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** Note: As of 09/10/2015, an official omake side fic set during the events of Chapter 9 entitled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11500146/1/ "Remedies for Loneliness"]]'' was released and is recommended reading for fans of the fic craving for more adventures set during the earlier days of the fic.

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** Note: As of 09/10/2015, an official omake side fic set during the events of Chapter 9 entitled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11500146/1/ "Remedies for Loneliness"]]'' was released and is recommended reading for fans of the fic craving for more adventures set during the earlier days of the fic.
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* TheAlcoholic: Ragyou is mentioned to be drinking red wine on a semi-regular basis [[spoiler: until Chapter 14.]] She returns to that habit afterward.

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Ragyou is mentioned to be drinking red wine on a semi-regular basis [[spoiler: until Chapter 14.]] She returns to that habit afterward.



* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Ryuuko and Senketsu]]. Through some help, they get better.

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[[spoiler: Ryuuko and Senketsu]]. Through some help, they get better.



* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler: Nui's]]

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* DrowningMySorrows: [[spoiler: Ryuuko]] in chapter 22. She even mentioned this to be such.

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* GoshDangItToHeck: both Mako and Satsuki clearly don't use as much profanity as their respective friends do.

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* DarkerAndEdiger: ZigZagged quite a bit in that while much of the first half of the story would only get dark when it needed to, much of the entire mid-section of the fic (starting with Chapter 18) makes the original anime look pretty lighthearted in comparison.

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* DarkerAndEdiger: DarkerAndEdgier: ZigZagged quite a bit in that while much of the first half of the story would only get dark when it needed to, to in certain moments, much of the entire mid-section of the fic (starting with Chapter 18) 18 on) makes the original anime look pretty lighthearted in comparison.
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* BloodierAndGorier: Unlike the original anime, many people throughout the story die in very gory ways that can definitely make some readers queasy.


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* DarkerAndEdiger: ZigZagged quite a bit in that while much of the first half of the story would only get dark when it needed to, much of the entire mid-section of the fic (starting with Chapter 18) makes the original anime look pretty lighthearted in comparison.
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As of 09/10/2015, an official omake side fic set during the events of Chapter 9 entitled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11500146/1/ "Remedies for Loneliness"]]'' was released and is recommended reading for fans of the fic craving for more adventures set during the earlier days of the fic.

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**Note: As of 09/10/2015, an official omake side fic set during the events of Chapter 9 entitled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11500146/1/ "Remedies for Loneliness"]]'' was released and is recommended reading for fans of the fic craving for more adventures set during the earlier days of the fic.
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As of 09/10/2015, an official omake side fic set during the events of Chapter 9 entitled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11500146/1/ "Remedies for Loneliness"]]'' was released and is recommended reading for fans of the fic craving for more adventures set during the earlier days of the fic.
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* DarkestHour:
** Things truly get go downhill for Tokyo ever since [[spoiler:Ragyo abruptly cancelled Nui's potent psychological prescription drug, reverting her back to her childish yet bloodthirsty self and costing Tokyo PD one hell of a good cop.]]
** Just when things couldn't get worse than that, it does [[spoiler:when Ragyo lays siege on Tokyo, forcing everyone to either submit to her new rule, face death at her hands, or to run for their lives to seek refuge outside of the city.]]
** It didn't exactly help matters when [[spoiler:Satsuki snaps into a dictator-like mental state when she discovered that the killer of her ex-boyfriend was still kicking, both of which severely crippling the morale of Nudist Beach; the very military organization that she unknowingly fought alongside with since Chapter 12.]]
*** But with the issues regarding[[spoiler: Satsuki and Nui's mental states chronologically resolved at Chapter 25, things are no doubt looking back up for the good guys again.]]
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**Chapter 25, however, has her reverting back to this policy [[spoiler:after she snaps out of her tyrant-like mental state.]]
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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Satsuki never had a problem with how much skin she shows, Kamui or otherwise.
**However, when Satsuki [[spoiler:finally snapped out of her tyrant-like mental state, [[UpToEleven she turned it up to eleven]] by ripping off her military like suit during dinner in full view for everyone to see, with naught but a Nudist Beach uniform underneath.]]
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** As of Chapter 25, [[spoiler: the two halves now have their own separate bodies.]] Talk about duality.
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A regular Jason Voorhees expect without the bloodlust.

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* FeelNoPain: Everything that [[spoiler: Evelyn tried to do to kill Satsuki, even going as far as throwing the latter into a furnace, had zero effect.]]
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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight harsher in hindsight]]). It's particularily telling if she warns Dr. Batty to steer clear of her.

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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight harsher in hindsight]]). It's particularily particularly telling if she warns Dr. Batty to steer clear of her.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ryuuko and various other minor characters first notice Ragyou's odd behavior. After the events in chapter fourteen, it also a tad strange if Ragyou shows any tinge of ''genuine'' emotion after [[spoiler: Chapter 14]]
** Satsuki doesn't upset pretty easily and is rather one of the nicest people one could meet, however, she does show a burst of anger and venom in Chapter 20.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ryuuko and various other minor characters first notice Ragyou's odd behavior. After the events in chapter fourteen, it also a tad strange if Ragyou shows any tinge of ''genuine'' emotion after [[spoiler: Chapter 14]]
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** Satsuki doesn't upset pretty easily and is rather one of the nicest people one could meet, however, she does show a burst of anger and venom in Chapter 20. Her being depressed is likely to have this effect.



* SplitPersonality: [[spoiler: Nui]] and said personalities. being more akin to TwoBeingsOneBody, are often at odds with one another.

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* SplitPersonality: [[spoiler: Nui]] and said personalities. being personalities are more akin to TwoBeingsOneBody, are often at odds with one another.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Ragyo's interaction with the Chancellor seems to be laced with this, although, this is somewhat justified, seeing as the latter did mess with her head during that point by [[spoiler: impersonating her the former's deceased father]].
* EyeScream: A particularly nasty example of this happens in Chapter 18 [[spoiler: when Maiko Ogure losles her right eye after it got blown off by a shotgun shrapnel shell during her fight against some of Ragyo Kiryuin's troopers.]]

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Ragyo's interaction with the Chancellor seems to be laced with this, although, this is somewhat justified, seeing as the latter did mess with her head during that point by [[spoiler: impersonating her the former's deceased father]].
* EyeScream: A particularly nasty example of this happens in Chapter 18 [[spoiler: when Maiko Ogure losles loses her right eye after it got blown off by a shotgun shrapnel shell during her fight against some of Ragyo Kiryuin's troopers.]] ]]
*FacialHorror: When [[spoiler: Ryuuko]] had her jaw blown off with a shotgun blast.
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*EvenEvilHasStandards: Ragyo's interaction with the Chancellor seems to be laced with this, although, this is somewhat justified, seeing as the latter did mess with her head during that point by [[spoiler: impersonating her the former's deceased father]].
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* Satsuki doesn't upset pretty easily and is rather one of the nicest people one could meet, however, she does show a burst of anger and venom in Chapter 20.

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* ** Satsuki doesn't upset pretty easily and is rather one of the nicest people one could meet, however, she does show a burst of anger and venom in Chapter 20.
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* SplitPersonality: [[spoiler: Nui]] and said personalities are often at odds with one another.

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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale /[[DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnFemale Female]]: Averted in the case of a [[spoiler: brainwashed Ryuuko]] and, naturally, it is seen as horrifying, especially when she [[spoiler: has sex with a ''very'' reluctant Uzu]].

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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale /[[DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnFemale Female]]: Averted in the case of a [[spoiler: brainwashed Ryuuko]] and, naturally, it is seen as horrifying, especially when she [[spoiler: has sex with a ''very'' reluctant Uzu]]. Uzu]].
* EyeScream: A particularly nasty example of this happens in Chapter 18 [[spoiler: when Maiko Ogure losles her right eye after it got blown off by a shotgun shrapnel shell during her fight against some of Ragyo Kiryuin's troopers.]]

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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight harsher in hindsight]]).

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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight harsher in hindsight]]). It's particularily telling if she warns Dr. Batty to steer clear of her.


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*NoNameGiven /EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Chancellor is called, well, the aforementioned. Her name is never given.
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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight Harsher in Hindsight]]).

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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight Harsher harsher in Hindsight]]).hindsight]]).
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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters [[HarsherInHindsight Harsher in Hindsight]]).

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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight Harsher in Hindsight]]).
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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much.

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* TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much.much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters [[HarsherInHindsight Harsher in Hindsight]]).
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* AmbiguousDisorder: It's clear that Nui, sans medication, is not right in the head. We also get the same with [[spoiler: Ragyou]], apparently

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* AmbiguousDisorder: It's clear that Nui, sans medication, is not right in the head. We also get the same with [[spoiler: Ragyou]], apparently



** As we find out later, [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also has one. To elaborate further, [[spoiler: Ragyou's father, Gaoh, apparently passed away when she was in her teens (he was mentioned to have died before she met Soichiro) and, apparently, his experiments with life fibers lead to his demise, along with that of his wife's Dietricha, as the aftermath of one of such experiment left her with missing limbs, which life-fiber prosthetics were made to replace. Unfortunately, said limbs routinely left her with severe staph infections because they didn't sync with properly, which was mentioned to have aged her "worse than an average chain smoker",]] to which Soichiro confirms in a conversation with Gi Man.

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** As we find out later, [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also has one. To elaborate further, [[spoiler: Ragyou's father, Gaoh, apparently passed away when she was in her teens (he was mentioned to have died before she met Soichiro) and, apparently, his experiments with life fibers lead to his demise, along with that of his wife's Dietricha, as the aftermath of one of such experiment left her with missing limbs, which life-fiber prosthetics were made to replace. Unfortunately, said limbs routinely left her with severe staph infections because they didn't sync with properly, which was mentioned to have physically aged her "worse than an average chain smoker",]] to which Soichiro confirms in a conversation with Gi Man.
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Girl knows her rights and wrongs. And soon, Batty will know her left.


** As for Satsuki, she is capable of using the big three, but only when rightfully deserved or prompt, [[spoiler: such as when she thought she accidentally ripped Ragyo's face off prior to the curbstomp or while Satsuki was being "purified". She even elaborated on the subject herself after Ryuko told her rival that she suffered the same fate]]. She later curses a few more times in Chapter 22 during her confrontation with The Staple Eyed Gentleman.

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** As for Satsuki, she is capable of using the big three, but only when rightfully deserved or prompt, [[spoiler: such as when she thought she accidentally ripped Ragyo's face off prior to the curbstomp or while Satsuki was being "purified". She even elaborated on the subject herself after Ryuko told her rival that she suffered the same fate]]. She later Later, she rightfully curses a few more times in Chapter 22 during her confrontation with The Staple Eyed Gentleman.

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* AbusiveParents: Played with. Ragyou, true to canon, however, [[spoiler: she didn't entirely start out that way, actually, she got to be abusive in ''some ways'' after being exposed to the Original Life Fiber]]. However, before that she [[spoiler: experimented on a ten year old girl]]. According to Soichiro, she did much worse in his absence. Interestingly, she did seem to be or was very close to being a good mother to Ryuuko, referring to her as her "darling sugar cube" and the like, [[FridgeHorror then again]]...

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* AbusiveParents: Played with. Ragyou, true to canon, however, [[spoiler: she didn't entirely start out that way, actually, she got to be abusive in ''some ways'' after being exposed to the Original Life Fiber]]. However, before that she [[spoiler: experimented on a ten year old girl]]. According to Soichiro, she did much worse in his absence. Interestingly, she did seem to be or was very close to being a good mother to Ryuuko, referring to her as her "darling sugar cube" and the like, [[FridgeHorror then again]]...



* AmbiguousDisorder: It's clear that Nui, sans medication, is not right in the head. We also get the same with [[spoiler: Ragyou]]

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* AmbiguousDisorder: It's clear that Nui, sans medication, is not right in the head. We also get the same with [[spoiler: Ragyou]]Ragyou]], apparently



*BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Izanami Nishimura]] and, earlier, [[spoiler: Nui]]



*TheDreaded: "The Chancellor", whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ryuuko and various other minor characters first notice Ragyou's odd behavior. After the events in chapter fourteen, it also a tad strange if Ragyou shows any tinge of emotion

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ryuuko and various other minor characters first notice Ragyou's odd behavior. After the events in chapter fourteen, it also a tad strange if Ragyou shows any tinge of emotion''genuine'' emotion after [[spoiler: Chapter 14]]



** Its in unclear, as it could be hallucination on her part, but [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also seems have one by the name of [[spoiler: The Chancellor]]. She is also ''very'' afraid and dreads the presence of said split personality.


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*UnknownCharacter: "The Chancellor" and the question that comes up is: ''"Who is she?"''

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**As we find out later, [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also has one. To elaborate further, [[spoiler: Ragyou's father, Gaoh, apparently passed away when she was in her teens (he was mentioned to have died before she met Soichiro) and, apparently, his experiments with life fibers lead to his demise, along with that of his wife's Dietricha, as the aftermath of one of such experiment left her with missing limbs, which life-fiber prosthetics were made to replace. Unfortunately, said limbs routinely left her with severe staph infections because they didn't sync with properly, which was mentioned to have aged her "worse than an average chain smoker",]] to which Soichiro confirms in a conversation with Gi Man.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ryuuko and various other minor characters first notice Ragyou's odd behavior.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ryuuko and various other minor characters first notice Ragyou's odd behavior. After the events in chapter fourteen, it also a tad strange if Ragyou shows any tinge of emotion



** Hard to tell but it seems [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also have one by the name of [[spoiler: The Chancellor]].
* SwitchedAtBirth: This is implied to be the case [[spoiler: with Satsuki and Ryuuko]]

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** Hard to tell Its in unclear, as it could be hallucination on her part, but it seems [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also seems have one by the name of [[spoiler: The Chancellor]].
Chancellor]]. She is also ''very'' afraid and dreads the presence of said split personality.
* SwitchedAtBirth: This is implied to be the case [[spoiler: with Satsuki and Ryuuko]]Ryuuko]]. It's complicated.
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* DrowningMySorrows: [[spoiler: Ryuuko]] in chapter 22. She even mentioned this to be such.
** At first, it looked like [[spoiler: Nui]] was doing this, however, it was subverted, when it was she stated [spoiler: that she was combining the alcohols from the collection to commit suicide with]].

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* DrowningMySorrows: *DrowningMySorrows: [[spoiler: Ryuuko]] in in chapter 22. She even mentioned this to be such.
** At **At first, it looked like [[spoiler: Nui]] was doing this, however, it was subverted, when it was she stated [spoiler: [[spoiler: that she was combining the alcohols from the collection to commit suicide with]].



** Hard to tell but it seems [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also have one by the name of [[spoiler: The Chancellor]].

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** Hard **Hard to tell but it seems [[spoiler: Ragyou]] also have one by the name of [[spoiler: The Chancellor]].

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** Ryuuko is too, to a lesser extent. Considering that the Kiryuuins were revealed to have a large alcohol collection, it would safe to say that they are or were or are

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**At first, it looked like [[spoiler: Nui]] was doing this, however, it was subverted, when it was she stated [spoiler: that she was combining the alcohols from the collection to commit suicide with]].


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* TheAlcoholic: Ragyou is mentioned to be drinking red wine on a semi-regular basis [[spoiler: until Chapter 14.]]

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**Ryuuko is too, to a lesser extent. Considering that the Kiryuuins were revealed to have a large alcohol collection, it would safe to say that they are or were or are

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* CurbstompBattle: Satsuki's has won her fair share of these. However there are also times where she was in the receiving end of this trope

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** [[spoiler: Izanami Nishimura, the fiance of Satsuki's late ex-bofriend Masanori Kakinomoto, is also this in the second half of the fic and is convinced by Dr. Richard Batty that Satsuki killed her lover out of jealousy.]]
* CurbstompBattle: Satsuki's has won her fair share of these. However there are also times where she was in the receiving end of this tropetrope



** As for Satsuki, she is capable of using the big three, but only when rightfully deserved or prompt, [[spoiler: such as when she thought she accidentally ripped Ragyo's face off prior to the curbstomp or while Satsuki was being "purified". She even elaborated on the subject herself after Ryuko told her rival that she suffered the same fate.]]

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** As for Satsuki, she is capable of using the big three, but only when rightfully deserved or prompt, [[spoiler: such as when she thought she accidentally ripped Ragyo's face off prior to the curbstomp or while Satsuki was being "purified". She even elaborated on the subject herself after Ryuko told her rival that she suffered the same fate.]]fate]]. She later curses a few more times in Chapter 22 during her confrontation with The Staple Eyed Gentleman.
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**As of Chapter 22, she has officially foregone this trope [[spoiler:as she is preparing to help raise an army for Nudist Beach to storm REVOCS owned Tokyo.]]


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**Satsuki does the same thing later in Chapter 22 with the same individual [[spoiler:, only this time it was much more successful]]

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