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--> '''Midoriya''': [[spoiler: (''laughing'') ''(laughing)'' Kill you? No. If I was going to kill you, I wouldn’t have gone through all the trouble of calling you out as my nemesis.]]
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For Clouds' other works, see the ''Fanfic/ForTheWantOfANailSeries'' ''Fanfic/ForTheWantOfANailSeries'', ''Fanfic/DeathDaggersMHA'', and ''Fanfic/DeathDaggersMHA''.
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When villains become well known enough, they choose a hero to be their nemesis. This hero will get priority in all cases involving their nemesis, and have an additional responsibility to catch them. Nemesis call outs have been around as long as heroes and villains have existed, and are widely accepted as a normal part of the hero system. Mischief is the exception. Despite his power, he has never identified his chosen nemesis.
Never, that is, until today.
Never, that is, until today.
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When villains become well known enough, they choose a hero to be their nemesis. This hero will get priority in all cases involving their nemesis, and have an additional responsibility to catch them. Nemesis call outs have been around as long as heroes and villains have existed, and are widely accepted as a normal part of the hero system. Mischief is the exception. Despite his power, he has never identified his chosen nemesis.
nemesis. Never, that is, until today.
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--> '''Midoriya''': [[spoiler: (''laughing'') Kill you? No. If I was going to kill you, I wouldn’t have gone through all the trouble of calling you out as my nemesis.]]
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: Bakugou continues to think he can take care of Deku with ease, not caring that he’s now an A-rank villain. [[spoiler: He realizes how much of a badass Mischief is in the final chapter, where he’s on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle.]]
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* UncertainDoom: [[spoiler: Tsukauchi mentions that Stain did something to Iida, although what exactly he did is unclear.]]
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For Clouds' other works, see ''Fanfic/CheatCodeSupportStrategist'', ''Fanfic/DekuIThinkHesSomePro'', ''Fanfic/MastermindStrategistForHire'', ''Fanfic/MastermindRiseOfAnarchy'', ''Fanfic/ViridianTheGreenGuide'', and ''Fanfic/ShadowsTheHorrorMovieHeroes''.
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For Clouds' other works, see ''Fanfic/CheatCodeSupportStrategist'', ''Fanfic/DekuIThinkHesSomePro'', ''Fanfic/MastermindStrategistForHire'', ''Fanfic/MastermindRiseOfAnarchy'', ''Fanfic/ViridianTheGreenGuide'', the ''Fanfic/ForTheWantOfANailSeries'' and ''Fanfic/ShadowsTheHorrorMovieHeroes''.
''Fanfic/DeathDaggersMHA''.
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* CruelMercy: [[spoiler: Izuku doesn't kill Katsuki when he's given the chance, wanting him to suffer for as long as he did.]]
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* GetItOverWith: [[spoiler: Bakugou does this after getting beaten by Izuku.]] [[spoiler: Izuku doesn't do it however, wanting him to suffer for as long as he did.]]
--> '''Bakugou''': [[spoiler: So what? Are you gonna fucking kill me or what?]]
--> '''Midoriya''': [[spoiler: Kill you? No. If I was going to kill you, I wouldn’t have gone through all the trouble of calling you out as my nemesis.]]
--> '''Bakugou''': [[spoiler: So what? Are you gonna fucking kill me or what?]]
--> '''Midoriya''': [[spoiler: Kill you? No. If I was going to kill you, I wouldn’t have gone through all the trouble of calling you out as my nemesis.]]
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For Clouds' other works, see ''Fanfic/CheatCodeSupportStrategist'', ''Fanfic/DekuIThinkHesSomePro'', ''Fanfic/MastermindStrategistForHire'', ''Fanfic/MastermindRiseOfAnarchy'' ''Fanfic/MastermindRiseOfAnarchy'', ''Fanfic/ViridianTheGreenGuide'', and ''Fanfic/ViridianTheGreenGuide''.
''Fanfic/ShadowsTheHorrorMovieHeroes''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Izuku is an A-rank villainy known as Mischief, whereas in canon he is a hero-student in training.
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: Katsuki bullied and belittled Izuku for ''years'', until he was seemingly DrivenToSuicide. In reality, however, Izuku faked his death and went underground, building up a reputation as the mysterious villain Mischief while waiting for Katsuki to 'catch up' with him by earning his license.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: On top of getting away with years of tormenting Izuku and anyone else he felt like bullying, Katsuki never faced any consequences for encouraging him to [[SuicideDare kill himself]], with the incident being completely covered up. All that changes when Mischief officially names him his nemesis, staging a series of crimes lovingly designed to hang his dirty laundry out for the whole world to see.
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* NeverMyFault: Though there are hints that Katsuki ''does'' feel some guilt over how he mistreated Midoriya, he balks at the prospect of actually ''acknowledging'' he did anything wrong, latching onto his outrage over Izuku faking his death and turning evil like a lifeline.
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* ArchEnemy: As noted in the fic's summary, it is a common occurrence for high-profile Villains to name a particuar Pro Hero as their nemesis. The plot itself is kicked off with Mischief revealing himself to be Izuku and declaring Bakugou his nemesis, and revolves around the two characters' relationship.
* AssholeVictim: The hostages Mischief takes were all complicit in allowing Bakugou to bully him for over a decade
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* ArchEnemy: As noted in the fic's summary, it is a common occurrence for high-profile Villains to name a particuar particular Pro Hero as their nemesis. The plot itself is kicked off with Mischief revealing himself to be Izuku and declaring Bakugou his nemesis, and revolves around the two characters' relationship.
* AssholeVictim: The hostages Mischief takes were all complicit in allowing Bakugou to bully him for over adecadedecade.
* AssholeVictim: The hostages Mischief takes were all complicit in allowing Bakugou to bully him for over a
* FatalFlaw: Mischief exploits Katsuki's inflated sense of {{Pride}}, deliberately riling him up while forcing him to face the less pleasant aspects of their past.
* MaliciousMisnaming: Katsuki continues to refer to Midoriya[=/=]Mischief exclusively as 'Deku'.
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* PyrrhicVictory: {{Discussed}}. As Mischief explains, [[spoiler:heroes with a nemesis are more popular than those without any. Since Izuku became the infamous Mischief and named Katsuki as his nemesis right before his heroic career could really begin, even if he reaches Number One, he'll never know if he did so entirely on his own merits, or if ''Izuku helped him get there'']].
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* PyrrhicVictory: {{Discussed}}. As Mischief explains, [[spoiler:heroes with a nemesis nemeses are more popular than those without any. Since Izuku became the infamous Mischief and named Katsuki as his nemesis right before his heroic career could really begin, even if he reaches Number One, he'll never know if he did so entirely on his own merits, or if ''Izuku helped him get there'']].there'']].
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Izuku calls Katsuki out on holding a lifelong grudge against him over, of all things, having a hand offered to him after he fell into the river.
-->'''Midoriya:''' You slipped and fell, Kacchan. You were my best friend! Of course I was concerned about you! But instead of accepting my help for what it was like a normal human being, you convinced yourself that I thought I was better than you! Do you even realize how messed up that was?
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Izuku calls Katsuki out on holding a lifelong grudge against him over, of all things, having a hand offered to him after he fell into the river.
-->'''Midoriya:''' You slipped and fell, Kacchan. You were my best friend! Of course I was concerned about you! But instead of accepting my help for what it was like a normal human being, you convinced yourself that I thought I was better than you! Do you even realize how messed up that was?
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* {{Hypocrite}}: After learning that Kirishima got bullied himself back in middle school, Bakugou wishes he could make those responsible for hurting him pay, though he recognizes this as rather hypocritical on his part.
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* BittersweetEnding: Bakugou manages to save the hostages, but [[spoiler:Mischief ultimately escapes, having spelled out for Katsuki precisely ''how'' he's getting his revenge: by making sure the two of them are permanently linked in the eyes of the world]].
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* BittersweetEnding: Bakugou manages to save the hostages, but his relationship with Kirishima is naturally damaged by the truth about his past coming out, and [[spoiler:Mischief ultimately escapes, having spelled out for Katsuki precisely ''how'' he's getting his revenge: by making sure the two of them are permanently linked in the eyes of the world]].world]].
* BullyingADragon: Katsuki continues to insist that he can easily handle the 'quirkless weakling' on his own, despite Izuku having built up a reputation as the villainous Mischief.
* BullyingADragon: Katsuki continues to insist that he can easily handle the 'quirkless weakling' on his own, despite Izuku having built up a reputation as the villainous Mischief.
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* DisappointedInYou: Implied by Ejirou's reaction to learning about Katsuki's past as a bully, though he avoids calling him out directly.
* DisappointedInYou: Implied by Ejirou's reaction to learning about Katsuki's past as a bully, though he avoids calling him out directly.
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* HostageSituation: Izuku takes about a dozen hostages in two seperate locations - one in Eitai bridge, and nearly a dozen in Tatooine Shopping District.
* PyrrhicVictory: Discussed. [[spoiler: Heroes that have a nemesis are more popular than a comparable hero without a nemesis. Since Izuku called Bakugou out as his nemesis, should Bakugou ever reach number one, he will never know if it was because of his own skills, ''or if Izuku helped him get there'', taking away any pride he could ever feel in actually succeeding at that]].
* UnSorcerer: Like in Clouds' other fics, Izuku is Quirkless.
* PyrrhicVictory: Discussed. [[spoiler: Heroes that have a nemesis are more popular than a comparable hero without a nemesis. Since Izuku called Bakugou out as his nemesis, should Bakugou ever reach number one, he will never know if it was because of his own skills, ''or if Izuku helped him get there'', taking away any pride he could ever feel in actually succeeding at that]].
* UnSorcerer: Like in Clouds' other fics, Izuku is Quirkless.
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* HostageSituation: Izuku takes about a dozen hostages in two seperate separate locations - one in Eitai bridge, and nearly a dozen in Tatooine Shopping District.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Villains can effectively invoke this on ''themselves'' by naming a hero as their nemesis. In the eyes of the public, this saddles that hero with the responsibility of dealing with that villain.
* PyrrhicVictory:Discussed. [[spoiler: Heroes that have {{Discussed}}. As Mischief explains, [[spoiler:heroes with a nemesis are more popular than a comparable hero those without a nemesis. any. Since Izuku called Bakugou out became the infamous Mischief and named Katsuki as his nemesis, should Bakugou ever reach number one, nemesis right before his heroic career could really begin, even if he will reaches Number One, he'll never know if it was because of he did so entirely on his own skills, ''or merits, or if Izuku ''Izuku helped him get there'', taking away any pride there'']].
* SuicideDare: Katsuki is forced to own up to how hecould ever feel in actually succeeding at that]].
told Izuku to 'take a swan dive off the roof'.
* UnSorcerer: Like in Clouds' other fics, Izuku isQuirkless.Quirkless.
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Villains can effectively invoke this on ''themselves'' by naming a hero as their nemesis. In the eyes of the public, this saddles that hero with the responsibility of dealing with that villain.
* PyrrhicVictory:
* SuicideDare: Katsuki is forced to own up to how he
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* ContinuityNod: Tatooine Shopping District, the location where Chapter 3 takes place, is explicitly noted to have been where Izuku had saved Bakugou from the Sludge Villain.
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When villains become well known enough, they choose a hero to be their nemesis. This hero will get priority in all cases involving their nemesis, and have an additional responsibility to catch them. Nemesis call outs have been around as long as heroes and villains have existed, and are widely accepted as a normal part of the hero system. Mischief is the exception. Despite his power, he has never identified his chosen nemesis.
Never, that is, until today.
''Nemesis'' is a ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'' fanfic by myheadinthecloudsnotcomingdown. It can be read on ''Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn'' [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24720043/chapters/59752849 here]].
For Clouds' other works, see ''Fanfic/CheatCodeSupportStrategist'', ''Fanfic/DekuIThinkHesSomePro'', ''Fanfic/MastermindStrategistForHire'', ''Fanfic/MastermindRiseOfAnarchy'' and ''Fanfic/ViridianTheGreenGuide''.
!!''Nemesis'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* ArchEnemy: As noted in the fic's summary, it is a common occurrence for high-profile Villains to name a particuar Pro Hero as their nemesis. The plot itself is kicked off with Mischief revealing himself to be Izuku and declaring Bakugou his nemesis, and revolves around the two characters' relationship.
* AssholeVictim: The hostages Mischief takes were all complicit in allowing Bakugou to bully him for over a decade
* AdaptationalVillainy: Izuku is an A-rank vilain known as Mischief, whereas in canon he is a hero-student in training.
* BigBad: Mischief, aka Izuku Midoriya, is the fic's sole antagonist.
* BittersweetEnding: Bakugou manages to save the hostages, but [[spoiler:Mischief ultimately gets his revenge on Bakugou and escapes]].
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:All Might is revealed to have died saving Bakugou at Kamino Ward]].
* ContinuityNod: Tatooine Shopping District, the location where Chapter 3 takes place, is explicitly noted to have been where Izuku had saved Bakugou from the Sludge Villain.
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The entire story takes place over the course of a single afternoon, starting at 2:30 PM and ending at around 7 PM.
* FakingTheDead: Izuku faked his suicide two years before the story began.
* GoodbyeCruelWorld: Izuku had left a suicide note at Eitai bridge after faking his suicide.
* HostageSituation: Izuku takes about a dozen hostages in two seperate locations - one in Eitai bridge, and nearly a dozen in Tatooine Shopping District.
* UnSorcerer: Like in Clouds' other fics, Izuku is Quirkless.
Never, that is, until today.
''Nemesis'' is a ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'' fanfic by myheadinthecloudsnotcomingdown. It can be read on ''Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn'' [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24720043/chapters/59752849 here]].
For Clouds' other works, see ''Fanfic/CheatCodeSupportStrategist'', ''Fanfic/DekuIThinkHesSomePro'', ''Fanfic/MastermindStrategistForHire'', ''Fanfic/MastermindRiseOfAnarchy'' and ''Fanfic/ViridianTheGreenGuide''.
!!''Nemesis'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* ArchEnemy: As noted in the fic's summary, it is a common occurrence for high-profile Villains to name a particuar Pro Hero as their nemesis. The plot itself is kicked off with Mischief revealing himself to be Izuku and declaring Bakugou his nemesis, and revolves around the two characters' relationship.
* AssholeVictim: The hostages Mischief takes were all complicit in allowing Bakugou to bully him for over a decade
* AdaptationalVillainy: Izuku is an A-rank vilain known as Mischief, whereas in canon he is a hero-student in training.
* BigBad: Mischief, aka Izuku Midoriya, is the fic's sole antagonist.
* BittersweetEnding: Bakugou manages to save the hostages, but [[spoiler:Mischief ultimately gets his revenge on Bakugou and escapes]].
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:All Might is revealed to have died saving Bakugou at Kamino Ward]].
* ContinuityNod: Tatooine Shopping District, the location where Chapter 3 takes place, is explicitly noted to have been where Izuku had saved Bakugou from the Sludge Villain.
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The entire story takes place over the course of a single afternoon, starting at 2:30 PM and ending at around 7 PM.
* FakingTheDead: Izuku faked his suicide two years before the story began.
* GoodbyeCruelWorld: Izuku had left a suicide note at Eitai bridge after faking his suicide.
* HostageSituation: Izuku takes about a dozen hostages in two seperate locations - one in Eitai bridge, and nearly a dozen in Tatooine Shopping District.
* UnSorcerer: Like in Clouds' other fics, Izuku is Quirkless.