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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: [[spoiler: In chapter 16, Sorey and Mikleo have sex for the first time, and in spite of Sorey's anxiety about it, he does enjoy it. It helps that their sex scene is very heartwarming.]]
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''Love Feels Like Home'' is a ''VideoGame/TalesOfZestiria'' AlternateUniverse FanFic written by Creator/{{SaoirseParisa}} (also known as firechick12012 or Juliko)
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: When Muse and her brother were kids, Michael was a nice boy who loved Muse and treated her fairly, even after he learned she was autistic. He helped her and took care of her like any big brother would. But as they grew up, he began to resent her and her successes in life, turning to drinking to cope.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: When Muse and her brother were kids, Michael was a nice boy who loved Muse and treated her fairly, even after he learned she was autistic. He helped her and took care of her like any big brother would. But as they grew up, he began to resent her and her successes in life, turning to drinking to cope.cope.
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This fan fic is noteworthy for mostly one thing: [[DisabledInTheAdaptation Sorey is made autistic in this fan fic.]] But even without that, it's very well-liked for its good writing, CharacterDevelopment, refreshing portrayals of certain characters, and well written romance.
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This fan fic fanfic is noteworthy for mostly one thing: [[DisabledInTheAdaptation Sorey is made autistic in this fan fic.]] But even without that, it's very well-liked for its good writing, CharacterDevelopment, refreshing portrayals of certain characters, and well written well-written romance.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: In chapter 9, Sorey freaks out when he finds a stinkbug on his arm, and the sensory overload was enough to make him swing his arm and knock over a plate of food a waiter was carrying right behind him. It was clearly an accident, and Sorey did try to make up for it, but the angry customer curses him out, slaps him across the face, and assumes he did it on purpose. Despite everyone's attempts to defuse the situation, it's enough to make Sorey go into a HeroicBSOD and try to get away from the situation. In fact, Sorey, under the assumption that Zenrus hates him, believes this single act will make him want to disown him and cries himself to pieces over it.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: In chapter 9, Sorey freaks out when he finds a stinkbug on his arm, and the sensory overload was enough to make him swing his arm and knock over a plate of food a waiter was carrying right behind him. It was clearly an accident, and Sorey did try to make up for it, but the angry customer curses him out, slaps him across the face, and assumes he did it on purpose. Despite everyone's attempts to defuse the situation, situation and despite even the customer's wife being appalled at her husband's behavior, it's enough to make Sorey go into a HeroicBSOD and try to get away from the situation. In fact, Sorey, under the assumption that Zenrus hates him, believes this single act will make him want to disown him and cries himself to pieces over it.
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* SpottingTheThread: Mikleo figures out that Sorey is autistic because several of the things he does (especially his aversion to eye contact) is similar to things that his autistic mother does.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Mikleo's uncle Michael views the neuroatypical with disdain, even his own autistic sister.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: PoliticallyIncorrectVillain:
** Mikleo's uncle Michael views the neuroatypical with disdain, even his own autisticsister.sister. He is also pretty homophobic, as [[spoiler: he reacts to finding out that Mikleo and Sorey are dating by beating up Mikleo in a drunken rage]].
** Mikleo's uncle Michael views the neuroatypical with disdain, even his own autistic
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* TwoferTokenMinority: Sorey is both autistic and gay.
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** Sorey's social worker, Agatha, is very unsympathetic to Sorey's plight, constantly scolds him whenever he stims, seems to view him as a burden and fears he'll throw a tantrum at the slightest provocation, believes many [[LackOfEmpathy untrue]] [[ManChild stereotypes]] [[DisabledMeansHelpless about]] [[NoSocialSkills autistic people]], and [[WhatAnIdiot misinterprets his act of kindness--giving his ice cream to a child who dropped hers--as budding pedophilic tendencies.]]
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** Sorey's social worker, Agatha, is very unsympathetic to Sorey's plight, constantly scolds him whenever he stims, seems to view him as a burden and fears he'll throw a tantrum at the slightest provocation, believes many [[LackOfEmpathy untrue]] [[ManChild stereotypes]] [[DisabledMeansHelpless about]] [[NoSocialSkills autistic people]], and [[WhatAnIdiot [[MistakenForPedophile misinterprets his act of kindness--giving his ice cream to a child who dropped hers--as budding pedophilic tendencies.]]
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: In chapter 9, Sorey freaks out when he finds a stinkbug on his arm, and the sensory overload was enough to make him swing his arm and knock over a plate of food a waiter was carrying right behind him. It was clearly an accident, and Sorey did try to make up for it, but the angry customer curses him out, slaps him across the face, and assumes he did it on purpose. Despite everyone's attempts to diffuse the situation, it's enough to make Sorey go into a HeroicBSOD and try to get away from the situation. In fact, Sorey, under the assumption that Zenrus hates him, believes this single act will make him want to disown him and cries himself to pieces over it.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: In chapter 9, Sorey freaks out when he finds a stinkbug on his arm, and the sensory overload was enough to make him swing his arm and knock over a plate of food a waiter was carrying right behind him. It was clearly an accident, and Sorey did try to make up for it, but the angry customer curses him out, slaps him across the face, and assumes he did it on purpose. Despite everyone's attempts to diffuse defuse the situation, it's enough to make Sorey go into a HeroicBSOD and try to get away from the situation. In fact, Sorey, under the assumption that Zenrus hates him, believes this single act will make him want to disown him and cries himself to pieces over it.
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It can be read on AO3 [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9083563 here]] and on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12346884/1/Love-Feels-Like-Home here.]] It's complete on both sites at 22 chapters.
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It can be read on AO3 Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9083563 here]] and on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12346884/1/Love-Feels-Like-Home here.]] It's complete on both sites at 22 chapters.
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* CallingParentsByTheirName: In this case, calling grandparent by name. Because Sorey hasn't seen his grandfather in years, along with believing Zenrus hates him, Sorey can't bring himself to refer to him as Grandfather, or even call him anything. The only time he refers to him by his name is when he's giving him a ReasonYouSuckSpeech in chapter 11, accusing him of secretly hating him and only pretending to care about him. Once the misunderstanding is cleared up, Sorey refers to Zenrus as Gramps and their relationship improves.
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: [[spoiler: In chapter 16, Sorey and Mikleo have sex for the first time, and in spite of Sorey's anxiety about it, he does enjoy it. It helps that their sex scene is very [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming.]]]]
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: [[spoiler: In chapter 16, Sorey and Mikleo have sex for the first time, and in spite of Sorey's anxiety about it, he does enjoy it. It helps that their sex scene is very [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming.]]]]]]
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* HandshakeRefusal: When Agatha visits Sorey in Elysia, she extends her hand out for him to shake in greeting. Sorey doesn't do it, as he hates touching people he isn't familiar with or dislikes. Noticing his discomfort, Lailah does it for him.
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** Sorey's social worker, Agatha, is very unsympathetic to Sorey's plight, constantly scolds him whenever he stims, seems to view him as a burden and fears he'll throw a tantrum at the slightest provocation, believes many [[LackOfEmpathy untrue]] [[ManChild stereotypes]] [[DisabledMeansHelpless about]] [[NoSocialSkills autistic people]], and [[WhatAnIdiot misinterprets his act of kindness--giving his ice cream to a child who dropped hers--as budding pedophilic tendencies.]]
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* OppositesAttract: The normally cheery, optimistic, energetic Sorey and the calm, serious, level-headed Mikleo, though at their first meeting, Sorey was still adjusting to his mother's death, so at that time, he was still rather cynical, heartbroken, and mentally exhausted.
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: When Sorey is severely injured in the ruins he and Mikleo hang out in, the sensory overload from the pain was too much for him, and he begs Mikleo not to leave him alone. Mikleo does all he can to comfort Sorey and keep him calm before help arrives.
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''Love Feels Like Home'' is a ''VideoGame/TalesOfZestiria'' FanFic written by SaoirseParisa [[=SaoirseParisa=]] (also known as firechick12012 or Juliko)
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* EyesAlwaysAverted: Being autistic, Sorey doesn't make eye contact very much, as he finds it painful to do so. But once he warms up to Mikleo, he's able to look him in the eyes more, though the latter does respect his desire to not do so.
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* DownerBeginning: The story begins with a depressed, mentally exhausted Sorey on a train to Elysia with an unsympathetic social worker as he flashes back to the day his mother died.
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** It's also a big part of Michael's characters. Many of his issues come about because he doesn't want to tell anyone about his problems under the assumption that they'll leave him in the dust in favor of Muse.
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** It's also a big part of Michael's characters.character. Many of his issues come about because he doesn't want to tell anyone about his problems under the assumption that they'll leave him in the dust in favor of Muse.
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[[IHaveNoSon I Have No Brother]]: [[spoiler:After Michael severely injures Mikleo a second time in a drunken rage, Muse decides she's had enough. She visits him in jail, calls him out for everything, and when he pulls a NeverMyFault, Muse realizes the brother she once knew and loved is gone, so she disowns him.]]
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* [[IHaveNoSon I Have No Brother]]: [[spoiler:After Michael [[MoralEventHorizon severely injures Mikleo Mikleo, his nephew, a second time in a drunken rage, rage]], Muse decides she's had enough. She visits him in jail, calls him out for everything, and when he pulls a NeverMyFault, Muse realizes the brother she once knew and loved is gone, so she disowns him.]]
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[[IHaveNoSon I Have No Brother]]: [[spoiler:After Michael severely injures Mikleo a second time in a drunken rage, Muse decides she's had enough. She visits him in jail, calls him out for everything, and when he pulls a NeverMyFault, Muse realizes the brother she once knew and loved is gone, so she disowns him.]]
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* CryingAfterSex: [[spoiler:After having his first time with Mikleo, Sorey finds himself [[TearsOfJoy overwhelmed with happiness]] after the encounter, relieved that he was able to enjoy it despite his anxiety about it and that he was able to trust Mikleo not to do anything he didn't want to do.]]
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** Oh, and DO NOT for the life of you mistreat Sorey in front of Zenrus. He will unleash his wrath on you and it will not be pretty, as Barlow learned the hard way in chapter 9, though it was off-screen.
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* [[Determinator]]: Despite Mikleo's protests, Sorey willingly traverses a very unstable structure in a decaying ruin in order to get Mikleo's cell phone back. Not even knowledge of the potential dangers or Zenrus getting angry with him is enough to deter him from doing it. Even though he gets injured afterward, to the point of being sent to the hospital, it ultimately paid off.
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* [[Determinator]]: {{Determinator}}: Despite Mikleo's protests, Sorey willingly traverses a very unstable structure in a decaying ruin in order to get Mikleo's cell phone back. Not even knowledge of the potential dangers or Zenrus getting angry with him is enough to deter him from doing it. Even though he gets injured afterward, to the point of being sent to the hospital, it ultimately paid off.
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* [[Determinator]]: Despite Mikleo's protests, Sorey willingly traverses a very unstable structure in a decaying ruin in order to get Mikleo's cell phone back. Not even knowledge of the potential dangers or Zenrus getting angry with him is enough to deter him from doing it. Even though he gets injured afterward, to the point of being sent to the hospital, it ultimately paid off.
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* TheirFirstTime: [[spoiler:Played straight with Sorey, who has never had sex before, but averted with Mikleo, who previously had two boyfriends before meeting Sorey, and was sexually active with them. Mikleo uses his experience to teach Sorey about sex and calm his anxiety about whether it'll hurt or not. Thanks to Mikleo's tenderness and respect for Sorey's personal boundaries and desires, he enjoys the encounter.]]
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** Mikleo's name is a nickname here as well, with his in-universe real name being Cor'''''mik Leo'''''pold Rulay.
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** Mikleo's name is a nickname here as well, with his in-universe real name being Cor'''''mik Leo'''''pold Cor'''mick Leo'''pold Rulay.
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** Mikleo's name is a nickname here as well, with his in-universe real name being Cor''''mik Leo''''pold Rulay.
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** Mikleo's name is a nickname here as well, with his in-universe real name being Cor'''''mik Leo'''''pold Rulay.
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