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* AdaptationalVillainy: Downplayed. Harry isn't an outright villain, but she certainly does some rather... disturbing things.
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** The Dursleys were never good people to begin with, but in this fic they are FAR worse.
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* BecomingTheMask: Harry originally puts up the façade of being a "good girl", seeing her friends only as potential allies and having aspirations of being a bad girl. However, as the years pass, she does become a warmer and kinder person who genuinely cares about her friends and relationships (though she still has no qualms about her more morally dubious actions).
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* BecomingTheMask: Harry originally puts up the façade of being a "good girl", seeing her friends only as potential allies and having aspirations of being a bad girl.the next great Dark Witch. However, as the years pass, she does become a warmer and kinder person who genuinely cares about her friends and relationships (though she still has no qualms about her more morally dubious actions).
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Moratorium sacrifices himself to allow Tom to become the new anchor for the Horcruxes instead of Voldemort to stop himself from causing a SplitPersonalityTakeover on Harry.]]
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* BecomingTheMask: Harry originally puts up the façade of being a "good girl", seeing her friends only as potential allies and having aspirations of being a bad girl. But once she finds parental figures in Lupin and Sirius and realizes that her friends do genuinely care about her, she openly begins to consider them as friends and regard them with genuine warmth in return.
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* BecomingTheMask: Harry originally puts up the façade of being a "good girl", seeing her friends only as potential allies and having aspirations of being a bad girl. But once However, as the years pass, she finds parental figures in Lupin does become a warmer and Sirius and realizes that kinder person who genuinely cares about her friends do genuinely care and relationships (though she still has no qualms about her, she openly begins to consider them as friends and regard them with genuine warmth in return.her more morally dubious actions).
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* BecomingTheMask: Harry originally puts up the façade of being a "good girl", seeing her friends only as potential allies and having aspirations of being a bad girl. But once she finds parental figures in Lupin and Sirius and realizes that her friends do genuinely care about her, she openly begins to consider them as friends and regard them with genuine warmth in return.
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** Tom Riddle, unwillingly.
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** Tom Riddle, though at first unwillingly.
** The Basilisk.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Downplayed. Harry isn't an outright villain, but she certainly does some rather... disturbing things.
** The Basilisk.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: While most of Tom's objections to Voldemort Pre-HeelFaceTurn are more along the lines of PragmaticVillainy or DoWrongRight, he is genuinely disgusted and horrified to see Voldemort torture one of his own Death Eaters with the Cruciatus Curse at the graveyard after said Death Eater begged for forgiveness.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Tom is utterly ''horrified'' to see what he has become in the future.
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--> '''Harry:''' ''[afterwards]'' I don't see any Death Eaters. Who'd I knock out the window?
--> '''Tom:''' Toad lady from the Ministry.
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* FirstKiss: Harry and Tom have theirs right after [[spoiler: Harry kills Voldemort]].
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* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: Harry insists she and Tom are JustFriends. Hermione's not fooled.
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* StealthParody: Is very likely this towards the "Dark!Harry" and "Girl!Harry" subgenres of fanfic. It ''is'' a Humor fic, after all.
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* {{Badass}}: Harry. She befriends a basilisk, [[spoiler: takes over the Ministry]], and frees herself from a dungeon, all while she's still at school.
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** Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough. She calls him "eye-candy" and she's one of the few people he trusts enough to tell about his past. They eventually end up together.
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** Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough.years). She calls him "eye-candy" and she's one of the few people he trusts enough to tell about his past. They eventually end up together.
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--> '''Harry:''' Oh, Oh. She's an idiot. I don't mind taking out an idiot.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: It happens off-screen, sadly, but Draco calls Lucius out when the latter objects to him marrying Hermione.
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** Draco and Hermione. Despite their different personalities and opinions, they have a lot in common. And Hermione blushes when Draco calls her a "young woman". [[spoiler: They also end up together]].
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** Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough. She calls him "eye-candy" and she's one of the few people he trusts enough to tell about his past. [[spoiler: They eventually end up together]].
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Voldemort and the Dursleys are dead; magical creatures are accepted into Wizarding society; the twins set up a joke shop and Sirius helps out part-time; Remus marries Tonks and becomes an Auror; Dumbledore retires and Neville becomes Headmaster; Luna becomes Transfiguration teacher and marries Neville; Snape stays at Hogwarts; Hermione and Draco get married; Harry and Tom get married and [[spoiler: find a portal to another world]].
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* FriendToAllLivingThings [=/=] FluffyTamer: Harry's pets include a Basilisk, a Hippogriff, and a Cerberus pup. Tom even calls her an animal-lover.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings FirstKiss: Harry and Tom have theirs right after [[spoiler: Harry kills Voldemort]].
* FluffyTamer [=/=]FluffyTamer: FriendToAllLivingThings: Harry's pets include a Basilisk, a Hippogriff, and a Cerberus pup. Tom even calls her an animal-lover.animal-lover.
* GroinAttack: Harry hits Voldemort with a ''Diffindo'' in a very painful place. Ouch.
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* {{Badass}}: Harry. She befriends a basilisk, [[spoiler: takes over the Ministry]], and frees herself from a dungeon, all while she's still at school.
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* BigDamnHeroes: L and Dagonet when they rescue Harry.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: We don't know much about them, but they can turn any other magical creature into a vampire (though very few survive). and a wizard turned into a vampire can still use magic.
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* InsistentTerminology: Harry doesn't have friends, she has ''alliances''.
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** And Voldemort is now known as "Voldewhore".
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* TheReveal: Moratorium [[spoiler: isn't a split personality. He's Voldemort's accidental Horcrux]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: Hermione for Harry and Tom and Tom for Hermione and Draco.
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** Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough. She calls him "eye-candy" and she's one of the few people he trusts enough to tell about his past. [[spoiler: They eventually end uptogether]].together]].
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* DestinationDefenestration: Dolores Umbridge gets knocked out a window by Harry, who thought she was a Death Eater. It's a long story.
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--> '''Tom:''' Toad lady from the Ministry.
--> '''Harry:''' Oh, She's an idiot. I don't mind taking out an idiot.
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* RefugeInAudacity: The vast majority of things Harry does. For example, [=McGonagall=] tries to deduct points after she knocked Umbridge out a window. Harry abuses her new status as a prefect to award herself as many points as [=McGonagall=] deducts.
* RefugeInAudacity: The vast majority of things Harry does. For example, [=McGonagall=] tries to deduct points after she knocked Umbridge out a window. Harry abuses her new status as a prefect to award herself as many points as [=McGonagall=] deducts.
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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: After Krum asks Hermione to the ball, Harry gives him this speech.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: It's seven chapters, which might not sound like much, but it's over 225,000 words long.
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* ShipTease: Between Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough.
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* ShipTease: Between Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough. [[spoiler: They eventually end up together]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: Harry and Tom, usually at each other.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Harry comes to the conclusion Professor Quirrell is a pedophile. The truth is something rather different.
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** Tom Riddle and theBasilisk.Basilisk.
** Gilderoy Lockhart gets out of second year with both his memories and reputation intact.
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** Gilderoy Lockhart gets out of second year with both his memories and reputation intact.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9486886/1/Moratorium Moratorium]]'' is an [[AlternateUniverse AU]] ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2697189/Darkpetal16 Darkpetal16]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9486886/1/Moratorium Moratorium]]'' is an [[AlternateUniverse AU]] RuleSixtyThree ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2697189/Darkpetal16 Darkpetal16]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9486886/1/Moratorium Moratorium]]'' is an [[AlternateUniverse AU]] ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2697189/Darkpetal16 Darkpetal16]].
Harriett "Harry" Potter realises from watching her cousin Dudley that good children never win. So, she decides she won't be a good girl any more. With the help of her split personality Moratorium, she sets about taking over the Wizarding world. Now, if only her friends - ''[[InsistentTerminology alliances]]'', damn it! - and a certain diary would stop getting in the way...
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* AbusiveParents: The Dursleys for Harry and the people at the orphanage for Tom.
* AdaptationalHeroism: Tom Riddle, unwillingly.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Harry isn't an outright villain, but she certainly does some rather... disturbing things.
* AntiHero: Harry. Good god, Harry.
* DistractedByTheSexy: All the men (except Tom) when the Veelas appear. Harry has a mild case when she sees the Beauxbatons boys.
* MrFanservice: Harry thinks Tom and the Beauxbatons boys are this.
* OverprotectiveDad: Sirius for Harry, at least where boys are concerned. He gives Ron a "talk" that leaves Ron terrified and threatens to do the same to Draco and Oliver.
* ShipTease: Between Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Tom Riddle and the Basilisk.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Harry and Tom.
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Harriett "Harry" Potter realises from watching her cousin Dudley that good children never win. So, she decides she won't be a good girl any more. With the help of her split personality Moratorium, she sets about taking over the Wizarding world. Now, if only her friends - ''[[InsistentTerminology alliances]]'', damn it! - and a certain diary would stop getting in the way...
! Contains examples of:
* AbusiveParents: The Dursleys for Harry and the people at the orphanage for Tom.
* AdaptationalHeroism: Tom Riddle, unwillingly.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Harry isn't an outright villain, but she certainly does some rather... disturbing things.
* AntiHero: Harry. Good god, Harry.
* DistractedByTheSexy: All the men (except Tom) when the Veelas appear. Harry has a mild case when she sees the Beauxbatons boys.
* MrFanservice: Harry thinks Tom and the Beauxbatons boys are this.
* OverprotectiveDad: Sirius for Harry, at least where boys are concerned. He gives Ron a "talk" that leaves Ron terrified and threatens to do the same to Draco and Oliver.
* ShipTease: Between Harry and Tom. It starts when she's twelve and he's sixteen (give or take fifty years), disturbingly enough.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Tom Riddle and the Basilisk.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Harry and Tom.
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