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* InsaneTrollLogic: Harry does this a few times in order to explain how he knows certain facts that he shouldn't know yet.
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* AdultChild: Sirius, so very much. Harry too, if you go by mental age.
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** Luna has seen ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' and read ''ThePictureOfDorianGray''.
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** Luna has seen ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' and read ''ThePictureOfDorianGray''.''Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray''.
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Not to be confused with the trope OhNoNotAgain
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* WorldOfSnark: Unsurprisingly, given the source material. Harry, of course, gets to do it the most, but most of the characters, even background ones, get a few snarky lines. A special mention should probably go to Neville, given how a few changes in his first scenes make a huge difference between his canon self and what he is like in the fanfic.
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* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler: When Pettigrew is caught, Luna pulls out a animagus-proof jar that her father had her carry around in case she ever ran across an illegal animagus she wanted to capture]].
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* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler: When Pettigrew is caught, Luna pulls out a an animagus-proof jar that her father had her carry around in case she ever ran across an illegal animagus she wanted to capture]].
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* RuleSixtyThree: Played with: Changing your gender might be one of the consequences of falling asleep during [[spoiler:Sirius']] classes.
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* {{Troperiffic}}: Tropes are invoked, discussed and parodied all the time. Several tropes are even mentioned by name - BlatantLies, CannonFodder, ThePowerOfLove, UnexplainedRecovery, {{UST}} and UnresolvedSexualTension (spelled both ways, in fact)...
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* {{Troperiffic}}: Tropes are invoked, discussed and parodied all the time. Several tropes are even mentioned by name - BlatantLies, CannonFodder, ThePowerOfLove, UnexplainedRecovery, UnexplainedRecovery (by [[RenamedTropes its old name]], "I Got Better"), {{UST}} and UnresolvedSexualTension (spelled both ways, in fact)...
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* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Well, Harry's not ''only'' interested in money, but he does deliberately project this persona, to the point where he manages to convince everyone that he's not the Heir of Slytherin, because if he was he would be profiting off it.
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-->'''Snape''':Is there a reason you felt the need to go running off on a suicidal rescue mission without informing a responsible adult, first?
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--> "Oh, well [[spoiler:he killed me and I had a nice chat with Dumbledore's soul who informed me that just because I was imagining things it didn't make it not real and then]] IGotBetter."
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--> "Oh, well [[spoiler:he killed me and I had a nice chat with Dumbledore's soul who informed me that just because I was imagining things it didn't make it not real and then]] IGotBetter.I got better."
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* {{Troperiffic}}: Tropes are invoked, discussed and parodied all the time. Several tropes are even mentioned by name - BlatantLies, CannonFodder, ThePowerOfLove, IGotBetter, UnexplainedRecovery, {{UST}} and UnresolvedSexualTension (spelled both ways, in fact)...
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--> '''Harry:''' Draco grinned. Harry was sure that as a result, [[{{WebOriginal/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries}} somewhere a puppy just died]].
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--> '''Harry:''' Draco grinned. Harry was sure that as a result, [[{{WebOriginal/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries}} [[WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries somewhere a puppy just died]].
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* FunWithAcronyms: Hermione's [[ZombieAdvocate house-elf rights organization]] becomes SHOE- '''S'''top '''H'''urting '''O'''ur '''E'''lves.
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* ADogAteMyHomework: One of the papers Lupin tries to grade was chewed up by the textbook Hagrid assigned.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: While Harry is clearly [[CloudCuckoolander mad as a hatter]] and [[ObfuscatingInsanity makes no]] [[BunnyEarsLawyer effort to hide it]], he's - usually - a nice guy, employing Dumbledore's tactics of destroying his foes through politeness and snark. Sometimes, though, he strays right into MagnificentBitch territory:
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: While Harry is clearly [[CloudCuckoolander mad much more of a CloudCuckoolander this time round, causing the general population to view him as a hatter]] and somewhere between [[ObfuscatingInsanity makes no]] [[BunnyEarsLawyer effort to hide it]], batshit insane]] and just full of it, but he's - usually - a nice guy, employing Dumbledore's tactics of destroying his foes through politeness and snark. Sometimes, though, he strays right into MagnificentBitch territory:
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** At one point, Draco smiles, and Harry narrates:
--> '''Harry:''' Draco grinned. Harry was sure that as a result, [[{{WebOriginal/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries}} somewhere a puppy just died]].
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* FridgeHorror: The timeline Harry left now has his firstborn growing up without a father and no one knowing what happened to him, including [[LoveInterest Ginny]].
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: While Harry is clearly [[CloudCuckoolander mad as a hatter]] and [[ObfuscatingInsanity makes no]] [[BunnyEarsLawyer effort to hide it]], he's - usually - a nice guy, employing Dumbledore's tactics of destroying his foes through politeness and snark. Sometimes, though, he strays right into MagnificentBitch territory:
--> '''Pansy:''' (After Rita Skeeter's Pentawizard Playoffs article) Stunningly pretty? GRANGER? What was she judged against - a chipmunk?
--> '''Harry:''' I wouldn't talk if I were you, Pansy. Seeing as I heard you came in third.
--> '''Pansy:''' (After Rita Skeeter's Pentawizard Playoffs article) Stunningly pretty? GRANGER? What was she judged against - a chipmunk?
--> '''Harry:''' I wouldn't talk if I were you, Pansy. Seeing as I heard you came in third.
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* LovePotion: Discussed. When [[spoiler: Sirius]] explains Voldemort's backstory and asks his class what the morale is, Lavender says, “Don't assume the guy your feeding love potions is in love with you and stop?", [[{{Squick}} squicking]] Seamus out.
* MagnificentBastard: Harry verges on this, and even strays into MagnificentBitch territory:
--> '''Pansy:''' Stunningly pretty? GRANGER? What was she judged against - a chipmunk?
--> '''Harry:''' I wouldn't talk if I were you, Pansy. Seeing as I heard you came in third.
* MagnificentBastard: Harry verges on this, and even strays into MagnificentBitch territory:
--> '''Pansy:''' Stunningly pretty? GRANGER? What was she judged against - a chipmunk?
--> '''Harry:''' I wouldn't talk if I were you, Pansy. Seeing as I heard you came in third.
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* LovePotion: Discussed. When [[spoiler: Sirius]] explains Voldemort's backstory and asks his class what the morale is, Lavender says, “Don't assume the guy your feeding love potions is in love with you and stop?", [[{{Squick}} squicking]] Seamus out. \n* MagnificentBastard: Harry verges on this, and even strays into MagnificentBitch territory:\n--> '''Pansy:''' Stunningly pretty? GRANGER? What was she judged against - a chipmunk?\n--> '''Harry:''' I wouldn't talk if I were you, Pansy. Seeing as I heard you came in third.
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* MagnificentBastard: Harry verges on this, and even strays into MagnificentBitch territory:
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* MugglesDoItBetter: An example appears to explain why a Slytherin is in the Muggle Studies. When asked why he was there, the Slytherin noted that his father learned the hard-way that Muggles weren't as harmless as he thought after being shot on a trip to Las Vegas, and wanted his son to learn as much about Muggles as possible.
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* MugglesDoItBetter: An example appears to explain why Theodore, a Slytherin Slytherin, is in the Muggle Studies. When asked why he was there, the Slytherin Theodore noted that his father learned the hard-way that Muggles weren't as harmless as he thought after being shot on a trip to Las Vegas, and wanted his son to learn as much about Muggles as possible.
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** Moody mentions The Dark Side, unintentionally referencing ''StarWars''.
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** Harry [[spoiler: and Sirius]] quote lines from ''PinkyAndTheBrain''.
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* BadLiar: When Ron wonders where Ginny got the extra money she was spending on school supplies (which she got from her cut of a [[BlatantLies less-than-accurate book by Lockhart]]), she freaks out and [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial demands to know if he's implying she stole it]]. Harry thinks to himself that the Weasley's were raised to be honest.
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* BadLiar: When Ron wonders where Ginny got the extra money she was spending on school supplies (which she got from her cut of a [[BlatantLies less-than-accurate book by Lockhart]]), she freaks out and [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial demands to know if he's implying she stole it]]. Harry thinks to himself that the Weasley's Weasleys were raised to be honest.
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* CuteClumsyGirl: Harry gets Tonks an anti-clumsiness ring to help with her Autor training, but figures she'll only wear it for work, suspecting that she likes to be klutzy.
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* CuteClumsyGirl: Harry gets Tonks an anti-clumsiness ring to help with her Autor Auror training, but figures she'll only wear it for work, suspecting that she likes to be klutzy.
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* DraggedIntoDrag: ''Sort'' of. Draco gets a photo of Harry in a dress ([[ItMakesSenseInContext technically a Boggart Neville made less frightening]]) and sells them to students as collectables. Harry negotiates for a cut of the profits and is okay with signing them.
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* DraggedIntoDrag: ''Sort'' of. Draco gets a photo of Harry in a dress ([[ItMakesSenseInContext technically a Boggart Neville made less frightening]]) and sells them to students as collectables.collectibles. Harry negotiates for a cut of the profits and is okay with signing them.
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-->'''Harry:''' Wait…Didn't Wait... Didn't Draco order you not to try to save my life or to try and drive me from the castle?
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** At one point, it's shown that even the Weasley's aren't completely immune to the Pureblood mentality when Ron mentions they never talk about their second cousin who's a Squib (and an accountant). Harry notes that it's to Ron's credit that he doesn't grasp ''why'' the cousin is an outcast and that he's invoking this trope unintentionally.
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** At one point, it's shown that even the Weasley's Weasleys aren't completely immune to the Pureblood mentality when Ron mentions they never talk about their second cousin who's a Squib (and an accountant). Harry notes that it's to Ron's credit that he doesn't grasp ''why'' the cousin is an outcast and that he's invoking this trope unintentionally.
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* GrammarNazi: Harry trademarked SPEW for his Grammar Nazi organization 'Stop People Abusing Words.' He chose to spell 'Abusing' with an E to [[strike: make it fit the acronym]] to be [[{{Irony}} ironic]].
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* GrammarNazi: Harry trademarked SPEW for his Grammar Nazi organization 'Stop People Abusing Words.' He chose to spell 'Abusing' with an E to [[strike: make it fit the acronym]] to be [[{{Irony}} ironic]].ironic]] (and make it [[FunWithAcronyms fit the acronym]]).
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--> "It gets better," Harry grinned. "Apparently I only [[spoiler: survived]] because of [[ThePowerOfLove the power of love]]."
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* PsychicPowers: Harry's main excuse for knowing what he does is that his scar is psychic. Note that ''he'' is not psychic- just his scar. Professor Trelawney calls him a Seer by proxy.
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* TheRival: Draco, but the tone Harry setup is far more friendly. Neither likes the others friends and they sometimes don't speak to each other, but are on rather good terms. It may be best described as a cross between this and VitriolicBestBuds.
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* TheRival: Draco, but the tone Harry setup in a way that is far more friendly. friendly than in canon. Neither likes the others other's friends and they sometimes don't speak to each other, but generally they are on rather good terms. It may be best described as a cross between this and VitriolicBestBuds.
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-->'''Harry:''' She let's lets you call her [[EmbarrassingFirstName Nymphadora]].
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** Luna has seen and read ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' and ''ThePictureOfDorianGray'', respectively.
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** Luna has seen and read ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' and ''ThePictureOfDorianGray'', respectively.read ''ThePictureOfDorianGray''.
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* StunnedSilence: The Death Eater's reaction when Harry throws off Voldemort's Imperio Curse and proceeds to mouth off at him.
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-->'''[[spoiler: Sirius:]]''' Top box. It was part of my reparation. Of course, the rest of it went to buying Harry a Firebolt but…
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* TricksterArchetype: The first thing Harry does when meeting the Weasley twins (again) was trick them into starting a rumor, stunning them and Ron. He later encourages others to try to lose the House Cup, calling it a "Suck-up" Cup. Then there's, well, everything else he does...
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* {{Troperiffic}}: Tropes are invoked, discussed and parodied all the time. Several tropes are even mentioned by name- BlatantLies, CannonFodder, ThePowerOfLove, IGotBetter, {{UST}} and UnresolvedSexualTension (spelled both ways, in fact)...
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* TricksterArchetype: The first thing Harry does when meeting the Weasley twins (again) was is trick them into starting a rumor, stunning them and Ron. He later encourages others to try to lose the House Cup, calling it a "Suck-up" Cup. Then there's, well, everything else he does...
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* WorstWhateverEver: [[spoiler:Sirius]] calls himself the worst guardian ever after [[spoiler:Harry dies again]]. Harry assures him he couldn't possibly be worse than the Dursley's were. [[DamnedByFaintPraise For some reason]], [[spoiler:Sirius]] doesn't find this comforting.
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* WorstWhateverEver: [[spoiler:Sirius]] calls himself the worst guardian ever after [[spoiler:Harry dies again]]. Harry assures him he couldn't possibly be worse than the Dursley's Dursleys were. [[DamnedByFaintPraise For some reason]], [[spoiler:Sirius]] doesn't find this comforting.
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** Also, this exchange:
-->'''Snape''':Is there a reason you felt the need to go running off on a suicidal rescue mission without informing a responsible adult, first?
-->'''Harry''': I did get a responsible adult. Professor Lockhart is a Hogwarts Professor and surely Professor Dumbledore wouldn't have hired him if he didn't have complete faith in him.
-->'''Snape''':Is there a reason you felt the need to go running off on a suicidal rescue mission without informing a responsible adult, first?
-->'''Harry''': I did get a responsible adult. Professor Lockhart is a Hogwarts Professor and surely Professor Dumbledore wouldn't have hired him if he didn't have complete faith in him.
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-->'''Snape''':Is there a reason you felt the need to go running off on a suicidal rescue mission without informing a responsible adult, first?
-->'''Harry''': I did get a responsible adult. Professor Lockhart is a Hogwarts Professor and surely Professor Dumbledore wouldn't have hired him if he didn't have complete faith in him.
-->'''Snape''':Is there a reason you felt the need to go running off on a suicidal rescue mission without informing a responsible adult, first?
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-->'''Harry''': I did get a responsible adult. Professor Lockhart is a Hogwarts Professor and surely Professor Dumbledore wouldn't have hired him if he didn't have complete faith in him.
-->'''Snape''':Is there a reason you felt the need to go running off on a suicidal rescue mission without informing a responsible adult, first?
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* ReplacementGoldfish: [[spoiler: After Mrs. Norris is killed by the basilisk (the only casualty in that incident), Harry and Mrs. Figg send Filch a kitten to Sirius's horror. She's seen working alongside him like Norris had and he seems to like her]].
