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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Hinata is killed off early in the story.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Hinata is killed off early in the story.climax of the first arc.]]
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This fic comes highly reccomended.
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This fic comes highly reccomended.
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* [[spoiler:AnyoneCanDie]]AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Hinata is killed off early in the story.]]
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* DishingOutDirt: Sakura gets a major power upgrade- and several earth jutsu -due to some serious motivation via Kabuto and knowing [[spoiler: Naruto is the Kyuubi container]].
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* DishingOutDirt: Sakura gets a major power upgrade- and several earth jutsu -due to some serious motivation via Kabuto and knowing [[spoiler: Naruto is the Kyuubi container]]. Kurotsuchi as well.
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* MercyLead: Kurotsuchi, on her father's orders, gives Sakura a thirty-minute head start before she chases her down and kills her for unplugging the canals.
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* AwesomeByAnalysis: Sakura. She manages to analyze a quick-lime build up made by jutsu, breakdown the elements used to forge it, and then use her memories of how Sasuke used his Fireball jutsu to learn how to mold fire chakra and copy it.
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* PlayingWithFire: Sakuke and Sakura later on.
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* HumanResources / OrganTheft: Sakura needs an organ transplant after [[spoiler:the Rain-nin stabs her in the liver before she kills him. She got it from a perfectly healthy nurse after the doctor knocked her out and she was probably killed afterwards.]]
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* BrutalHonesty: Sakura, in the face of the Kazekage and his council, points out how their village is dying and the caravan her village was hired to protect chose ninja from a place other than their village because no one trusts them. [[spoiler:The Kazekage acknowledges the point calmly and it serves to secure his alliance to the plans to invade Konoha, just as Orochimaru planned.]]
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* DriventoSuicide / DyingAsYourself: A major theme spanning the first two arcs. Subverted, played straight, and then double-subverted by Sakura. [[spoiler: She attempts both, then fails, as she lacked the willpower to go through with it. Then when she confronts Hinata's murderer it is played very straight and subverted, because Orochimaru still has use for her...]]
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* DriventoSuicide DrivenToSuicide / DyingAsYourself: A major theme spanning the first two arcs. Subverted, played straight, and then double-subverted by Sakura. [[spoiler: She attempts both, then fails, as she lacked the willpower to go through with it. Then when she confronts Hinata's murderer it is played very straight and subverted, because Orochimaru still has use for her...]]
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* TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler: Danzo]]
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* TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.Kabuto until she gets bumped up to being a part of Orochimaru's plans.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler: Danzo]]
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* DirtyBusiness: The aftermath of the fire pit traps Sakura uses against [[spoiler: the bandits in the ''Desert Arc'' is all about this. Sasuke is notably disturbed by Sakura's actions.]]
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Once upon a time Haruno Sakura was recruited as a spy. What follows is a tale of her struggles under all the difficulties this entails. Most would be crushed- under the pressure, the never-ending questions (do they know, do they suspect?) and the constant prodding, demands for more information. Instead of melting down, Sakura rises to the occasion, heroicly.
Sakura's story follows her repeated attempts to circumvent her Curse-Seal, recover information without arouseing suspicion, and survive both the rigors of ordinary ninja life while simaltaniously evadeing discovery.
Sakura's story follows her repeated attempts to circumvent her Curse-Seal, recover information without arouseing suspicion, and survive both the rigors of ordinary ninja life while simaltaniously evadeing discovery.
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Once upon a time Haruno Sakura was recruited as a spy. What follows is a tale of her struggles under all the difficulties this entails. Most would be crushed- crushed under the pressure, the never-ending questions (do they know, do they suspect?) and the constant prodding, demands for more information. Instead of melting down, Sakura rises to the occasion, heroicly.heroically... somewhat.
Sakura's story follows her repeated attempts to circumvent herCurse-Seal, Cursed Seal, recover information without arouseing arousing suspicion, and survive both the rigors of ordinary ninja life while simaltaniously evadeing simultaneously evading discovery.
Sakura's story follows her repeated attempts to circumvent her
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* {{Determinator}}: Sakura at the climax of the Desert Arc- ''Desert Arc''- Holy Shit!
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* WarIsHell: Kakashi tells a guilt-ridden Sakura all about this after [[spoiler: she killed the attacking bandits with her improvised fire pit traps in the Desert Arc.]]
* WhamEpisode: The Desert Arc. Full stop.
* WhamEpisode: The Desert Arc. Full stop.
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* WarIsHell: Kakashi tells a guilt-ridden Sakura all about this after [[spoiler: she killed the attacking bandits with her improvised fire pit traps in the Desert Arc.''Desert Arc''.]]
* WhamEpisode: TheDesert Arc.''Desert Arc''. Full stop.
* WhamEpisode: The
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* YouCanBarelyStand: The end of the Desert Arc.''Desert Arc''.
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* DoYouTrustMe: Sakura asks Hinata this while the latter hesitates with giving Sakura the[[spoiler: exploding tags she needs while bandits attack their caravan in the ''Desert Arc''. She does.]]
* EyeScream: What the [[spoiler: Rain-nin does to Hinata. While she is alive, no less, though it happens offscreen.]]
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: After feeling guilty about it for a while, Sakura eventually acknowledges this after having [[spoiler: killed dozens of bandits with her fire pit traps. If she hadn't done it, the bandits would've killed more people. Kakashi points it out to her as well.]]
* TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler: Danzo]]
* TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler: Danzo]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: After traversing the desert for days in hopes of saving Hinata, Sakura arrived too late and proceeded to not only chase but kill the Rain-nin who took her eyes, even if it left her neat death.]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: After traversing the desert for days in hopes of saving Hinata, Sakura arrived too late and proceeded to not only chase but kill the Rain-nin who took her eyes, even if it left her neat near death.]]
* WarIsHell: Kakashi tells a guilt-ridden Sakura all about this after [[spoiler: she killed the attacking bandits with her improvised fire pit traps in the Desert Arc.]]
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* YouCanBarelyStand: The end of the Desert Arc.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: After traversing the desert for days in hopes of saving Hinata, Sakura arrived too late and proceeded to not only chase but kill the Rain-nin Jounin who took her eyes, even if it left her neat death.]]
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* WhamEpisode: The Desert arc.Arc. Full stop.
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* DeathByDisfigurement: Poor [[spoiler: Hinata]]
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* DeathByDisfigurement: Poor [[spoiler: Hinata]]Hinata has her eyes scooped out by a Rain-nin and left to die.]]
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: After traversing the desert for days in hopes of saving Hinata, Sakura arrived too late and proceeded to not only chase but kill the Rain-nin Jounin who took her eyes, even if it left her neat death.]]
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* YouAreTooLate: Sakura though thought she made it in time...
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* NightmareFuel: What happens to [[spoiler: Hinata]].
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* TearJerker
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* TeenSuperSpy: Brutally and mercilessly deconstructed AND played straight.
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* TeenSuperSpy: Brutally Deconstructed and mercilessly deconstructed AND played straight.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5316196/1/Loyalty Loyalty]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/975220/A_True_Radical_Dreamer A True Radical Dreamer]] is remarkable for both exceptional paceing and general quality, and a realistic portrayal of espianage- such as it is in a world like ''Naruto.''
this fic comes highly reccomended.
this fic comes highly reccomended.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5316196/1/Loyalty Loyalty]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/975220/A_True_Radical_Dreamer A True Radical Dreamer]] is remarkable for both exceptional paceing pacing and general quality, and a realistic portrayal of espianage- espionage- such as it is in a world like ''Naruto.''
this This fic comes highly reccomended.
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* DishingOutDirt: Sakura gets a major power upgrade- and several earth jutsu -due to some serious motivation via Kabuto and knowing [[spoiler: Naruto is the Kyuubi container]].
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* YouAreTooLate: Sakura though she made it in time...
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* DriventoSuicide / DyingAsYourself: A major theme spanning the first two arcs. Subverted, played straight, and then double-subverted by Sakura. [[spoiler: She attempts both, than fails, as she lacked the willpower to go through with it. Then when she confronts Hinata's murderer it is played very straight. Then Subverted, because Orochimaru still has use for her...]]
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* DriventoSuicide / DyingAsYourself: A major theme spanning the first two arcs. Subverted, played straight, and then double-subverted by Sakura. [[spoiler: She attempts both, than then fails, as she lacked the willpower to go through with it. Then when she confronts Hinata's murderer it is played very straight. Then Subverted, straight and subverted, because Orochimaru still has use for her...]]
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* DriventoSuicide / Dyingasyourself: A major theme spanning the first two arcs. Subverted, played straight, and then double-subverted by Sakura. [[spoiler: She attempts both, than fails, as she lacked the willpower to go through with it. Then when she confronts Hinata's murderer it is played very straight. Then Subverted, because Orochimaru still has use for her...]]
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* DriventoSuicide / Dyingasyourself: DyingAsYourself: A major theme spanning the first two arcs. Subverted, played straight, and then double-subverted by Sakura. [[spoiler: She attempts both, than fails, as she lacked the willpower to go through with it. Then when she confronts Hinata's murderer it is played very straight. Then Subverted, because Orochimaru still has use for her...]]
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* DriventoSuicide / Dyingasyourself: A major theme spanning the first two arcs. Subverted, played straight, and then double-subverted by Sakura. [[spoiler: She attempts both, than fails, as she lacked the willpower to go through with it. Then when she confronts Hinata's murderer it is played very straight. Then Subverted, because Orochimaru still has use for her...]]
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* NightmareFuel: What happens to [[spoiler: Hinata]]. Poor Sakura.
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* {{Determinator}}: Sakura at the climax of the Desert recue arc- Recue Arc- Holy Shit!Shit!
* DeathByDisfigurement: Poor [[spoiler: Hinata]]
* DeathByDisfigurement: Poor [[spoiler: Hinata]]
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* NightmareFuel: What happens to [[spoiler: Hinata]]. Poor Sakura.
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Remarkable for both exceptional paceing and general quality, and a realistic potreyal of espianage- such as it is in a world like ''Naruto.''
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BecomeingTheMask: Sakura notes her own corruption, it worries her at first. Then she gets over it.
CloakAndDagger: Fun times!
TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler Danzou]]
WhamEpisode: The Desert arc. Full stop.
TalkingThroughTechnique: An interesting case, ''musical notation'' is used as code.
CloakAndDagger: Fun times!
TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler Danzou]]
WhamEpisode: The Desert arc. Full stop.
TalkingThroughTechnique: An interesting case, ''musical notation'' is used as code.
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* CloakAndDagger: Fun times!
* DeepcoverAgent: Sakura. Also Kabuto.
* Main/Determinator: Sakura at the climax of the Desert recue arc- Holy Shit!
* GuileHero: Sakura.
* TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have
* ShoePhone: Sakura gets her missions via a disguised journal sealed inside an (apparently) blank scroll.
* TeenSuperSpy: Brutally and mercilessly deconstructed AND played straight.
* TalkingThroughTechnique: An interesting case, ''musical notation'' is used as
* WhamEpisode: The Desert arc. Full stop.
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-> ''What a horrible night to be lurking around.''
Once upon a time Haruno Sakura was recruited as a spy. What follows is a tale of her struggles under all the difficulties this entails. Most would be crushed- under the pressure, the never-ending questions (do they know, do they suspect?) and the constant prodding, demands for more information. Instead of melting down, Sakura rises to the occasion, heroicly.
Sakura's story follows her repeated attempts to circumvent her Curse-Seal, recover information without arouseing suspicion, and survive both the rigors of ordinary ninja life while simaltaniously evadeing discovery.
Remarkable for both exceptional paceing and general quality, and a realistic potreyal of espianage- such as it is in a world like ''Naruto.''
this fic comes highly reccomended.
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BecomeingTheMask: Sakura notes her own corruption, it worries her at first. Then she gets over it.
CloakAndDagger: Fun times!
TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler Danzou]]
WhamEpisode: The Desert arc. Full stop.
TalkingThroughTechnique: An interesting case, ''musical notation'' is used as code.
Once upon a time Haruno Sakura was recruited as a spy. What follows is a tale of her struggles under all the difficulties this entails. Most would be crushed- under the pressure, the never-ending questions (do they know, do they suspect?) and the constant prodding, demands for more information. Instead of melting down, Sakura rises to the occasion, heroicly.
Sakura's story follows her repeated attempts to circumvent her Curse-Seal, recover information without arouseing suspicion, and survive both the rigors of ordinary ninja life while simaltaniously evadeing discovery.
Remarkable for both exceptional paceing and general quality, and a realistic potreyal of espianage- such as it is in a world like ''Naruto.''
this fic comes highly reccomended.
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BecomeingTheMask: Sakura notes her own corruption, it worries her at first. Then she gets over it.
CloakAndDagger: Fun times!
TheMole: Sakura, unwillingly, for [[spoiler: Oto, and specifically Kabuto.]] From the other side of the fence we have [[spoiler Danzou]]
WhamEpisode: The Desert arc. Full stop.
TalkingThroughTechnique: An interesting case, ''musical notation'' is used as code.
