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* EarnYourHappyEnding: In the end,[[spoiler:Sean finally gets his happy ending after a final battle in the Galactic Core, helping prevent the full Cerberus takeover of the Citadel and surviving a shuttle crash. Once the Crucible has fired, killing each and every Reaper in the galaxy, he goes on to do everything he promised he would, including having more kids and starting a company.]]
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Sporadic updates, over fifty chapters long, each between 4500 to 5000 words in length, it's a good few hours of reading if you want to dive directly into it. The author has also commissioned multiple pieces of artwork for the story, view-able at the ends of the chapters.

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Sporadic updates, over fifty chapters long, each between 4500 to 5000 words Started in length, it's a good few hours of reading if you want to dive directly into it.April, 2015, officially completed in July, 2021. The author has also commissioned multiple pieces of artwork for the story, view-able at the ends of the chapters.
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* PsychologicalTormentZone: [[spoiler:Sean enters one in his unconscious mind when suffering from the early effects of Reaper indoctrination. In it, he is tormented by his past mistakes and regrets, and the Reaper "influence" in his mind takes the form of dead members of Cerberus, specifically those who's deaths he was personally responsible for. Crosses over into [[{{MindRape}} Mind Rape]] when they actively try to kill Sean during an operation to counteract said indoctrination with an experimental implant.]]

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* PsychologicalTormentZone: [[spoiler:Sean Sean enters one on his own construction in his unconscious mind mind, [[spoiler:especially when suffering from the early effects of Reaper indoctrination. In it, he is tormented by his past mistakes and regrets, and the Reaper "influence" in his mind takes the form of dead members of Cerberus, specifically those who's deaths he was personally responsible for. Crosses over into [[{{MindRape}} Mind Rape]] when they actively try to kill Sean during an operation to counteract said indoctrination with an experimental implant.]]
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In a different take on the Franchise/MassEffect universe, Murphy's Law is a world where the Mass Effect games never happened, leaving the characters Sean and Dan in a world very alien to them. Taking influence from a variety of different sources, mainly Franchise/{{Halo}} and TabletopGame/BattleTech, Murphy's Law manages to blend elements from these sources into the Mass Effect universe without ruining the feel of the world or turning it into a crossover fic.

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In a different take on the Franchise/MassEffect universe, Murphy's Law is a world where the Mass Effect games never happened, leaving the characters Sean and Dan in a world very alien to them. Taking influence from a variety of different sources, mainly Franchise/{{Halo}} and TabletopGame/BattleTech, Series/BattlestarGalactica2003, Murphy's Law manages to blend elements from these sources into the Mass Effect universe without ruining the feel of the world or turning it into a crossover fic.
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* ExtremeMeleeRevenge: Sean pulls this on a [[spoiler: Cerberus mortician before stabbing him to death after learning he had been involved with dissecting [[{{WouldHurtAChild}} children]] in the rebuilt Teltin Facility.]]
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** Hurt his friends [[spoiler:(or god forbid you lay a finger on a child)]], and Sean will ensure your remaining time in the mortal coil is very short.

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** Hurt any of his friends people [[spoiler:(or god forbid you lay a finger on a child)]], and Sean will ensure your remaining time in the mortal coil is very short.short. Sean was willing to [[spoiler: throw away his entire reputation in an instant and punch Han'Gerrel simply for speaking ill of Dan after the loss of his leg on Fehl Prime.]]



** Turns out Richard's "hobbies" include advanced cybernetic prosthesis and implants. As a medical genius, this is to be expected.

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** Turns out Richard's "hobbies" include advanced cybernetic prosthesis cybernetics, prosthetics, and implants. As a medical genius, genius in charge of a team of [[spoiler: ex-Cerberus scientists]] working in the same field, this is to be expected.



* CurbStompBattle: The battle between the [[spoiler:Migrant Fleet and Cerberus above Reach quickly becomes this, with the Quarians doing the stomping]]. It's an absolute bloodbath.

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* CurbStompBattle: The battle between the [[spoiler:Migrant [[spoiler: Migrant Fleet and Cerberus above Reach quickly becomes this, with the Quarians doing the stomping]]. It's an absolute bloodbath.



** [[spoiler:Sean's deployment of the highly-destructive Ares Device results in this, vaporizing half of the Reaper fleet on their way to Reach in an instant.]]

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** [[spoiler:Sean's deployment of the highly-destructive Ares Device results in this, vaporizing half of the Reaper fleet on their way to Reach in an instant.instant, thinning their number enough to give them a fighting chance.]]



* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler: Admirals Zorah and Gerrel make it very clear that they do not care for Sean or his crew, but will continue supporting them as long as they keep providing the Migrant Fleet with new experimental technology.]]
** As is usually the case, Cerberus is this. Most in the organization hate the fact that Sean and his team have devoted themselves to improving the lives of the Quarians [[spoiler:(and later the Raloi)]], and have tried to capture and kill them on several occasions. [[spoiler:This comes back to bite them in the ass later down the line, when Sean and his Marines manage to infiltrate Cronos Station, eventually killing The Illusive Man.]]

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* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler: Admirals Zorah and Gerrel make it very clear that they do not care for Sean or his crew, but will continue supporting them as long as they keep providing the Migrant Fleet with new experimental technology. Iolin initially exhibits shades of this, though he ultimately proclaims the loyalties of he and his people are to the Confederation when he denies the Council's offer of an embassy on the Citadel.]]
** As is usually the case, Cerberus is this. Most in the organization hate the fact that Sean and his team have devoted themselves to improving the lives of the Quarians [[spoiler:(and later the Raloi)]], Raloi and Geth)]], and have tried to capture and kill them on several occasions. [[spoiler:This comes back to bite them in the ass later down the line, when Sean and his Marines manage to infiltrate Cronos Station, eventually killing The Illusive Man.]]



* GodzillaThreshold: The development and deployment of the [[spoiler:Ares Device, a fusion bomb with a blast radius over 100,000 kilometers in diameter,]] is considered the point where Sean and his team officially cross the threshold. It terrified Sean so much that he had all records of it's development destroyed once it was finished.

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* GodzillaThreshold: The development and deployment of the [[spoiler:Ares Device, a fusion bomb with a blast radius over 100,000 kilometers in diameter,]] is considered the point where Sean and his team officially cross the threshold. It terrified Sean and the rest of his team so much that he had all records of it's development destroyed once it was finished.

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* MindScrew: Any time Sean has a particularly vivid dream, or when [[spoiler: suffering from the effects of indoctrination. Later, he experiences a much milder version when communicating with the young Rachni Queen captured by Cerberus.]]

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* MindScrew: Any time Sean has a particularly vivid dream, or when [[spoiler: suffering from the effects of indoctrination. ]] Later, he experiences a much milder version when communicating with [[spoiler: the young Rachni Queen captured by Cerberus.and their Asari emissary, Jallere.]]


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* TheTease: [[spoiler: Sean and Mara are often flirt outrageously with one another, though Mara is usually the first to [[{{FlirtatiousSmackOnTheAss}} go for more physical forms of teasing]].]]

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* BadFuture: [[spoiler: Old Dan comes from one of these, though whether he is a genuine time traveler or has [[{{AlternateUniverse}} hopped between universes]] is unknown. He's trying his best to keep Sean one step ahead of the Reapers.]]



* MightyLumberjack: Dimitri exhibits shades of this, but eventually plays it straight when it's revealed he hand-carved most of the furniture used in his colony prefab, sourcing it locally from the trees native to Reach. He's even cut special wood paneling for Sean's office in CASTLE Base.

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* MightyLumberjack: Dimitri exhibits shades of this, but eventually plays it straight when it's revealed he hand-carved most of the furniture used in his colony prefab, sourcing it locally from the "Polock" trees native to Reach. He's He even cut special wood paneling for Sean's office in CASTLE Base.



* MundaneLuxury: Sean considers [[{{MustHaveCaffeine}} Eight O'Clock Original]] a vital part of his day-to-day.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: A very widespread example. The [[spoiler: Quarian Schism between the pro-war and anti-war Admirals leads to a sudden mass exodus of ships from the Klenot System, with the anti-war Admirals and over 1/3rd of the Migrant Fleet leaving to seek peace with the Geth.]]



* WaterTorture: After reaching his first [[{{RageBreakingPoint}} breaking point]] in the story, Sean employs this on Lynda before Cerberus activates a kill-switch implanted inside her.

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* WaterTorture: After reaching his first [[{{RageBreakingPoint}} breaking point]] in the story, Sean employs this on Lynda before Cerberus activates a kill-switch implanted inside her.her.
* UnusualUserInterface: Most control interfaces designed by Sean and Dan tend to be this due to their preference for physical, non-holographic controls. The Dragoon mech is the most prevalent example of this.
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* WaterTorture: After reaching [[spoiler: his first {{RageBreakingPoint}} in the story, Sean employs this on Lynda before Cerberus activates a kill-switch implanted inside her.]]

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* WaterTorture: After reaching [[spoiler: his first {{RageBreakingPoint}} [[{{RageBreakingPoint}} breaking point]] in the story, Sean employs this on Lynda before Cerberus activates a kill-switch implanted inside her.]]

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** Sean's music (and occasionally Dan's) becomes a topic of "interest" throughout the story, mostly to the Quarians they interact with. Though not aliens, it is even [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure considered unusual to some of his human friends,]] [[FishOutOfTemporalWater considering how old his music really is.]]

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** Sean's music (and occasionally Dan's) becomes a topic of "interest" throughout the story, mostly to the Quarians they interact with. Though not aliens, it is even [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure considered unusual to some of his human friends,]] [[FishOutOfTemporalWater considering how old his music really is.]]]] As it turns out, many members of [[spoiler:Reegar's ORION team]] enjoy listening to Sean's personal radio station.



** [[spoiler:Happens once again after Sean's operation to surgically install an implant to counteract Reaper indoctrination. It works, but the "influence" in his mind nearly kills him in the process.]]



** The [[spoiler: ORIONS]] are all this, considering the training they went through together. [[spoiler: The numerous procedures they went through only made them better.]]



** [[spoiler:The Director appears as the main antagonist for two chapters, before disappearing after the destruction of the Barn.]]
** Randall Ezno appears as a member of the Cerberus team sent to investigate [[spoiler:Ferris Fields]], surprising everyone with his biotics. He later shows up again at the [[spoiler:Overlord facility]], with orders to retrieve the project data and trigger the facility's nuclear failsafe. [[spoiler:He discovers what Gavin Archer inflicted on his brother, David, and is allowed to leave in peace after handing over all the information he has on Cerberus and swearing off the organization.]]

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** [[spoiler:The Director appears as the main antagonist for two chapters, before disappearing seemingly dying after the destruction of the Barn.Barn. He reappears much later during the Reaper War, having rallied most of the remaining Cerberus forces under his banner.]]
** Randall Ezno appears as a member of the Cerberus team sent to investigate [[spoiler:Ferris Fields]], surprising everyone with his biotics. He later shows up again at the [[spoiler:Overlord facility]], with orders to retrieve the project data and trigger the facility's nuclear failsafe. [[spoiler:He discovers what Gavin Archer inflicted on his brother, David, and is allowed to leave in peace after handing over all the information he has on Cerberus and swearing off the organization. He later reappears with a team and ship of his own, agreeing to help fight the Director's Cerberus "remnants" alongside Sean's Third Fleet.]]



** Turns out Richard's "hobbies" include advanced cybernetic prosthesis and implants.

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** Turns out Richard's "hobbies" include advanced cybernetic prosthesis and implants. As a medical genius, this is to be expected.



** The Phantom-class frigates, a flying wing stealth ship featuring the latest reactor and FTL tech, and created with a mix of quarian and human design elements.

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** The Phantom-class frigates, a flying wing stealth ship featuring the latest reactor and FTL tech, and created with a mix of quarian and human design elements. [[spoiler:Shepard receives one to fight the Collectors with after he is revived by a Quarian-led Lazarus Project.]]



* DeadpanSnarker: More like Cast Of Snark. Given the appropriate moment, everyone will snark and will do it with or without a big smile.

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** [[spoiler:Sean's deployment of the highly-destructive Ares Device results in this, vaporizing half of the Reaper fleet on their way to Reach in an instant.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: More like Cast Of Snark. Given the appropriate moment, everyone will snark and will do it with or without a big smile. This gradually lessens across the board as the stakes go up, especially during the Reaper War.



* DescriptionPorn: The technical details of the various tech and science can get a little involved.

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* DescriptionPorn: The technical details of the various tech and science can get a little involved.involved, though it is never dwelled on for too long.



* DueToTheDead: Once back home at Serenity Valley, [[spoiler: Jack is given a proper funeral with everyone except Dan in attendance.]]

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* DueToTheDead: Once back home at Serenity Valley, [[spoiler: Jack is given a proper funeral with everyone except Dan in attendance. He grieves privately in his own way.]]



** UCNF HIGHCOM is also this, being the headquarters of the United Confederation military.



* GadgeteerGenius: Though all members of the old Task Force exhibit shades of this, its most clearly seen with Richard, who not only devised a way to transform brain signals into digital code, but has [[spoiler: successfully reverse-engineered and reproduced Geth tech, constructed cybernetics to improve the Quarian immune system, and managed to build a whole new body for Lydia.]]
* GeniusDitz: While some members of the team exhibit shades of this, it can most clearly be seen with Sira, who has been observed staring at the sky for extended periods of time or talking about the weather on entirely different planets with no provocation. Richard is a close second, though most of his "quirkiness" stems from him being very lazy.
** Given how old Sira is by Asari standards, this could just be an adolescent tick.

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* GadgeteerGenius: Though all members of the old Task Force exhibit shades of this, its most clearly seen with Richard, who not only devised a way to transform brain signals into digital code, but has [[spoiler: successfully reverse-engineered and reproduced Geth tech, constructed cybernetics to improve the Quarian immune system, developed a brain implant that counteracts Reaper indoctrination, and managed to build a whole new body for Lydia.]]
* GeniusDitz: While some members of the team exhibit shades of this, it can most clearly be seen with Sira, who has been observed staring at the sky for extended periods of time or talking about the weather on entirely different planets with no provocation. Richard is a close second, though most of his "quirkiness" stems from him being very lazy.lazy and withdrawn.
** Given how old Sira is by [[{{ReallySevenHundredYearsOld}} Asari standards, standards]], this could just be an adolescent tick.



* HumansAreBastards: Cerberus is the flip-side to Sean's idealism and altruistic attitudes. When the veil has been lifted, they make no effort to hide that they are complete bastards that disregard everyone, even their own people.

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* HumansAreBastards: Cerberus is the flip-side to Sean's idealism and altruistic attitudes. attitude. When the veil has been lifted, they make no effort to hide that they are complete bastards that disregard everyone, even their own people.people, in the name of getting more power.



** Sean later does this in a crippled mech, using its cannons to arrest his momentum.



* KnifeNut: Dan is one of these, keeping at least two razor-sharp knives on him at all times in addition to his private collection.

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* KnifeNut: Dan is one of these, keeping at least two razor-sharp knives on him at all times in addition to his private collection. Sean also exhibits much lighter shades of this, carrying a knife whenever he's on field ops.



* LogicBomb: Lampshaded, and averted. Dan tries this on Powell during their first meeting on Aldrin Station as a test, only to have him laugh and repeat a different paradox back at him. This establishes how advanced Richard's AI development is.

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* LogicBomb: Lampshaded, and averted. Dan tries this on Powell during their first meeting on Aldrin Station as a test, only to have him laugh and repeat a different paradox back at him. This establishes how advanced Richard's AI development is.



* MindScrew: Any time Sean has a particularly vivid dream, or when [[spoiler: suffering from the effects of indoctrination. Later, he experiences a much milder version when communicating with the young Rachni Queen captured by Cerberus.]]



** Most of the systems (and the planets in them) visited by [[spoiler:Sean and the crew of the MFV Discovery]] during their survey mission are named in ways that reference various pieces of sci-fi.



* NoSocialSkills: Dan had great difficulty talking to people before meeting Sean.

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* NoSocialSkills: Dan had great difficulty talking to people before meeting Sean. Years later, he still interacts with very few people by himself.



* NumberTwo: [[spoiler:Dixon]] is this aboard the UCV Saint Luke, being in charge of most day-to-day operations or taking command when Sean is [[{{TheMainCharactersDoEverything}} on the ground leading a mission.]]



* PsychologicalTormentZone: [[spoiler:Sean enters one in his unconscious mind when suffering from the early effects of Reaper indoctrination. In it, he is tormented by his past mistakes and regrets, and the Reaper "influence" in his mind takes the form of dead members of Cerberus, specifically those who's deaths he was personally responsible for. Crosses over into [[{{MindRape}} Mind Rape]] when they actively try to kill Sean during an operation to counteract said indoctrination with an experimental implant.]]



** After discovering the [[spoiler:morgue and the body of a dissected child in the Teltin facility on Pragia, he loses his temper and stabs the Cerberus mortician who was hiding in the room to death in a blind fury. This was AFTER beating the man and Sean having blood spat on his face.]]
* RaisedCatholic: Sean was brought up in a traditional Catholic household. This becomes a point of contention for Sean over the course of the story, especially after [[spoiler:the death of Jack.]] Even though he sees himself as an atheist, he begins readopting some of his old Catholic mannerisms, including using the Sign of the Cross and praying before meals.
-->'''Sean:''' Even as an atheist, I couldn't deny my upbringing. I was raised Catholic, and in many ways I always would be Catholic.

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** After discovering the [[spoiler:morgue and the body of a dissected child in the Teltin facility on Pragia, he loses his temper and stabs the Cerberus mortician who was hiding in the room to death in a blind fury. This was AFTER beating the man and Sean having blood spat on within an inch of his face.life.]]
* RaisedCatholic: Sean was brought up in a traditional Catholic household. This becomes a point of contention for Sean over the course of the story, especially after [[spoiler:the death of Jack.]] Even though he sees himself as an atheist, he begins readopting some of his old Catholic mannerisms, including using the Sign of the Cross and praying before meals.
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meals. It gets to the point where he even questions if the [[spoiler: "spiritual experience" he had with his mother and father during Richard's implant surgery was raised Catholic, and in many ways I always would be Catholic.simple brain chemistry coping with trauma, or if they were actually spirits that had been sent to protect him.]]



** Aldrin Station, built in the dark side of Mercury, is where Task Force Cerebellum is based, [[spoiler: until it is destroyed by Cerberus]].

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** Aldrin Station, built in the dark side of Mercury, is where Task Force Cerebellum is based, based [[spoiler: until it is destroyed by Cerberus]].



* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: One has to wonder how many times Sean will have to end up in dangerous situations before he's ordered to stay in the safety of his home on Reach.

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* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: One has to wonder how many times Sean will have to end up in dangerous situations before he's either ordered to stay on his ship or in the safety of his home on Reach.



** Later [[{{LampshadeHanging}} lampshaded]] by Mara when she pleads Sean stop exposing himself to so much personal danger.



* TheyWouldCutYouUp: Sean discovers, much to his horror, [[spoiler:Cerberus won't hesitate to do this to human children in the name of unethical biotics research.]]

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* TheyWouldCutYouUp: Sean discovers, much to his horror, [[spoiler:Cerberus won't hesitate to do this to human children in the name of unethical biotics research.]]
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* GodzillaThreshold: The development and deployment of the [[spoiler:Ares Device, a fusion bomb with a blast radius over 100,000 kilometers in diameter,]] is considered the point where Sean and his team officially cross the threshold. It terrified Sean so much that he had all records of it's development destroyed once it was finished.
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* ElectronicEyes: Richard has one where his left eye used to be. It was given to him by the Geth after limping into the Perseus Veil with Powell after after a pirate attack.


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* GadgeteerGenius: Though all members of the old Task Force exhibit shades of this, its most clearly seen with Richard, who not only devised a way to transform brain signals into digital code, but has [[spoiler: successfully reverse-engineered and reproduced Geth tech, constructed cybernetics to improve the Quarian immune system, and managed to build a whole new body for Lydia.]]


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* HumansAreBastards: Cerberus is the flip-side to Sean's idealism and altruistic attitudes. When the veil has been lifted, they make no effort to hide that they are complete bastards that disregard everyone, even their own people.


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* HomeSweetHome: It doesn't take long for Sean and his friends to build houses for themselves on Reach, making it their new home after joining the Migrant Fleet. No matter what happens to them, they always return to their quiet homestead in Serenity Valley.
* HonoraryTrueCompanion: Many [[spoiler: former members of Cerberus]] end up becoming these to Sean and his team.
** The [[spoiler: Cerberus defectors from Minuteman Station]] prove instrumental to [[spoiler: reviving Commander Shepard]] and developing several new technologies, both mechanical and biological.
** [[spoiler: Dixon and his friends]] waste no time proving their value to Sean, [[spoiler: eventually becoming members of his CIC crew aboard the UCV Saint Luke. Dixon in particular, considering his position as XO.]]


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* ScienceHero: [[HumbleHero Though he would never admit to being such]], Sean has slowly become this over the course of the story. The advancements of him and his team have shifted the balance of power in the Milky Way Galaxy, and he's never shied away from getting his hands dirty, fighting alongside those he could simply command from afar.


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* TheTeam: Sean and his friends make a very good one, using their skills in their respective fields to advance themselves and those around them. Without each other, they'd never be able to pull off half of what they've accomplished.


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* TrueCompanions: The original Task Force Cerebellum team (Sean, Dan, Dimitri, Mara, Richard, Jack, and Sira) are this, even if there is (or used to be) some tension between several of them. Throughout everything, [[spoiler:even Jack's murder at the hands of Cerberus]], they've remained together and supported one another for years after the destruction of Aldrin Station.
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** While staying aboard the [[spoiler:Idenna]], the quarian crew take a liking to Sean's [[Franchise/TheElderScrolls Skyrim]] tavern music.
** Later, Sira expresses interest in Sean's old vaporwave tracks, causing Dan equal parts annoyance and bafflement.

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** While staying aboard the [[spoiler:Idenna]], the quarian crew take a liking to Sean's [[Franchise/TheElderScrolls Skyrim]] tavern music.
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music (and occasionally Dan's) becomes a topic of "interest" throughout the story, mostly to the Quarians they interact with. Though not aliens, it is even [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure considered unusual to some of his human friends,]] [[FishOutOfTemporalWater considering how old vaporwave tracks, causing Dan equal parts annoyance and bafflement.his music really is.]]



** [[spoiler: Lydia receives a whole new BODY as a result of Richard and Powell's research, allowing her to finally be free of her card reader and function independently from computer systems. While based on the Geth mobile platforms, her body is of a unique design, effectively making her a new, unique form of life.]]


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** [[spoiler: Captain Kira Haymsand her crew also turn on Cerberus after discovering the truth about what they had been doing to Alliance colonies in the Terminus, among other incriminating details. She proves vital to ending the Cerberus threat, using her ship to get Sean and his marines close enough to Cronos Station to board it.]]

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* [[spoiler: Dixon, Tony, and Morgan from the Pragia facility are also this, though as lower-level members of Cerberus, they weren't privy to what was really going on, and were considered disposable by the facility's project leads.]]
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* ** [[spoiler: Captain Kira Haymsand her crew also turn on Cerberus after discovering the truth about what they had been doing to Alliance colonies in the Terminus, among other incriminating details. She proves vital to ending the Cerberus threat, using her ship to get Sean and his marines close enough to Cronos Station to board it.]]

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** [[spoiler:Randall Ezno appaears as a member of the Cerberus team sent to investigate Ferris Fields, surprising everyone with his biotics.]]

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** [[spoiler:Randall Randall Ezno appaears appears as a member of the Cerberus team sent to investigate Ferris Fields, [[spoiler:Ferris Fields]], surprising everyone with his biotics.biotics. He later shows up again at the [[spoiler:Overlord facility]], with orders to retrieve the project data and trigger the facility's nuclear failsafe. [[spoiler:He discovers what Gavin Archer inflicted on his brother, David, and is allowed to leave in peace after handing over all the information he has on Cerberus and swearing off the organization.]]



** Turns out Richard's "hobbies" include advanced cybernetic prosthesis and implants.



* HeroicBSOD: Dan undergoes two of these. the first occurs after [[spoiler:he fatally stabs a turian mugger to death on the Citadel,]] and the second happens when he[[spoiler: returns from The Barn after Jack's death at the hands of Cerberus.]] Both are complete with a [[{{ThousandYardStare}} Thousand-Yard Stare]].

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* HeroicBSOD: Dan undergoes two three of these. the first occurs after [[spoiler:he fatally stabs a turian mugger to death on the Citadel,]] and the second happens when he[[spoiler: returns from The Barn after Jack's death at the hands of Cerberus.]] Both The third occurs after the [[spoiler:loss of his left leg, leaving him crippled until later in the story.]] All three are complete with a [[{{ThousandYardStare}} Thousand-Yard Stare]].
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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:The Illusive Man receives and unceremonious one at the hands of Sean in Chapter 94.]]

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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:The Illusive Man receives and an unceremonious one at the hands of Sean in Chapter 94.]]

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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:The Illusive Man receives and unceremonious one at the hands of Sean in Chapter 94.]]



** The Caprica-class and Dradis-class, respectively. [[ShoutOut Considering both are based off vessels used by the Colonial Fleet in Battlestar Galactica: Deadlock, this is to be expected.]]



** [[spoiler:The Battle of Imaneya becomes one as well, with Sean's forces suffering no casualties in-orbit against Cerberus, or on the ground against the huskified remains of their experiments.]]



* FamilyOfChoice: The entire original group formed from the remains of Task Force Cerebellum eventually became this, having been forced together under the banner of the Migrant Fleet. [[spoiler:They are later joined by Cerberus defectors.]]
* FanOfThePast: Sean and Dan technically become this due to how old their original lives are.

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* FamilyOfChoice: The entire original group formed from the remains of Task Force Cerebellum eventually became this, having been forced together under the banner of the Migrant Fleet. [[spoiler:They are later joined by Cerberus defectors.defectors, who prove themselves to be equals.]]
* FanOfThePast: Sean and Dan technically become this due to how old their original lives are. Sean in particular makes reference to many games and shows that his compatriots barely understand.



* GeniusDitz: While some members of the team exhibit shades of this, it can most clearly be seen with Sira, who has been observed staring at the sky for extended periods of time or talking about the weather on entirely different planets with no provocation.
** Given how old she is by Asari standards, this could just be an adolescent tick.

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** As is usually the case, Cerberus is this. Most in the organization hate the fact that Sean and his team have devoted themselves to improving the lives of the Quarians [[spoiler:(and later the Raloi)]], and have tried to capture and kill them on several occasions. [[spoiler:This comes back to bite them in the ass later down the line, when Sean and his Marines manage to infiltrate Cronos Station, eventually killing The Illusive Man.]]
* GeniusDitz: While some members of the team exhibit shades of this, it can most clearly be seen with Sira, who has been observed staring at the sky for extended periods of time or talking about the weather on entirely different planets with no provocation.
provocation. Richard is a close second, though most of his "quirkiness" stems from him being very lazy.
** Given how old she Sira is by Asari standards, this could just be an adolescent tick.



-->'''Sean''' Well, let's just say that if Dan had done this while we were rooming in college, I would have killed him.



* [[spoiler: Dixon, Tony, and Morgan from the Pragia facility are also this, though as lower-level members of Cerberus, they weren't privy to what was really going on, and were considered disposable by the facility's project leads.]]
* [[spoiler: Captain Kira Haymsand her crew also turn on Cerberus after discovering the truth about what they had been doing to Alliance colonies in the Terminus, among other incriminating details. She proves vital to ending the Cerberus threat, using her ship to get Sean and his marines close enough to Cronos Station to board it.]]



* TemptingFate: [[spoiler:The Illusive Man believes he is too valuable to be killed, thinking Sean won't shoot him. [[{{BoomHeadshot}} He's wrong.]]]]



* TheyWouldCutYouUp: Sean discovers, much to his horror, that [[spoiler:Cerberus won't hesitate to do this to human children in the name of unethical biotics research.]]

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* TheyWouldCutYouUp: Sean discovers, much to his horror, that [[spoiler:Cerberus won't hesitate to do this to human children in the name of unethical biotics research.]]
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** Hurt his friends (or god forbid you lay a finger on a child), and Sean will ensure your remaining time in the mortal coil is very short.

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** Hurt his friends (or [[spoiler:(or god forbid you lay a finger on a child), child)]], and Sean will ensure your remaining time in the mortal coil is very short.
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** During their [[spoiler:survey mission later in the story]], Sean and his crew visit dozens of dead, lifeless rocks [[spoiler: before discovering the Raloi homeworld, Turviss.]]
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** [[spoiler:Dan]] receives a "home-grown" left leg replacement from Richard after [[spoiler:losing his original during the Battle of Fehl Prime.]]
** [[spoiler: Lydia receives a whole new BODY as a result of Richard and Powell's research, allowing her to finally be free of her card reader and function independently from computer systems. While based on the Geth mobile platforms, her body is of a unique design, effectively making her a new, unique form of life.]]


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** Hurt his friends (or god forbid you lay a finger on a child), and Sean will ensure your remaining time in the mortal coil is very short.
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**Later, the [[spoiler:Confederation]] begins using reversed-engineered copies of a Cerberus rifle that Sean decides to retroactively call a [[VideoGame/HalfLife2 Pulse Rifle]]. While it functions similarly to standard mass accelerator weapons, it fires larger, 4mm tungsten rounds sheathed in plasma, increasing its penetrating power and turning each shot fired into a miniature HEAT/SABOT round.


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** Sean decides to call the reverse-engineered Cerberus weapons used to [[spoiler:attack the Saint Luke]] [[VideoGame/HalfLife2 Pulse Rifles]] due to how similar the fired rounds are compared to the OSIPR's.

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* BirdPeople: The Raloi are this to a tee. According to [[Main/WordOfGod Word Of God]], their visual design is based on a mix of elements, including the American Bald Eagle, feathered Velociraptors, and Frank Herbert's [[Franchise/{{Dune}} Dune]].



** [[spoiler:The Director appears as the main antagonist for two chapters, before dissapearing after the distruction of the Barn.]]

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* ProudWarriorRace: The [[Main/BirdPeople Raloi]] are shades of this, even though most of their population consisted of poor, poverty-stricken farmers restricted to a House-based caste system before First Contact with Sean and his crew.
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** Dan doesn't even try to hide the fact that the Caprica-class and Dradis-class ships he "designed" are almost exact copies of the Jupiter-class Mk.1 and Adamant-class ships from [[VideoGame/BattlestarGalacticaDeadlock Battlestar Galactica Deadlock]].
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* SpeechImpediment: * Dan has a really bad one influenced by his Asperger's Syndrome that causes him to repeat words or fail to say them entirely, though this doesn't usually prevent him from being understood. It goes away when he's under immediate situational stress, [[spoiler: and went away permanently for Old Dan after the death of Sean in his original timeline.]]

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* SpeechImpediment: * Dan has a really bad one influenced by his Asperger's Syndrome that causes him to repeat words or fail to say them entirely, though this doesn't usually prevent him from being understood. It goes away when he's under immediate situational stress, [[spoiler: and went away permanently for Old Dan after the death of Sean in his original timeline.]]
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* SpeechImpediment: * Dan has a really bad one influenced by his Asperger's Syndrome that causes him to repeat words or fail to say them entirely, though this doesn't usually prevent him from being understood. It goes away when he's under immediate situational stress, [[spoiler: and went away permanently for Old Dan after the death of Sean in his original timeline.]]
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*** Before the final design, it looked more like the [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life}} Gluon Gun]].

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*** Before the final design, it looked more like the [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life}} [[VideoGame/HalfLife Gluon Gun]].

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