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* DidntThinkThisThrough: When Meili was in middle school, she becomes friends with a girl named Alicia, a Low-Tier and despite already being a Mid-Tier, she didn't hide the friendship. This caused problems for Alicia, as she was now a target from the students that saw Meili as an equal for "forgetting her place".
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: When Meili was in middle school, she becomes became friends with a girl named Alicia, a Low-Tier and despite already being a Mid-Tier, she didn't hide the friendship. This caused problems for Alicia, as she was now a target from the students that saw Meili as an equal for "forgetting her place".
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* BlueBlood: God-Tiers are so rare their families can better be described as noble clans than proprer families. Arlo's family, for instance, is so rich and powerful their estate is described as almost castle-like.
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* BlueBlood: God-Tiers are so rare their families can better be described as noble clans than proprer proper families. Arlo's family, for instance, is so rich and powerful their estate is described as almost castle-like.
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* ExperiencedProtagonist: As a SI, not only Meili already knows a lot of the subjects in class, giving her a clear academical advantage, but she also knows the original plot of unOrdinary. She's also very good at social combat, being able to quickly analize the behavior of those around her, no matter if they are weaker or stronger.
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* ExperiencedProtagonist: As a SI, not only Meili already knows a lot of the subjects in class, giving her a clear academical advantage, but she also knows the original plot of unOrdinary. She's also very good at social combat, being able to quickly analize analyze the behavior of those around her, no matter if they are weaker or stronger.
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* CurbStompBattle: At the Freshmen Tournament, Meili fought both Holden and Zeke, who were a bit stronger than her before her Evolution. After that, she was so much stronger than them they didn't even pose a challenge.
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* CurbStompBattle: At the Freshmen Tournament, Meili fought both Holden and Zeke, who were a bit stronger than her before her Evolution. After that, she was so much stronger than them that they didn't even pose a challenge.
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* Worldbuilding: The author, hsum23, is making an effort to give more details to the world of unOrdinary, given that the source material has so little of it.
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* Worldbuilding: {{Worldbuilding}}: The author, hsum23, is making an effort to give more details to the world of unOrdinary, given that the source material has so little of it.
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* PowerUp: Meili achieves an Ability Evolution, changing her ability from Demon Claws to the more powerful Devil's Hands. Both her Power and Trick stats grew from the change. If before she was likely to have come a high end Elite-Tier/low end High-Tier, she's now likely to become a low end God-Tier by the time she becomes a fully matured adult.
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* PowerUp: Meili achieves an Ability Evolution, changing her ability from Demon Claws to the more powerful Devil's Hands. Both her Power and Trick stats grew from the change. If before she was likely to have come a high end Elite-Tier/low end High-Tier, she's now likely to become a low end God-Tier by the time she becomes a fully matured adult.adult.
* Worldbuilding: The author, hsum23, is making an effort to give more details to the world of unOrdinary, given that the source material has so little of it.
* Worldbuilding: The author, hsum23, is making an effort to give more details to the world of unOrdinary, given that the source material has so little of it.
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* BlueBlood: God-tiers are so rare their families can better be described as noble clans than proprer families. Arlo's family, for instance, is so rich and powerful their estate is described as almost castle-like.
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* BlueBlood: God-tiers God-Tiers are so rare their families can better be described as noble clans than proprer families. Arlo's family, for instance, is so rich and powerful their estate is described as almost castle-like.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: When Meili was in middle school, she becomes friends with a girl named Alicia, a low-tier and despite already being a mid-tier, she didn't hide the friendship. This caused problems for Alicia, as she was now a target from the students that saw Meili as an equal for "forgetting her place".
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: When Meili was in middle school, she becomes friends with a girl named Alicia, a low-tier Low-Tier and despite already being a mid-tier, Mid-Tier, she didn't hide the friendship. This caused problems for Alicia, as she was now a target from the students that saw Meili as an equal for "forgetting her place".
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* OffTheRails: Meili's interferance in Rei's future plans likely ensured he will never become a vigilante, which would completely change the plot of the webcomic. [[note]]Rei's death was instrumental for Seraphina eventually coming back one more time to Turf Wars after becoming the Ace of Wellston. Without his death, Seraphina would never be present that day and thus Arlo would never be given a reason to investigate John's influence on her.[[/note]]
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* OffTheRails: Meili's [[spoiler:Meili's interferance in Rei's future plans likely ensured he will never become a vigilante, which would completely change the plot of the webcomic. [[note]]Rei's death was instrumental for Seraphina eventually coming back one more time to Turf Wars after becoming the Ace of Wellston. Without his death, Seraphina would never be present that day and thus Arlo would never be given a reason to investigate John's influence on her.[[/note]][[/note]]]]
* PowerUp: Meili achieves an Ability Evolution, changing her ability from Demon Claws to the more powerful Devil's Hands. Both her Power and Trick stats grew from the change. If before she was likely to have come a high end Elite-Tier/low end High-Tier, she's now likely to become a low end God-Tier by the time she becomes a fully matured adult.
* PowerUp: Meili achieves an Ability Evolution, changing her ability from Demon Claws to the more powerful Devil's Hands. Both her Power and Trick stats grew from the change. If before she was likely to have come a high end Elite-Tier/low end High-Tier, she's now likely to become a low end God-Tier by the time she becomes a fully matured adult.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: The world of unOrdinary is this by definition. Meili is very aware of this fact and constantly rationalizes most people's actions around her to be based on this.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: The world of unOrdinary is this by definition. Meili is very aware of this fact and constantly rationalizes most people's actions around her to be based on this. Multiple of her journals mention how levels are important to the people in this world, to the point that their potential becomes their single most important trait.
* BlueBlood: God-tiers are so rare their families can better be described as noble clans than proprer families. Arlo's family, for instance, is so rich and powerful their estate is described as almost castle-like.
* CurbStompBattle: At the Freshmen Tournament, Meili fought both Holden and Zeke, who were a bit stronger than her before her Evolution. After that, she was so much stronger than them they didn't even pose a challenge.
** The situation reverses itself when she fights Arlo in the semi-finals. She wasn't even able to touch him before being defeated.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: When Meili was in middle school, she becomes friends with a girl named Alicia, a low-tier and despite already being a mid-tier, she didn't hide the friendship. This caused problems for Alicia, as she was now a target from the students that saw Meili as an equal for "forgetting her place".
* ExperiencedProtagonist: As a SI, not only Meili already knows a lot of the subjects in class, giving her a clear academical advantage, but she also knows the original plot of unOrdinary. She's also very good at social combat, being able to quickly analize the behavior of those around her, no matter if they are weaker or stronger.
* OffTheRails: Meili's interferance in Rei's future plans likely ensured he will never become a vigilante, which would completely change the plot of the webcomic. [[note]]Rei's death was instrumental for Seraphina eventually coming back one more time to Turf Wars after becoming the Ace of Wellston. Without his death, Seraphina would never be present that day and thus Arlo would never be given a reason to investigate John's influence on her.[[/note]]
* BlueBlood: God-tiers are so rare their families can better be described as noble clans than proprer families. Arlo's family, for instance, is so rich and powerful their estate is described as almost castle-like.
* CurbStompBattle: At the Freshmen Tournament, Meili fought both Holden and Zeke, who were a bit stronger than her before her Evolution. After that, she was so much stronger than them they didn't even pose a challenge.
** The situation reverses itself when she fights Arlo in the semi-finals. She wasn't even able to touch him before being defeated.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: When Meili was in middle school, she becomes friends with a girl named Alicia, a low-tier and despite already being a mid-tier, she didn't hide the friendship. This caused problems for Alicia, as she was now a target from the students that saw Meili as an equal for "forgetting her place".
* ExperiencedProtagonist: As a SI, not only Meili already knows a lot of the subjects in class, giving her a clear academical advantage, but she also knows the original plot of unOrdinary. She's also very good at social combat, being able to quickly analize the behavior of those around her, no matter if they are weaker or stronger.
* OffTheRails: Meili's interferance in Rei's future plans likely ensured he will never become a vigilante, which would completely change the plot of the webcomic. [[note]]Rei's death was instrumental for Seraphina eventually coming back one more time to Turf Wars after becoming the Ace of Wellston. Without his death, Seraphina would never be present that day and thus Arlo would never be given a reason to investigate John's influence on her.[[/note]]
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''My Name Is Beautiful'' is a SI fanfic of ''Webcomic/UnOrdinary'' written by hsum23.
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''My Name Is Beautiful'' is a SI fanfic of ''Webcomic/UnOrdinary'' written by hsum23.
[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/hsum23.542212/ hsum23]].
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''My Name Is Beautiful'' is a SI fanfic of ''Webcomic/UnOrdinary'' written by hsum23.
It explores the life of someone inserted into Meili's body, a side-character, and the consequences of her actions changing the people around her.
It can be read on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/my-name-is-beautiful-unordinary-si.1148168/ SpaceBattles]]
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!!''My Name Is Beautiful'' contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Unlike Meili in the original webcomic, this one suffered an Ability Evolution, allowing her to reach great levels of Power and Trick to her ability.
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: The world of unOrdinary is this by definition. Meili is very aware of this fact and constantly rationalizes most people's actions around her to be based on this.
It explores the life of someone inserted into Meili's body, a side-character, and the consequences of her actions changing the people around her.
It can be read on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/my-name-is-beautiful-unordinary-si.1148168/ SpaceBattles]]
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!!''My Name Is Beautiful'' contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Unlike Meili in the original webcomic, this one suffered an Ability Evolution, allowing her to reach great levels of Power and Trick to her ability.
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: The world of unOrdinary is this by definition. Meili is very aware of this fact and constantly rationalizes most people's actions around her to be based on this.
