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* {{WAFF}}: One of the major features of the Twilight/Trixie chapters.
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* MoodWhiplash: Most of Chapter 6 is a giant SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}} covering Trixie's first Hearth's Warming with Twilight's family. Then at the end of the chapter, [[spoiler: she receives Nightmare Moon's helmet from the original timeline]].
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* MoodWhiplash: Most of Chapter 6 is a giant SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}} heartwarming moment covering Trixie's first Hearth's Warming with Twilight's family. Then at the end of the chapter, [[spoiler: she receives Nightmare Moon's helmet from the original timeline]].
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No longer to be used as a trope. And Indentation and no redirecting to other parts of the page or potholing tropes in lists.
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* {{Badass}}: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star as a hardened warmage...
** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd.
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd.
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
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* {{Badass}}: BadassBookworm: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] [[spoiler:Lady]] Blue Star as a hardened warmage...
** BadassBookworm: ...warmage is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd.
*** BadassDamsel: ...butnerd. It then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.fight.
** BadassBookworm: ...
*** BadassDamsel: ...but
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* [[CourtroomEpisode Courtroom Chapter]]: In Chapter 10, Blue Star has to convince Equestria's Royal Court that her reforms are, despite Lady Blueblood's claims, actually beneficial to Equestria.
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* [[CourtroomEpisode Courtroom Chapter]]: ChristmasEpisode : Chapter 6 covers Trixie's first Hearth's Warming with Twilight's family.
* CourtroomEpisode: In Chapter 10, Blue Star has to convince Equestria's Royal Court that her reforms are, despite Lady Blueblood's claims, actually beneficial to Equestria.
* CourtroomEpisode: In Chapter 10, Blue Star has to convince Equestria's Royal Court that her reforms are, despite Lady Blueblood's claims, actually beneficial to Equestria.
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* [[ChristmasEpisode Hearth's Warming Episode]]: Chapter 6 covers Trixie's first Hearth's Warming with Twilight's family.
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MeanwhileInTheFuture, Twilight Sparkle discovers a prophecy which talks about the imminent return of a malevolent entity called [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Darklight]] [[OhCrap Star]], who fought the two Princesses a thousand years ago before getting imprisoned in the North Star.
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MeanwhileInTheFuture, Twilight Sparkle discovers a prophecy which talks about the imminent return of a malevolent entity called [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Darklight]] [[OhCrap Darklight Star]], who fought the two Princesses a thousand years ago before getting imprisoned in the North Star.
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* [[Badass]]: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star as a hardened warmage...
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* [[Badass]]: {{Badass}}: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star as a hardened warmage...
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* Badass: [[Badass]]: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star as a hardened warmage...
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* Badass: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star as a hardened warmage...
** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a completenerd.nerd.
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of September '''2016'''.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of September '''2016'''.June '''2019'''.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Lady Blueblood, who makes her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver descendent from the original timeline]] look like a saint in comparison. When Blue Star is first appointed to Celestia's court, Blueblood attempts to take advantage of their similar-sounding names by claiming they're related. Once Blue Star makes clear that the two of them have ''very'' different priorities, Blueblood [[spoiler: actively attempts to use the Royal Court to put an end to the changes Blue Star is trying to bring about to Equestria]].
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Lady Blueblood, who makes her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver descendent descendant from the original timeline]] look like a saint in comparison. When Blue Star is first appointed to Celestia's court, Blueblood attempts to take advantage of their similar-sounding names by claiming they're related. Once Blue Star makes clear that the two of them have ''very'' different priorities, Blueblood [[spoiler: actively attempts to use the Royal Court to put an end to the changes Blue Star is trying to bring about to Equestria]].
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* DoomedByCanon: In the prologue, we see Twilight reading a prophecy much like [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon the one from the show's pilot]]. At the end of the prologue, we see a note from ''another'' Twilight Sparkle, saying that she did the best she could to improve things, and she hopes the Princesses will forgive her one day. And finally, in Chapter 1, the Twilight from the canon timeline gets TrappedInThePast and adopts the name Blue Star. It's not hard to figure out where things are going from there.
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* ForegoneConclusion: In the prologue, we see Twilight reading a prophecy much like [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon the one from the show's pilot]]. At the end of the prologue, we see a note from ''another'' Twilight Sparkle, saying that she did the best she could to improve things, and she hopes the Princesses will forgive her one day. And finally, in Chapter 1, the Twilight from the canon timeline gets TrappedInThePast and adopts the name Blue Star. It's not hard to figure out where things are going from there.
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* MoodWhiplash: Most of Chapter 6 is a giant HeartwarmingMoment covering Trixie's first Hearth's Warming with Twilight's family. Then at the end of the chapter, [[spoiler: she recieves Nightmare Moon's helmet from the original timeline]].
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* MoodWhiplash: Most of Chapter 6 is a giant HeartwarmingMoment SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}} covering Trixie's first Hearth's Warming with Twilight's family. Then at the end of the chapter, [[spoiler: she recieves receives Nightmare Moon's helmet from the original timeline]].
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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[ComicBook/WatchMen Manehattan]] / [[StarCraft Protoss Archon]] / [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] [[SuperMode mode]].
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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[ComicBook/WatchMen Manehattan]] / [[StarCraft [[VideoGame/StarCraft Protoss Archon]] / [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] [[SuperMode mode]].
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Removed per TRS.
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* BadAss: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star...
** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd.
** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd.
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* BadAss: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star...
**BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd.
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* WordOfGod: Confirmed the branch timeline conventions explained in [[http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/3104/brianexplainsafimfic.gif this GIF]] are in effect.
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* WordOfGod: Confirmed the branch timeline conventions explained in [[http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/3104/brianexplainsafimfic.gif this GIF]] are model is in effect.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of October '''2015'''.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of October '''2015'''.September '''2016'''.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of Christmas '''2014'''.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of Christmas '''2014'''.October '''2015'''.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of Christmas '''2013'''.'''2014'''.
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* FanNickname: In order to differentiate the original Twilight that time traveled from the one in the new timeline, the readerbase occasionally refers to Original Twilight/Blue Star as Bluelight, [=TwiBlue=], or some other merging of the names depending on the commenter.
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* FanNickname: In order to differentiate the original Twilight that time traveled from the one in the new timeline, the readerbase occasionally refers to Original Twilight/Blue Star as Bluelight, [=TwiBlue=], or some other merging of the names depending on the commenter.Bluelight.
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* GambitPileup: The story seems to be heading in this direction, with [[spoiler:Celestia manipulating events to create the perfect bearers for the Elements of Harmony, herself being unknowingly manipulated by Luna to that very same effect, and the [[AncientConspiracy Order of Stars]] having its own, yet unspecified, agenda.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:It is heavily implied by her surviving notes, that Twilight took the Nightmare into herself to prevent it corrupting Luna.]]
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** BitchInSheepsClothing: Lady Blueblood, who makes her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver descendent from the original timeline]] look like a saint in comparison. When Blue Star is first appointed to Celestia's court, Blueblood attempts to take advantage of their similar-sounding names by claiming they're related. Once Blue Star makes clear that the two of them have ''very'' different priorities, Blueblood [[spoiler: actively attempts to use the Royal Court to put an end to the changes Blue Star is trying to bring about to Equestria]].
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** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd...
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Lady Blueblood, who makes her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver descendent from the original timeline]] look like a saint in comparison. When Blue Star is first appointed to Celestia's court, Blueblood attempts to take advantage of their similar-sounding names by claiming they're related. Once Blue Star makes clear that the two of them have ''very'' different priorities, Blueblood [[spoiler: actively attempts to use the Royal Court to put an end to the changes Blue Star is trying to bring about to Equestria]].
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Lady Blueblood, who makes her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver descendent from the original timeline]] look like a saint in comparison. When Blue Star is first appointed to Celestia's court, Blueblood attempts to take advantage of their similar-sounding names by claiming they're related. Once Blue Star makes clear that the two of them have ''very'' different priorities, Blueblood [[spoiler: actively attempts to use the Royal Court to put an end to the changes Blue Star is trying to bring about to Equestria]].
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** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd...
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
*nerd.
** BitchInSheepsClothing: Lady Blueblood, who makes her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver descendent from the original timeline]] look like a saint in comparison. When Blue Star is first appointed to Celestia's court, Blueblood attempts to take advantage of their similar-sounding names by claiming they're related. Once Blue Star makes clear that the two of them have ''very'' different priorities, Blueblood [[spoiler: actively attempts to use the Royal Court to put an end to the changes Blue Star is trying to bring about to Equestria]].
*** BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight. See MuggingTheMonster below.
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** BitchInSheepsClothing: Lady Blueblood, who makes her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver descendent from the original timeline]] look like a saint in comparison. When Blue Star is first appointed to Celestia's court, Blueblood attempts to take advantage of their similar-sounding names by claiming they're related. Once Blue Star makes clear that the two of them have ''very'' different priorities, Blueblood [[spoiler: actively attempts to use the Royal Court to put an end to the changes Blue Star is trying to bring about to Equestria]].
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of November 2013.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of November 2013.Christmas '''2013'''.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of September November 2013.
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Keeping the historical records clear of errors. ;p
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is '''still unfinished''' as of August September 2013.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is still '''less than half finished''' as of July 6, 2013.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2012 was over... it is still '''less than half finished''' '''still unfinished''' as of July 6, August 2013.
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* ScheduleSlip: Chapter 11 was scheduled to be published after Christmas 2013 was over... it is still '''less than half finished''' as of July 6, 2013.
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