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* {{Not So Different}}: Sans and Undyne.
** ''“In essence, Sans is the epitome of everything Undyne is not, and yet, he thinks, they’re not completely different in their positions. They just placed their faith in different people.”''
** ''“In essence, Sans is the epitome of everything Undyne is not, and yet, he thinks, they’re not completely different in their positions. They just placed their faith in different people.”''
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* {{Not So Different}}: NotSoDifferentRemark: Sans and Undyne.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}
** He trusts her to only use the time power she’s been granted for the sake of their survival, but the thought of someone else with those powers is…worrying, to say the least.
** He trusts her to only use the time power she’s been granted for the sake of their survival, but the thought of someone else with those powers is…worrying, to say the least.
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* {{My Greatest Failure}}: To Sans, Integrity’s death.
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* {{My Greatest Failure}}: To Sans, Integrity’s death. Even years later, Sans suffers from a clear-cut case of survivor's guilt.
** ''“Before Sans had inevitably killed the brightest star in his life?”''
** ''“Before Sans had inevitably killed the brightest star in his life?”''
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Not as Simple is a work in progress and is currently in pre-canon territory. It is fairly popular—the fanart tag on [[https://fallendownfallenback.tumblr.com its official blog]] is over 85 pieces strong, and its design for the soul of integrity has become common within the Undertale fandom. Not as Simple (as well as [=PastelClark=] in general) is known for focus on platonic love and inclusion of several OCs. Not as Simple's updates are sparse, but quite long.
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Not as Simple is a work in progress and is currently in pre-canon territory. It is fairly popular—the fanart tag on [[https://fallendownfallenback.tumblr.com its official blog]] is over 85 pieces strong, and its design for the soul of integrity has become common within the Undertale fandom. Not as Simple (as well as [=PastelClark=] in general) is known for focus on platonic love and inclusion of several OCs. Not as Simple's updates are sparse, but quite long.
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Not as Simple is a work in progress and is currently in pre-canon territory. It is fairly well known—the fanart tag on [[https://fallendownfallenback.tumblr.com its official blog]] is over 85 pieces strong, and its design for the soul of integrity has been popularized within the Undertale fandom.
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Not as Simple is a work in progress and is currently in pre-canon territory. It is fairly well known—the popular—the fanart tag on [[https://fallendownfallenback.tumblr.com its official blog]] is over 85 pieces strong, and its design for the soul of integrity has been popularized become common within the Undertale fandom.
fandom. Not as Simple (as well as [=PastelClark=] in general) is known for focus on platonic love and inclusion of several OCs. Not as Simple's updates are sparse, but quite long.
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Not as Simple as a Happy Ending is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PastelClark PastelClark]]. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5571245 on AO3]], and additional content can be found on [[https://fallendownfallenback.tumblr.com its official blog]].
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5571245 Not as Simple as a Happy Ending Ending]] is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PastelClark PastelClark]]. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5571245 on AO3]], PastelClark]].
Not as Simple is a work in progress andadditional content can be found is currently in pre-canon territory. It is fairly well known—the fanart tag on [[https://fallendownfallenback.tumblr.com its official blog]].
Not as Simpleblog]] is a work in progress over 85 pieces strong, and is currently in pre-canon territory.
its design for the soul of integrity has been popularized within the Undertale fandom.
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** ''"“Excellent.” Gaster goes to leave, and then pauses, turning back around to look at you curiously. “Oh, one last thing. What shall I call you?”''\\
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** ''"“Excellent.''““Excellent.” Gaster goes to leave, and then pauses, turning back around to look at you curiously. “Oh, one last thing. What shall I call you?”''\\
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''“…Wind,” you say. “Call me Wind.”"''
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''“…Wind,” you say. “Call me Wind.”"''””''
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* {{You Did Everything You Could}}: Gaster to Sans, about Integrity’s death.
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* {{You Did Everything You Could}}: Said almost verbatim from Gaster to Sans, Sans about Integrity’s death.Integrity's death.
** ''““I’m sure you did the best you could.””''
** ''““I’m sure you did the best you could.””''
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* {{We Used to Be Friends}}: Gaster and Asgore.
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* {{We Used to Be Friends}}: In chapter 22, Gaster briefly recounts to Asgore how much he looked up to him, and Asgore.how they used to be like family. (This is shortly after nearly having a breakdown and detailing that Asgore destroyed his life.) He then goes on to explicitly tell Asgore that he hates him.
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** “The characters that open this fic are not the ones we know and love in Undertale, and they’re seen through the eyes of a young, idealistic monster—as well as the reflections of an older, tired, even bitter one. Sans leads us through this world—he is not an impartial narrator, nor an omniscient one. He grows and changes, and so do the people around him.”
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** “The ''“The characters that open this fic are not the ones we know and love in Undertale, and they’re seen through the eyes of a young, idealistic monster—as well as the reflections of an older, tired, even bitter one. Sans leads us through this world—he is not an impartial narrator, nor an omniscient one. He grows and changes, and so do the people around him.””''
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* {{Driven to Suicide}}: Strato Cumulus, [[spoiler: Wind's mother, witnessed the brutal murder of the Perseverance child. She couldn't bear to look at her own daughter afterwards. Six months later, Strato, who could fly, jumped into the Waterfall abyss.]]
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* {{Driven to Suicide}}: Strato Cumulus, [[spoiler: Wind's mother, mother]], witnessed the brutal murder of the Perseverance child. She child and couldn't bear to look at her own daughter afterwards. Six months later, Strato, who could fly, jumped into the Waterfall abyss.]]
* {{Meaningful Rename}}: Wind's.
** ''"“Excellent.” Gaster goes to leave, and then pauses, turning back around to look at you curiously. “Oh, one last thing. What shall I call you?”''\\
''You arch an eyebrow. “Don’t you already know my name?”''\\
''Gaster hums. “I didn’t ask for your name, I asked what I should call you.”''\\
''You pause, studying the peculiar monster in front of you. It’s a second chance, you realize, a fresh start, away from secrets and lies and cots in living room corners, away from everything it meant to be Nimbus.''\\
''“Well?”''\\
''“…Wind,” you say. “Call me Wind.”"''
** ''"“Excellent.” Gaster goes to leave, and then pauses, turning back around to look at you curiously. “Oh, one last thing. What shall I call you?”''\\
''You arch an eyebrow. “Don’t you already know my name?”''\\
''Gaster hums. “I didn’t ask for your name, I asked what I should call you.”''\\
''You pause, studying the peculiar monster in front of you. It’s a second chance, you realize, a fresh start, away from secrets and lies and cots in living room corners, away from everything it meant to be Nimbus.''\\
''“Well?”''\\
''“…Wind,” you say. “Call me Wind.”"''
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* {{The Reveal}}: “It ''“It is feeding on us.””''
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* {{Coming of Age Story}}: Sans’s.Not as Simple serves as Sans’s coming of age story.
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** “The characters that open this fic are not the ones we know and love in Undertale, and they’re seen through the eyes of a young, idealistic monster—as well as the reflections of an older, tired, even bitter one. Sans leads us through this world—he is not an impartial narrator, nor an omniscient one. He grows and changes, and so do the people around him.”
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* {{Driven to Suicide}}: Cumulus.Strato Cumulus, [[spoiler: Wind's mother, witnessed the brutal murder of the Perseverance child. She couldn't bear to look at her own daughter afterwards. Six months later, Strato, who could fly, jumped into the Waterfall abyss.]]
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* {{Abusive Parents}}: Integrity/K Lin’s.
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* {{Abusive Parents}}: Physical violence and withheld food were regularly used as punishments in Integrity/K Lin’s.Lin’s home. She was left with a debilitating fear of the dark from her father and/or mother often locking her in the hall closet. At one point when she was nine, Integrity accidentally broke a plate. Her punishment was denial of proper food for several days, and her father left her with a bruise that lasted a week. When Integrity came to the Underground at twelve, she had several bruises from her mother and had only eaten a stolen candy bar in the past two days.
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Not as Simple is a work in progress and is currently in pre-canon territory; according to the author it will continue up to, including, and after the events of Undertale.
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Not as Simple is a work in progress and is currently in pre-canon territory; according to the author it will continue up to, including, and after the events of Undertale.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5571245 Not as Simple as a Happy Ending]] is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PastelClark PastelClark]].
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-> "Let me tell you about six fallen virtues, and two royal children, and a sharp-edged genius and his staff of the rejected."
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-> "Let Let me tell you about six fallen virtues, and two royal children, and a sharp-edged genius and his staff of the rejected."rejected. About two brothers—one who reached out with open arms, and one with incredible power and an even more incredible heart.
-> And about three children—a boy, a girl, and something not quite either—who looked at their fate and said, “No, I refuse to die.”
-> And about three children—a boy, a girl, and something not quite either—who looked at their fate and said, “No, I refuse to die.”
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art commissioned by the author from [[https://89animegirl.tumblr.com 89animegirl]]]]]]
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* {{She Is Not My Girlfriend}}: Sans, about Grillby, to Gamma in Chapter 20.
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* {{She Is Not My Girlfriend}}: Sans, about Grillby, to Gamma.Gamma in Chapter 20.
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* Abusive Parents: Integrity/K Lin’s.
* Coming-of-Age Story: Sans’s.
* Doomed by Canon: All of the pre-Frisk fallen children, as well as Gaster and most of his staff.
* Driven to Suicide: Cumulus.
* Family of Choice: Sans and Integrity, Sans and Gaster, and Sans and the lab staff.
* Gen Fic: There are a few romantic relationships, but platonic love is highlighted more often.
* Harmful to Minors: The entirety of Act 1.
* Happy Flashback: The start of Chapter 20.
* Heroic BSoD: Sans at Integrity’s death.
* Heroic Sacrifice: [[spoiler:Integrity’s death.]]
* My Greatest Failure: To Sans, Integrity’s death.
* Not So Different: Sans and Undyne.
* Coming-of-Age Story: Sans’s.
* Doomed by Canon: All of the pre-Frisk fallen children, as well as Gaster and most of his staff.
* Driven to Suicide: Cumulus.
* Family of Choice: Sans and Integrity, Sans and Gaster, and Sans and the lab staff.
* Gen Fic: There are a few romantic relationships, but platonic love is highlighted more often.
* Harmful to Minors: The entirety of Act 1.
* Happy Flashback: The start of Chapter 20.
* Heroic BSoD: Sans at Integrity’s death.
* Heroic Sacrifice: [[spoiler:Integrity’s death.]]
* My Greatest Failure: To Sans, Integrity’s death.
* Not So Different: Sans and Undyne.
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* Abusive Parents: {{Abusive Parents}}: Integrity/K Lin’s.
*Coming-of-Age Story: {{Coming of Age Story}}: Sans’s.
*Doomed {{Doomed by Canon: Canon}}: All of the pre-Frisk fallen children, as well as Gaster and most of his staff.
*Driven {{Driven to Suicide: Suicide}}: Cumulus.
*Family {{Family of Choice: Choice}}: Sans and Integrity, Sans and Gaster, and Sans and the lab staff.
*Gen Fic: {{Gen Fic}}: There are a few romantic relationships, but platonic love is highlighted more often.
*Harmful {{Harmful to Minors: Minors}}: The entirety of Act 1.
*Happy Flashback: {{Happy Flashback}}: The start of Chapter 20.
*Heroic BSoD: {{Heroic BSoD}}: Sans at Integrity’s death.
*Heroic Sacrifice: {{Heroic Sacrifice}}: [[spoiler:Integrity’s death.]]
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* Take Away Their Name: A side effect of capturing someone’s soul; happens to the six fallen children.
* The Reveal: “It is feeding on us.”
* We Used to Be Friends: Gaster and Asgore.
* You Can’t Fight Fate: Remnant’s sentiment towards Sans.
* You Did Everything You Could: Gaster to Sans, about Integrity’s death.
* She Is Not My Girlfriend: Sans, about Grillby, to Gamma.
* Take Away Their Name: A side effect of capturing someone’s soul; happens to the six fallen children.
* The Reveal: “It is feeding on us.”
* We Used to Be Friends: Gaster and Asgore.
* You Can’t Fight Fate: Remnant’s sentiment towards Sans.
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*She {{She Is Not My Girlfriend: Girlfriend}}: Sans, about Grillby, to Gamma.
*Take {{Take Away Their Name: Name}}: A side effect of capturing someone’s soul; happens to the six fallen children.
*The Reveal: {{The Reveal}}: “It is feeding on us.”
*We {{We Used to Be Friends: Friends}}: Gaster and Asgore.
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-->-- Author's note
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5571245 Not as Simple as a Happy Ending]] is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PastelClark PastelClark]].
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!!This fanfiction provides examples of:
* Abusive Parents: Integrity/K Lin’s.
* Coming-of-Age Story: Sans’s.
* Doomed by Canon: All of the pre-Frisk fallen children, as well as Gaster and most of his staff.
* Driven to Suicide: Cumulus.
* Family of Choice: Sans and Integrity, Sans and Gaster, and Sans and the lab staff.
* Gen Fic: There are a few romantic relationships, but platonic love is highlighted more often.
* Harmful to Minors: The entirety of Act 1.
* Happy Flashback: The start of Chapter 20.
* Heroic BSoD: Sans at Integrity’s death.
* Heroic Sacrifice: [[spoiler:Integrity’s death.]]
* My Greatest Failure: To Sans, Integrity’s death.
* Not So Different: Sans and Undyne.
** “In essence, Sans is the epitome of everything Undyne is not, and yet, he thinks, they’re not completely different in their positions. They just placed their faith in different people.”
* Parental Substitute: Gaster to Sans.
* She Is Not My Girlfriend: Sans, about Grillby, to Gamma.
* Take Away Their Name: A side effect of capturing someone’s soul; happens to the six fallen children.
* The Reveal: “It is feeding on us.”
* We Used to Be Friends: Gaster and Asgore.
* You Can’t Fight Fate: Remnant’s sentiment towards Sans.
* You Did Everything You Could: Gaster to Sans, about Integrity’s death.
-->-- Author's note
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5571245 Not as Simple as a Happy Ending]] is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PastelClark PastelClark]].
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!!This fanfiction provides examples of:
* Abusive Parents: Integrity/K Lin’s.
* Coming-of-Age Story: Sans’s.
* Doomed by Canon: All of the pre-Frisk fallen children, as well as Gaster and most of his staff.
* Driven to Suicide: Cumulus.
* Family of Choice: Sans and Integrity, Sans and Gaster, and Sans and the lab staff.
* Gen Fic: There are a few romantic relationships, but platonic love is highlighted more often.
* Harmful to Minors: The entirety of Act 1.
* Happy Flashback: The start of Chapter 20.
* Heroic BSoD: Sans at Integrity’s death.
* Heroic Sacrifice: [[spoiler:Integrity’s death.]]
* My Greatest Failure: To Sans, Integrity’s death.
* Not So Different: Sans and Undyne.
** “In essence, Sans is the epitome of everything Undyne is not, and yet, he thinks, they’re not completely different in their positions. They just placed their faith in different people.”
* Parental Substitute: Gaster to Sans.
* She Is Not My Girlfriend: Sans, about Grillby, to Gamma.
* Take Away Their Name: A side effect of capturing someone’s soul; happens to the six fallen children.
* The Reveal: “It is feeding on us.”
* We Used to Be Friends: Gaster and Asgore.
* You Can’t Fight Fate: Remnant’s sentiment towards Sans.
* You Did Everything You Could: Gaster to Sans, about Integrity’s death.
