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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/650053/1/ Mended]]'' by Ilex the Elder is a fanfic based off of the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime. It is themed around the theory that Professor Oak is Ash's father.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/650053/1/ Mended]]'' by Ilex the Elder is a fanfic based off of the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime.''Anime/PokemonTheSeries''. It is themed around the theory that Professor Oak is Ash's father.
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* SleepingWithTheBoss: Delia was working as Oak's assistant when they started their relationship. Delia quit after she ended up pregnant with Ash.
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* SleepingWithTheBoss: Delia was working as Oak's assistant when they started their relationship. Delia quit after she ended up pregnant with Ash.Ash.
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* AncestralName: Ash is named after his father Oak's middle name of "Ashley", which Oak himself had obtained from his grandfather.
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* MayDecemberRomance: There's a several decade age gap between Oak and Delia. Professor Oak has a grandson that's the same age as his son Ash. Thi gap is one reason why the two keep their relationship secret.
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* MayDecemberRomance: There's a several decade age gap between Oak and Delia. Professor Oak has a grandson that's the same age as his son Ash. Thi This gap is one reason why the two keep their relationship secret.
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* MarriedTooYoung: Delia married her husband Will right out of colege after knowing him for barely a month. He dumped her and ran off after his ex-girlfriend asked him to take her back. Delia hasn't heard from Will since.
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* MarriedTooYoung: Delia married her husband Will right out of colege college after knowing him for barely a month. He dumped her and ran off after his ex-girlfriend asked him to take her back. Delia hasn't heard from Will since.
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* TheTalk: It's mentioned that Oak gave Ash "the Talk" at age eleven
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* MistakenForDying: Samuel initially mistakes Delia's MorningSickness for cancer symptoms. His previous wife had just recently died of cancer, so it was on his mind.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/650053/1/ Mended]]'' by Illex the Elder is a fanfic based off of the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime. It is themed around the theory that Professor Oak is Ash's father.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/650053/1/ Mended]]'' by Illex Ilex the Elder is a fanfic based off of the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime. It is themed around the theory that Professor Oak is Ash's father.
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* AgeGapRomance: There's a several decade age gap between Oak and Delia but it's not large enough to be a MayDecemberRomance.
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* MayDecemberRomance: There's a several decade age gap between Oak and Delia. Professor Oak has a grandson that's the same age as his son Ash. Thi gap is one reason why the two keep their relationship secret.
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The story is set in the same continuity as an earlier fanfic, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/468396/1/Torn Torn]]'', which is about how Delia and Professor Oak ended up together.
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* MarriedTooYoung: Delia married her husband Will right out of colege after knowing him for barely a month. He dumped her and ran off after his exe-girlfriend asked him to take her back. Delia hasn't heard from Will since.
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* MarriedTooYoung: Delia married her husband Will right out of colege after knowing him for barely a month. He dumped her and ran off after his exe-girlfriend ex-girlfriend asked him to take her back. Delia hasn't heard from Will since.
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* GenderBlenderName: Ash is named after Oak's middle name "Ashley" (which was his grandfather's name). In his case, he notes that "Ashley" is traditionally a masculine name. Ash was ''almost'' named Ashley nut they shortened it because the name is considered feminine nowadays.
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* GenderBlenderName: Ash is named after Oak's middle name "Ashley" (which was his Oak's grandfather's name). In his case, he notes that "Ashley" is traditionally a masculine name. Ash was ''almost'' named Ashley nut but they shortened it because the name is considered feminine nowadays.
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Delia and Oak start their relationship while Delia is studying botany Pokémon as Oak's assistance. After Delia ends up pregnant, Oak wants to resign and marry her. Delia declines both because of the scandal and because she thinks he only wants to marry her because she's pregnant.
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Delia and Oak start their relationship while Delia is studying botany Pokémon as Oak's assistance.assistant. After Delia ends up pregnant, Oak wants to resign and marry her. Delia declines both because of the scandal and because she thinks he only wants to marry her because she's pregnant.
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* GenderBlenderName: Ash is named after Oak's middle name "Ashley" (which was his grandfather's name). In his case, he notes that "Ashley" is traditionally a masculine name. Ash was ''almost'' named Ashley nut they shortened it because the name is considered feminine nowadays.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: While pregnant, Delia bemoans with "I feel like a [[labelnote:Snorlax]]cow[[/labelnote]]".
* HoldYourHippogriffs: While pregnant, Delia bemoans with "I feel like a [[labelnote:Snorlax]]cow[[/labelnote]]".
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* OutdatedName: Oak's middle name, Ashley, comes from his grandfather. It may have been boyish during his grandfather's time but it no longer is during Samuel's.
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* AgeGapRomance: There's a several decade age gap between Oak and Delia but it's not large enough to be a MayDecemberRomance.
* FloralThemeNaming: Samuel Oak's wife was named Rose Oak.
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* OfficeRomance: Subverted with Spencer Hale and Delia. He had a crush on his co-worker Delia, but she didn't like him back.
* TheTalk: It's mentioned that Oak gave Ash "the Talk" at ageeleven.eleven
* TeacherStudentRomance: Delia and Oak start their relationship while Delia is studying botany Pokémon as Oak's assistance. After Delia ends up pregnant, Oak wants to resign and marry her. Delia declines both because of the scandal and because she thinks he only wants to marry her because she's pregnant.
* TheTragicRose: Oak's wife Rose died of cancer.
* SleepingWithTheBoss: Delia was working as Oak's assistant when they started their relationship. Delia quit after she ended up pregnant with Ash.
* TheTalk: It's mentioned that Oak gave Ash "the Talk" at age
* TeacherStudentRomance: Delia and Oak start their relationship while Delia is studying botany Pokémon as Oak's assistance. After Delia ends up pregnant, Oak wants to resign and marry her. Delia declines both because of the scandal and because she thinks he only wants to marry her because she's pregnant.
* TheTragicRose: Oak's wife Rose died of cancer.
* SleepingWithTheBoss: Delia was working as Oak's assistant when they started their relationship. Delia quit after she ended up pregnant with Ash.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/650053/1/ Mended]]'' by Illex the Elder is a fanfic based off of the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime. It is themed around the theory that Professor Oak is Ash's father.
At age seventeen, Ash goes looking for his birth certificate so that he can apply for university. To his surprise his father isn't listed as who he thought it'd be. Ash suddenly uncovers a nearly two decade secret that his mother had kept secret: Samuel Oak is his father.
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* DrowningMySorrows: After finding out that Oak is his father, Ash runs off and gets drunk with beer he stole from Brock.
* ExactWords: Looking back, Ash notices that his mother never ''technically'' told him that Will Ketchum was his father. He simply jumped to the logical conclusion.
* MarriedTooYoung: Delia married her husband Will right out of colege after knowing him for barely a month. He dumped her and ran off after his exe-girlfriend asked him to take her back. Delia hasn't heard from Will since.
* TheTalk: It's mentioned that Oak gave Ash "the Talk" at age eleven.
At age seventeen, Ash goes looking for his birth certificate so that he can apply for university. To his surprise his father isn't listed as who he thought it'd be. Ash suddenly uncovers a nearly two decade secret that his mother had kept secret: Samuel Oak is his father.
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!!''Mended'' provides examples of:
* DrowningMySorrows: After finding out that Oak is his father, Ash runs off and gets drunk with beer he stole from Brock.
* ExactWords: Looking back, Ash notices that his mother never ''technically'' told him that Will Ketchum was his father. He simply jumped to the logical conclusion.
* MarriedTooYoung: Delia married her husband Will right out of colege after knowing him for barely a month. He dumped her and ran off after his exe-girlfriend asked him to take her back. Delia hasn't heard from Will since.
* TheTalk: It's mentioned that Oak gave Ash "the Talk" at age eleven.
