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''Lucy's Unwanted House Guest'' is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6068309/Black-Pearl-Otaku Black Pearl Otaku]].
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''Lucy's Unwanted House Guest'' Guest!'' is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6068309/Black-Pearl-Otaku Black Pearl Otaku]].
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The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10666333/1/Lucy-s-Unwanted-House-Guest here]] and is a work in progress.
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The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10666333/1/Lucy-s-Unwanted-House-Guest here]] and is a work in progress.
here]], but [[DeadFic it hasn't been updated since 2017.]]
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* GratuitousJapanese: The fic not only uses JapaneseHonorifics and JapaneseSiblingTerminology, which are quite common among anime and manga fanfics, but also has [[HopelessSuitor Kyousuke]] call Lisanna "Lisanna-koi" a a term of endearment.
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* GratuitousJapanese: The fic not only uses JapaneseHonorifics UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics and JapaneseSiblingTerminology, UsefulNotes/JapaneseSiblingTerminology, which are quite common among anime and manga fanfics, but also has [[HopelessSuitor Kyousuke]] call Lisanna "Lisanna-koi" a a term of endearment.
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* AsYouKnow: Lisanna asks her underlings if they know the plan, and they recite it back to her.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Kyouske[=/=]Fake Gray actually feels sorry for Lucy after beating her up.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Kyouske[=/=]Fake Kyousuke[=/=]Fake Gray actually feels sorry for Lucy after beating her up.
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* InelegantBlubbering: Mirajane doesn't just cry while disowning Lisanna, she hiccups and even stutters.
-->'''Mirajane''': And to *sob* think *hiccup* t-that you were my...my...my SISTER?!
-->'''Mirajane''': And to *sob* think *hiccup* t-that you were my...my...my SISTER?!
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* InelegantBlubbering: Mirajane doesn't just cry while disowning Lisanna, she hiccups and even stutters.
stutters. Soon afterward, Lisanna starts "crying like a baby."
-->'''Mirajane''': And to *sob* think*hiccup* ''*hiccup*'' t-that you were my...my...my SISTER?! SISTER?!
--->'''Lisanna''': B-but *sob* One-
-->'''Mirajane''': I a-am *sob* NOT your *hiccup* 'Onee-chan'! For I could NEVER have such a [[YouMonster monstrous]] weak mage as my younger sibling!
-->'''Mirajane''': And to *sob* think
--->'''Lisanna''': B-but *sob* One-
-->'''Mirajane''': I a-am *sob* NOT your *hiccup* 'Onee-chan'! For I could NEVER have such a [[YouMonster monstrous]] weak mage as my younger sibling!
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* MusicalAssassin: Kyousuke is the Music Dragon Slayer.
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* PetTheDog: Kyousuke, after finishing beating up Lucy for Lisanna, puts her to bed.
* SailorEarth: Kyousuke is a first (if not third) generation Dragon Slayer with a dragon parent named Lyra.
* SailorEarth: Kyousuke is a first (if not third) generation Dragon Slayer with a dragon parent named Lyra.
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* InelegantBlubbering: Mirajane doesn't just cry while disowning Lisanna, she hiccups and even stutters.
-->'''Mirajane''': And to *sob* think *hiccup* t-that you were my...my...my SISTER?!
-->'''Mirajane''': And to *sob* think *hiccup* t-that you were my...my...my SISTER?!
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* WhatIsThisFeeling: Natsu regarding Lucy.
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* WhatIsThisFeeling: Natsu regarding Lucy.Lucy after seeing her injured.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Ikuto apparently is in love with Lisanna, but she rebuffs him. It's also implied that Natsu might have feelings for Lucy after all, which would mean that his and Lisanna's love is unrequited.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Ikuto Kyousuke apparently is in love with Lisanna, but she rebuffs him. It's also implied that Natsu might have feelings for Lucy after all, which would mean that his and Lisanna's love is unrequited.
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* CurseCutShort: Erza and Lisanna are about to call Wendy a "weak bitch" for slapping Natsu when Levy and Erza slap them.
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* CurseCutShort: Erza and Lisanna are about to call Wendy a "weak bitch" for slapping Natsu when Levy and Erza Mirajane slap them.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Kyouske[=/=]Fake Gray actually feel sorry for Lucy after beating her up.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Kyouske[=/=]Fake Gray actually feel feels sorry for Lucy after beating her up.
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* HopelessSuitor: Ikuto towards Lisanna.
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* GratuitousJapanese: The fic not only uses JapaneseHonorifics and JapaneseSiblingTerminology, which are quite common among anime and manga fanfics, but also has [[HopelessSuitor Kyousuke]] call Lisanna "Lisanna-koi" a a term of endearment.
* HopelessSuitor:Ikuto Kyousuke towards Lisanna.
* HopelessSuitor:
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Lisanna insults Lucy for being weak, only to end up being humiliated when Makarov has Mirajane bring him a list of all the missions Lucy did by herself, while also pointing out that Lisanna didn't do any.
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-->'''Natsu''': Yes, that weak mage always hides behind her spirits and complains about her rent, so we decided to teach her a lesson about how a weak mage should act with their superi- ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Wendy]] ([[TalkToTheFist slaps him]])''
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-->'''Natsu''': Yes, that weak mage always hides behind her spirits and complains about her rent, so we decided to teach her a lesson about how a weak mage should act with their superi- ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Wendy]] ([[TalkToTheFist ''([[BewareTheNiceOnes Wendy]]'' ''[[TalkToTheFist slaps him]])''
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-->Makarov: Team Natsu, is this how you treat one of your team mates!?
-->Natsu: Yes, that weak mage always hides behind her spirits and complains about her rent, so we decided to teach her a lesson about how a weak mage should act with their superi- ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Wendy]] ([[TalkToTheFist slaps him]])''
-->Natsu: Yes, that weak mage always hides behind her spirits and complains about her rent, so we decided to teach her a lesson about how a weak mage should act with their superi- ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Wendy]] ([[TalkToTheFist slaps him]])''
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-->Natsu: Why does my heart hurt? Is it because of [[LastNameBasis Heartfilia]]? I thought I only have feelings for Lisanna?
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Lisanna is this, to the point where she's still jealous of Lucy for being a "boyfriend stealer" despite already having won Natsu over.
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* MissingStepsPlan: Lisanna's plan is as follows
-->1)Hire some guys to disguise as Team Natsu and beat up Lucy.
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-->3)Everyone's convinced that Team Natsu beat Lucy up.
-->4)Profit!
-->1)Hire some guys to disguise as Team Natsu and beat up Lucy.
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-->3)Everyone's convinced that Team Natsu beat Lucy up.
-->4)Profit!
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''Lucy's Unwanted House Guest'' is a ''Manga/FairyTail'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6068309/Black-Pearl-Otaku Black Pearl Otaku]].
The story involves Lucy getting ostracized by Natsu for being weak, and going out on missions alone to prove herself. Unfortunately, this draws the attention of Lisanna, who, feeling threatened by Lucy, hires thugs to beat Lucy up while framing Natsu, Erza and Gray for the crime. Meanwhile, Erik, also known as Cobra of the Oracion Seis, finds his way to Lucy's house.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10666333/1/Lucy-s-Unwanted-House-Guest here]] and is a work in progress.
!The fic contains examples of:
*AllLoveIsUnrequited: Ikuto apparently is in love with Lisanna, but she rebuffs him. It's also implied that Natsu might have feelings for Lucy after all, which would mean that his and Lisanna's love is unrequited.
*BerserkButton: Wendy and Mirajane do not take badmouthing Lucy well.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: As in canon, Wendy, Levy and Mirajane are quite nice, but they do not take it well when Natsu badmouths Lucy.
*BluntYes: When Makarov demands an explanation from Team Natsu.
-->Makarov: Team Natsu, is this how you treat one of your team mates!?
-->Natsu: Yes, that weak mage always hides behind her spirits and complains about her rent, so we decided to teach her a lesson about how a weak mage should act with their superi- ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Wendy]] ([[TalkToTheFist slaps him]])''
*BrokenPedestal: Although Wendy canonically considers Natsu an older brother, she gives up on that near the start of the fic due to how poorly he treats Lucy.
*CoolBigSis: Wendy looks up to Lucy as one.
*CurseCutShort: Erza and Lisanna are about to call Wendy a "weak bitch" for slapping Natsu when Levy and Erza slap them.
*DidntThinkThisThrough: Lisanna forgets about a hole in her plan- Team Natsu not remembering their assault on her- and so hastily closes it by giving them FakeMemories.
*EvenEvilHasStandards: Kyouske[=/=]Fake Gray actually feel sorry for Lucy after beating her up.
*FakeMemories: Lisanna hypnotizes Natsu, Erza and Gray to make them think they'd kidnapped her.
*FullNameUltimatum: Natsu calls Lucy "Lucy Lucky Heartfilia," much to Lucy's shock
*HopelessSuitor: Ikuto towards Lisanna.
*IHaveNoSon: Lisanna's cruelty toward Lucy results in her getting disowned by her siblings.
*KarmaHoudini:
**Oddly averted with Lisanna. While her plan succeeds in framing Natsu, Erza and Gray for attacking Lucy, she ends up getting the same punishment, as well as being disowned by her siblings.
**Played straight with the impostors, who don't suffer any consequences for beating up Lucy.
*LastNameBasis: The fic has characters call each other by their last names when they no longer like them. When Makarov does this to Lisanna, Natsu, Gray and Erza while punishing them, they note [[YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious he's never done this before]].
*OfficialCouple: [[CrackPairing Lucy/Cobra]]. Oddly enough, Natsu and Lisanna, despite being the other two characters listed, are not listed as being in a pairing.
*TalkToTheFist: Wendy slaps Natsu when he insults Lucy, and when Lisanna and Erza object, their protests are cut off as Mirajane and Levy, respectively, slap them.
*TheyCallMeMisterTibbs: Makarov demands that Lisanna, Erza, Natsu and Gray call him "Master," since he doesn't like them enough to [[FriendlyAddressPrivileges give them the privilege of calling him "Gramps".]]
*WhatIsThisFeeling: Natsu regarding Lucy.
-->Natsu: Why does my heart hurt? Is it because of [[LastNameBasis Heartfilia]]? I thought I only have feelings for Lisanna?
* WhoDares: Erza and Lisanna are outraged by Wendy slapping Natsu, and say this phrase and call her weak in response, only to get cut off when Levy and Mirajane slap them.
The story involves Lucy getting ostracized by Natsu for being weak, and going out on missions alone to prove herself. Unfortunately, this draws the attention of Lisanna, who, feeling threatened by Lucy, hires thugs to beat Lucy up while framing Natsu, Erza and Gray for the crime. Meanwhile, Erik, also known as Cobra of the Oracion Seis, finds his way to Lucy's house.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10666333/1/Lucy-s-Unwanted-House-Guest here]] and is a work in progress.
!The fic contains examples of:
*AllLoveIsUnrequited: Ikuto apparently is in love with Lisanna, but she rebuffs him. It's also implied that Natsu might have feelings for Lucy after all, which would mean that his and Lisanna's love is unrequited.
*BerserkButton: Wendy and Mirajane do not take badmouthing Lucy well.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: As in canon, Wendy, Levy and Mirajane are quite nice, but they do not take it well when Natsu badmouths Lucy.
*BluntYes: When Makarov demands an explanation from Team Natsu.
-->Makarov: Team Natsu, is this how you treat one of your team mates!?
-->Natsu: Yes, that weak mage always hides behind her spirits and complains about her rent, so we decided to teach her a lesson about how a weak mage should act with their superi- ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Wendy]] ([[TalkToTheFist slaps him]])''
*BrokenPedestal: Although Wendy canonically considers Natsu an older brother, she gives up on that near the start of the fic due to how poorly he treats Lucy.
*CoolBigSis: Wendy looks up to Lucy as one.
*CurseCutShort: Erza and Lisanna are about to call Wendy a "weak bitch" for slapping Natsu when Levy and Erza slap them.
*DidntThinkThisThrough: Lisanna forgets about a hole in her plan- Team Natsu not remembering their assault on her- and so hastily closes it by giving them FakeMemories.
*EvenEvilHasStandards: Kyouske[=/=]Fake Gray actually feel sorry for Lucy after beating her up.
*FakeMemories: Lisanna hypnotizes Natsu, Erza and Gray to make them think they'd kidnapped her.
*FullNameUltimatum: Natsu calls Lucy "Lucy Lucky Heartfilia," much to Lucy's shock
*HopelessSuitor: Ikuto towards Lisanna.
*IHaveNoSon: Lisanna's cruelty toward Lucy results in her getting disowned by her siblings.
*KarmaHoudini:
**Oddly averted with Lisanna. While her plan succeeds in framing Natsu, Erza and Gray for attacking Lucy, she ends up getting the same punishment, as well as being disowned by her siblings.
**Played straight with the impostors, who don't suffer any consequences for beating up Lucy.
*LastNameBasis: The fic has characters call each other by their last names when they no longer like them. When Makarov does this to Lisanna, Natsu, Gray and Erza while punishing them, they note [[YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious he's never done this before]].
*OfficialCouple: [[CrackPairing Lucy/Cobra]]. Oddly enough, Natsu and Lisanna, despite being the other two characters listed, are not listed as being in a pairing.
*TalkToTheFist: Wendy slaps Natsu when he insults Lucy, and when Lisanna and Erza object, their protests are cut off as Mirajane and Levy, respectively, slap them.
*TheyCallMeMisterTibbs: Makarov demands that Lisanna, Erza, Natsu and Gray call him "Master," since he doesn't like them enough to [[FriendlyAddressPrivileges give them the privilege of calling him "Gramps".]]
*WhatIsThisFeeling: Natsu regarding Lucy.
-->Natsu: Why does my heart hurt? Is it because of [[LastNameBasis Heartfilia]]? I thought I only have feelings for Lisanna?
* WhoDares: Erza and Lisanna are outraged by Wendy slapping Natsu, and say this phrase and call her weak in response, only to get cut off when Levy and Mirajane slap them.
