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* JoustingLance: Unit-05's primary weapon is the [[WeaponOfChoice Lance of Cassius]]. As of Chapter 036, the Lance of Cassius is bigger, longer, and features a pair of built-in guns.
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* JoustingLance: Unit-05's primary weapon is the [[WeaponOfChoice Lance of Cassius]].Cassius. As of Chapter 036, the Lance of Cassius is bigger, longer, and features a pair of built-in guns.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: The fic's resident BattleCouple, Asuka and Mari.
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The premise is simple, combining the main story-lines of the original series, the [[Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion recent movie trilogy]], the manga adaptation, and the author's own ideas. (Not) the End pushes back the appearance of the Angels by two years, aging the characters up and making them a little different from canon. Naturally, things get different from there. Where does it start?
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The premise is simple, combining story combines the main story-lines of the original series, the [[Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion recent movie trilogy]], ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'', the manga adaptation, and the author's own ideas. (Not) the End pushes back the appearance of the Angels by two years, aging the characters up and making them a little different from canon. Naturally, things get different from there. Where does it start?
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* ActionGirl: As with the source material, pretty much every female pilot. Misato also counts as this, due to fending off Iruel with a sub machine gun to buy time.
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* BloodierAndGorier: Fight scenes between Evas and Angels usually end with both sides suffering multiple wounds of varying degrees of melting/messiness/burntness, stained with their colourful AlienBlood.
** Most recently, the two best contenders for this are the second Israfel fight, and Sandalphon vs. [[spoiler:Beast Mode Unit-02.]]
** Most recently, the two best contenders for this are the second Israfel fight, and Sandalphon vs. [[spoiler:Beast Mode Unit-02.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: BloodierAndGorier:
** Fight scenes between Evas and Angels usually end with both sides suffering multiple wounds of varying degrees of melting/messiness/burntness, stained with their colourful AlienBlood.
**Most recently, the two best contenders for this are the The second Israfel fight, and Sandalphon vs. [[spoiler:Beast Mode Unit-02.]]
** Fight scenes between Evas and Angels usually end with both sides suffering multiple wounds of varying degrees of melting/messiness/burntness, stained with their colourful AlienBlood.
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* CurbStompBattle: The first fight with Israfel, even more than canon. It ended with Nerv having to drop several N2 Mines before they could rescue the Evas and pilots. [[spoiler:Nerv simply never had the experience to deal with multiple opponents at once, and the fact that everyone froze up after Israfel revealed its abilities to replicate and regenerate certainly didn't help them.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompBattle:
** The first fight with Israfel, even more than canon. It ended with Nerv having to drop several N2 Mines before they could rescue the Evas and pilots. [[spoiler:Nerv simply never had the experience to deal with multiple opponents at once, and the fact that everyone froze up after Israfel revealed its abilities to replicate and regenerate certainly didn't help them.]]
** The first fight with Israfel, even more than canon. It ended with Nerv having to drop several N2 Mines before they could rescue the Evas and pilots. [[spoiler:Nerv simply never had the experience to deal with multiple opponents at once, and the fact that everyone froze up after Israfel revealed its abilities to replicate and regenerate certainly didn't help them.]]
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* JoustingLance: Unit-05's primary weapon is the [[WeaponOfChoice Lance of Cassius]].
** As of Chapter 036, the Lance of Cassius is bigger, longer, and features a pair of built-in guns.
* LovableAlphaBitch: Asuka's portrayed in a more sympathetic light initially, though she still has her aggressive attitude and AttentionWhore parts present.
** As of Chapter 036, the Lance of Cassius is bigger, longer, and features a pair of built-in guns.
* LovableAlphaBitch: Asuka's portrayed in a more sympathetic light initially, though she still has her aggressive attitude and AttentionWhore parts present.
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* JoustingLance: Unit-05's primary weapon is the [[WeaponOfChoice Lance of Cassius]].
**Cassius]]. As of Chapter 036, the Lance of Cassius is bigger, longer, and features a pair of built-in guns.
* LovableAlphaBitch: Asuka's portrayed in a more sympathetic light initially, though she still has her aggressiveattitude and AttentionWhore parts present.attitude.
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* MindRape: [[spoiler:Sandalphon]] essentially does this, [[spoiler:trapping Mari inside her own mind, convincing her that her life is useless, and eventually straight up ''trying to metaphorically choke her (soul) to death''.]] The end of Chapter 030 suggests just how bad the damage is.
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* MindRape: [[spoiler:Sandalphon]] essentially does this, [[spoiler:trapping [[spoiler:Sandalphon traps Mari inside her own mind, convincing her that her life is useless, and eventually straight up ''trying to metaphorically choke her (soul) to death''.]] The end of Chapter 030 suggests just how bad the damage is.
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** Beast Mode. Once [[spoiler:Mari activates it properly, she mortally wounds Sandalphon in moments,]] in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
*** [[spoiler:Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and pushes her from BloodKnight to AxCrazy.]]
*** [[spoiler:Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and pushes her from BloodKnight to AxCrazy.]]
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** Beast Mode. Once [[spoiler:Mari activates it properly, she mortally wounds Sandalphon in moments,]] in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
***minutes]]. [[spoiler:Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and pushes her from BloodKnight to AxCrazy.]]
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* ActionGirl: As with the source material, pretty much every female pilot.
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* BattleCouple: Asuka and Mari-- not just fellow soldiers, but romantically involved as well.
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* LongDistanceRelationship: [[spoiler:Asuka and Mari]], up until Chapter 015.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: [[spoiler:Mari and Asuka]], when the latter is introduced. Hinted at throughout the early chapters of the story.
* RousingSpeech: By ''Rei'' of all people, just before Operation Yashima.
* ScreamingWarrior: Mari, Shinji, and Asuka [[spoiler:the latter upon temporarily reaching 100% synchronization with Unit-02]].
* SuperMode: Two examples have been shown so far:
* RousingSpeech: By ''Rei'' of all people, just before Operation Yashima.
* ScreamingWarrior: Mari, Shinji, and Asuka [[spoiler:the latter upon temporarily reaching 100% synchronization with Unit-02]].
* SuperMode: Two examples have been shown so far:
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: [[spoiler:Mari and Asuka]], when the latter is introduced. Hinted at throughout the early chapters of the story.
* RousingSpeech: By ''Rei'' of all people, just before Operation Yashima.
* ScreamingWarrior: Mari, Shinji, andThe fic's resident BattleCouple, Asuka [[spoiler:the latter upon temporarily reaching 100% synchronization with Unit-02]].
and Mari.
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* RousingSpeech: By ''Rei'' of all people, just before Operation Yashima.
* ScreamingWarrior: Mari, Shinji, and
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* UseYourHead: Shinji [[spoiler:uses Unit-00's reinforced helmet to smash Shamshel's Core.]]
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** Technically, the Evangelions count as this themselves, due to [[spoiler:containing the souls of the pilots' mothers. Kyoko/Unit-02 in particular fits this, fighting Sandalphon directly in Chapter 030 to buy time for Mari.]]
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** Technically, the The Evangelions themselves count as this themselves, this, due to [[spoiler:containing the souls of the pilots' mothers. Kyoko/Unit-02 in particular fits this, fighting Sandalphon directly in Chapter 030 to buy time for Mari.]]
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** Unit-00's fists can use [[RocketPoweredWeapon elbow rockets]] to enhance their force. Additionally, she has a set of cranial Gatling guns.
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* BarrierBustingBlow: Unit-05's lance can punch through AT Fields without even slowing down.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: [[spoiler:Asuka]] punches Kaworu in the face for insinuating that she's frustrated with the fact that [[spoiler:her girlfriend is in another country]], ''and'' [[spoiler:challenges him to Eva vs. Eva simulated combat]].
* HollywoodHealing: Averted. Even twelve chapters later, Mari still has the scarring on her arms from her fight with Sachiel.
* HollywoodHealing: Averted. Even twelve chapters later, Mari still has the scarring on her arms from her fight with Sachiel.
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* HollywoodHealing: Averted. Even twelve chapters later, Mari still has the scarring on her arms from her fight with Sachiel.
* HumanResources: Iruel uses the Simulation Evas to form itself a composite body. Later, it [[spoiler:adds in the corpses of the failed Eva prototypes to make itself even larger.]]
** As of Chapter 036, the Lance of Cassius is bigger, longer, and features a pair of built-in guns.
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* MeatMoss: [[spoiler:Iruel, Terror of God.]]
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* MeatMoss: [[spoiler:Iruel, Iruel, Terror of God.]]
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Beast Mode]]. Once [[spoiler:Mari]] activates it properly, she mortally wounds [[spoiler:Sandalphon]] in moments, in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and pushes her from BloodKnight to AxCrazy.]]
* ThatCameOutWrong: Mari trying to get Shinji to [[spoiler:put on his plugsuit.]]
** [[spoiler:Of course, because it's ''Mari'', it's entirely likely that this was intentional.]]
* TheXOfY: Every. Single. Chapter. Title. WordOfGod says the author regrets this decision, but he's going through with it anyways.
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and pushes her from BloodKnight to AxCrazy.]]
* ThatCameOutWrong: Mari trying to get Shinji to [[spoiler:put on his plugsuit.]]
** [[spoiler:Of course, because it's ''Mari'', it's entirely likely that this was intentional.]]
* TheXOfY: Every. Single. Chapter. Title. WordOfGod says the author regrets this decision, but he's going through with it anyways.
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Beast Mode]]. Two examples have been shown so far:
** Beast Mode. Once[[spoiler:Mari]] [[spoiler:Mari activates it properly, she mortally wounds [[spoiler:Sandalphon]] Sandalphon in moments, moments,]] in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
** Also *** [[spoiler:Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and pushes her from BloodKnight to AxCrazy.]]
* ThatCameOutWrong: Mari trying ** [[spoiler:Perfect Synch. Used by Asuka against the Seventh and Third/Eleventh Angels, it pushes the pilot's synchronisation to get Shinji to [[spoiler:put on his plugsuit.]]
** [[spoiler:Of course, because100%, in what is essentially a controlled Berserker state. The only downside is that it's ''Mari'', it's entirely likely that this was intentional.]]
* TheXOfY: Every. Single. Chapter. Title. WordOfGod says the author regrets this decision, but he's going through with it anyways.[[HeroicRROD very tiring]] on Asuka.]]
** Beast Mode. Once
** [[spoiler:Of course, because
* TheXOfY: Every. Single. Chapter. Title. WordOfGod says the author regrets this decision, but he's going through with it anyways.
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Beast Mode]]. Once [[spoiler:Mari]] activates it properly, she mortally wounds [spoiler:Sandalphon]] in moments, in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Beast Mode]]. Once [[spoiler:Mari]] activates it properly, she mortally wounds [spoiler:Sandalphon]] [[spoiler:Sandalphon]] in moments, in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
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** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and her BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.]]
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** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and pushes her from BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.to AxCrazy.]]
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* LimitBreak: [[spoiler:Beast Mode]], as shown by Chapter 030. Once [[spoiler:Mari]] activates it properly, she mortally wounds [spoiler:Sandalphon]] in moments, in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and her BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.]]
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and her BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.]]
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Beast Mode]]. Once [[spoiler:Mari]] activates it properly, she mortally wounds [spoiler:Sandalphon]] in moments, in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and her BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.]]
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and her BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.]]
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* LimitBreak: [[spoiler:Beast Mode]], as shown by Chapter 030. Once [[spoiler:Mari]] activates it properly, she mortally wounds [spoiler:Sandalphon]] in moments, in spite the fact that [[spoiler:she was being [[MindRape MindRaped]] for the last ten or so minutes]].
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and her BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.]]
** Also a DeliberateInjuryGambit on her part, due to the side effects. Namely, [[spoiler:the feedback skyrockets-- meaning Mari can feel ''every'' injury Unit-02 suffers/has suffered-- the Eva's AT Field begins to actually [[HeroicRROD damage her ego barrier]], and her BloodKnight tendencies are shoved straight into UnstoppableRage territory.]]
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* AnatomyArsenal: Every single Evangelion has some sort of built-in weapon.
** Unit-00 has both a RocketPunch, and a set of cranial Gatling guns.
** Unit-01 has an ArmCannon, as seen in the fight against Israfel, and [[spoiler:the Berserker Incident flashback]].
** Unit-02 has AbsurdlySharpClaws on its hands and feet, as well as a set of missiles.
** Unit-00 has both a RocketPunch, and a set of cranial Gatling guns.
** Unit-01 has an ArmCannon, as seen in the fight against Israfel, and [[spoiler:the Berserker Incident flashback]].
** Unit-02 has AbsurdlySharpClaws on its hands and feet, as well as a set of missiles.
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* AnatomyArsenal: Every single Evangelion has some sort of built-in weapon.
weapon, most of which are a ShoutOut to some other mecha franchise.
**Unit-00 Unit-00's fists can use [[RocketPoweredWeapon elbow rockets]] to enhance their force. Additionally, she has both a RocketPunch, and a set of cranial Gatling guns.
** Unit-01 hasan ArmCannon, two [[ArmCannon I-22 Plasmacasters]], as seen in the fight against Israfel, Israfel and [[spoiler:the Berserker Incident flashback]].
** Unit-02 hasAbsurdlySharpClaws so-called [[AbsurdlySharpClaws "Dragon Fangs"]] on its her hands and feet, as well as a [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Stingblade]] on each arm.
** Unit-05 has her Shock Anchors, a set ofmissiles.wire-mounted cables that discharge electricity into the target.
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** Technically, the Evangelions count as this themselves, due to [[spoiler:containing the souls of the pilots' mothers. Kyoko/Unit-02 in particular fits this, fighting Sandalphon directly in Chapter 030 to buy time for Mari.]]
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** Unit-01 has an ArmCannon, as seen in [[spoiler:the Berserker Incident flashback]].
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** Unit-01 has an ArmCannon, as seen in the fight against Israfel, and [[spoiler:the Berserker Incident flashback]].
** Most recently, the two best contenders for this are the second Israfel fight, and Sandalphon vs. [[spoiler:Beast Mode Unit-02.]]
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* BolivianArmyEnding: Chapter 016 ends with [[spoiler:Asuka stuck in Unit-02, sinking to the bottom of the Pacific Ocean.]]
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** Chapter 016 ends with[[spoiler:Asuka stuck Asuka [[spoiler:stuck in Unit-02, sinking to the bottom of the Pacific Ocean.]]
** Chapter 029 ends when Mari [[spoiler:is eaten alive by Sandalphon. To make things worse, because of this, the UN Forces are going to ''nuke'' the place.]]
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* JoustingLance: Unit-05's primary weapon, used against the Third and [[spoiler:Seventh]] Angel to great effect.
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* MindRape: [[spoiler:Sandalphon]] essentially does this, [[spoiler:trapping Mari inside her own mind, convincing her that her life is useless, and eventually straight up ''trying to metaphorically choke her (soul) to death''.]] The end of Chapter 030 suggests just how bad the damage is.
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* CurbStompBattle: The first fight with Israfel, even more than canon. It ended with Nerv having to drop several N2 Mines before they could rescue the Evas and pilots. [[spoiler:Nerv simply never had the experience to deal with multiple opponents at once, and the fact that everyone froze up after Israfel revealed its abilities to replicate and regenerate certainly didn't help them.]]
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* ActionGirl: As with the source material, pretty much every female pilot.
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* BattleCouple: Asuka and Mari-- not just fellow soldiers, but romantically involved as well.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Unit-00's skull, and Unit-05's anchoring drills-- against Shamshel and Sachiel, respectively.
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* BrokenAce: As in canon, Asuka. The only difference here is that [[spoiler:she breaks even more after learning she's responsible for the death of all 25,000 people who couldn't escape the Pacific Fleet before the Seventh Angel destroyed it]].
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* HollywoodHealin: Averted. Even twelve chapters later, Mari still has the scarring on her arms from her fight with Sachiel.
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* ThEReasonYouSuckSpeech: Delivered twice in Chapter 021, first by [[spoiler:Shinji to Gendo]], and then by [[spoiler:Asuka to ''both'' of them.]]
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* ThEReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Delivered twice in Chapter 021, first by [[spoiler:Shinji to Gendo]], and then by [[spoiler:Asuka to ''both'' of them.]]
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* ThEReasonYouSuckSpeech: Delivered twice in Chapter 021, first by [[spoiler:Shinji to Gendo]], and then by [[spoiler:Asuka to ''both'' of them.]]
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* MeatMoss: [[spoiler:Iruel, Terror of God.]]
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(Not) the End can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11624461/1/NGE-Not-the-End FF.net]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/neon-genesis-evangelion-not-the-end.366457/ Spacebattles forum]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/neon-genesis-evangelion-not-the-end-nge.30080/ Sufficient Velocity forum]].
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''NGE:(Not) the End'' is an alternate universe ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fanfic by Fyrstorm.
The premise is simple, combining the main story-lines of the original series, the [[Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion recent movie trilogy]], the manga adaptation, and the author's own ideas. (Not) the End pushes back the appearance of the Angels by two years, aging the characters up and making them a little different from canon. Naturally, things get different from there. Where does it start?
(Not) the End can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11624461/1/NGE-Not-the-End FF.net]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/neon-genesis-evangelion-not-the-end.366457/ Spacebattles forum]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/neon-genesis-evangelion-not-the-end-nge.30080/ Sufficient Velocity forum]].
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!! ''(Not) the End'' contains examples of:
*AnatomyArsenal: Every single Evangelion has some sort of built-in weapon.
**Unit-00 has both a RocketPunch, and a set of cranial Gatling guns.
**Unit-01 has an ArmCannon, as seen in [[spoiler:the Berserker Incident flashback]].
**Unit-02 has AbsurdlySharpClaws on its hands and feet, as well as a set of missiles.
*BarrierBustingBlow: Unit-05's lance can punch through AT Fields without even slowing down.
*BloodierAndGorier: Fight scenes between Evas and Angels usually end with both sides suffering multiple wounds of varying degrees of melting/messiness/burntness, stained with their colourful AlienBlood.
*BloodKnight: Mari, just as much as she is in canon.
*FelonyMisdemeanor: [[spoiler:Asuka]] punches Kaworu in the face for insinuating that she's frustrated with the fact that [[spoiler:her girlfriend is in another country]], ''and'' [[spoiler:challenges him to Eva vs. Eva simulated combat]].
*FetishFuel: Subverted with Mari. WordOfGod says that Mari's going to have significant character development throughout the story ''particularly'' to rectify this from canon.
*HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Asuka breaks down when she's trapped at the bottom of the ocean, unable to escape.]]
*HeyYouHaymaker: Gloriously abused by Mari and Shinji against Sachiel.
*JoustingLance: Unit-05's primary weapon, used against the Third and [[spoiler:Seventh]] Angel to great effect.
*LongDistanceRelationship: [[spoiler:Asuka and Mari]], up until Chapter 015.
*LovableAlphaBitch: Asuka's portrayed in a more sympathetic light initially, though she still has her aggressive attitude and AttentionWhore parts present.
*RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: [[spoiler:Mari and Asuka]], when the latter is introduced. Hinted at throughout the early chapters of the story.
*RousingSpeech: By ''Rei'' of all people, just before Operation Yashima.
*ScreamingWarrior: Mari, Shinji, and Asuka [[spoiler:the latter upon temporarily reaching 100% synchronization with Unit-02]].
*ThatCameOutWrong: Mari trying to get Shinji to [[spoiler:put on his plugsuit.]]
**[[spoiler:Of course, because it's ''Mari'', it's entirely likely that this was intentional.]]
*TheXOfY: Every. Single. Chapter. Title. WordOfGod says the author regrets this decision, but he's going through with it anyways.
*UseYourHead: Shinji [[spoiler:uses Unit-00's reinforced helmet to smash Shamshel's Core.]]
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The premise is simple, combining the main story-lines of the original series, the [[Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion recent movie trilogy]], the manga adaptation, and the author's own ideas. (Not) the End pushes back the appearance of the Angels by two years, aging the characters up and making them a little different from canon. Naturally, things get different from there. Where does it start?
(Not) the End can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11624461/1/NGE-Not-the-End FF.net]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/neon-genesis-evangelion-not-the-end.366457/ Spacebattles forum]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/neon-genesis-evangelion-not-the-end-nge.30080/ Sufficient Velocity forum]].
Warning: there are spoilers below!
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!! ''(Not) the End'' contains examples of:
*AnatomyArsenal: Every single Evangelion has some sort of built-in weapon.
**Unit-00 has both a RocketPunch, and a set of cranial Gatling guns.
**Unit-01 has an ArmCannon, as seen in [[spoiler:the Berserker Incident flashback]].
**Unit-02 has AbsurdlySharpClaws on its hands and feet, as well as a set of missiles.
*BarrierBustingBlow: Unit-05's lance can punch through AT Fields without even slowing down.
*BloodierAndGorier: Fight scenes between Evas and Angels usually end with both sides suffering multiple wounds of varying degrees of melting/messiness/burntness, stained with their colourful AlienBlood.
*BloodKnight: Mari, just as much as she is in canon.
*FelonyMisdemeanor: [[spoiler:Asuka]] punches Kaworu in the face for insinuating that she's frustrated with the fact that [[spoiler:her girlfriend is in another country]], ''and'' [[spoiler:challenges him to Eva vs. Eva simulated combat]].
*FetishFuel: Subverted with Mari. WordOfGod says that Mari's going to have significant character development throughout the story ''particularly'' to rectify this from canon.
*HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Asuka breaks down when she's trapped at the bottom of the ocean, unable to escape.]]
*HeyYouHaymaker: Gloriously abused by Mari and Shinji against Sachiel.
*JoustingLance: Unit-05's primary weapon, used against the Third and [[spoiler:Seventh]] Angel to great effect.
*LongDistanceRelationship: [[spoiler:Asuka and Mari]], up until Chapter 015.
*LovableAlphaBitch: Asuka's portrayed in a more sympathetic light initially, though she still has her aggressive attitude and AttentionWhore parts present.
*RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: [[spoiler:Mari and Asuka]], when the latter is introduced. Hinted at throughout the early chapters of the story.
*RousingSpeech: By ''Rei'' of all people, just before Operation Yashima.
*ScreamingWarrior: Mari, Shinji, and Asuka [[spoiler:the latter upon temporarily reaching 100% synchronization with Unit-02]].
*ThatCameOutWrong: Mari trying to get Shinji to [[spoiler:put on his plugsuit.]]
**[[spoiler:Of course, because it's ''Mari'', it's entirely likely that this was intentional.]]
*TheXOfY: Every. Single. Chapter. Title. WordOfGod says the author regrets this decision, but he's going through with it anyways.
*UseYourHead: Shinji [[spoiler:uses Unit-00's reinforced helmet to smash Shamshel's Core.]]
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