Clone Angst and redefined to only be about people angsting about being a clone. Removing "clones exist" usage.


[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14093242/1/One-Piece-Final-Saga-Alternative One Piece Final Saga Alternative]] is an AlternateUniverseFic for the finale of Manga/OnePiece that is currently ongoing and written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6693874/RoamHomeForGlory Roam Home For Glory]].

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14093242/1/One-Piece-Final-Saga-Alternative One Piece Final Saga Alternative]] is an AlternateUniverseFic for the finale of Manga/OnePiece ''Manga/OnePiece'' that is currently ongoing and written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6693874/RoamHomeForGlory Roam Home For Glory]].



** [[{{Necromancer}} Hel]] tells [[spoiler: Big Mom]] the AwfulTruth that the one person she admired [[spoiler: Mother Caramel not only did not care for her, but was only nice to her due to being a powerful asset to sell to the government as a potential Marine or assassin. And that she is also a [[CloningBlues a flawed attempt of replicating Ataxia, the holder of the "Ancient Weapon"/the Avatar of Gaia, and the daughter of the Pirate King of the Cosmic Sea, Chaos]] in spite of being the only one to make it past infancy]]. Given that Elbaf was going to execute her anyway, this revelation had no real point than [[ForTheEvulz driving the victim to despair for no real reason]]. [[EveryoneHasStandards Even the Straw Hats that have every reason to hate her, are thoroughly disgusted by this action]].

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** [[{{Necromancer}} Hel]] tells [[spoiler: Big Mom]] the AwfulTruth that the one person she admired [[spoiler: Mother Caramel not only did not care for her, but was only nice to her due to being a powerful asset to sell to the government as a potential Marine or assassin. And that she is also a [[CloningBlues a flawed attempt of replicating Ataxia, the holder of the "Ancient Weapon"/the Avatar of Gaia, and the daughter of the Pirate King of the Cosmic Sea, Chaos]] Chaos in spite of being the only one to make it past infancy]]. Given that Elbaf was going to execute her anyway, this revelation had no real point than [[ForTheEvulz driving the victim to despair for no real reason]]. [[EveryoneHasStandards Even the Straw Hats that have every reason to hate her, are thoroughly disgusted by this action]].
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Void Century Arc- Chapter 60 (Currently being written).

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Void Century Arc- Chapter 60 (Currently being written).
60-70.
It has currently ended with a cliffhanger at Chapter 70.



* ProperlyParanoid: As reprehensible his actions were to prevent this, [[spoiler: Shanks was right about the other Lines being dangerous and needing to be prevented from access, especially after his death, it's proven painfully correct as Mary Geoise is almost razed to the ground with ease by every of these outside Pirates and the criminal activity skyrockets due to more Pirates to add to the already mess-up world, making it even worse than before.''

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* ProperlyParanoid: As reprehensible his actions were to prevent this, [[spoiler: Shanks was right about the other Lines being dangerous and needing to be prevented from access, especially after his death, it's proven painfully correct as Mary Geoise is almost razed to the ground with ease by every of these outside Pirates and the criminal activity skyrockets due to more Pirates to add to the already mess-up world, making it even worse than before.'''']]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: The fanfic isn't shy about exploring the realistic implications of certain events.
** The previous destruction of several islands of the East Blue during Usopp and Leviathan's battle, the combination/separation of the islands into/out of an attempt to make a super-continent, and visible prophesied signs of a prophesied end to the established government seen across the world, leads to the populace understandably having a massive FreakOut as it leads to riots and attacks on the government from all over the Grand Line. And even with their advanced powers, the Government's forces only have so many people at a time to guard against these rioters on top of the pirates and criminals taking advantage of the anarchy.
** The Elders' plan to scapegoat the [[spoiler: fake]] Imu for all of the crimes committed in the last hundred years and assassinate him, the people are still upset with the deliberate withholding of information on the other Lines and the draconian lengths they did to achieve this secrecy, leading to a potential coupe as the last straw with the full support of the Revolutionaries at that time. It takes two miracles, one of which discredits the reputation of the Revolutionaries to even reduce the backlash.
** The reason why the Bery bounty system was dropped once the Straw Hats reach an unfathomable level of reputation that was due to their actions on Elbaf. The Word Government can increase the bounties more and more to escalate the threat, but eventually, it would be too much for the government to actually pay the bounties without going bankrupt due to lacking the funds to match the absurd amount needed to be paid, even with their vast resources at their disposal. They opt for a more practical reward of elevating one's status based on the alphabetical ranking with the implication that this wouldn't require a paid service.
** Luffy's decision to allow the other Lines to have access to the Grand Line, the Lines having dangerous pirates implied to be stronger than anything on the Grand Line with nothing capable of actually stopping them. It leads to the anarchy one would expect when Mary Geoise is almost razed to the ground by these Pirates and it takes the efforts of [[spoiler: secret members of one of these Lines' Pirate Kings' crew posing as]] the elites of the Vira Kingdom to event hold them off. And even then, it's stated that there's a significant rise of breakouts and criminal activity due to all sides being able to take advantage of the others' resources with Impel Down especially being unprepared to deal with imprisoning such individuals that exceed their skill level lead to several successful breakouts. Luffy's decision to allow the other Lines access leads to the [[CrapsackWorld rather dangerous world of One Piece]] [[FromBadToWorse to become infinitely more dangerous to live in]].

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* ProperlyParanoid: As reprehensible his actions were to prevent this, [[spoiler: Shanks was right about the other Lines being dangerous and needing to be prevented from access, especially after his death, it's proven painfully correct as Mary Geoise is almost razed to the ground with ease by every of these outside Pirates and the criminal activity skyrockets due to more Pirates to add to the already mess-up world, making it even worse than before.''



* ProperlyParanoid: As reprehensible his actions were to prevent this, [[spoiler: Shanks was right about the other Lines being dangerous especially after his death, it's proven correct as Mary Geoise is almost razed to the ground with ease and the criminal activity skyrockets due to more Pirates to add to the already mess-up world, making it even worse than before.''
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** At least three of the members of the mysterious Five Elders who have shown to be well-intentioned at best, [[spoiler: here, they're secretly members of the Underworld system with the dreadlocks named Ezekiel in the story is a MadScientist who experiments on countess victims, the samurai named Byakuo in the story is a [[BloodKnight warmongering instigator of countless wars]], and the youngest looking member named David runs an illegal market [[SapientEatSapient that thrives on turning sapient races like Fishmen, Minks, etc into food to attempt to gain immortality]].

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** At least three of the members of the mysterious Five Elders who have shown to be well-intentioned at best, [[spoiler: here, they're secretly members of the Underworld system with the dreadlocks named Ezekiel in the story is a MadScientist who experiments on countess victims, the samurai named Byakuo in the story is a [[BloodKnight warmongering instigator of countless wars]], and the youngest looking member named David runs an illegal market [[SapientEatSapient that thrives on turning sapient races like Fishmen, Minks, etc into food to attempt to gain immortality]].immortality]]]].

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