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** After rescuing the kidnapped Katarina, the carriage used to return everyone to the castle belongs to one Lady [[LightNovel/KonoSuba Lalatina Dustiness]].



* TechnologyUplift: Maria introduces the concept of intravenous infusion to Sorcier from her old world, disguising it as something she read about in an ancient Friedonian book. It would prove instrumental in saving Katerina when her [[spoiler:Dark Magic-induced coma]] lasted several weeks.

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* TechnologyUplift: Maria introduces the concept of intravenous infusion to Sorcier from her old world, disguising it as something she read about in an ancient Friedonian book. It would prove instrumental in saving Katerina Katarina when her [[spoiler:Dark Magic-induced coma]] lasted several weeks.
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* AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil: The Student Council, which includes the Third and Fourth Prince of Sorcier, the son and daughter of the Prime Minister, several other high-ranking nobles, and Maria, rumoured to have wandered the countryside, taking down Dark Magic wielding mages. They handle most of the paperwork involved in running the school, and no mention is made of a headmaster for the Academy.

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* AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil: The Student Council, which includes the Third and Fourth Prince Princes of Sorcier, the son and daughter of the Prime Minister, several other high-ranking nobles, and Maria, rumoured rumored to have wandered the countryside, taking down Dark Magic wielding Magic-wielding mages. They handle most of the paperwork involved in running the school, and no mention is made of a headmaster for the Academy.



* AmazonChaser: [[spoiler:Raphael Walt]] is unashamed about his attraction to Maria Campbell, who he admits is more skilled then him at swordsmanship [[spoiler:and Dark Magic.]]

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* AmazonChaser: [[spoiler:Raphael Walt]] is unashamed about his attraction to Maria Campbell, who he admits is more skilled then him at swordsmanship [[spoiler:and Dark Magic.]]Magic]].



* [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Armor Piercing Comment]]: [[spoiler: Sirius Dieke]] goes utterly berserk the first time Katarina [[spoiler: calls him "Rafael Walt"]]. This also prompts the InternalReveal of [[spoiler: Maria realizing that Katarina is "an idiot" instead of a cunning and subtle seductress.]]

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* [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Armor Piercing Armor-Piercing Comment]]: [[spoiler: Sirius Dieke]] goes utterly berserk the first time Katarina [[spoiler: calls him "Rafael Walt"]]. This also prompts the InternalReveal of [[spoiler: Maria realizing that Katarina is "an idiot" instead of a cunning and subtle seductress.]]



* BaitAndSwitch: The Third Prince mentions to the Wards of the Kingdom that they would no longer be able to meet their savior, [[spoiler:Miss Maria Campbell]], to their sorrow. He then introduces them to their new guardian, [[spoiler:Lady Maria, Knight of Sorcier,]] to they joy of everyone, especially after she gives him a kick in the shin for making the kids cry.
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael's body gives out, only to end up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Lady Maria of Cainhurst.]]

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* BaitAndSwitch: The Third Prince mentions to the Wards of the Kingdom that they would will no longer be able to meet their savior, [[spoiler:Miss Maria Campbell]], to their sorrow. He then introduces them to their new guardian, [[spoiler:Lady Maria, Knight of Sorcier,]] Sorcier]], to they the joy of everyone, especially after she gives him a kick in the shin for making the kids cry.
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: The dark magic Dark Magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael's body gives out, only to end up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Lady Maria of Cainhurst.]]



* BewareTheQuietOnes: Sophia expresses a burning interest in the firearms Maria's making, even putting in a commission and asking if they can be made with multiple barrels, self-reloading, and big enough to "remove bridges, castles, dragons and inconvenient gods", a desire that makes Keith and even Maria feel disturbed.

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* BewareTheQuietOnes: Sophia expresses a burning interest in the firearms Maria's making, even putting in a commission and asking if they can be made with multiple barrels, self-reloading, and big enough to "remove bridges, castles, dragons and inconvenient gods", a desire that which makes Keith and even Maria feel disturbed.



* ChekhovsSkill: Katarina's training in swordsmanship, introduced in Chapter 2, doesn't get used properly until [[spoiler:the School Festival's play, where the heroine, played by Maria, has an epic [[FinalFight final duel]] with the villaness, played by a disguised Katarina, to the amazement of everyone.]]

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* ChekhovsSkill: Katarina's training in swordsmanship, introduced in Chapter 2, doesn't get used properly until [[spoiler:the School Festival's play, where the heroine, played by Maria, has an epic [[FinalFight final duel]] with the villaness, villainess, played by a disguised Katarina, to the amazement of everyone.]]



* CoolHat: Maria of Cainhurst had a nifty tricorne hat that Maria Campbell misses. She finally replaces it just before [[spoiler: the climactic fight against Sirius Dieke]].

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* CoolHat: Maria of Cainhurst had a nifty tricorne hat that Maria Campbell misses. She finally replaces it it, just before [[spoiler: the climactic fight against Sirius Dieke]].



* TheCorruptor: Sirius uses his dark magic to exacerbate people's hate towards each other.

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* TheCorruptor: Sirius uses his dark magic Dark Magic to exacerbate people's hate towards each other.



* CurbStompBattle: Maria versus [[spoiler: Sirius is about as fair as putting a novice against one of the best swordswomen in Yharnam can be expected to be. The following BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind between the Dark Spirit possessing Sirius and Lady Maria of the Astral Clocktower is if anything, even more unfair.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: Maria versus [[spoiler: Sirius is about as fair as putting a novice against one of the best swordswomen in Yharnam can be expected to be. The following BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind between the Dark Spirit possessing Sirius and Lady Maria of the Astral Clocktower is is, if anything, even more ''more'' unfair.]]



* DamnYouMuscleMemory: {{Zigzagged|Trope}}. Maria quickly finds that she cannot rely on her past life's memories in a fight because her body is untrained. However, later on when fighting [[spoiler: Sirius]] her using a dagger in her off hand instead of a shortsword causes it to repeatedly undershoot her swings with it. Given that she's ''not'' aiming to kill, however, this turns out to her advantage.

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* DamnYouMuscleMemory: {{Zigzagged|Trope}}. Maria quickly finds that she cannot rely on her past life's memories in a fight because her body is untrained. However, later on when fighting [[spoiler: Sirius]] Sirius]], her using a dagger in her off hand offhand instead of a shortsword causes it to repeatedly undershoot her swings with it. Given that she's ''not'' aiming to kill, however, this turns works out to her advantage.



* ForScience: One of the Ministry employees researching blood types injects another person's blood into his own, which turns out to be incompatible. After nearly dying for blood clotting, he exclaims that they should repeat the experiment. At which point, Maria knocks him out.

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* ForScience: One of the Ministry employees researching blood types injects another person's blood into his own, which turns out to be incompatible. After nearly dying for to blood clotting, he exclaims that they should repeat the experiment. At which point, Maria knocks him out.



* FriendToAllChildren: The Third Prince towards the Wards of the Kingdom, ie the children Maria rescued, earning him the unintentional nickname of Uncle Prince.

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* FriendToAllChildren: The Third Prince towards the Wards of the Kingdom, ie i.e. the children Maria rescued, earning him the unintentional nickname of Uncle Prince.



* HeyYou: Katarina repeatedly called Maria "Maria", which Maria insists is improper for a noble to address a mere commoner by. [[spoiler:Even after Maria becomes knighted, she still insists that it's improper for her as a lowly knight to be called "Maria", rather than "Lady Campbell"]]. Maria threatens to forget how to bake, which spooks Katarina enough that she starts calling her "Miss Campbell" in her thoughts.
** Later, Maria allows Katarina to call her "[[spoiler:Lady]] Maria" and herself call Katarina "Lady Katarina", rather than "Lady Claes", after she impresses her with [[spoiler:her training and swordsmanship during the Student Festival's play.]]

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* HeyYou: Katarina repeatedly called Maria "Maria", which Maria insists is improper for a noble to address a mere commoner by. [[spoiler:Even after Maria becomes knighted, she still insists that it's improper for her as a lowly knight to be called "Maria", rather than "Lady Campbell"]]. Maria threatens to forget how to bake, which spooks Katarina enough that she starts calling her "Miss Campbell" even in her thoughts.
** Later, Maria allows Katarina to call her "[[spoiler:Lady]] Maria" and herself to call Katarina "Lady Katarina", rather than "Lady Claes", after she impresses her with [[spoiler:her training and swordsmanship during the Student Festival's play.]]



* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Maria spends much of the story thoroughly convinced that [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Katarina]] [[ObliviousToLove Claes]] is some sort of highly intelligent master seductress.

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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Maria spends much the entire early part of the story thoroughly convinced that [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Katarina]] [[ObliviousToLove Claes]] is some sort of highly intelligent master seductress.



* InSpiteOfANail: Despite forging a genuine friendship with Maria, [[spoiler:Raphael Walt still goes through with his revenge on the nobility, putting Katarina in a Dark-Magic induced coma.]]

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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite forging a genuine friendship with Maria, [[spoiler:Raphael Walt still goes through with his revenge on the nobility, putting Katarina in a Dark-Magic induced Dark Magic-induced coma.]]



* KingIncognito: It's implied that the King and Queen of Sorcier attended the Student Festival as Lady Redmane and her butler.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: One use of dark magic. [[spoiler: Maria later inverts this to recall specific memories (cookie instructions) that she had forgotten.]]
* LostTechnology: The books from the long fallen Marvelous Kingdom of Friedonia describe medical procedures such as intravenous infusions, blood transfusions, and ABO blood typing, which have seemingly been lost to time by present day.

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* KingIncognito: It's implied that the The King and Queen of Sorcier attended attend the Student Festival disguised as Lady Redmane and her butler.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: One use of dark magic.Dark Magic. [[spoiler: Maria later inverts this to recall specific memories (cookie instructions) that she had forgotten.]]
* LostTechnology: The books from the long fallen long-fallen Marvelous Kingdom of Friedonia describe medical procedures such as intravenous infusions, blood transfusions, and ABO blood typing, which have seemingly been lost to time by present day.



** The ABO blood typing, which is named Sword, Shield, Armed, or Bared type blood. Otherwise known as Campbell-typing, as she was the only one who remembered to take notes during the discovery.

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** The ABO blood typing, which is named Sword, Shield, Armed, or Bared type blood. Otherwise known as Campbell-typing, as she was the only one who remembered to actually take notes during the discovery.



* PenPushingPresident: The Student Council in General and the President in particular. Sirius and Maria even have a running joke about being the Head Clerk instead of the President.

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* PenPushingPresident: The Student Council in General general and the President in particular. Sirius and Maria even have a running joke about being the Head Clerk instead of the President.



** There are vast and long-lasting complications to the aftermath of [[spoiler: the fight with the dark spirit]]. At the same time, [[spoiler: no one was permanently harmed, and Rafael is a victim of the Marchioness possessed by a dark spirit, so he gets off with probation once he's freed.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: It takes ritual murder to give someone dark magic, but having dark magic on its own is not a crime because most people dabbling in dark magic usually give powers to a (disposable) third party first, in order to test whether it works, so those victims get probation.
** It likely says something about [[VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}} Yharnam]] that Maria believes the only reason she would be summoned to the capital is for some kind of execution.

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** There are vast and long-lasting complications to the aftermath of [[spoiler: the fight with the dark spirit]]. At the same time, [[spoiler: no one was permanently harmed, and Rafael is was both a victim of the Marchioness and possessed by a dark spirit, so he gets off with probation once he's freed.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: It takes ritual murder to give someone dark magic, but Dark Magic, however having dark magic Dark Magic on its own is not a crime because most people dabbling in dark magic it usually give powers to a (disposable) third party first, in order to test whether it works, so those victims get probation.
** It likely says something about [[VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}} Yharnam]] that Maria believes the only reason she would be summoned to the capital is for some kind of execution.to be executed.



** The Student Festival's play is based off ''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}''.

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** The Student Festival's play is based off ''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}''. basically ''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}'', with lore elements of ''VideoGame/DarkSouls'' mixed in.



* SimplemindedWisdom: Katarina observes that if Sirius really wanted to kill her he'd have killed her after putting her to sleep, so he probably is wants to talk about something.

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* SimplemindedWisdom: Katarina observes that if Sirius had really wanted to kill her her, he'd have killed her after putting her to sleep, so he probably is wants to talk about something.



* SoProudOfYou: Maria is so proud of Katarina for [[spoiler:not only showing up to partake in the play even though she didn't want to, but also for her training and swordsmanship, allowing the two of them to put on an epic final duel between the heroine and villianess, that she even allows her to [[FirstNameBasis call her "Lady Maria"]] in private.]]

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* SoProudOfYou: Maria is so proud of Katarina for [[spoiler:not only showing up to partake in the play even though she didn't want to, but also for her training and swordsmanship, allowing the two of them to put on an epic final duel between the heroine and villianess, villainess, that she even allows her to [[FirstNameBasis call her "Lady Maria"]] in private.]]



* StrangelyArousing: Maria, who found the description of blood transfusions in an ancient medical textbook to be very erotic, to the point where she [[spoiler:pounced on Raphael when they later met.]]

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* StrangelyArousing: Maria, who found the description of blood transfusions in an ancient medical textbook to be very erotic, to the point where she [[spoiler:pounced on Raphael when they later met.]] met]].



* TechnologyUplift: Maria introduces the concept of intravenous infusion to Sorcier for her old world, disguising it as something she read about in an ancient Friedonian book. It would prove instrumental in saving Katerina when her [[spoiler:Dark-Magic induced coma]] lasted several weeks.

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* TechnologyUplift: Maria introduces the concept of intravenous infusion to Sorcier for from her old world, disguising it as something she read about in an ancient Friedonian book. It would prove instrumental in saving Katerina when her [[spoiler:Dark-Magic induced [[spoiler:Dark Magic-induced coma]] lasted several weeks.



-->'''Maria''': ''"It would be in the coin of greatest value to the realm, lives and power."''

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-->'''Maria''': -->'''Maria:''' ''"It would be in the coin of greatest value to the realm, lives and power."''
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Can be read on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maria-campbell-of-the-astral-clocktower-hamefura-bloodborne-crossover-yes-really.870472/ spacebattles]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13654825/1/Maria-Campbell-of-the-Astral-Clocktower Fanfiction dot net]].

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Can be read on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maria-campbell-of-the-astral-clocktower-hamefura-bloodborne-crossover-yes-really.870472/ spacebattles]] or Spacebattles]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13654825/1/Maria-Campbell-of-the-Astral-Clocktower Fanfiction dot net]].
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* AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil: The Student Council, which includes the Third and Fourth Prince of Sorcier, the son and daughter of the Prime Minister, several other high-ranking nobles, and Maria, rumoured to have wandered the countryside, taking down Dark Magic wielding mages. They handle most of the paperwork involved in running the school, and no mention is made of a headmaster for the Academy.



* BewareTheQuietOnes: Sophia expresses a burning interest in the firearms Maria's making, even putting in a commission and asking if they can be made with multiple barrels, self-reloading, and big enough to "remove bridges, castles, dragons and inconvenient gods", a desire that makes Keith and even Maria feel disturbed.



* FreudianSlip: Katarina talks about giving Maria her "really big, long and thick" cucumber.



* IHaveThisFriend: Sirius Dieke opens up to Maria about his past [[spoiler:as Raphael Walt]] under the guise of talking about his sickly, deceased bastard of a half-brother.



* InSpiteOfANail: Despite forging a genuine friendship with Maria, [[spoiler:Raphael Walt still goes through with his revenge on the nobility, putting Katarina in a Dark-Magic induced coma.]]



* SchoolFestival: The Academy has a school festival during Maria's second year, complete with a ball and [[SchoolPlay a play performed by the Student Council.]] Maria is so confused by the notion of high nobility acting as commoners, she questions if it was Katarina's idea.



** Katarina's name from her past life is revealed to be Yamada Tae, from ''Anime/ZombielandSaga''.

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** In the second Katarina Interlude, the Katarina council discuss the possibility of reincarnating in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', ''VideoGame/LifeIsStrange'', and ''VisualNovel/DokiDokiLiteratureClub'', referring to the latter two as weird American Otome games.
** In Katarina's Dream Sequence, Acchan talks about getting together with some guys to try out something called [[VideoGame/CorpseParty Sachiko Ever After.]]
** Several of the new routes in Fortune Lover include an Isekai Hero ending starring [[LightNovel/KonoSuba Kazuma and Megumin]], and a DLC route starring Sienna, OG!Katarina's best friend shown only in ''LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom'''s spinoff, Verge of Destruction.
** Katarina's name from her past life is revealed to be Yamada Tae, the unawake zombie idol from ''Anime/ZombielandSaga''.''Anime/ZombielandSaga''.
** An omake directly references and features a similar plot to that of ''Fanfic/ThroughTheLookingGlassMyNextLifeAsAVillainess'', where the Maria and Katarina of this story end up meeting their Light Novel counterparts.


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* SmallGirlBigGun: Sophia expresses interest in a gun the size of a building, shooting projectiles the size of people to "remove bridges, castles, dragons and inconvenient gods".
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* ChekhovsSkill: Katarina's training in swordsmanship, introduced in Chapter 2, doesn't get used properly until [[spoiler:the School Festival's play, where the heroine, played by Maria, has an epic [[FinalFight final duel]] with the villaness, played by a disguised Katarina, to the amazement of everyone.]]


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* FirstNameBasis: Maria, after a year and a half of forcing Katarina to call her "Miss Campbell" [[spoiler:and later "Lady Campbell"]], finally allows her to call her "[[spoiler:Lady]] Maria" after Katarina impresses her [[spoiler:with her swordsmanship during the School Festival's play.]] She also allows herself to call Katarina "Lady Katarina", rather than "Lady Claes".


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* {{Flynning}}: Averted hard. During the School Festival's play, Maria, the princes, and [[spoiler:Katarina]] have multiple realistic and brutal duels over the course of the story, impressing the swordsmen within the audience.


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** Later, Maria allows Katarina to call her "[[spoiler:Lady]] Maria" and herself call Katarina "Lady Katarina", rather than "Lady Claes", after she impresses her with [[spoiler:her training and swordsmanship during the Student Festival's play.]]


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* KingIncognito: It's implied that the King and Queen of Sorcier attended the Student Festival as Lady Redmane and her butler.


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** The Student Festival's play is based off ''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}''.


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* SoProudOfYou: Maria is so proud of Katarina for [[spoiler:not only showing up to partake in the play even though she didn't want to, but also for her training and swordsmanship, allowing the two of them to put on an epic final duel between the heroine and villianess, that she even allows her to [[FirstNameBasis call her "Lady Maria"]] in private.]]
--> "And good students who make me proud may call me [[spoiler:Lady]] Maria in private."
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-->'''Maria''': ''"It would be in the coin of greatest value to the realm, lives and power."''
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael's body gives out, only to ends up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Maria of Cainhurst.]]

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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael's body gives out, only to ends end up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Lady Maria of Cainhurst.]]
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* FracturedFairyTale: Mary Hunt uses the tale of [[UsefulNotes/ElizabethBathory Goodwife Bathory]] baking nobles into pies as evidence against trusting Maria (a commoner).

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* FracturedFairyTale: Mary Hunt uses the tale of [[UsefulNotes/ElizabethBathory Goodwife Bathory]] baking nobles into pies as evidence against trusting Maria (a commoner). [[RashomonStyle Interestingly, the commoners appear have their own version of the tale, which appears to be closer to the original.]]



* FlashStep: Quickening is specifically noted to be something separate from Maria's BloodMagic and thus something she can perform in Sorcier.

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* FlashStep: Quickening is specifically noted to be something separate from Maria's BloodMagic BloodMagic, and thus something she can perform in Sorcier.



* HeyYou: Katarina repeatedly called Maria 'Maria' which Maria insists is improper for a noble to address a mere commoner by. [[spoiler:Even after Maria becomes knighted, she still insists that it's improper for her as a lowly knight to be called 'Maria', rather than 'Lady Campbell']]. Maria threatens to forget how to bake, which spooks Katarina enough that she starts calling her 'Miss Campbell' in her thoughts.

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* HeyYou: Katarina repeatedly called Maria 'Maria' "Maria", which Maria insists is improper for a noble to address a mere commoner by. [[spoiler:Even after Maria becomes knighted, she still insists that it's improper for her as a lowly knight to be called 'Maria', "Maria", rather than 'Lady Campbell']]. "Lady Campbell"]]. Maria threatens to forget how to bake, which spooks Katarina enough that she starts calling her 'Miss Campbell' "Miss Campbell" in her thoughts.



** Contrary to her [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny personality,]] Katarina's swordsmanship is BoringButPractical and she diligently practices in the early mornings before class.

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** Contrary to her [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny personality,]] personality]], Katarina's swordsmanship is BoringButPractical and she diligently practices in the early mornings before class.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: It takes ritual murder to give someone dark magic, but having dark magic on its own is not a crime because most people dabbling in dark magic first give powers to a (disposable) third party in order to test whether it works, so those victims get probation.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: It takes ritual murder to give someone dark magic, but having dark magic on its own is not a crime because most people dabbling in dark magic first usually give powers to a (disposable) third party first, in order to test whether it works, so those victims get probation.



* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Maria threatens to 'forget' how to bake sweets whenever Katarina misbehaves, usually by calling Maria improperly.

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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Maria threatens to 'forget' "forget" how to bake sweets whenever Katarina misbehaves, usually by calling Maria improperly.



** The King of Sorcier, Artorias Stuart, who was teased for being easily mistaken for a maiden, reminiscent of Saber, ie the female King of Camelot who hid her gender, Artoria Pendragon from ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''.

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** The King of Sorcier, Artorias Stuart, who was teased for being easily mistaken for a maiden, reminiscent of Saber, ie i.e. the female King of Camelot who hid her gender, Artoria Pendragon from ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''.



* StrangelyArousing: Maria who found the description of blood transfusions in an ancient medical textbook to be very erotic, to the point where she [[spoiler:pounced on Rapheal when they later met.]]

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* StrangelyArousing: Maria Maria, who found the description of blood transfusions in an ancient medical textbook to be very erotic, to the point where she [[spoiler:pounced on Rapheal Raphael when they later met.]]



** Taken UpToEleven when all of her various heroic deeds earn her a ''knighthood'', yet Maria ''still'' can't seem to [[HumbleHero wrap her head around the idea that what she did was in any way out of the ordinary]].

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** Taken UpToEleven when all of her various heroic deeds earn her a ''knighthood'', yet Maria ''still'' can't seem to [[HumbleHero wrap her head around the idea that [[SkewedPriorities what she did was in any way out of the ordinary]].



* WeWantOurJerkBack: Once Maria [[spoiler: figures out that Katarina is naive and innocent,]] she becomes so protective that the others long for the days Maria avoided everyone.

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* WeWantOurJerkBack: Once Maria [[spoiler: figures out that Katarina is naive and innocent,]] she becomes so protective that the others long for the days when Maria avoided everyone.



* WrongGenreSavvy: Maria has too many bad memories to realize her new life is LighterAndSofter than her old life as a Cainhurst Vileblood.

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* WrongGenreSavvy: Maria has too many bad memories to realize her new life is LighterAndSofter than her old life as a Cainhurst Vileblood. She is slowly getting better.
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** She later introduces the concept of gunpowder (and its less-violent application, fireworks), claiming it as a "fortuitous discovery in Alchemy class".
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** A Katarina Interlude, which is written in the format of [[Literature/Worm Worm's in-universe Parahuman Online forums.]]

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** A Katarina Interlude, which is written in the format of [[Literature/Worm Worm's ''Literature/{{Worm}}'''s in-universe Parahuman Online forums.]]
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* AmazonChaser: [[spoiler:Raphael Walt]] is unashamed about his attraction to Maria Campbell, who he admits is more skilled then him at swordsmanship [[spoiler:and Dark Magic.]]


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* BaitAndSwitch: The Third Prince mentions to the Wards of the Kingdom that they would no longer be able to meet their savior, [[spoiler:Miss Maria Campbell]], to their sorrow. He then introduces them to their new guardian, [[spoiler:Lady Maria, Knight of Sorcier,]] to they joy of everyone, especially after she gives him a kick in the shin for making the kids cry.


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* BehavioralConditioning: Katerina gets hungry when she sees Maria, as she associates her with sweets.
* BizarreTasteInFood: Maria and blood, to the point where she tried to bake blood into sweets and make blood cocktails, to little success.
* BookcasePassage: The Prime Minister and the King of Sorcier have a secret door between their offices, in order to share an office while preserving the fiction that they don't. It's an open secret among the staff.


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* ForScience: One of the Ministry employees researching blood types injects another person's blood into his own, which turns out to be incompatible. After nearly dying for blood clotting, he exclaims that they should repeat the experiment. At which point, Maria knocks him out.


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* FriendToAllChildren: The Third Prince towards the Wards of the Kingdom, ie the children Maria rescued, earning him the unintentional nickname of Uncle Prince.


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* HeyYou: Katarina repeatedly called Maria 'Maria' which Maria insists is improper for a noble to address a mere commoner by. [[spoiler:Even after Maria becomes knighted, she still insists that it's improper for her as a lowly knight to be called 'Maria', rather than 'Lady Campbell']]. Maria threatens to forget how to bake, which spooks Katarina enough that she starts calling her 'Miss Campbell' in her thoughts.


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* LostTechnology: The books from the long fallen Marvelous Kingdom of Friedonia describe medical procedures such as intravenous infusions, blood transfusions, and ABO blood typing, which have seemingly been lost to time by present day.


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* MomentKiller: Averted. Mary and the Third Prince choke out Alan when it seems his laughing will interrupt [[spoiler:Raphael and Maria's moment after the graduation.]]


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* NamingConventions:
** The events concerning Sirius Dieke and the Marchioness Dieke, [[spoiler:and subsequently Raphael's revenge]], which would became known as [[spoiler:Raphael's]] Vengeance.
** The ABO blood typing, which is named Sword, Shield, Armed, or Bared type blood. Otherwise known as Campbell-typing, as she was the only one who remembered to take notes during the discovery.


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* OneOfTheKids: Katarina Claes, who is seen as a fellow kid by the Wards of the Kingdom.


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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Maria threatens to 'forget' how to bake sweets whenever Katarina misbehaves, usually by calling Maria improperly.
* ShipperOnDeck: Both Katarina and Sophia ship Maria and [[spoiler:Raphael, and squee in joy whenever they see them act cute together. Katarina is even upset when it appears in her eyes that the Third Prince is seducing Maria.]]
* ShoutOut:
** A Katarina Interlude, which is written in the format of [[Literature/Worm Worm's in-universe Parahuman Online forums.]]
** Katarina's name from her past life is revealed to be Yamada Tae, from ''Anime/ZombielandSaga''.
** Diana Cavendish, a noble who joins the student council during Maria's second year, who is named after and acts like her namesake from ''Anime/LittleWitchAcademia''.
** The King of Sorcier, Artorias Stuart, who was teased for being easily mistaken for a maiden, reminiscent of Saber, ie the female King of Camelot who hid her gender, Artoria Pendragon from ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''.


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* StrangelyArousing: Maria who found the description of blood transfusions in an ancient medical textbook to be very erotic, to the point where she [[spoiler:pounced on Rapheal when they later met.]]


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* TechnologyUplift: Maria introduces the concept of intravenous infusion to Sorcier for her old world, disguising it as something she read about in an ancient Friedonian book. It would prove instrumental in saving Katerina when her [[spoiler:Dark-Magic induced coma]] lasted several weeks.
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* OneNoteCook: Raphael Walt's tea is so distinctive, Katarina and Maria can TheNoseKnows it.

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* OneNoteCook: Raphael Walt's tea is so distinctive, Katarina and Maria can TheNoseKnows it.[[TheNoseKnows instantly identify it by its scent]].



* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Geordo to be "The '''ADVERSARY''' And Enemy Of The Alliance" due to his engagement to Katarina. Keith also refers to him this way at one point.

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* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers and Keith both refer to Prince Geordo to be as "The '''ADVERSARY''' '''''ADVERSARY''''' And Enemy Of The Alliance" at various points, due to his engagement to Katarina. Keith also refers to him this way at one point.Katarina.
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Maria spends much of the story thoroughly convinced that [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Katarina]] [[ObliviousToLove Claes]] is some sort of highly intelligent master seductress.


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* UnaccustomedAsIAmToPublicSpeaking: A prime case. Maria of Cainhurst was a noble of the highest house, with the instilled etiquette and upbringing thereof, before she was reborn as Maria Campbell, a low-born commoner of (self-claimed) questionable parentage. Her former life's manners don't so much as shine through, but blaze like a beacon of eldritch propriety, skewed morals, and unblemished comportment. She frequently corrects nobles on their improper behaviours and assumptions, while remaining unfailingly polite, as behooves a commoner.

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** Taken UpToEleven when all of her various heroic deeds earn her a ''knighthood'', yet Maria ''still'' can't seem to [[HumbleHero wrap her head around the idea that what she did was in any way out of the ordinary]].
* UnaccustomedAsIAmToPublicSpeaking: A prime case. Maria of Cainhurst was a noble of the highest house, with the instilled etiquette and upbringing thereof, before she was reborn as Maria Campbell, a low-born commoner of (self-claimed) questionable parentage. Her former life's manners don't really so much as shine through, but as blaze like a beacon of eldritch propriety, skewed morals, and unblemished comportment. She frequently corrects nobles on their improper behaviours behaviors and assumptions, while remaining unfailingly polite, as behooves a commoner.



* WrongGenreSavvy: Maria has too many bad memories to realize her new life is LighterAndSofter than her life as a Cainhurst Vileblood.

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* WrongGenreSavvy: Maria has too many bad memories to realize her new life is LighterAndSofter than her old life as a Cainhurst Vileblood.
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* RealityEnsues: Because Katarina's friends were by her bedside [[spoiler: during her coma]] their grades dropped enough that Prince Jeord couldn't become Student Council President.

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* RealityEnsues: Because Katarina's friends were by her bedside [[spoiler: during her coma]] coma]], their grades dropped enough that Prince Jeord Geordo couldn't become Student Council President.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: It takes ritual murder to give someone dark magic, but having dark magic on its own is not a crime because most people dabbling in dark magic first give powers to a (disposable) third party to test whether it works, so those victims get probation.
* RefugeInAudacity: When rumors begin claiming that Katarina is pregnant [[spoiler: since she's in a coma and her classmates don't know why]], the one naming Mary Hunt [[DudeLooksLikeALady as the father]] is so outrageous Maria pauses to consider it.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: It takes ritual murder to give someone dark magic, but having dark magic on its own is not a crime because most people dabbling in dark magic first give powers to a (disposable) third party in order to test whether it works, so those victims get probation.
* RefugeInAudacity: When rumors begin claiming that Katarina is pregnant [[spoiler: since she's in a coma and her classmates don't know why]], the one naming Mary Hunt [[DudeLooksLikeALady as the father]] is so outrageous Maria actually pauses to consider it.



** Later averted when Prince Geordo tries everything short of an abuse of power to bring his grades up and qualify to become Student Council President, but fails.

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** Later averted when Prince Geordo tries everything short of an actual abuse of power to bring his grades up and qualify to become Student Council President, but fails.



* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Geordo to be "The ADVERSARY And Enemy Of The Alliance" due to his engagement with Katarina.
* SupremeChef: Maria's sweets (and threats to stop making them,) are about the only thing able to make Katarina behave.

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* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Geordo to be "The ADVERSARY '''ADVERSARY''' And Enemy Of The Alliance" due to his engagement with Katarina.
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* SupremeChef: Maria's sweets (and threats to stop making them,) them) are about the only thing able to make Katarina behave.



* TempleOfDoom: One of the school's test is set up to resemble this. [[WrongAssumption Maria naturally assumes it to be genuinely lethal, and is astonished that all her classmates survive.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Maria observes that [[spoiler: the Dark Magic spirit]] could have had revenge by the third month of the prior school year by asking friends for help.

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* TempleOfDoom: One of the school's test tests is set up to resemble this. [[WrongAssumption Maria naturally assumes it to be genuinely lethal, and is astonished that all her classmates survive.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Maria observes that [[spoiler: the Dark Magic spirit]] could have had its revenge by as early as the third month of the prior school year year, simply by asking friends for help.
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* [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Armor Piercing Comment]]: [[spoiler: Sirius Dieke]] goes utterly berserk the first time Katarina [[spoiler: calls him “Rafael Walt”]]. This also prompts the InternalReveal of [[spoiler: Maria realizing that Katarina is “an idiot” instead of a cunning and subtle seductress.]]
* AssimilationBackfire: [[spoiler: Sirius attempting to posess Maria opens him up to being pulled into her dream with her. Her ''Hunter's'' Dream.]]
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael’s body gives out, only to ends up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Maria of Cainhurst.]]

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* [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Armor Piercing Comment]]: [[spoiler: Sirius Dieke]] goes utterly berserk the first time Katarina [[spoiler: calls him “Rafael Walt”]]. "Rafael Walt"]]. This also prompts the InternalReveal of [[spoiler: Maria realizing that Katarina is “an idiot” "an idiot" instead of a cunning and subtle seductress.]]
* AssimilationBackfire: [[spoiler: Sirius attempting to posess possess Maria opens him up to being pulled into her dream with her. Her ''Hunter's'' Dream.]]
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael’s Rafael's body gives out, only to ends up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Maria of Cainhurst.]]



--> "...a shrewd, cunning mind possessed of great power and influence … a subtle and manipulative seductress without compare."
* TheCorruptor: Sirius uses his dark magic to exacerbate people’s hate towards each other.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: Katarina is proven right in her guess that the Student Council President didn’t really want them dead and in her refusal to kill him after he passed out.
* CurbStompBattle: Maria versus [[spoiler: Sirius posessing him is about as fair as putting a novice against one of the best swordswomen in Yharnam can be expected to be. The following BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind between the Dark Spirit posessing Sirius and Lady Maria of the Astral Clocktower is if anything, even more unfair.]]
* TheCynic: Maria, due to her past life’s experiences.
* DamnYouMuscleMemory: Zig-zagged. Maria quickly finds that she cannot rely on her past life’s memories in a fight because her body is untrained. However, later on when fighting [[spoiler: Sirius]] her using a dagger in her off hand instead of a shortsword causes it to repeatedly undershoot her swings with it. Given that she's ''not'' aiming to kill however, this turns out to her advantage.
* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is ''7 feet tall'' and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]

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--> "...a "…a shrewd, cunning mind possessed of great power and influence … influence… a subtle and manipulative seductress without compare."
* TheCorruptor: Sirius uses his dark magic to exacerbate people’s people's hate towards each other.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: Katarina is proven right in her guess that the Student Council President didn’t didn't really want them dead and in her refusal to kill him after he passed out.
* CurbStompBattle: Maria versus [[spoiler: Sirius posessing him is about as fair as putting a novice against one of the best swordswomen in Yharnam can be expected to be. The following BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind between the Dark Spirit posessing possessing Sirius and Lady Maria of the Astral Clocktower is if anything, even more unfair.]]
* TheCynic: Maria, due to her past life’s life's experiences.
* DamnYouMuscleMemory: Zig-zagged. {{Zigzagged|Trope}}. Maria quickly finds that she cannot rely on her past life’s life's memories in a fight because her body is untrained. However, later on when fighting [[spoiler: Sirius]] her using a dagger in her off hand instead of a shortsword causes it to repeatedly undershoot her swings with it. Given that she's ''not'' aiming to kill kill, however, this turns out to her advantage.
* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is ''7 feet tall'' and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath Goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]



--> [[spoiler: '''Rafael''': “Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” ]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Maria''': “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]
* GrowlingGut: Maria mistakes Katarina’s for an actual beast at one point.
* HealingHands: Maria’s Light Magic, which can mend soreness and broken bones alike.

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--> [[spoiler: '''Rafael''': “Miss '''Rafael:''' "Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” me?" ]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Maria''': “"Oh? '''Maria:''' "Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]
* GrowlingGut: Maria mistakes Katarina’s Katarina's for an actual beast at one point.
* HealingHands: Maria’s Maria's Light Magic, which can mend soreness and broken bones alike.



* HiddenDepths: Despite her JadeColoredGlasses, Maria has a strong sense of justice and later [[spoiler: works to keep Katarina “safe” from her harem, as she believes Katarina is not mentally competent to consent to intimate behavior]].
** Contrary to her [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny personality,]] Katarina’s swordsmanship is BoringButPractical and she diligently practices in the early mornings before class.
* HumbleHero: Maria insists that her summer holidays’ actions didn’t qualify her for any kind of reward.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Maria, repeatedly. Usually of blood, but she’d settle for alcohol too.

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* HiddenDepths: Despite her JadeColoredGlasses, Maria has a strong sense of justice and later [[spoiler: works to keep Katarina “safe” "safe" from her harem, as she believes Katarina is not mentally competent to consent to intimate behavior]].
** Contrary to her [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny personality,]] Katarina’s Katarina's swordsmanship is BoringButPractical and she diligently practices in the early mornings before class.
* HumbleHero: Maria insists that her summer holidays’ holidays' actions didn’t didn't qualify her for any kind of reward.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Maria, repeatedly. Usually of blood, but she’d she'd settle for alcohol too.



* {{Irony}}: Light magic can’t be used to generate visible light.
* JustIgnoreIt: Maria’s first strategy at handling nasty rumors, until Katarina starts poking at Maria’s love life. It mostly works afterward for non-Katarina annoyances.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: One use of dark magic. [[spoiler: Maria later inverts this to recall specific memories (cookie instructions) she had forgotten.]]

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* {{Irony}}: Light magic can’t Magic can't be used to generate visible light.
* JustIgnoreIt: Maria’s Maria's first strategy at handling nasty rumors, until Katarina starts poking at Maria’s Maria's love life. It mostly works afterward for non-Katarina annoyances.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: One use of dark magic. [[spoiler: Maria later inverts this to recall specific memories (cookie instructions) that she had forgotten.]]



* MeaningfulEcho: [[spoiler: Rafael Walt]] repeats Katarina’s words when he thanks Maria.

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* MeaningfulEcho: [[spoiler: Rafael Walt]] repeats Katarina’s Katarina's words when he thanks Maria.



* NailedToTheWagon: No matter her cravings, Maria Campbell literally can’t get any blood in this world like Maria of Cainhurst drank because the magic is different.
* NotBloodSiblings: Zig-zagged. Maria briefly believes that Katarina is trying to seduce her and that they may be half-siblings, but neither assumption is true.

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* NailedToTheWagon: No matter her cravings, Maria Campbell literally can’t can't get any blood in this world like Maria of Cainhurst drank because the magic is different.
* NotBloodSiblings: Zig-zagged.{{Zigzagged|Trope}}. Maria briefly believes that Katarina is trying to seduce her and that they may be half-siblings, but neither assumption is true.



* NotSoDifferent: Maria and Katarina have totally opposite personalities – one wearing JadeColoredGlasses and the other living in a RoseTintedNarrative – but they both constantly misinterpret others’ actions and motivations, coming across as similarly oblivious to personal relationships and significant developments. Sirius even points out that both are good at making people think they’re [[ObfuscatingStupidity less knowledgeable]] than they are (and he doesn’t even know about Katarina’s meta-knowledge).
* OneNoteCook: Raphael Walt’s tea is so distinctive, Katarina and Maria can TheNoseKnows it.
** Maria bakes excellent pastries, though she can’t successfully make them with blood yet.

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* NotSoDifferent: Maria and Katarina have totally opposite personalities – one wearing JadeColoredGlasses and the other living in a RoseTintedNarrative – but they both constantly misinterpret others’ others' actions and motivations, coming across as similarly oblivious to personal relationships and significant developments. Sirius even points out that both are good at making people think they’re they're [[ObfuscatingStupidity less knowledgeable]] than they are (and he doesn’t doesn't even know about Katarina’s Katarina's meta-knowledge).
* OneNoteCook: Raphael Walt’s Walt's tea is so distinctive, Katarina and Maria can TheNoseKnows it.
** Maria bakes excellent pastries, though she can’t can't successfully make them with blood yet.



* RealityEnsues: Because Katarina’s friends were by her bedside [[spoiler: during her coma]] their grades dropped enough that Prince Jeord couldn’t become Student Council President.
** There are vast and long-lasting complications to the aftermath of [[spoiler: the fight with the dark spirit]]. At the same time, [[spoiler: no one was permanently harmed, and Rafael is a victim of the Marchioness possessed by a dark spirit, so he gets off with probation once he’s freed.]]

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* RealityEnsues: Because Katarina’s Katarina's friends were by her bedside [[spoiler: during her coma]] their grades dropped enough that Prince Jeord couldn’t couldn't become Student Council President.
** There are vast and long-lasting complications to the aftermath of [[spoiler: the fight with the dark spirit]]. At the same time, [[spoiler: no one was permanently harmed, and Rafael is a victim of the Marchioness possessed by a dark spirit, so he gets off with probation once he’s he's freed.]]



* RefugeInAudacity: When rumors begin claiming that Katarina is pregnant [[spoiler: since she’s in a coma and her classmates don’t know why]], the one naming Mary Hunt [[DudeLooksLikeALady as the father]] is so outrageous Maria pauses to consider it.

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* RefugeInAudacity: When rumors begin claiming that Katarina is pregnant [[spoiler: since she’s she's in a coma and her classmates don’t don't know why]], the one naming Mary Hunt [[DudeLooksLikeALady as the father]] is so outrageous Maria pauses to consider it.



* SimplemindedWisdom: Katarina observes that if Sirius really wanted to kill her he’d have killed her after putting her to sleep, so he probably is wants to talk about something.
* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Geordo to be “The ADVERSARY And Enemy Of The Alliance” due to his engagement with Katarina.
* SupremeChef: Maria’s sweets (and threats to stop making them,) are about the only thing able to make Katarina behave.

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* SimplemindedWisdom: Katarina observes that if Sirius really wanted to kill her he’d he'd have killed her after putting her to sleep, so he probably is wants to talk about something.
* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Geordo to be “The "The ADVERSARY And Enemy Of The Alliance” Alliance" due to his engagement with Katarina.
* SupremeChef: Maria’s Maria's sweets (and threats to stop making them,) are about the only thing able to make Katarina behave.



* TempleOfDoom: One of the school’s test is set up to resemble this. [[WrongAssumption Maria naturally assumes it to be genuinely lethal, and is astonished that all her classmates survive.]]

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* TempleOfDoom: One of the school’s school's test is set up to resemble this. [[WrongAssumption Maria naturally assumes it to be genuinely lethal, and is astonished that all her classmates survive.]]



* ThinkNothingOfIt: Whenever recompense for Maria’s actions is discussed.
--> '''Third Prince''': Not even reimbursement? You did spend a lot of money so those children can stay at an inn.
--> '''Maria''': That was money well spent in their care. I parted with it gladly.
* UnaccustomedAsIAmToPublicSpeaking: A prime case. Maria of Cainhurst was a noble of the highest house, with the instilled etiquette and upbringing thereof, before she was reborn as Maria Campbell, a low-born commoner of (self-claimed) questionable parentage. Her former life’s manners don’t so much as shine through, but blaze like a beacon of eldritch propriety, skewed morals, and unblemished comportment. She frequently corrects nobles on their improper behaviours and assumptions, while remaining unfailingly polite, as behooves a commoner.

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* ThinkNothingOfIt: Whenever recompense for Maria’s Maria's actions is discussed.
--> '''Third Prince''': Prince:''' Not even reimbursement? You did spend a lot of money so those children can stay at an inn.
--> '''Maria''': '''Maria:''' That was money well spent in their care. I parted with it gladly.
* UnaccustomedAsIAmToPublicSpeaking: A prime case. Maria of Cainhurst was a noble of the highest house, with the instilled etiquette and upbringing thereof, before she was reborn as Maria Campbell, a low-born commoner of (self-claimed) questionable parentage. Her former life’s life's manners don’t don't so much as shine through, but blaze like a beacon of eldritch propriety, skewed morals, and unblemished comportment. She frequently corrects nobles on their improper behaviours and assumptions, while remaining unfailingly polite, as behooves a commoner.
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Can be read on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maria-campbell-of-the-astral-clocktower-hamefura-bloodborne-crossover-yes-really.870472/ spacebattles]].

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Can be read on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maria-campbell-of-the-astral-clocktower-hamefura-bloodborne-crossover-yes-really.870472/ spacebattles]].
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--> [[spoiler: ''Maria'': “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]

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--> [[spoiler: ''Rafael'': '''Rafael''': “Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” ]]
--> [[spoiler: ''Maria'': '''Maria''': “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]



--> ''Third Prince'': Not even reimbursement? You did spend a lot of money so those children can stay at an inn.
--> ''Maria'': That was money well spent in their care. I parted with it gladly.

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--> ''Third Prince'': '''Third Prince''': Not even reimbursement? You did spend a lot of money so those children can stay at an inn.
--> ''Maria'': '''Maria''': That was money well spent in their care. I parted with it gladly.
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* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is **7 feet tall** and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]

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* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is **7 ''7 feet tall** tall'' and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]



--> [[spoiler: **Rafael**: “Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” ]]
--> [[spoiler: **Maria**: “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]

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--> [[spoiler: **Rafael**: ''Rafael'': “Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” ]]
--> [[spoiler: **Maria**: ''Maria'': “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]



--> **Third Prince**: Not even reimbursement? You did spend a lot of money so those children can stay at an inn.
--> **Maria**: That was money well spent in their care. I parted with it gladly.

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--> **Third Prince**: ''Third Prince'': Not even reimbursement? You did spend a lot of money so those children can stay at an inn.
--> **Maria**: ''Maria'': That was money well spent in their care. I parted with it gladly.
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* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is 7bfeet tall **7 feet tall** and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]

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--> [[spoiler: Rafael: “Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” ]]
--> [[spoiler: Maria: “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]

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--> [[spoiler: Rafael: **Rafael**: “Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” ]]
--> [[spoiler: Maria: **Maria**: “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]



* HumbleHero: Maria insists that her summer holidays’ actions didn’t qualify her for any kind of reward.



* NoNameGiven: Averted, as the dream sequence reveals that Monkey Girl was named Yamada Tae.

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* ThinkNothingOfIt: Whenever recompense for Maria’s actions is discussed.
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* UnaccustomedAsIAmToPublicSpeaking: A prime case. Maria of Cainhurst was a noble of the highest house, with the instilled etiquette and upbringing thereof, before she was reborn as Maria Campbell, a low-born commoner of (self-claimed) questionable parentage. Her former life’s manners don’t so much as shine through, but blaze like a beacon of eldritch propriety, skewed morals, and unblemished comportment. She frequently corrects nobles on their improper behaviours and assumptions, while remaining unfailingly polite, as behooves a commoner.
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In this case, the canon [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Maria Campbell]] awakens her past life's memories as [[BloodMagic Maria]] [[BloodKnight Cainhurst]] years before she and Katarina (reincarnated as per canon) meet.

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In this case, the canon [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Maria Campbell]] awakens her past life's memories as [[LadyOfWar Lady]] [[BloodMagic Maria]] [[BloodKnight of Cainhurst]] years before she and Katarina (reincarnated as per canon) meet.



* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is 7-feet tall and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]

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* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is 7-feet 7bfeet tall and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]



* MistakenForRomance: Maria mistakes several nobles as [[DecadentCourt trying to seduce her]] several times. Later on, classmates mistake her as confessing love to Nicol Ascort.

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* MistakenForRomance: Maria mistakes several nobles as [[DecadentCourt trying to seduce her]] several times. Later on, classmates mistake her as confessing love to Nicol Ascort.Ascart.



** Later averted when Prince Geord tries everything short of an abuse of power to bring his grades up and qualify to become Student Council President, but fails.

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** Later averted when Prince Geord Geordo tries everything short of an abuse of power to bring his grades up and qualify to become Student Council President, but fails.



* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Jeord to be “The ADVERSARY And Enemy Of The Alliance” due to his engagement with Katarina.

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* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Jeord Geordo to be “The ADVERSARY And Enemy Of The Alliance” due to his engagement with Katarina.
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A crossover between VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}} and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.

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A crossover between VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}} ''VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}}'' and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom ''LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom'' (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.

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* TheAtoner: How Maria Campbell feels after Maria Cainhurst.

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* TheAtoner: How Maria Campbell feels after Maria of Cainhurst.



* [[spoiler: BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael’s body gives out, only to ends up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Maria Cainhurst.]]

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* AssimilationBackfire: [[spoiler: Sirius attempting to posess Maria opens him up to being pulled into her dream with her. Her ''Hunter's'' Dream.]]
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BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael’s body gives out, only to ends up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Maria of Cainhurst.]]



* CoolHat: Maria Cainhurst had a nifty tricorne hat that Maria Campbell misses. She finally replaces it just before [[spoiler: the climactic fight against Sirius Dieke]].

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* CoolHat: Maria of Cainhurst had a nifty tricorne hat that Maria Campbell misses. She finally replaces it just before [[spoiler: the climactic fight against Sirius Dieke]].



* CurbStompBattle: Maria versus [[spoiler: Sirius posessing him is about as fair as putting a novice against one of the best swordswomen in Yharnam can be expected to be. The following BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind between the Dark Spirit posessing Sirius and Lady Maria of the Astral Clocktower is if anything, even more unfair.]]



* DamnYouMuscleMemory: Averted. Maria quickly finds that she cannot rely on her past life’s memories in a fight because her body is untrained.
* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic]].

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* DamnYouMuscleMemory: Averted. Zig-zagged. Maria quickly finds that she cannot rely on her past life’s memories in a fight because her body is untrained.
untrained. However, later on when fighting [[spoiler: Sirius]] her using a dagger in her off hand instead of a shortsword causes it to repeatedly undershoot her swings with it. Given that she's ''not'' aiming to kill however, this turns out to her advantage.
* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic]].Magic in her dreams]]. Maria's [[spoiler: astral self is 7-feet tall and still dwarfed by the spirit. In this case, David rips goliath apart until Goliath is about the same size as David, then proceeds to tear Goliath's metaphorical heart out.]]



* FlashStep: Quickening is specifically noted to be something separate from Maria's BloodMagic and thus something she can perform in Sorcier.



* NailedToTheWagon: No matter her cravings, Maria Campbell literally can’t get any blood in this world like Maria Cainhurst drank because the magic is different.

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* NailedToTheWagon: No matter her cravings, Maria Campbell literally can’t get any blood in this world like Maria of Cainhurst drank because the magic is different.



* WrongGenreSavvy: Maria has too many bad memories to realize her new life is LighterAndSofter than her life as a Cainhurst.

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* WrongGenreSavvy: Maria has too many bad memories to realize her new life is LighterAndSofter than her life as a Cainhurst.Cainhurst Vileblood.
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A crossover between VideoGame/[[Bloodborne]] and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.

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A crossover between VideoGame/[[Bloodborne]] VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}} and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.
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A crossover between VideoGame/{Bloodborne} VideoGame/[[Bloodborne]] and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.
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A crossover between VideoGame/Bloodborne and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.

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A crossover between VideoGame/Bloodborne VideoGame/{Bloodborne} and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.
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''Maria Campbell remembers an old life. A life bathed in blood. A fishing hamlet. A research hall of many floors and many patients. And a stranger who insisted on corpse-fishing...''

''AKA, that fic where a grimdark DLC boss is reincarnated in fluffy otome-land and still acts like she's in a From Software game (that's NOT Cookies & Cream)...''

A crossover between VideoGame/Bloodborne and LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom (yes, really,) by Creator/ShadowCrystalMage, this story explores what happens when a story based around someone who knows they're [[GenreSavvy in an Otome Game]] runs into someone reincarnated without meta-knowledge.

In this case, the canon [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Maria Campbell]] awakens her past life's memories as [[BloodMagic Maria]] [[BloodKnight Cainhurst]] years before she and Katarina (reincarnated as per canon) meet.

This result in much amusing mayhem and more than one SustainedMisunderstanding as Maria fails to grasp the LighterAndSofter nature of her world even as she slowly heals from the trauma that made her into ThatOneBoss.

! Examples:

* AdaptationExpansion: The version of Fortune Lover made by Miyazaki secretly has eight routes and twenty endings instead of the canonical four and a bonus route.
* TheAtoner: How Maria Campbell feels after Maria Cainhurst.
--> She was just Maria Campbell doing her chores. It was hard work, but it was a good hardness, of honest labor and clean work and no one was hurt, nothing was defiled.
--> Carrying only guilt from a life already past, Maria found a semblance of peace.
* [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Armor Piercing Comment]]: [[spoiler: Sirius Dieke]] goes utterly berserk the first time Katarina [[spoiler: calls him “Rafael Walt”]]. This also prompts the InternalReveal of [[spoiler: Maria realizing that Katarina is “an idiot” instead of a cunning and subtle seductress.]]
* [[spoiler: BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: The dark magic spirit tries to possess Maria when Rafael’s body gives out, only to ends up in a HopelessBossFight against the memories and experience of Maria Cainhurst.]]
* BullyingADragon: Maria broke the arms of a few would-be noble bullies.
* ChastityDagger: Maria carries one after seeing Katarina practice her sword skills.
* CombatPragmatist: Maria fights seriously with anything on hand, even a piece of bread.
* CoolHat: Maria Cainhurst had a nifty tricorne hat that Maria Campbell misses. She finally replaces it just before [[spoiler: the climactic fight against Sirius Dieke]].
* {{Corpsing}}: In-universe, Prince Alan barely keeps from collapsing in laughter when [[EntertaininglyWrong Maria]] describes [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Katarina]] as:
--> "...a shrewd, cunning mind possessed of great power and influence … a subtle and manipulative seductress without compare."
* TheCorruptor: Sirius uses his dark magic to exacerbate people’s hate towards each other.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: Katarina is proven right in her guess that the Student Council President didn’t really want them dead and in her refusal to kill him after he passed out.
* TheCynic: Maria, due to her past life’s experiences.
* DamnYouMuscleMemory: Averted. Maria quickly finds that she cannot rely on her past life’s memories in a fight because her body is untrained.
* DavidVersusGoliath: Maria versus [[spoiler: the spirit of Dark Magic]].
* FailedASpotCheck: Maria sees the smoky tendrils that signify Dark Magic, but she mistakes it for a new fad in noble fashion and dismisses it, even when Katarina is in a coma and emitting smoke.
* FearlessFool: Katarina steps unflinchingly into a cloud of Dark Magic that frightens Maria.
* FracturedFairyTale: Mary Hunt uses the tale of [[UsefulNotes/ElizabethBathory Goodwife Bathory]] baking nobles into pies as evidence against trusting Maria (a commoner).
* FlashbackNightmare: How it all begins for Maria, remembering her past life.
* TheGadfly: How [[spoiler: Maria]] flirts.
--> [[spoiler: Rafael: “Miss Campbell, would you take a walk with me?” ]]
--> [[spoiler: Maria: “"Oh? Are you trying to get me alone for some nefarious purpose, former-Head Clerk?"]]
* GrowlingGut: Maria mistakes Katarina’s for an actual beast at one point.
* HealingHands: Maria’s Light Magic, which can mend soreness and broken bones alike.
* HeartbrokenBadass: Maria can feel things inside her breaking as the evidence against [[spoiler: Sirius Dieke]] mounts, to the point that [[spoiler: her voice is shaking as she asks him to stand down while dueling him with swords, and she freezes rather than finish him]].
* HiddenDepths: Despite her JadeColoredGlasses, Maria has a strong sense of justice and later [[spoiler: works to keep Katarina “safe” from her harem, as she believes Katarina is not mentally competent to consent to intimate behavior]].
** Contrary to her [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny personality,]] Katarina’s swordsmanship is BoringButPractical and she diligently practices in the early mornings before class.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Maria, repeatedly. Usually of blood, but she’d settle for alcohol too.
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Downplayed into a subversion, as the only attraction to [[spoiler: Katarina Claes]] that Maria feels occurs when [[spoiler: she sees Katarina practicing her sword skills one morning]], but it never develops into anything.
** Similarly, [[spoiler: Raphael Walt becomes very attracted to Maria after she fights him with a sword and [[RescueRomance banishes the spirit possessing him]].]]
* {{Irony}}: Light magic can’t be used to generate visible light.
* JustIgnoreIt: Maria’s first strategy at handling nasty rumors, until Katarina starts poking at Maria’s love life. It mostly works afterward for non-Katarina annoyances.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: One use of dark magic. [[spoiler: Maria later inverts this to recall specific memories (cookie instructions) she had forgotten.]]
* LotusEaterMachine: Maria is too blissed out on blood to notice time passing or anything else when they get pulled into a book that gives readers their desires.
* MeaningfulEcho: [[spoiler: Rafael Walt]] repeats Katarina’s words when he thanks Maria.
* MistakenForRomance: Maria mistakes several nobles as [[DecadentCourt trying to seduce her]] several times. Later on, classmates mistake her as confessing love to Nicol Ascort.
* NailedToTheWagon: No matter her cravings, Maria Campbell literally can’t get any blood in this world like Maria Cainhurst drank because the magic is different.
* NotBloodSiblings: Zig-zagged. Maria briefly believes that Katarina is trying to seduce her and that they may be half-siblings, but neither assumption is true.
* NoNameGiven: Averted, as the dream sequence reveals that Monkey Girl was named Yamada Tae.
* NotSoDifferent: Maria and Katarina have totally opposite personalities – one wearing JadeColoredGlasses and the other living in a RoseTintedNarrative – but they both constantly misinterpret others’ actions and motivations, coming across as similarly oblivious to personal relationships and significant developments. Sirius even points out that both are good at making people think they’re [[ObfuscatingStupidity less knowledgeable]] than they are (and he doesn’t even know about Katarina’s meta-knowledge).
* OneNoteCook: Raphael Walt’s tea is so distinctive, Katarina and Maria can TheNoseKnows it.
** Maria bakes excellent pastries, though she can’t successfully make them with blood yet.
* ParentalSexualitySquick: Maria wishes for a sedative after her thoughts drift to the possibility of a new sibling.
* PassiveAggressiveKombat: When Raphael finally visits the school, Maria demurely assures him that she knows how much more important his revenge is to him than anything else (like her).
* PenPushingPresident: The Student Council in General and the President in particular. Sirius and Maria even have a running joke about being the Head Clerk instead of the President.
* RealityEnsues: Because Katarina’s friends were by her bedside [[spoiler: during her coma]] their grades dropped enough that Prince Jeord couldn’t become Student Council President.
** There are vast and long-lasting complications to the aftermath of [[spoiler: the fight with the dark spirit]]. At the same time, [[spoiler: no one was permanently harmed, and Rafael is a victim of the Marchioness possessed by a dark spirit, so he gets off with probation once he’s freed.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: It takes ritual murder to give someone dark magic, but having dark magic on its own is not a crime because most people dabbling in dark magic first give powers to a (disposable) third party to test whether it works, so those victims get probation.
* RefugeInAudacity: When rumors begin claiming that Katarina is pregnant [[spoiler: since she’s in a coma and her classmates don’t know why]], the one naming Mary Hunt [[DudeLooksLikeALady as the father]] is so outrageous Maria pauses to consider it.
* RousingSpeech: Katarina gives one to Maria about finding the truth behind [[spoiler: Sirius Dieke and Dark Magic uses]] together to get her to accompany them.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Maria reflects that when a group with two princes, a future duke, and several other nobles decides to bend the rules, they can do so.
** Later averted when Prince Geord tries everything short of an abuse of power to bring his grades up and qualify to become Student Council President, but fails.
* SignatureMove: No one surpasses Maria at the lunge.
* SimplemindedWisdom: Katarina observes that if Sirius really wanted to kill her he’d have killed her after putting her to sleep, so he probably is wants to talk about something.
* SitcomArchNemesis: Mary considers Prince Jeord to be “The ADVERSARY And Enemy Of The Alliance” due to his engagement with Katarina.
* SupremeChef: Maria’s sweets (and threats to stop making them,) are about the only thing able to make Katarina behave.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Maria absolutely did not twitch when Rafael was mentioned.
* TempleOfDoom: One of the school’s test is set up to resemble this. [[WrongAssumption Maria naturally assumes it to be genuinely lethal, and is astonished that all her classmates survive.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Maria observes that [[spoiler: the Dark Magic spirit]] could have had revenge by the third month of the prior school year by asking friends for help.
* UnreliableNarrator: Everyone.
* WeWantOurJerkBack: Once Maria [[spoiler: figures out that Katarina is naive and innocent,]] she becomes so protective that the others long for the days Maria avoided everyone.
* WhatMeasureIsAMook: Maria kills several guards but leaves their employer alive for trial.
* WrongGenreSavvy: Maria has too many bad memories to realize her new life is LighterAndSofter than her life as a Cainhurst.

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