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* YouWakeUpOnABeach: Applejack starts the story by waking up the beach edge of the island:
--> Applejack slowly regained consciousness to find herself laying flat on her belly with a dull ache permeating her head. The farmpony groaned as she rubbed at her temples, noting with great relief that her hat was still safely located in its rightful position atop her mane. As she massaged the pain to a more manageable level, she began to take stock of her surroundings. She was laying in something coarse and fine—sand, from what she could tell—and she could hear the sound of waves nearby. She was obviously on a beach then,
--> Applejack slowly regained consciousness to find herself laying flat on her belly with a dull ache permeating her head. The farmpony groaned as she rubbed at her temples, noting with great relief that her hat was still safely located in its rightful position atop her mane. As she massaged the pain to a more manageable level, she began to take stock of her surroundings. She was laying in something coarse and fine—sand, from what she could tell—and she could hear the sound of waves nearby. She was obviously on a beach then,
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* AprilFoolsDay: The special April Fools' chapter had it turn out that the island was actually Syndrome's IslandBase from WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles, with Applejack meeting up with the family and fighting off Syndrome's soldiers. And then [[Literature/TheDresdenFiles Harry Dresden]] shows up.
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* AprilFoolsDay: The special April Fools' chapter had it turn out that the island was actually Syndrome's IslandBase from WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles, Franchise/TheIncredibles, with Applejack meeting up with the family and fighting off Syndrome's soldiers. And then [[Literature/TheDresdenFiles Harry Dresden]] shows up.
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* CaptainErsatz: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.
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* CaptainErsatz: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation.Website/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/71501/mother-of-invention Mother Of Invention]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/zaponator zaponator]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/71501/mother-of-invention Mother Of of Invention]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/zaponator zaponator]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/71501/mother-of-invention Mother Of Invention]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/zaponator zaponator]].
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* CaptainErsatz: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.* CatapultNightmare: Happens with Applejack's first nightmare.
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* CaptainErsatz: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.logs.
* CatapultNightmare: Happens with Applejack's first nightmare.
* CatapultNightmare: Happens with Applejack's first nightmare.
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* ApocalypticLog: The magical book Applejack finds turns out to be this.
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* CatapultNightmare: Happens with Applejack's first nightmare.
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* BlackOutBasement: The underground facility, as a circuit breaker has been tripped.
* CaptainErsatz: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.* CatapultNightmare: Happens with Applejack's firstnightmare.nightmare.
* ClosedCircle: An island is of course already this for an earth pony with no access to pegasus flight or unicorn teleportation. But when Applejack tries to escape on a raft, she find the situation is actually even worse.
* CaptainErsatz: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.* CatapultNightmare: Happens with Applejack's first
* ClosedCircle: An island is of course already this for an earth pony with no access to pegasus flight or unicorn teleportation. But when Applejack tries to escape on a raft, she find the situation is actually even worse.
* DeusExMachina: At first, Applejack has hope that Twilight Sparkle or princess Celestia will magically rescue her. [[spoiler:After Applejack finally disables the Faraday Protocol, this is exactly what happens.]]
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* CaptainErsatz: The EatenAlive: Happened to an unnamed pony during an experiment with parasprites. After reading this, Applejack understandably concludes that the Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred has gone from morally ambiguous to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.completely evil.
* HeelRealization: Eventually happened to the unknown scientist that wrote the book Applejack finds.
* TeleportInterdiction: [[spoiler:The "Faraday Protocol", which prevents magically scanning or teleporting to or from the island. It's powerful enough to even block Luna's DreamWalker power.]]
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Appplejack appears to be suffering from this, since she has no memory of how she came to be on the island.
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Appplejack appears to be suffering from this, since she has no memory of how she came to be on the island. [[spoiler:She eventually remembers exactly what happened.]]
* WeakenedByTheLight: The monster that stalks Applejack never appears during the day, from which she deduces it cannot stand bright light. [[spoiler:She is exactly right.]]
* WeatherControlMachine: [[spoiler:Eventually revealed to be the cause of the unnatural storm that caused the accident that left Applejack stranded.]]
* WeakenedByTheLight: The monster that stalks Applejack never appears during the day, from which she deduces it cannot stand bright light. [[spoiler:She is exactly right.]]
* WeatherControlMachine: [[spoiler:Eventually revealed to be the cause of the unnatural storm that caused the accident that left Applejack stranded.]]
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/71501/mother-of-invention Mother Of Invention]]is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/zaponator zaponator]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/71501/mother-of-invention Mother Of Invention]]is Invention]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/zaponator zaponator]].
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** Happens again when AJ gets injured - she calculates that about two weeks passed but she only remembers bits and pieces.
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** Happens again when AJ gets injured - -- she calculates that about two weeks passed but she only remembers bits and pieces.
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Appplejack appears to be suffering from this - since she has no memory of how she came to be on the island.
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Appplejack appears to be suffering from this - this, since she has no memory of how she came to be on the island.
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Applejack wakes up alone on a DesertedIsland. Without her friends and no idea how she got here, the Element of Honesty has to figure out how to survive until she's rescued - or escapes. That would make the situation grim enough, but there's more to the island than meets the eye—and she might not be alone after all.
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Applejack wakes up alone on a DesertedIsland. Without her friends and no idea how she got here, the Element of Honesty has to figure out how to survive until she's rescued - -- or escapes. That would make the situation grim enough, but there's more to the island than meets the eye—and eye -- and she might not be alone after all.
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That's a simple translation of a grammatically correct Latin phrase, not something only known for certain because the author confirmed it.
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* ArcWords: "NEC DI NEC DOMINI" ([[WordOfGod translation: "No Gods, No Masters"]]), which has turned up on every structure Applejack has found on the island.
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* ArcWords: "NEC DI NEC DOMINI" ([[WordOfGod ([[BilingualBonus translation: "No Gods, No Masters"]]), which has turned up on every structure Applejack has found on the island.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Applejack may be safe, but]] there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Applejack may be safe, but]] there's There's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.
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* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.]]
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* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.]]
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Applejack may be safe, but but]] there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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The fact that the island has a secret is not a spoiler, but the exact nature of that secret (as well as AJ's ultimate fate) *is* very much a spoiler. The information hidden behind the spoiler tags is not revealed until very late in the fic. They're spoilers.
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* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.]]
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* SequelHook: Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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removing spoiler tags. The fact that the mysteious island actaully has something mysterious on it is not a spoiler.
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* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler:The The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.]]
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Applejack Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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Why were those spoiler tags removed? Those examples are most definitely spoilers.
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* CaptainErsatz: The [[spoiler:The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.]]
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* SequelHook: Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.
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* SequelHook: Applejack [[spoiler:Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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Applejack wakes up alone on a DesertedIsland. Without her friends and no idea how she got here, the Element of Honesty has to figure out how to survive until she's rescued - or escapes.
escapes. That would make the situation grim enough, but there's more to the island than meets the eye—and she might not be alone after all.
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* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler: The Daedalus Foundation is directly inspired by the Wiki/SCPFoundation. D-class personnel are referred to by that exact term. The Alpha, Gamma, and Omega classifications are a perfect match for SCP's Safe, Euclid, and Keter classifications. And the experiment logs we see are written in the same detached and clinical style as actual SCP experiment logs.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: Applejack's parents are gone. While they're a very painful subject that AJ does her best to not think about, her thoughts can't help but stray to them during her brushes with death. While Applejack's mother did indeed die while giving birth to Applebloom, the fic plays this trope a little differently than is usual for Applejack fics by [[spoiler: [[DisappearedDad having her father be]] ''[[DisappearedDad missing]]'', rather than explicitly dead.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: Applejack's parents are gone. While they're a very painful subject that AJ does her best to not think about, her thoughts can't help but stray to them during her brushes with death. While Applejack's mother did indeed die while giving birth to Applebloom, the fic plays this trope a little differently than is usual for Applejack fics by [[spoiler: [[DisappearedDad having her father be]] ''[[DisappearedDad missing]]'', rather than explicitly dead.]]
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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* AprilFoolsDay: The special April Fools' chapter had it turn out that the island was actually Syndrome's IslandBase from WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles, with Applejack meeting up with the family and fighting off Syndrome's soldiers. [[spoiler: And then [[Literature/TheDresdenFiles Harry Dresden]] shows up.]]
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* AprilFoolsDay: The special April Fools' chapter had it turn out that the island was actually Syndrome's IslandBase from WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles, with Applejack meeting up with the family and fighting off Syndrome's soldiers. [[spoiler: And then [[Literature/TheDresdenFiles Harry Dresden]] shows up.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: Applejack's parents are gone. While they're a very painful subject that AJ does her best to not think about, her thoughts can't help but stray to them during her brushes with death. [[spoiler: While Applejack's mother did indeed die while giving birth to Applebloom, the fic plays this trope a little differently than is usual for Applejack fics by [[DisappearedDad having her father be]] ''[[DisappearedDad missing]]'', rather than explicitly dead.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: Applejack's parents are gone. While they're a very painful subject that AJ does her best to not think about, her thoughts can't help but stray to them during her brushes with death. [[spoiler: While Applejack's mother did indeed die while giving birth to Applebloom, the fic plays this trope a little differently than is usual for Applejack fics by [[spoiler: [[DisappearedDad having her father be]] ''[[DisappearedDad missing]]'', rather than explicitly dead.]]
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* {{Robinsonade}}: Finding food, water, and shelter make up most of Applejack's struggles so far.
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* {{Robinsonade}}: Finding food, water, and shelter make up most a great deal of Applejack's struggles so far.struggles.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Defied, the destruction of the raft leads Applejack to momentary consider ending it all - but she shakes it off.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Defied, Defied twice. First, the destruction of the raft leads Applejack to momentary momentarily consider ending it all - but she shakes it off.off. Second, she almost considers simply living out her days on the island, but quickly rejects the idea upon realizing that not trying to escape is simply suicide in another form.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Applejack may be safe, but there's no telling what secrets still sleep within the ruins of the Daedalus foundation. It's not hard to imagine Princess Celestia launching a formal investigation of the island and its underground laboratories.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: Applejack's parents are gone. While they're a very painful subject that AJ does her best to not think about, her thoughts can't help but stray to them during her brushes with death. [[spoiler: While Applejack's mother did indeed die while giving birth to Applebloom, the fic plays this trope a little differently than is usual for Applejack fics by [[DisappearedDad having her father be]] ''[[[[DisappearedDad missing]]'', rather than explicitly dead.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: Applejack's parents are gone. While they're a very painful subject that AJ does her best to not think about, her thoughts can't help but stray to them during her brushes with death. [[spoiler: While Applejack's mother did indeed die while giving birth to Applebloom, the fic plays this trope a little differently than is usual for Applejack fics by [[DisappearedDad having her father be]] ''[[[[DisappearedDad ''[[DisappearedDad missing]]'', rather than explicitly dead.]]
