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* AdaptationalExpansion: Hibari’s backstory and past is explored on in the final arc as Hibari has an unelaborated MysteriousPast in canon.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6458280/1/My-Heavenly-Judgement My Heavenly Judgement]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2020316/colbub Colbub]] is a complete fanfiction that follows the adventure of a girl named Alice, who leads an non-eventful life in our world, she even has gray hair and gray eyes to match her nearly invisible existence. Everything in her life was practically boring and uneventful until the day she passed away in a car accident, after some heartfelt goodbyes with her family, she was soon sent to the fictional world of Manga/Reborn2004 in order to pass her judgement and move on to heaven, so she could meet with her family once again. Her one priority is to not get attached to anyone, for it will make it hard for her to pass her judgement and pass on to heaven. The story is somewhat AU and is extremely OC-centric but is very well-written and delves in deeper to the other characters' pasts and thoughts.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6458280/1/My-Heavenly-Judgement My Heavenly Judgement]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2020316/colbub Colbub]] is a complete fanfiction that follows the adventure of a girl named Alice, who leads an non-eventful life in our world, she even has gray hair and gray eyes to match her nearly invisible existence. Everything in her life was practically boring and uneventful until the day she passed away in a car accident, after some heartfelt goodbyes with her family, she was soon sent to the fictional world of Manga/Reborn2004 in order to pass her judgement and move on to heaven, so she could meet with her family once again. Her one priority is to not get attached to anyone, for it will make it hard for her to pass her judgement and pass on to heaven. heaven.
The story is somewhat AU and is extremely OC-centric but is very well-written and delves in deeper to the other characters' pasts and thoughts.
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The story was initially published in November 2010 and is completed in January 2016.


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* {{Doorstopper}}: Including the author's own additional notes, the story has 650,000+ words total.
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** [[spoiler: This can also apply to Amanda though there wasn’t any specifications as to why is unknown, but Amanda does admit to Alice that she is actually jealous of Alice’s life]]

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** [[spoiler: This can also apply to Amanda though there wasn’t any specifications as to why is unknown, but Amanda does admit to Alice that she is actually jealous of Alice’s life]]life as she gets to have a loving family and had a rather normal relationship with people without them putting her on a pedestal.]]

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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Jared from the Varia becomes this in only a matter of 10 years, and Patrick Brighteye is definitely this.

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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Jared from the Varia becomes this in only a matter of 10 years, years due to being near the Varia crew for as long as he did, and Patrick Brighteye is definitely this.this with his own love of Hello Kitty and hatred for tall people.



* HeightAngst: Alice gets somewhat depressed whenever anyone calls her 'short'. And when she meets everyone briefly during her time being hit by the Ten Year Bazooka, she was bitter about how tall the guys have become.
** Patrick goes so far to even celebrate the fact that Alice is shorter than him, and being rather antagonistic towards the rather tall Yamamoto. So antagonistic that he only forgave Yamamoto when Yamamoto himself said that [[RealMenWearPink he thinks Hello Kitty is cool]].

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* HeightAngst: HeightAngst:
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Alice gets somewhat depressed whenever anyone calls her 'short'. And when she meets everyone briefly during her time being hit by the Ten Year Bazooka, she was bitter about how tall the guys have become.
** Patrick goes so far to even celebrate the fact that Alice is shorter than him, and being rather antagonistic towards the rather tall Yamamoto. So antagonistic that he only forgave Yamamoto when Yamamoto himself said that [[RealMenWearPink he thinks Hello Kitty is cool]].



* StarCrossedLovers: Anyone/Brighteye. ''Really.'' Considering that the Brighteye members are actually full of half dead people who will eventually die after completing their trial, it's to be expected. Even Bill discourages this, since emotions in a new universe will only make the process of sending that Brighteye to heaven a lot more difficult for everyone.

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* StarCrossedLovers: Anyone/Brighteye.Anyone who romanced with a Brighteye. ''Really.'' Considering that the Brighteye members are actually full of half dead people who will eventually die after completing their trial, it's to be expected. Even Bill discourages this, since emotions in a new universe will only make the process of sending that Brighteye to heaven a lot more difficult for everyone.



* TwoGirlsToATeam: The Vongola has Chrome(sometimes) and Alice.

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* TwoGirlsToATeam: The Vongola has Chrome(sometimes) Chrome (sometimes) and Alice.Alice as the female members of the tenth generation.



* UnresolvedSexualTension: [[spoiler: Hibari]] and Alice's interactions with each other are very obvious, and it doesn't help that Alice is [[OblivioustoLove Oblivious to Love]] or that [[spoiler:Hibari is [[MarriedToTheJob Married to his School]] either.]][[spoiler: It gets resolved in the end, and the two becomes [[OfficialCouple a couple.]] ]]

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* UnresolvedSexualTension: [[spoiler: Hibari]] and Alice's interactions with each other are very obvious, and it doesn't help that Alice is [[OblivioustoLove Oblivious to Love]] or that [[spoiler:Hibari is [[MarriedToTheJob Married to his School]] either.]][[spoiler: It gets resolved in the end, and the two becomes [[OfficialCouple a couple.]] couple]] when they reunite in the afterlife.]]
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* Rule63: In a Extra, Reborn obtains the 'Gender-Swapping Bullet', and proceeds to use it on [[CuteClumsyGirl Tsuna]], [[MsFanservice Gokudera]], [[{{Bishonen}} Alice]], [[AloofDarkHairedGirl Hibari]], and [[BrainlessBeauty Yamamoto.]] Needless to say, Reborn had gained a lot of blackmailing material that day.

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* Rule63: In a Extra, Reborn obtains the 'Gender-Swapping Bullet', and proceeds to use it on [[CuteClumsyGirl Tsuna]], [[MsFanservice Gokudera]], [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy Alice]], [[AloofDarkHairedGirl Hibari]], and [[BrainlessBeauty Yamamoto.]] Needless to say, Reborn had gained a lot of blackmailing material that day.
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** Patrick however, Fits this trope [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven.]] Going so far to even celebrate the fact that Alice is shorter than him, and being rather antagonistic towards the rather tall Yamamoto. So antagonistic that he only forgave Yamamoto when Yamamoto himself said that [[RealMenWearPink he thinks Hello Kitty is cool]].

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** Patrick however, Fits this trope [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven.]] Going goes so far to even celebrate the fact that Alice is shorter than him, and being rather antagonistic towards the rather tall Yamamoto. So antagonistic that he only forgave Yamamoto when Yamamoto himself said that [[RealMenWearPink he thinks Hello Kitty is cool]].
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* PairTheSpares: [[spoiler: As Hibari and Alice finally get together, Tsuna ends up with Kyoko which isn’t too strange considering his puppy crush on her, though it ''is'' strange once it’s revealed that future Tsuna loved Alice to the point that he regarded her as TheLostLenore, there were also no buildup between Tsuna and Kyoko that indicates them having deep feelings for each other and it’s made clear when they only got together after Alice’s death, which still holds a big impact on Tsuna. Overall, it’s a pretty pitiful arrangement.]]

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* PairTheSpares: [[spoiler: As Hibari and Alice finally get together, Tsuna ends up with Kyoko which isn’t too strange considering his puppy crush on her, though it ''is'' strange once it’s revealed that future Tsuna loved Alice to the point that he regarded regards her as TheLostLenore, there were also no buildup love lost between Tsuna and Kyoko that indicates them having deep feelings for each other and it’s made clear when they only got get together after Alice’s death, death which still holds a big impact on Tsuna. Overall, it’s a pretty very pitiful arrangement.arrangement that makes Kyoko look like the rebound for Tsuna.]]
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* PairTheSpares: [[spoiler: As Hibari and Alice finally get together, Tsuna ends up with Kyoko which isn’t all that strange considering his puppy crush on her, though it ''is'' strange once it’s found out that future Tsuna seems to love Alice more, there were also no moments between Tsuna and Kyoko in this work that indicates them having genuine feelings for each other and it’s made clear when they only got together after Alice’s death. Overall, it seems like a pretty pitiful arrangement.]]

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* PairTheSpares: [[spoiler: As Hibari and Alice finally get together, Tsuna ends up with Kyoko which isn’t all that too strange considering his puppy crush on her, though it ''is'' strange once it’s found out revealed that future Tsuna seems to love loved Alice more, to the point that he regarded her as TheLostLenore, there were also no moments buildup between Tsuna and Kyoko in this work that indicates them having genuine deep feelings for each other and it’s made clear when they only got together after Alice’s death. death, which still holds a big impact on Tsuna. Overall, it seems like it’s a pretty pitiful arrangement.]]
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* PairTheSpares: [[spoiler: As Hibari and Alice finally get together, Tsuna ends up with Kyoko which isn’t all that strange considering his puppy crush on her, though it ''is'' strange once it’s found out that future Tsuna seems to love Alice more, there were also no moments between Tsuna and Kyoko in this work that indicates them having genuine feelings for each other and it’s made clear when they only got together after Alice’s death. Overall, it seems like a pretty pitiful arrangement.]]
** [[spoiler: it is implied that Yamamoto and Haru get together as well. How? We really don’t know.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6458280/1/My-Heavenly-Judgement My Heavenly Judgement]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2020316/colbub Colbub]] is a complete fanfiction that follows the adventure of a girl named Alice, who leads an non-eventful life in our world, she even has gray hair and gray eyes to match her nearly invisible existence. Everything in her life was practically boring and uneventful until the day she passed away in a car accident, after some heartfelt goodbyes with her family, she was soon sent to the fictional world of Manga/KatekyoHitmanReborn in order to pass her judgement and move on to heaven, so she could meet with her family once again. Her one priority is to not get attached to anyone, for it will make it hard for her to pass her judgement and pass on to heaven. The story is somewhat AU and is extremely OC-centric but is very well-written and delves in deeper to the other characters' pasts and thoughts.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6458280/1/My-Heavenly-Judgement My Heavenly Judgement]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2020316/colbub Colbub]] is a complete fanfiction that follows the adventure of a girl named Alice, who leads an non-eventful life in our world, she even has gray hair and gray eyes to match her nearly invisible existence. Everything in her life was practically boring and uneventful until the day she passed away in a car accident, after some heartfelt goodbyes with her family, she was soon sent to the fictional world of Manga/KatekyoHitmanReborn Manga/Reborn2004 in order to pass her judgement and move on to heaven, so she could meet with her family once again. Her one priority is to not get attached to anyone, for it will make it hard for her to pass her judgement and pass on to heaven. The story is somewhat AU and is extremely OC-centric but is very well-written and delves in deeper to the other characters' pasts and thoughts.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Alice is practical in every sense of the word, and prefers to do things with minimal effort to the point that she finds makeup and girly clothing a hassle. Yet she enjoys reading bad romance novels and is secretly a sentimental romantic at heart.

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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Alice is practical in every sense of the word, and prefers to do things with minimal effort to the point that she finds makeup and girly clothing a hassle. Yet she enjoys reading bad romance novels and novels, is secretly a sentimental romantic at heart. heart, and loves cute things etc.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Alice is practical in every sense of the word, and prefers to do things with minimal effort to the point that she finds makeup and girly clothing a hassle. Yet she enjoys reading bad romance novels and is secretly a sentimental romantic at heart.
** on a bittersweet note, she even mentions that if she hadn’t died early, her greatest dream would be to fall in love and start a family which shows that she’s surprisingly [[TeamMom maternal]].
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* IAmNotPretty: it’s been heavily implied throughout the story that Alice doesn’t see herself as anywhere close to attractive, yet there are times where SheCleansUpNicely and [[WhenSheSmiles genuinely smiles]] that indicates that if she just put some effort into looking nice, she’s actually really pretty.

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* IAmNotPretty: it’s been heavily implied throughout the story that Alice doesn’t see herself as anywhere close to attractive, yet there are times where moments when SheCleansUpNicely and [[WhenSheSmiles genuinely smiles]] that indicates indicate that if she just put some effort into looking nice, she’s actually [[BeautifulAllAlong really pretty.pretty]].
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* IAmNotPretty: it’s been heavily implied throughout the story that Alice doesn’t see herself as anywhere close to attractive, yet there are times where SheCleansUpNicely and [[WhenSheSmiles genuinely smiles]] that indicates that if she just put some effort into looking nice, she’s actually really pretty.
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* AlwaysSecondBest: Some insight into Alice’s relationship with Amanda reveals that she always felt inferior to Amanda, but unlike most examples Alice seems to be fine with that.
** [[spoiler: This can also apply to Amanda though there wasn’t any specifications as to why is unknown, but Amanda does admit to Alice that she is actually jealous of Alice’s life]]
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* DesignatedParents: Downplayed. Even though Tsuna is the boss he plays the role of TheHeart for the group and often cares about the others’ welfare more, making him the TeamMom. And then, there’s Alice, while she does somewhat care about the wellbeing of others she is more about discipline as seen with how she tries to constantly keep the guardians in line, which makes her the TeamDad.
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* OneOfTheGuys: Downplayed. Alice majorly hangs out with Tsuna and his guardians and it's discussed that she acts tomboyish enough to fit the bill. Alice is also friends with Kyoko, Haru, Hana and Chrome.
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** Patrick however, Fits this trope [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven.]] Going so far to even celebrate the fact that Alice is shorter than him, and being rather antagonistic towards the rather tall Yamamoto.

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** Patrick however, Fits this trope [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven.]] Going so far to even celebrate the fact that Alice is shorter than him, and being rather antagonistic towards the rather tall Yamamoto. So antagonistic that he only forgave Yamamoto when Yamamoto himself said that [[RealMenWearPink he thinks Hello Kitty is cool]].



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* OriginalCharacterOriginalCharacter: Alice along with many of the Brighteye's.
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**Alice pretty much jumps at the chance whenever she can to subtly hint Hana and Ryohei's future relationship, questionable whether she just teases them for her own amusement or if she's actually rooting for them.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6458280/1/My-Heavenly-Judgement My Heavenly Judgement]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2020316/colbub Colbub]] is a complete fanfiction that follows the adventure of a girl named Alice, who leads an non-eventful life in our world, she even has gray hair and gray eyes to match her nearly invisible existence. Everything in her life was practically boring and uneventful until the day she passed away in a car accident, after some heartfelt goodbyes with her family, she was soon sent to the fictional world of KatekyoHitmanReborn! in order to pass her judgement and move on to heaven, so she could meet with her family once again. Her one priority is to not get attached to anyone, for it will make it hard for her to pass her judgement and pass on to heaven. The story is somewhat AU and is extremely OC-centric but is very well-written and delves in deeper to the other characters' pasts and thoughts.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6458280/1/My-Heavenly-Judgement My Heavenly Judgement]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2020316/colbub Colbub]] is a complete fanfiction that follows the adventure of a girl named Alice, who leads an non-eventful life in our world, she even has gray hair and gray eyes to match her nearly invisible existence. Everything in her life was practically boring and uneventful until the day she passed away in a car accident, after some heartfelt goodbyes with her family, she was soon sent to the fictional world of KatekyoHitmanReborn! Manga/KatekyoHitmanReborn in order to pass her judgement and move on to heaven, so she could meet with her family once again. Her one priority is to not get attached to anyone, for it will make it hard for her to pass her judgement and pass on to heaven. The story is somewhat AU and is extremely OC-centric but is very well-written and delves in deeper to the other characters' pasts and thoughts.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Kind of the whole point of this fic is to also give other characters (besides the main characters) some personal screen time and a more fleshed out backstory. Such as exploring more into the most notably Nana, Lambo, and Mukuro's pasts, and how their relationships with the other characters drive their motivation for becoming the kind of person they are. [[spoiler: Also, Hibari as well, who eventually allows himself to be vulnerable when he needs to be and acknowledge the Vongola family as an ally, thanks to Alice's friendship and eventual love.]]
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: A Brighteye reincarnated to another world will die at the same age they first died. Given that Alice originally died at the age of sixteen, she dies faster than the other Brighteye's. [[spoiler:And due to using up her flames to help calm Hibari down when he fights Zhang, Alice has only one week left to live after that]].

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* YourDaysAreNumbered: A Brighteye reincarnated to another world will die at the same age they first died. Given that Alice originally died at the age of sixteen, she dies faster than the other Brighteye's. [[spoiler:And due to using up her flames to help calm Hibari down when he fights Zhang, Alice has only one week ten days left to live after that]].
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* YouAreNumberSix: Alice is called Number 50 in the Brighteye Organization.

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* YouAreNumberSix: Alice is called Number 50 in the Brighteye Organization.Organization.
* YourDaysAreNumbered: A Brighteye reincarnated to another world will die at the same age they first died. Given that Alice originally died at the age of sixteen, she dies faster than the other Brighteye's. [[spoiler:And due to using up her flames to help calm Hibari down when he fights Zhang, Alice has only one week left to live after that]].
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* FanPreferredCouple: Needless, to say Shipping truly is a Serious Thing, sometimes. To start it off, The Author [[WordOfGod Colbub]] created a poll about who should become Alice's canon love interest, and that alone created a lot of [[ShipToShipCombat arguments]] among the fandom.
** Yamamoto was actually a close contender and was ranked just after the two more popular love interests. Which lead to a moderate amount of [[ShipSinking Ship Sinking.]]
** Hoo Boy.[[spoiler: Now, there was a vast majority (roughly ''half'' of the readers) who genuinely believed that Tsuna should've been the canon love interest instead of Hibari. Mainly because of the controversy that revolves around Kyoko and Haru, being the [[SatelliteLoveInterest Satellite Love Interests]] for Tsuna and fitting more into being a stereotypical Damsel In Distresses in comparison to Alice, who actually bonded and forged one of the most beautiful friendships with. There is also another side to the argument, saying that Alice wouldn't even have met Hibari if it wasn't for Tsuna. A lot of the readers also think that Tsuna and Alice had this kind of [[OppositesAttract 'Opposites Attract']] kind of dynamics going on between them and found that to be more enjoyable to see. In comparison to the dynamics of Hibari and Alice, whom both practically projects a similar 'aloof aura'.]]
** [[spoiler: However, the other half is entirely happy when Hibari won the poll. The arguments for Hibari is that Hibari will never see Alice as a liability, but as his equal partner. In comparison to Tsuna's constant habit of believing [[AlwaysSaveTheGirl that girls need to be protected at all times.]] Throughout the story, we also see that Hibari and Alice share similar interests (such as sleeping on the school roof and reading the same romance novel) and many similarities with each other. Alice is also the only person (besides Kusakabe) that truly understand Hibari without him having to say a single thing.]]
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* CelibateHero: There's a good reason why Alice avoids getting too ''close'' to anyone who might catch her romantic interest or just someone she deeply cares for in general.
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* ShipperOnDeck: [[spoiler: In the TYL! Arc, it is heavily implied that Kusakabe wants Alice and Hibari to stop beating around the bush and realize their feelings for each other. Ryohei even tries to get Hibari to interact with Alice more before she's completely gone.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Alice actually had two younger siblings back when she was alive in her universe and needless to say, she is dearly missed by both of them. Lambo and Alice eventually become close enough that [[spoiler: Lambo believed that it was his fault that Alice died.]] She gets along with all the younger characters in general however.
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* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: Alice tries to pull this on [[spoiler: TYL!Hibari when she found out that he ''loved her'' of all people, He still ended up loving her anyway no matter how painful it was, even when they both knew of her eventual fate.]]

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* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: Alice tries to pull this on [[spoiler: TYL!Hibari when she found out that he ''loved her'' of all people, He still people by avoiding present Hibari and acting a bit more cold in their interactions, it didn't work and Hibari ended up loving liking her anyway no matter how painful it was, even anyway. Even when they both he knew of her eventual fate.death was inevitable.]]
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** There's also [[spoiler: Wend, who is immortal and extremely vengeful, to the point where he and Mukuro aren't any different in that particular aspect. However, in his letter exchanges with Alice, he reveals his past to her rather easily and the letters have a more friendly vibe to it.]]

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** There's also [[spoiler: Wend, who is immortal and extremely vengeful, to the point where he and Mukuro aren't any different in that particular aspect. However, aspect, is just an extremely misguided soul and is eventually given a second chance. Also in his letter exchanges with Alice, he reveals his past to her rather easily and the letters have a more friendly vibe to it.it to the point that they both sometimes exchange gifts to one another.]]

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