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* FirstKiss: In chapter 11, Shinji remembers his and Asuka's first kiss and ponders that it went horribly.
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* FirstKiss: In chapter Chapter 11, Shinji remembers his and Asuka's Asuka share a BigDamnKiss. During this, Shinji thinks back to their actual first kiss and ponders that the fact it went horribly.horribly wrong in so many ways, and that the kiss they are sharing right now is the first that feels ''right''.
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* BigEgoHiddenDepths: After having a long talk with Asuka about their mothers, where she tells him about her mother's death, her father remarrying and ditching her, and her resulting abandonment and loneliness issues... Shinji ruminates on her ego and anger issues as only being a mask and she's truly more complex than people tend to give her credit for.
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* BigEgoHiddenDepths: After having a long talk with Asuka about their mothers, where she tells him about her mother's death, her father remarrying and ditching her, and her resulting abandonment issues and loneliness issues...loneliness... Shinji ruminates on her ego and anger issues as only being a mask and she's truly more complex than people tend to give her credit for.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Shinji is very, very much in love with Asuka.
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* BigEgoHiddenDepths: After having a long talk with Asuka about their mothers, where she tells him about her mother's death, her father remarrying and ditching her, her abandonment and loneliness issues... Shinji ruminates on her ego and anger issues are only being a mask and she's truly more complex than people credits her for.
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* BigEgoHiddenDepths: After having a long talk with Asuka about their mothers, where she tells him about her mother's death, her father remarrying and ditching her, and her resulting abandonment and loneliness issues... Shinji ruminates on her ego and anger issues are as only being a mask and she's truly more complex than people credits tend to give her credit for.
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Hopefully a little less clunky.
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It starts where Episode 24 left off, with Episodes 25 & 26 and End of Evangelion ignored.; NERV manages through political maneuvering to prevent SEELE's attack for a time, though this action also forces back the schedule for the Human Instrumentality project.
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This paragraph is pure gushing.
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Starting where Episode 24 left off; NERV manages through political maneuvering to prevent SEELE's attack for a time, though this action also forces the schedule for the Human Instrumentality project further back, meaning that the scenarios from Episodes 25 & 26, and End of Evangelion are averted.
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Featuring relationships between the pilots that are handled incredibly well, original characters inserted seamlessly, and [[OriginalFlavour maintaining the feel of the original series]], without succumbing to the pitfalls of many other stories which explore the same territory, ''Evangelion: Genocide'' is regarded as one of the great classics of Evangelion fanfiction.
