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* FutureBadass: [[spoiler:IMMORTALITY MARK CRUSADERS GO!]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: During the epilogue, Twilight is surprised to find Rainbow Dash [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E16ReadItAndWeep reading a book]]. The epilogue was posted about a month before the episode.
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* MultipleChoicePast: Marcus, who can't even figure out which origin is exactly his.
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* {{Reincarnation}}: [[spoiler:Marcus.]]
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* Doorstopper: In digital form! Each chapter is referred to as a "book" for a ''reason.''
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* Doorstopper: {{Doorstopper}}: In digital form! Each chapter is referred to as a "book" for a ''reason.''
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* EvilLaugh / LaughingMad: Marcus does this a lot in his narrative, always either when he finds some misfortune on an enemy amusing(or has been successfully tricked) or [[CaptainObvious when he's nervous]], though usually for that part he'll just as often scream internally.
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* Doorstopper: In digital form! Each chapter is referred to as a "book" for a ''reason.''
* EvilLaugh / LaughingMad: Marcus does this a lot in his narrative, always either when he finds some misfortune on an enemyamusing(or amusing (or has been successfully tricked) or [[CaptainObvious when he's nervous]], though usually for that part he'll just as often scream internally.
* EvilLaugh / LaughingMad: Marcus does this a lot in his narrative, always either when he finds some misfortune on an enemy
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* KnightsAndKnaves: Pinkie busts one of these in White Plume Mountain by asking a question they don't know the answer to.
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Can be read with commentary and reviews on Spacebattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=197864 here]], or edited and corrected in pure text-form [[http://www.thekeep.org/%7Ewombat/Stories/MLP/index.html here]]
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Can be read with commentary and reviews on Spacebattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=197864 here]], or edited and corrected in pure text-form [[http://www.thekeep.org/%7Ewombat/Stories/MLP/index.html here]]
here]], or in text form with better formatting [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2857/My%28stara%27s%29-Little-Ponies%3A--Friendship-is-Adventuring here.]]
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Written by long-time fic author John Biles, My(stara's) Little Ponies: Friendship is Adventuring transports [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] wholesale into the DungeonsAndDragons world of {{Mystara}}, and it mixes in beautifully.
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Written by long-time fic author John Biles, My(stara's) Little Ponies: Friendship is Adventuring transports [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] wholesale into the DungeonsAndDragons world of {{Mystara}}, and it mixes in beautifully.
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Can be read with commentary and reviews on Spacebattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=197864 here]], or edited and corrected in a slightly less complete pure text-form [[http://www.thekeep.org/%7Ewombat/Stories/MLP/index.html here]]
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* NiceHat: Marcus ''loves'' a good chapot. In fact he spends much of the first few chapters lusting after Applejack's cowboy hat after his own was washed down stream.
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* NiceHat: Marcus ''loves'' a good chapot.chapeau. In fact he spends much of the first few chapters lusting after Applejack's cowboy hat after his own was washed down stream.
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A little proofreading, plus a new trope
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---> -Samus Marcus, [[LovableCoward Our Point-Of-View hero Fillies and Gentlecolts]].
Written by long-time fic Author John Biles, My(stara's) Little Ponies: Friendship is Adventuring transports [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] wholesale into the DungeonsAndDragons world of {{Mystara}}, and it mixes in beautifully.
Written by long-time fic Author John Biles, My(stara's) Little Ponies: Friendship is Adventuring transports [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] wholesale into the DungeonsAndDragons world of {{Mystara}}, and it mixes in beautifully.
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---> -Samus Marcus, [[LovableCoward Our Point-Of-View hero Fillies and Gentlecolts]].
Written by long-time ficAuthor author John Biles, My(stara's) Little Ponies: Friendship is Adventuring transports [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] wholesale into the DungeonsAndDragons world of {{Mystara}}, and it mixes in beautifully.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: When Marcus first meets Pinkie Pie, when he is the only thing keeping them plus Ivan from being washed downstream:
--> "Hello, ma'am," I said. "I hope you are a great swimmer because I fear my hands
-->are slipping and we are about to be swept towards that waterfall over there."
--> "Hello, ma'am," I said. "I hope you are a great swimmer because I fear my hands
-->are slipping and we are about to be swept towards that waterfall over there."
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The story is told from the viewpoint of one Samus Marcus [[spoiler: and on occasion another member of the party, later on in the story]], a typical adventurer with a penchant for [[NiceHat nice hats]] based on a character commonly used in the author's own campaigns over the years. We start off with Marcus and friend Ivan almost getting killed along with the rest of their party over a waterfall in a swamp, but are saved by the [[Characters/{{Friendship Is Magic-The Mane Cast}} Elements of Harmony]], registered Adventuring group in the employ of Princess Celestia. Turns out that they are aiming for the same goal as Marcus and Ivan.
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The story is told from the viewpoint of one Samus Marcus [[spoiler: and on occasion another member of the party, later on in the story]], a typical adventurer with a penchant for [[NiceHat nice hats]] based on a character commonly used in the author's own campaigns over the years. We start off with Marcus and friend Ivan almost getting killed along with the rest of their party over a waterfall in a the Malpheggi swamp, but are saved by the [[Characters/{{Friendship Is Magic-The Mane Cast}} Elements of Harmony]], registered Adventuring group in the employ of Princess Celestia. Turns out that they are aiming for the same goal as Marcus and Ivan.
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There's just one small problem: Marcus used to be Eric of the Northlands, who had a history with Twilight that.... well, let's just say that if she learned who he was, she'd blow him up. And if she didn't Spike would gladdly burn him alive, if her new friends didn't do the job for him.
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There's just one small problem: Marcus used to be Eric of the Northlands, who had a history with Twilight that.... well, let's just say that if she learned who he was, she'd blow him up. And if she didn't Spike would gladdly gladly burn him alive, if her new friends didn't do the job for him.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Marcus accidentally got caught in one with Twilight in the backstory. [[spoiler: he later gets involved in a more intentional one with Rarity, using polymorph candy to avoid the [[{{Squick}} obvious problems]]]].
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* InterspeciesRomance: Marcus accidentally got caught in one with Twilight in the backstory. [[spoiler: he He later gets involved in a more intentional one with Rarity, using polymorph candy to avoid the [[{{Squick}} obvious problems]]]].
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* NoodleIncident: All over the place.
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* NoodleIncident: All over A hallmark of the place.story. Marcus is constantly referencing past adventures and incidents in passing, never giving more information than to make the reader go "wha-huh?".
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* GenreSavvy: Marcus again. ''"Always think outside the box... Because the box is full of scorpions."''
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Can be read on Spacebattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=197864 here]], and in a slightly less complete text-form [[http://www.thekeep.org/~wombat/MLP/index.org/%7Ewombat/Stories/MLP/index.html here]]
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Can be read on Spacebattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=197864 here]], and in an incomplete (though sans comments) text-form [[http://www.thekeep.org/~wombat/MLP/FIADraft.txt here]]
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Can be read on Spacebattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=197864 here]], and in an incomplete (though sans comments) a slightly less complete text-form [[http://www.thekeep.org/~wombat/MLP/FIADraft.txt org/~wombat/MLP/index.html here]]
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* ChickMagnet: See above. Marcus always works on currying favor (you never know when it'll be needed), and is always willing to court a lovely lady. Trouble is, [[HilarityEnsues pony courtship evidently has surface similarities to said currying.]]
* TotalPartyKill: Marcus has survived a multitude of these. See ProperlyParanoid.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.
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The story is told from the viewpoint of one Samus Marcus [[spoiler: and on occasion another member of the party, later on in the story]], a typical adventurer with a penchant for [[NiceHat nice hats]] based on a character commonly used in the author's own campaigns over the years. We start off with Marcus and friend Ivan almost getting killed along with the rest of their party over a waterfall in a swamp, but are saved by the [[Characters/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Elements of Harmony]], registered Adventuring group in the employ of Princess Celestia. Turns out that they are aiming for the same goal as Marcus and Ivan.
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The story is told from the viewpoint of one Samus Marcus [[spoiler: and on occasion another member of the party, later on in the story]], a typical adventurer with a penchant for [[NiceHat nice hats]] based on a character commonly used in the author's own campaigns over the years. We start off with Marcus and friend Ivan almost getting killed along with the rest of their party over a waterfall in a swamp, but are saved by the [[Characters/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[Characters/{{Friendship Is Magic-The Mane Cast}} Elements of Harmony]], registered Adventuring group in the employ of Princess Celestia. Turns out that they are aiming for the same goal as Marcus and Ivan.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Averted with the resident Entropy Immortal Luna, and Pinkie Pie, whose Element, Laughter, is an Entropy Artifact.
* AmnesiacGod: [[spoiler:Turns out, Marcus was on the path to becoming an Immortal, long ''long'' ago, but his patron immortal either abandoned him or died part-way through.]]
* AmnesiacGod: [[spoiler:Turns out, Marcus was on the path to becoming an Immortal, long ''long'' ago, but his patron immortal either abandoned him or died part-way through.]]
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* EvilLaugh / LaughingMad: Marcus does this a lot in his narrative, always either when he finds some misfortune on an enemy amusing(or has been successfully tricked)/[[CaptainObvious when he's nervous]], though usually for that part he'll just as often scream internally.
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* DoomMagnet: Marcus. Oh. My. Word.
* EvilLaugh / LaughingMad: Marcus does this a lot in his narrative, always either when he finds some misfortune on an enemy amusing(or has been successfullytricked)/[[CaptainObvious tricked) or [[CaptainObvious when he's nervous]], though usually for that part he'll just as often scream internally.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.Twist.
* YouMeddlingKids: ''' ''CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS ADVENTURERS YAY!!'' '''
* YouMeddlingKids: ''' ''CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS ADVENTURERS YAY!!'' '''
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Flutterdragon is not the only time she morphs with Druid powers
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy [[spoiler: a.k.a. Flutterdragon]] can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Fluttershy [[spoiler: a.k.a. Flutterdragon]] can do this as a Druid... She just has trouble controling the animal instincts. Also possible with polymorphing candy, courtesy of Twist.
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* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Poor Scootaloo, [[spoiler: all her friends are getting Cutie Marks but her]].
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* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Poor Scootaloo, [[spoiler: all her friends are getting Cutie Marks but her]].her. She finally got her wish though! Go Rainbow Wheel!]]
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* DeathRay: The Moonraker ''would'' have one, if only they could find a Demi-lich's skull.
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* DeathRay: The Moonraker ''would'' have one, if only they could find a Demi-lich's skull. [[spoiler: But with the new Slaad the Moonraker is fully operational! As long as they remember to feed it anyway...]]
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There's just one small problem: Marcus used to be Eric of Nort, who had a history with Twilight that.... well, let's just say that if she learned who he was, she'd blow him up. And if she didn't Spike would gladdly burn him alive, if her new friends didn't do the job for him.
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There's just one small problem: Marcus used to be Eric of Nort, the Northlands, who had a history with Twilight that.... well, let's just say that if she learned who he was, she'd blow him up. And if she didn't Spike would gladdly burn him alive, if her new friends didn't do the job for him.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Marcus accidentally got caught in one with Twilight in the backstory. [[spoiler: he later gets involved in a more intentional one with Rarity, using polymorph candy to avoid the [[{{Squick}} obvious problems]]]].
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''"I am going to die. And without a hat!"''
-Samus Marcus, [[LovableCoward Our Point-Of-View hero Fillies and Gentlecolts]].
-Samus Marcus, [[LovableCoward Our Point-Of-View hero Fillies and Gentlecolts]].
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--> ''"I am going to die. And without a hat!"''
hat!"''
---> -Samus Marcus, [[LovableCoward Our Point-Of-View hero Fillies and Gentlecolts]].
---> -Samus Marcus, [[LovableCoward Our Point-Of-View hero Fillies and Gentlecolts]].
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* EvilLaugh / LaughingMad: Marcus does this a lot in his narrative, always either when he finds some misfortune on an enemy amusing(or has been successfully tricked)/[[CaptainObvious when he's nervous]], though usually for that part he'll just as often scream internally.
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* NiceHat: Marcus ''loves'' a good chapot. In fact he spends much of the first few chapters lusting after Applejack's cowboy hat after his own was washed down stream.
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* NiceHat: ManiacleLaughter/NervousLaughter: Marcus does this a lot in his narrative, always either when he finds some misfortune on an enemy amusing(or has been successfully tricked)/[[CaptainObvious when he's nervous]], though usually for that part he'll just as often scream internally.
*NiceHat: Marcus ''loves'' a good chapot. In fact he spends much of the first few chapters lusting after Applejack's cowboy hat after his own was washed down stream.
*NiceHat: Marcus ''loves'' a good chapot. In fact he spends much of the first few chapters lusting after Applejack's cowboy hat after his own was washed down stream.