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** Hiroshi Mizuno, AI's older brother.
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** Hiroshi Mizuno, AI's Ai's older brother.
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* Chapter Five: "Mango Lollipops" follows Saki as she meets with her father.
* Chapter Six: "Sins of the Mother" follows Ai as she discovers what her mother has done after she died.
* Chapter Six: "Sins of the Mother" follows Ai as she discovers what her mother has done after she died.
* AbusiveParents: Naomi Mizuno is definitely this for profiting off her daughter's death and forcing her other daughter to get plastic surgery so she'll better resemble Ai and exploit it.
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--->[[spoiler:“Your mom would be so proud, Saki-chan,” Sakura assured, only to have her friend turn to face her [[BrokenTears in tears]].]]\\
[[spoiler:“I don’t give a shit about that, I just want her back, and she’s not coming back. She’s just fucking gone and [[TragicKeepsake this is all I have left]].” Saki hugged her tear-soaked pillow and hit it a few times. “Damn it damn it damn it!”]]
[[spoiler:“I don’t give a shit about that, I just want her back, and she’s not coming back. She’s just fucking gone and [[TragicKeepsake this is all I have left]].” Saki hugged her tear-soaked pillow and hit it a few times. “Damn it damn it damn it!”]]
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** Mei Mizuno, Ai's younger sister.
** Naomi Mizuno, Ai's mother.
** Naomi Mizuno, Ai's mother.
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-->[[spoiler:“So are we supposed to just shut this down and hide in that house?”]]\\
[[spoiler:“I would call this more hiding from that house,” the husband remarked softly as he closed his laptop and massaged his temples, stress causing his head to throb in pain.]]
[[spoiler:“I would call this more hiding from that house,” the husband remarked softly as he closed his laptop and massaged his temples, stress causing his head to throb in pain.]]
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[[spoiler:"I would call this more hiding from that
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* StarvingArtist: Saki's mother was an impoverished musician who barely afford enough to support the two of them.
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* StarvingArtist: Saki's mother was an impoverished musician who barely afford afforded enough to support the two of them.
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* Chapter Four: "Alone" follows Yugiri as she reflects on her past life as an oiran.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36605491?view_full_work=true The work can be read here on Ao3.]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36605491?view_full_work=true org/works/36605491 The work can be read here on Ao3.]]
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* CastFullOfGay: Saki is explicitly into girls and has a lot of ShipTease with Sakura. Ai and Junko has a clear mutual attraction, though Junko continues to be in denial because she's a dork. Tae and Yuko were lovers in life.
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* CastFullOfGay: Saki is explicitly into girls and has a lot of ShipTease with Sakura. Ai and Junko has have a clear mutual attraction, though Junko continues to be in denial because she's a dork. Tae and Yuko were lovers in life.
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* StarvingArtist: Saki's mother was an impoverished musician who barely afford enough to support the two of them.
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* CastFullOfGay: Saki is explicitly into girls and has a lot of ShipTease with Sakura. Ai and Junko has a clear mutual attraction, though Junko continues to be in denial because she's a dork. Tae and Yuko were lovers in life.
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* CutenessProximity: Ai finds herself enamored with a big plushie of an [[RunningGag onion]]. Junko decides to get a matching one that's marketed as its lover, [[SelectiveObliviousness not realizing the implications.]]
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* CutenessProximity: Ai finds herself enamored with a big plushie of an [[RunningGag onion]]. Junko decides to get a matching one that's marketed as its lover, [[SelectiveObliviousness not realizing the implications.implications in regards to between her and Ai.]]
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* CutenessProximity: Ai finds herself enamored with a big plushie of an [[RunningGag onion]]. Junko decides to get a matching one that's marketed as its lover, [[SelectiveObliviousness not realizing the implications.]]
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* GranolaGirl: Maria was somehow able to guilt trip Saki into buying a canvas bag, reasoning that it would reduce plastic pollution.
-->The kid sure knew how to guilt trip, talking up how plastic was killing sweet baby turtles, are you a turtle killer? You wanna make a turtle cry? Look at his poor little nose.
-->The kid sure knew how to guilt trip, talking up how plastic was killing sweet baby turtles, are you a turtle killer? You wanna make a turtle cry? Look at his poor little nose.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Saki's pretty forward about Ai and Junko having something between them.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Saki and Reiko in this fic had a romantic relationship in life, whereas they're close but not lovers in canon.
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* IMissMom: [[spoiler:A heartbroken Saki admits to Sakura that she still misses her mother.]]
-->[[spoiler:“Your mom would be so proud, Saki-chan,” Sakura assured, only to have her friend turn to face her [[BrokenTears in tears]].]]\\
-->[[spoiler:“Your mom would be so proud, Saki-chan,” Sakura assured, only to have her friend turn to face her [[BrokenTears in tears]].]]\\
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* IMissMom: IMissMom:
** [[spoiler:A heartbroken Saki admits to Sakura that she still misses her mother.]]
-->[[spoiler:“Your --->[[spoiler:“Your mom would be so proud, Saki-chan,” Sakura assured, only to have her friend turn to face her [[BrokenTears in tears]].]]\\
** [[spoiler:A heartbroken Saki admits to Sakura that she still misses her mother.]]
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** Sakura realizes that she misses her parents and suffers an episode of depression [[spoiler:after encountering them again years after her death.]]
--->A tinge of regret hit Sakura as she thought back to her family. Her sister’s well meaning, yet annoying attempts to break her from her depression, her father’s doting, and her mother’s attempt at pep talks had all made her feel worse at the time, but she missed those annoying interruptions. She missed her family…
--->A tinge of regret hit Sakura as she thought back to her family. Her sister’s well meaning, yet annoying attempts to break her from her depression, her father’s doting, and her mother’s attempt at pep talks had all made her feel worse at the time, but she missed those annoying interruptions. She missed her family…
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** Sachiko and Shigeru Minamoto, Sakura's mother and father.
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** Sachiko and Shigeru Minamoto, Sakura's mother and father.father [[spoiler:who now run a cafe inspired by her]].
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* OriginalCharacter:
** Emiko Nikaido, Saki's mother and an impoverished musician.
** Sachiko and Shigeru Minamoto, Sakura's mother and father.
** Aya Minamoto, Sakura's older sister.
** Emiko Nikaido, Saki's mother and an impoverished musician.
** Sachiko and Shigeru Minamoto, Sakura's mother and father.
** Aya Minamoto, Sakura's older sister.
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* [[MommasBoy Momma's Girl]]: Saki grew up with no one but her mother, making the two incredibly close. [[spoiler:Her mother's death was what drove her into a troubled life as a teen.]]
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* NoSell: [[spoiler:Tae is able to take a knife to the chest when confronting an armed assailant.]]
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* PersonalityRemnant: What little there is left of the original Tae Yamada is buried deep under her zombie instincts. [[spoiler:It lets her trace her way back to Yuko's home after 30 years.]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Emiko used to call Saki "Chickie".
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* AffectionateNickname: Emiko used to call Saki "Chickie".
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* AdaptationalAgeLift: Yuko Hyodo is closer in age to Tae here than she is in canon. Their relationship is also explicitly romantic.
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* AdaptationalAgeLift: AgeLift: Yuko Hyodo is closer in age to Tae here than she is in canon. Their relationship is also explicitly romantic.
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* Chapter Three: "Of Onions and Lovers" follows Tae as she has vague recollections of someone close to her in life.
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* AdaptationalAgeLift: Yuko Hyodo is closer in age to Tae here than she is in canon. Their relationship is also explicitly romantic.
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Every chapter of the series follows the main cast as they face mementos from their past lives. The first chapter follows Saki as she discovers a cassette tape from her late mother, a musician just like the former is now.
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Every chapter of the series follows the main cast as they face mementos from their past lives. The first chapter
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* Chapter One: "Cassette" follows Saki as she discovers a cassette tape from her late mother, a musician just like the former is now.
* Chapter Two: "Cafes and Bedrooms" follows Sakura as she recalls her family who she left behind on death.
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* Chapter One: "Cassette" follows Saki as she discovers a cassette tape from her late mother, a musician just like the former is now.
* Chapter Two: "Cafes and Bedrooms" follows Sakura as she recalls her family who she left behind on death.
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[[spoiler:“I don’t give a shit about that, I just want her back, and she’s not coming back. She’s just fucking gone and this is all I have left.” Saki hugged her tear-soaked pillow and hit it a few times. “Damn it damn it damn it!”]]
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[[spoiler:“I don’t give a shit about that, I just want her back, and she’s not coming back. She’s just fucking gone and [[TragicKeepsake this is all I have left.left]].” Saki hugged her tear-soaked pillow and hit it a few times. “Damn it damn it damn it!”]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Sakura's parents are still around [[spoiler:and have been to this day in grief of their daughter's death. The event was traumatic enough that they tend to avoid being home as it reminds them of the day she died on the street.]]
-->[[spoiler:“So are we supposed to just shut this down and hide in that house?”]]\\
[[spoiler:“I would call this more hiding from that house,” the husband remarked softly as he closed his laptop and massaged his temples, stress causing his head to throb in pain.]]
-->[[spoiler:“So are we supposed to just shut this down and hide in that house?”]]\\
[[spoiler:“I would call this more hiding from that house,” the husband remarked softly as he closed his laptop and massaged his temples, stress causing his head to throb in pain.]]
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* IMissMom: [[spoiler:A heartbroken Saki admits to Sakura that she still misses her mother.]]
-->[[spoiler:“Your mom would be so proud, Saki-chan,” Sakura assured, only to have her friend turn to face her [[BrokenTears in tears]].]]\\
[[spoiler:“I don’t give a shit about that, I just want her back, and she’s not coming back. She’s just fucking gone and this is all I have left.” Saki hugged her tear-soaked pillow and hit it a few times. “Damn it damn it damn it!”]]
-->[[spoiler:“Your mom would be so proud, Saki-chan,” Sakura assured, only to have her friend turn to face her [[BrokenTears in tears]].]]\\
[[spoiler:“I don’t give a shit about that, I just want her back, and she’s not coming back. She’s just fucking gone and this is all I have left.” Saki hugged her tear-soaked pillow and hit it a few times. “Damn it damn it damn it!”]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Emiko used to call Saki "Chickie".
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Saki is revealed to have had a lot in common with her mother Emiko: they were both musicians, both swore like sailors, and both have strong maternal instincts.
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Saki is revealed to have had a lot in common with her mother Emiko: they were both musicians, both swore like sailors, and both have had strong maternal instincts.
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Saki is revealed to have had a lot in common with her mother Emiko: they were both musicians, both swore like sailors, and both have strong maternal instincts.
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->''Franchouchou had lives before their untimely deaths. While they live on in happiness together, there will always be a part of them that misses their old lives. From cassette tapes to interviews with relatives, the girls must confront the ghosts of their old lives.''
Mementos is a fanfiction based on ''Anime/ZombieLandSaga'' written by "thewriterofflucifenia''. The series was published months after the second season concluded.
Every chapter of the series follows the main cast as they face mementos from their past lives. The first chapter follows Saki as she discovers a cassette tape from her late mother, a musician just like the former is now.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36605491?view_full_work=true The work can be read here on Ao3.]]
!!Tropes
* MissingMom: Saki's mother, Emiko, [[spoiler:is revealed to have died from an overdose when Saki was ten, leaving her all alone with no family to turn to.]] This creates a retroactive interpretation for how Saki grew up to be a troubled delinquent.
* TragicKeepsake: The cassette made by Saki's mother is found at an antique stall, and Saki buys it immediately upon seeing it. [[spoiler:She stays up later that night listening to it, the memories that resurface bringing her to [[BrokenTears tears]]]].
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Mementos is a fanfiction based on ''Anime/ZombieLandSaga'' written by "thewriterofflucifenia''. The series was published months after the second season concluded.
Every chapter of the series follows the main cast as they face mementos from their past lives. The first chapter follows Saki as she discovers a cassette tape from her late mother, a musician just like the former is now.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36605491?view_full_work=true The work can be read here on Ao3.]]
!!Tropes
* MissingMom: Saki's mother, Emiko, [[spoiler:is revealed to have died from an overdose when Saki was ten, leaving her all alone with no family to turn to.]] This creates a retroactive interpretation for how Saki grew up to be a troubled delinquent.
* TragicKeepsake: The cassette made by Saki's mother is found at an antique stall, and Saki buys it immediately upon seeing it. [[spoiler:She stays up later that night listening to it, the memories that resurface bringing her to [[BrokenTears tears]]]].
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