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* AntiquatedLinguistics: Ivan speaks like this as Origami Cyclone, as part of his samurai character.
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The story is complete on the Dreamwidth Anon Meme [[http://t-and-b-anon.dreamwidth.org/3254.html?thread=4964790#cmt4964790 here]], but it's being de-anoned with edits and snippets of new content on a three-day schedule on Fanfiction.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7963065/1/Objective here]]
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* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kaede's MegaManning abilites once again become essential in stopping the evil plot, as she uses Bellisair's powers to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal Objective.]]
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* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kaede's MegaManning abilites once again become essential in stopping the evil plot, as she uses Bellisair's powers power to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal Objective.]]
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* CatholicSchoolGirlsRule: Invoked by Karina, when she dresses up as Blue Rose in an (improvised) sexy version of her school uniform to persuade a thug to part with his bike.
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* CatholicSchoolGirlsRule: Invoked by Karina, when she dresses up as Blue Rose in an (improvised) sexy version of her school uniform to persuade a thug to part with his bike.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Just when [[spoiler: Kaede]] is poised to give Kotetsu [[spoiler: a different Objective]], Sumo Thunder decides to launch a car at them. [[spoiler: This causes her to replace Bellisair's power with Kotetsu's after he grabs her to move her out of the way.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Just when [[spoiler: Kaede]] is poised to give Kotetsu [[spoiler: a different Objective]], Sumo Thunder decides to launch a car at them. [[spoiler: This causes her Kotetsu to replace grab and rescue her, inadvertently replacing Bellisair's command power with Kotetsu's after he grabs her to move her out of the way.Hundred Power.]]
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* CatholicSchoolGirlsRule: Invoked by Karina, when she dresses up as Blue Rose in a sexy school girl outfit to persuade a thug to part with his bike.
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* CatholicSchoolGirlsRule: Invoked by Karina, when she dresses up as Blue Rose in a an (improvised) sexy version of her school girl outfit uniform to persuade a thug to part with his bike.
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* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kaede's MegaManning abilites once again become essential in stopping an evil plot, as she can use Bellisair's powers to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal Objective.]]
** [[spoiler: Bellisair himself may qualify, because the first step in fixing Kotetsu is figuring out what exactly Bellisair did to him.]]
** [[spoiler: Bellisair himself may qualify, because the first step in fixing Kotetsu is figuring out what exactly Bellisair did to him.]]
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* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kaede's MegaManning abilites once again become essential in stopping an the evil plot, as she can use uses Bellisair's powers to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal Objective.]]
** [[spoiler: Bellisair himself may qualify,because as the first step in fixing heroes search for him as a way to restore Kotetsu is figuring out what exactly Bellisair did to him.]] normal.]]
** [[spoiler: Bellisair himself may qualify,
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* WhereEverybodyKnowsYourFlame: Nathan uses his gay bar as the place the brief the other heroes. This is hilariously lampshaded by [[OnlySaneMan Antonio.]]
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* WhereEverybodyKnowsYourFlame: Nathan uses his gay bar as the place the brief the other heroes.heroes' initial HQ. This is hilariously lampshaded by [[OnlySaneMan Antonio.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: Ivan made a deal with Lunatic to keep two of Bellisair's goons safe.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Ivan made makes a deal with Lunatic to keep two of Bellisair's goons safe.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: How do you contain a man that has the power to increase his strength by 100 times? [[spoiler: Tie him up with his own superstrenght wires.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: How do you contain a man that has the power to increase his strength by 100 times? [[spoiler: Tie him up with his own superstrenght super-strength wires.]]
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* LethalChef: Kotetsu spends a whole evening preparing a poison lunch for Barnaby. Then he realizes that Barnaby is never going to eat his crappy cooking, so he just laces a ready made lunch with glass cleaner.
* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kanade's MegaManning abilites once again becomes essential in stopping an evil plot, as she can use Bellisair's powers to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal, Objective.]]
* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kanade's MegaManning abilites once again becomes essential in stopping an evil plot, as she can use Bellisair's powers to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal, Objective.]]
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* LethalChef: Kotetsu spends a whole evening preparing a poison poisoned lunch for Barnaby. Then he realizes that Barnaby is never going to eat his crappy cooking, so he just laces a ready made lunch with glass cleaner.
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* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler:Kanade's Kaede's MegaManning abilites once again becomes become essential in stopping an evil plot, as she can use Bellisair's powers to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal, lethal Objective.]]
** [[spoiler: Bellisair himself may qualify, because the first step in fixing Kotetsu is figuring out what exactly Bellisair did to him.]]
* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler:
** [[spoiler: Bellisair himself may qualify, because the first step in fixing Kotetsu is figuring out what exactly Bellisair did to him.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Just when [[spoiler: Kanade]] is poised to give Kotetsu [[spoiler: a different Objective]], Sumo Thunder decides to launch a car at them. [[spoiler: This causes her to replace Bellisair's power with Kotetsu's after he grabs her to move her out of the way.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Just when [[spoiler: Kanade]] Kaede]] is poised to give Kotetsu [[spoiler: a different Objective]], Sumo Thunder decides to launch a car at them. [[spoiler: This causes her to replace Bellisair's power with Kotetsu's after he grabs her to move her out of the way.]]
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* CreepyCrossdresser: Nathan pretends to be one in order to get information on Bellisair's whereabouts from one of this thugs.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Brainwashed Kotetsu, probably because he's too focused on killing Barnaby than watching the road.
* EvilDetectingDog: Upon meeting him, John immediately decides that the brainwashed Kotetsu is up to no good and [[CrowningMomentOfFunny proceeds to chase him out of Keith's apartment and down the street.]]
* EvilDetectingDog: Upon meeting him, John immediately decides that the brainwashed Kotetsu is up to no good and [[CrowningMomentOfFunny proceeds to chase him out of Keith's apartment and down the street.]]
* LethalChef: Kotetsu spends a whole evening preparing a poison lunch for Barnaby. Then he realizes that Barnaby is never going to eat his crappy cooking, so he just laces a ready made lunch with glass cleaner.
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* OnlySaneMan: Agnes for the First League heroes, and Chopman for the Second League.
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* OnlySaneMan: Antonio and Agnes for the First League heroes, and Chopman for the Second League. League.
* PlayingDrunk: Nathan does this in order to get Barnaby to escort him home and stay the night. Barnaby only agrees once Nathan gives him a room that locks from the inside.
* PlayingDrunk: Nathan does this in order to get Barnaby to escort him home and stay the night. Barnaby only agrees once Nathan gives him a room that locks from the inside.
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* TelepathicSprinklers: Played straight when the heroes need to flush Kotetsu out from Barnaby's apartment. Unlike most examples it's justified, since Karina is controlling them with her NEXT powers.
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* TelepathicSprinklers: Played straight when the heroes need to flush Kotetsu out from Barnaby's apartment. Unlike most examples it's justified, since Karina is controlling them with her NEXT powers.powers.
* WhereEverybodyKnowsYourFlame: Nathan uses his gay bar as the place the brief the other heroes. This is hilariously lampshaded by [[OnlySaneMan Antonio.]]
* WhereEverybodyKnowsYourFlame: Nathan uses his gay bar as the place the brief the other heroes. This is hilariously lampshaded by [[OnlySaneMan Antonio.]]
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* BerserkButton: As poor Sumo Thunder finds out the hard way, Nathan does ''not'' take well to his beloved sports car being used in a CarFu attempt.
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* FakeBoobs: Due to normally lacking the bust to successfully pull off Blue Rose, Karina has to pad her bra with Pao Lin's socks when duty calls. [[ShipTease Her returning them afterwards causes Pao Lin to get a bit flustered.]]
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* InterruptedIntimacy: Happens to a poor couple when Karina sets off the sprinklers in Barnaby's apartment building, causing them to rush out in [[ModestyTowel nothing but towels.]]
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* LivingMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kanade's MegaManning abilites once again becomes essential in stopping an evil plot, as she can use Bellisair's powers to give Kotetsu a different, less lethal, Objective.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Just when [[spoiler: Kanade]] is poised to give Kotetsu [[spoiler: a different Objective]], Sumo Thunder decides to launch a car at them. [[spoiler: This causes her to replace Bellisair's power with Kotetsu's after he grabs her to move her out of the way.]]
* OnlySaneMan: Agnes for the First League heroes, and Chopman for the Second League.
* OnlySaneMan: Agnes for the First League heroes, and Chopman for the Second League.
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* CatholicSchoolGirlsRule: Invoked by Karina, when she dresses up as Blue Rose in a sexy school girl outfit to persuade a thug to part with his bike.
* DisguisedInDrag: Agnes dolls Barnaby up in an attempt to fool Kotetsu.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: How do you contain a man that has the power to increase his strength by 100 times? [[spoiler: Tie him up with his own superstrenght wires.]]
* LoveConfession: Karina tries this on Barnaby to distract him, but it falls flat once he calls her out on her EveryoneCanSeeIt crush on Kotetsu. This leads her to try the FakeoutMakeout tactic instead.
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* SunglassesAtNight: Justified. Bellisair has to make eyecontact with his victims, so it makes sense to obscure your eyes if you want to talk to him.
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* SunglassesAtNight: Justified. Bellisair has to make eyecontact with his victims, so it makes sense to obscure your eyes if you want to talk to him.him.
* TelepathicSprinklers: Played straight when the heroes need to flush Kotetsu out from Barnaby's apartment. Unlike most examples it's justified, since Karina is controlling them with her NEXT powers.
* TelepathicSprinklers: Played straight when the heroes need to flush Kotetsu out from Barnaby's apartment. Unlike most examples it's justified, since Karina is controlling them with her NEXT powers.
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* SternChase: The fic revolves around Kotetsu finding Barnaby so he can kill hm.
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* SternChase: The fic revolves around Kotetsu finding Barnaby so he can kill hm.him.
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* SternChase: The fic revolves around Kotetsu finding Barnaby so he can kill hm.hm.
* SunglassesAtNight: Justified. Bellisair has to make eyecontact with his victims, so it makes sense to obscure your eyes if you want to talk to him.
* SunglassesAtNight: Justified. Bellisair has to make eyecontact with his victims, so it makes sense to obscure your eyes if you want to talk to him.
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* MagicAIsMagicA: Bellisair can only use his power on someone once and all objectives must be quanifiable.
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* MagicAIsMagicA: Bellisair can only use his power on someone once and all objectives must be quanifiable.give Objectives with a clear end point. For instance, he can't give the order "obey me."
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* MagicAIsMagicA: Bellisair can only use his power on someone once and all objectives must be quanifiable.
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* AxeCrazy: What happens to Bellisair's victims if they don't complete their objective within one week of getting it.
* BigBadWannaBe: WordOfGod says that Bellisair thought he was in the same league as Maverick
* BigBadWannaBe: WordOfGod says that Bellisair thought he was in the same league as Maverick
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* AxeCrazy: What happens to Bellisair's victims if they don't complete their objective Objective within one week of getting it.
* BigBadWannaBe: WordOfGod says that Bellisairthought he was thinks he's in the same league as Maverick
* BigBadWannaBe: WordOfGod says that Bellisair
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** He also asks Lunatic to hold out on killing Bellisair until the heroes have fixed Tiger. [[spoiler: He only sort of does]].
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** He also asks Lunatic to hold out on killing Bellisair delay [[spoiler:killing Bellisair]] until the heroes have fixed Tiger. [[spoiler: He only sort of does]].does]].
* FakeoutMakeout: One of the techniques used to distract Barnaby
* FakeoutMakeout: One of the techniques used to distract Barnaby
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* MadnessMantra: Scenes from Kotetsu’s POV contain repetitions of the phrase ‘Kill Bunny,’ which gradually grows louder and more insistent, occasionally mingling with Kotetsu’s own thoughts.
* RaceAgainstTheClock: Victims only have a week to complete an objective.
* RaceAgainstTheClock: Victims only have a week to complete an objective.
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* MadnessMantra: Scenes from Kotetsu’s POV contain repetitions of the phrase ‘Kill Bunny,’ which gradually grows louder and more insistent, occasionally mingling with Kotetsu’s own thoughts.
* RaceAgainstTheClock: Victims only have a week to complete anobjective.Objective before losing their personality completely.
* RaceAgainstTheClock: Victims only have a week to complete an
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* MadnessMantra: Scenes from Kotetsu’s POV contain repetitions of the phrase ‘Kill Bunny,’ which gradually grows louder and more insistent, occasionally mingling with Kotetsu’s own thoughts.
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* [[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture: Lunatic on Bellisair]]
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** He also asks Lunatic to hold out on killing Bellisair until the heroes have fixed Tiger. [[spoiler: He only sort of does]].
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The other heroes quickly discover Bellisair's treachery and now have three goals: Stop Kotetsu from killing his partner, stop Barnaby from unknowingly wandering into a death trap, and finding the man responsible so they have a chance at changing Kotetsu back.
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The other heroes quickly discover Bellisair's treachery and now have three goals: Stop Kotetsu from killing his partner, stop Barnaby from unknowingly wandering into a death trap, and finding find the man responsible so they have a chance at changing Kotetsu back.
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The other heroes quickly discover Bellisair's treachery and now have three goals: Stop Kotetsu from killing his partner, stop Barnaby from unknowingly wandering into a death trap, and finding the man responsible so they have a chance at changing Kotetsu back.
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* BigBadWannaBe: WordOfGod says that Bellisair thought he was in the same league as Maverick
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: What Bellisair does to his victims.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: What Bellisair does to his victims.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop:BarnabyLockedOutOfTheLoop: Barnaby
* RaceAgainstTheClock: Victims only have a week to complete an objective.
* SlaveMooks: Bellisair turns people into these.
* RaceAgainstTheClock: Victims only have a week to complete an objective.
* SlaveMooks: Bellisair turns people into these.
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* SternChace: The fic revolves around Kotetsu finding Barnaby so he can kill hm.
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* SternChace: SternChase: The fic revolves around Kotetsu finding Barnaby so he can kill hm.
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''Objective'' is the name of a TigerAndBunny fic wherein Kotetsu finds himself compelled by crime boss, Luthor Bellisair, to kill Barnaby. How did Bellisair manage that? Well you see, Bellisair is a [=NEXT=] with the ability to get people to do his bidding by looking his victim in the eye and saying "objective [perform a task]."
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''Objective'' is the name of a TigerAndBunny fic wherein Kotetsu finds himself compelled by crime boss, Luthor Bellisair, to kill Barnaby. How did Bellisair manage that? Well you see, Bellisair is a [=NEXT=] with the ability to get people to do his bidding by looking his victim in the eye and saying "objective "Objective: [perform a task]."
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*AxeCrazy: What happens to Bellisair's victims if they don't complete their objective within one week of getting it.
*CompellingVoice: Bellisair has one of sorts.
*DealWithTheDevil: Ivan made a deal with Lunatic to keep two of Bellisair's goons safe.
*ItOnlyWorksOnce: Bellisair can only give someone one Objective.
*LockedOutOfTheLoop:Barnaby
*SternChace: The fic revolves around Kotetsu finding Barnaby so he can kill hm.
*CompellingVoice: Bellisair has one of sorts.
*DealWithTheDevil: Ivan made a deal with Lunatic to keep two of Bellisair's goons safe.
*ItOnlyWorksOnce: Bellisair can only give someone one Objective.
*LockedOutOfTheLoop:Barnaby
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''Objective'' is the name of a Tiger and Bunny fic wherein Kotetsu finds himself compelled by crime boss, Luthor Bellisair, to kill Barnaby. How did Bellisair manage that? Well you see, Bellisair is a [[=NEXT=]] with the ability to get people to do his bidding by looking his victim in the eye and saying "objective [perform a task]."
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''Objective'' is the name of a Tiger and Bunny TigerAndBunny fic wherein Kotetsu finds himself compelled by crime boss, Luthor Bellisair, to kill Barnaby. How did Bellisair manage that? Well you see, Bellisair is a [[=NEXT=]] [=NEXT=] with the ability to get people to do his bidding by looking his victim in the eye and saying "objective [perform a task].""
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''Objective'' is the name of a Tiger and Bunny fic wherein Kotetsu finds himself compelled by crime boss, Luthor Bellisair, to kill Barnaby. How did Bellisair manage that? Well you see, Bellisair is a [[=NEXT=]] with the ability to get people to do his bidding by looking his victim in the eye and saying "objective [perform a task]."
