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* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler:In the LotusEaterMachine-spawned alternate timeline Leviathan gets trapped in, she reconciles with her human friend Honoré and eventually marries him after three years of developing their relationship.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler:In the LotusEaterMachine-spawned alternate timeline Leviathan gets trapped in, she reconciles with her human friend Honoré and eventually marries him after three years of developing their relationship. Much later after he dies, she becomes drawn to an aspiring artist and later marries him as well.]]
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Celestia subjects Twilight Sparkle to this when Leviathan's existence becomes known, keeping her from hearing any sort of news about the Reploid at all. According to one of her letters, this is done to prevent her from thinking that Levi is a sapient ''golem'' and thus hound her for details as to how she's able to live. Spike is already aware, but he has been sworn to secrecy.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Celestia subjects Twilight Sparkle to this when Leviathan's existence becomes known, keeping her from hearing any sort of news about the Reploid at all. According to one of her letters, this is done to prevent her from thinking that Levi is a sapient ''golem'' and thus hound her for details as to how she's able to live. Spike is already aware, but he has been sworn to secrecy. A "What If?" scenario confirms that Twilight would actively pester Leviathan if Celestia chose not to do this.
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* TheOmniscientCouncilOfVagueness: The meeting between Cocoa Mocha's proxy, Ignition, and his agents hits some of the marks: a completely dark room (passed off by some of them as needing some new lights), the agents being referred to almost entirely by their numbers (except for a few prior antagonists that are already known to the audience), ominous discussions revolving around the protagonists, and a plan to punt Celestia off of her throne that's not entirely clear to the readers.
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* TheOmniscientCouncilOfVagueness: The meeting between Cocoa Mocha's proxy, Ignition, and his agents hits some of the marks: a completely dark room (passed off by some of them as needing some new lights), the agents being referred to almost entirely by their numbers (except for a few prior antagonists that are already known to the audience), ominous discussions revolving around the protagonists, and a plan to punt Celestia off of her throne that's not entirely clear to the readers. As the story progresses, everything about them becomes less omniscient and vague.
** Calico: "You won't beat me, you won't freeze me, and you're sure as blazes not quick enough to ''catch'' me!"
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* TrashTheSet: Trifecta utterly torches the facility Leviathan chases him to in an attempt to kill her. While the local weather team and firefighters were able to keep the blaze from going out of control, enough damage has been done that the facility is afterwards slated for demolition.
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* TrashTheSet: TrashTheSet:
** Trifecta utterly torches the facility Leviathan chases him to in an attempt to kill her. While the local weather team and firefighters were able to keep the blaze from going out of control, enough damage has been done that the facility is afterwards slated fordemolition.demolition.
** Leviathan's battle with Calico at a nearly-completed shopping mall ends with the building's food court getting gutted. Intervention from the city's fireponies keeps the fires from spreading to the rest of the building, however.
** Trifecta utterly torches the facility Leviathan chases him to in an attempt to kill her. While the local weather team and firefighters were able to keep the blaze from going out of control, enough damage has been done that the facility is afterwards slated for
** Leviathan's battle with Calico at a nearly-completed shopping mall ends with the building's food court getting gutted. Intervention from the city's fireponies keeps the fires from spreading to the rest of the building, however.
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* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: After a slightly convoluted plan to kill Leviathan is brought up by Ignition, Gates wonders why he shouldn't just stab her and be done with it. Ignition rejects the idea, citing a possibility that Leviathan's death explosion could send him to another world like Omega's did at best, or straight up kill him at worst.
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* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: After a slightly convoluted plan to kill Leviathan is brought up by Ignition, Gates wonders why he shouldn't just stab her and be done with it. Ignition rejects the idea, citing a possibility that Leviathan's death explosion could send him to another world like Omega's did at best, or straight up kill him at worst.worst--they just don't have the information they need to do safely.
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* YankTheDogsChain: The entirety of "Shine Aqua Illusion". [[spoiler:230 years of life in a world that showed humans and Reploids at their best, the joy of marrying her first real friend, seeing the world she lived in rendered suitable for global habitation once more, and many other things... and then Leviathan is released from Illudere's spell back into reality, leaving her with nothing but a confidence-breaking feeling of loss.]]
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* YankTheDogsChain: The entirety of "Shine Aqua Illusion". [[spoiler:230 years of life in a world that showed humans and Reploids at their best, the joy of marrying her first real friend, seeing the world she lived in rendered suitable for global habitation once more, and many other things... and then Leviathan is released from Illudere's spell back into reality, leaving her with nothing but a confidence-breaking feeling of loss.loss and the realization that everything she'd experienced was a lie.]]
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Leviathan hates it when non-combative civilians, especially her close friends, put themselves in danger for her sake. When Drama does this at one point, Levi snaps at her despite her having a good reason for doing so.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: AngerBornOfWorry:
** Leviathan hates it when non-combative civilians, especially her close friends, put themselves in danger for her sake. When Drama does this at one point, Levi snaps at her despite her having a good reason for doingso.so.
** This happens to Gray when one of her children does something incredibly dangerous. When she finds the child, she rants to them about how stupid their actions were and loudly wonders why they thought doing so was a good idea. It's not until after the child disarms her anger that Gray calms down and admits she was only upset because she cared about them.
** Leviathan hates it when non-combative civilians, especially her close friends, put themselves in danger for her sake. When Drama does this at one point, Levi snaps at her despite her having a good reason for doing
** This happens to Gray when one of her children does something incredibly dangerous. When she finds the child, she rants to them about how stupid their actions were and loudly wonders why they thought doing so was a good idea. It's not until after the child disarms her anger that Gray calms down and admits she was only upset because she cared about them.
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* FreakOut: [[spoiler:Calico Driftwood undergoes one of these when she gets hit with several major realizations, changing her perceptions about both herself and the incident that prompted her race's Silencing. Her emotional output as a result of this completely kills off her wanderlust, forces her to flee Manehattan, and prompts her to willingly submit to being submersed in the Stream of Silence back home.]]
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* PasswordSlotMachine: Each of Leviathan's new abilities requires a two-billion-character password, with 250 or so possibilities for each character. However, the system is set up to allow an infinite number of wrong guesses without locking the user out, and it also tells the user which characters are correct. Leviathan figures out that it'll take her 250 guesses at most to crack each password (make an initial guess, see which characters are correct, lock those in and advance all the others by one, lather, rinse, repeat) and writes a program to do the job.
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* PasswordSlotMachine: Each of Leviathan's new abilities requires a two-billion-character password, with 250 or so possibilities for each character. However, the system is set up to allow an infinite number of wrong guesses without locking the user out, and it also tells the user which characters are correct. Leviathan figures out that it'll take her 250 guesses at most to crack each password (make an initial guess, see which characters are correct, lock those in and any correct characters, advance all the others by one, lather, rinse, repeat) and writes a program to do the job.
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* PasswordSlotMachine: Each of Leviathan's new abilities requires a two-billion-character password, with 250 or so possibilities for each character. However, the system is set up to allow an infinite number of wrong guesses without locking the user out, and it also tells the user which characters are correct. Leviathan figures out that it'll take her 250 guesses at most to crack each password and writes a program to do the job.
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* PasswordSlotMachine: Each of Leviathan's new abilities requires a two-billion-character password, with 250 or so possibilities for each character. However, the system is set up to allow an infinite number of wrong guesses without locking the user out, and it also tells the user which characters are correct. Leviathan figures out that it'll take her 250 guesses at most to crack each password (make an initial guess, see which characters are correct, lock those in and advance all the others by one, lather, rinse, repeat) and writes a program to do the job.
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* OhCrap: Gray Ghost panics when the ever-bombastic Drama Heart starts into a heartsong, knowing that her children are within range.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** Gray Ghost panics when the ever-bombastic Drama Heart starts into a heartsong, knowing that her children are withinrange.range.
** Much later, Gray experiences another such moment when [[spoiler:Fiver unexpectedly disappears.]]
** Gray Ghost panics when the ever-bombastic Drama Heart starts into a heartsong, knowing that her children are within
** Much later, Gray experiences another such moment when [[spoiler:Fiver unexpectedly disappears.]]
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** This ability aids Leviathan at least twice. The first time against Gray, she is able to piece together how the former MRPD officer is able to damage her and work up a counter against it. The second time outright saves her life against Metallium, allowing her to attack the dragon someplace where her defenses were weakest.
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** This ability aids Leviathan at least twice. The first time against Gray, she is able to piece together how the former MRPD officer is able to damage her and work up a counter against it. The second time outright saves her life against Metallium, allowing her to attack the dragon someplace where her defenses were are weakest.
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* UnconventionalFoodUsage: Leviathan discovers that Heartbreakers candy will refill her Energen supply -- but only that particular brand.
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* UnconventionalFoodUsage: Leviathan discovers that Heartbreakers candy will refill her Energen supply -- but only that particular brand. It's suggested by the candy's producer that Zap Apple jam being one of the ingredients may have something to do with it.
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* GRatedDrug: Catnip serves as this to Gray Ghost, and she behaves the same way a regular cat would while under its influence. According to her children, it normally only lasts for about ten minutes, or about the same length of time as it would a real cat before the onset of olfactory fatigue.
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** The narration refers to Leviathan [[VideoGame/MarvelVsCapcom Foot Diving]] into a random pony's swimming pool as the pool being [[Characters/DoctorDoom "Dr. Doomed".]]
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** The narration refers to Leviathan [[VideoGame/MarvelVsCapcom Foot Diving]] into a random pony's swimming pool as the pool being [[Characters/DoctorDoom [[Characters/MarvelComicsDoctorDoom "Dr. Doomed".]]
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* UnconventionalFoodUsage: Leviathan discovers that Heartbreakers candy will refill her Energen supply -- but only that particular brand.
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** When Leviathan first learns about her new enemies in "Prismatic", she hears one of their names and thinks that the pony it belongs to didn't earn it because of his candy-making abilities. Much later in "Buggin'", it's revealed that the pony was, in fact, a candy maker.
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** When In "Prismatic," Leviathan first learns about her new enemies in "Prismatic", she hears looks over the files of Cocoa Mocha's agents and doubts that one of their names and thinks that the pony it belongs to didn't earn it because of them (Bushwhacker) is so named for his candy-making abilities. skills. Much later later, in "Buggin'", it's revealed "Buggin," Bushwhacker reveals to Gray Ghost that the pony was, he does in fact, a fact make candy maker.-- specifically, the very brand that Leviathan has been using to keep her energy levels topped up.
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* PityTheKidnapper: [[spoiler:When Gray's family is kidnapped, Fiver and Zig-Zag avert the trope entirely by being generally well-behaved. Ebony and Pure Energy, on the other hand, play it straight: the former doesn't hesitate to speak her mind, forcing Ocean Guard to hold her back, and the latter gives Illudere the run-around and ultimately escapes his confinement.]]
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* PityTheKidnapper: [[spoiler:When Gray's family is kidnapped, Fiver and Zig-Zag avert the trope entirely by being generally well-behaved. Ebony and Pure Energy, on the other hand, play it straight: the former doesn't hesitate to speak her mind, forcing Ocean Guard to hold her back, and the latter gives Illudere the run-around run-around, locks her in her own bedroom, and ultimately escapes his confinement.confinement by tricking her into unlocking the exit.]]
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* PasswordSlotMachine: Each of Leviathan's new abilities requires a billion-character password, with 250 or so possibilities for each character. However, the system is set up to allow an infinite number of wrong guesses without locking the user out, and it also tells the user which characters are correct. Leviathan figures out that it'll take her 250 guesses at most to crack each password and writes a program to do the job.
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* PasswordSlotMachine: Each of Leviathan's new abilities requires a billion-character two-billion-character password, with 250 or so possibilities for each character. However, the system is set up to allow an infinite number of wrong guesses without locking the user out, and it also tells the user which characters are correct. Leviathan figures out that it'll take her 250 guesses at most to crack each password and writes a program to do the job.
