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!Contains the following tropes
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!!Contains the following
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* SuperiorTwinTeamwork:
** Pink and Link work together to help Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngest and thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a considerable challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
** Pink and Link work together to help Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngest and thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a considerable challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
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* SuperiorTwinTeamwork:
** Pink and Link work together to help Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
**SuperiorTwinTeamwork: Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngest and thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a considerable challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.them one-on-one.
** Pink and Link work together to help Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
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* TricksterTwins: Pink and Link work together to help Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
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** Ryoga never falls in a Jusenkyo spring so is spared the curse of turning in a small helpless piglet and slowly bonds with Ranko, who unlike Akane fully reciprocates his romantic feeling.
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** Ryoga never falls in a Jusenkyo spring so is spared the curse of turning in a small helpless piglet and slowly bonds with Ranko, who unlike Akane fully reciprocates his romantic feeling.feelings.
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** Both Ranma and Shampoo are nothing but disgusted at the prospect to marry each other and act hostile as a consequence. Inversely, Mousse being ready to help Shampoo to break the betrothal convinces her to see him in a romantic light.
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** Both Ranma and Shampoo are nothing but disgusted at the prospect to marry of marrying each other and act hostile as a consequence. Inversely, Mousse being ready to help Shampoo to break the betrothal engagement convinces her to see him in a romantic light.
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** Having beaten Shampoo in a fight, Ranma is supposed to marry her according the Amazon custom. He decides he would rather run away, and Shampoo isn't too happy either about the prospect to marry a "fake woman".
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** Having beaten Shampoo in a fight, Ranma is supposed to marry her according the Amazon custom. He decides he would rather run away, and Shampoo isn't too happy either about the prospect to marry of marrying a "fake woman".
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* AscendedExtra: Since Ranko never left China, there's much more emphasis on minor characters from there such as Nekonron, the herborist twins Pink and Link and the Musk Dynasty.
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* AscendedExtra: Since Ranko never left China, there's much more emphasis on minor characters from there such as Nekonron, the herborist herbalist twins Pink and Link and the Musk Dynasty.
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** Lychee dreams of a PrinceCharming marrying her. When she's finally introduced to Prince Kirin, that's because he was seeking her friend Ranko under the assumption she's a thief, and his agents happened to stumble upon Lychee when they decided to ''abduct'' her for pulling an IHaveYourWife gambit.
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** Lychee dreams of a PrinceCharming marrying her. When she's finally introduced to Prince Kirin, that's because he was seeking her friend Ranko under the assumption she's a thief, and his agents happened to stumble upon Lychee when they decided to ''abduct'' her for pulling to pull an IHaveYourWife gambit.
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* CoordinatedClothes: Expected since the three sets of twins in the franchise (Herbalist twins Pink and Link, Amazon twins Rin-Rin and Ran Ran and Nekonron's twins Daikokuse and Daihakuse) appear in the story.
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* CoordinatedClothes: Expected since the three sets of twins in the franchise (Herbalist twins Pink and Link, Amazon twins Rin-Rin and Ran Ran Ran-Ran and Nekonron's twins Daikokuse and Daihakuse) appear in the story.
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* DramaticIrony: Ranko and Ryoga's relationship on two levels -- the first is that Ryoga came to China chasing after Ranma whom he resents and despises, only to unknowingly fall in love with the female version of the guy and save her several times. For the second level, Ranko is ''terrified'' by cats but she trusts Ryoga to care for her, and he's implied to descend from a feline Musk warrior.
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* DramaticIrony: Ranko and Ryoga's relationship on two levels -- the first is that Ryoga came to China chasing after Ranma whom he resents and despises, only to unknowingly fall in love with the female version of the guy and save her several times. For the second level, Ranko is ''terrified'' by cats but she trusts Ryoga to care for her, and he's implied to descend from a feline clan Musk warrior.
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* FindTheCure: Ranko wants to cure her amnesia, and Ryoga wants to cure the qi imbalance causing his lack of direction sense.
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* FindTheCure: Ranko wants to cure her amnesia, and Ryoga wants to cure the qi ki imbalance causing his lack of direction sense.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Royal Advisor Sumac mentions a Musk warrior from the Lion clan abandoned the country long ago because he disagreed with their way of training. Now, a few people familiar with the Musk Dynasty have commented on Ryoga's CuteLittleFangs and qi signature, and he's carrying an heirloom locket in the shape of a lion head...
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Royal Advisor Sumac mentions a Musk warrior from the Lion clan abandoned the country long ago because he disagreed with their way of training. Now, a few people familiar with the Musk Dynasty have commented on Ryoga's CuteLittleFangs and qi ki signature, and he's carrying an heirloom locket in the shape of a lion head...
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Chervil very much regrets stealing her betrothed's heirloom ring in a fit of spite -- now the Musk Dynasty as a whole is angry at her, she lost an important royal artefact and an innocent girl is chased all around China for her mistake.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Chervil very much regrets stealing her betrothed's heirloom ring in a fit of spite -- now the Musk Dynasty as a whole is angry at after her, she lost an important royal artefact and an innocent girl is chased all around China for her mistake.
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* OneExtraMember: The Seven Lucky Gods have Jurojin as an unnoficial member. He is a skilled martial artist who is training to be the next royal bodyguard and covert operative.
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* OneExtraMember: The Seven Lucky Gods have Jurojin as an unnoficial member. He is Jurojin, a skilled martial artist who is training to be the Nekonron's next royal bodyguard and covert operative.operative, as an unnoficial member.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Ryoga is implied to be a descendant of a feline Musk tribe.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Ryoga is implied to be a descendant of a feline Musk tribe.clan.
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** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngest and thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a solid challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
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** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngest and thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a solid considerable challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
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* OneExtraMember: The Seven Lucky Gods have Jurojin as an unnoficial member. He is a skilled martial artist who is training to be the next royal bodyguard and covert operative.
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** Pink and Link work together to free Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngestand thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a solid challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngestand thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a solid challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
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** Pink and Link work together to free help Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be theyoungestand youngest and thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a solid challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the
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* OldMentor: Lotion. She takes Cologne's place as the one who teaches Ryoga and Ranko special techniques, though there are hints her motives to do this could put Ryoga and Ranko in a very dangerous situation.
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* OldMentor: OldMaster: Lotion. She takes Cologne's place as the one who teaches Ryoga and Ranko special techniques, though there are hints her motives to do this could put Ryoga and Ranko in a very dangerous situation.
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* CoordinatedClothes: Expected since the three sets of twins in the franchise (Herbaist twins Pink and Link, Amazon twins Rin-Rin and Ran Ran and Nekonron's Daikokuse and Daihakuse) appear in the story.
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* CoordinatedClothes: Expected since the three sets of twins in the franchise (Herbaist (Herbalist twins Pink and Link, Amazon twins Rin-Rin and Ran Ran and Nekonron's twins Daikokuse and Daihakuse) appear in the story.
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* BattleCouple: Ryoga and Ranko became this since pretty much the moment they met, when they have to team up to fight a Musk tracker. After that they faced Shampoo and Mousse, Pantyhose Taro, infiltrated Nekonron (fighting dozens of soldiers in the process) and the Seven Lucky Gods together.
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* BattleCouple: Ryoga and Ranko became this since pretty much the moment shortly after they met, when they have to team up to fight were attacked by a Musk tracker. After that they faced Shampoo and Mousse, Pantyhose Taro, Taro and infiltrated Nekonron (fighting dozens of soldiers in the process) and the Seven Lucky Gods together.
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* BattleCouple: Ryoga and Ranko become this since pretty much the moment they met, when they team up to fight a Musk tracker. After that they faced Shampoo and Mousse, Pantyhose Taro, infiltrated Nekonron (fighting dozens of soldiers in the process) and the Seven Lucky Gods together.
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* BattleCouple: Ryoga and Ranko become became this since pretty much the moment they met, when they have to team up to fight a Musk tracker. After that they faced Shampoo and Mousse, Pantyhose Taro, infiltrated Nekonron (fighting dozens of soldiers in the process) and the Seven Lucky Gods together.
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* OldMentor: Lotion. She takes Cologne's place as the one who teaches Ryoga and Ranko special techniques, though there are hints her motives to do this could put Ryoga and Ranko in a very dangerous situation.
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* RazorFloss: Monlon of the Seven Lucky Gods uses it against Ranko, unlike in the movie where Ranma is saved by Shampoo, this time Ranko is able to figure out how to escape the technique.
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*SuperiorTwinTeamwork:
** Pink and Link work together to free Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngestand thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a solid challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
** Pink and Link work together to free Ranko and Ryoga in order to play a prank on Shampoo (it doesn't end well for them, however) and later have to do it again to escape Mint and Lime, distracting them in order to feed them hypnotic mushrooms.
** Daikokuse and Daihakuse may be the youngestand thus the weakest members of the Seven Lucky Gods, but they fight using a combination of solid teamwork and TricksterTwins strategies that is effective enough for them to be a solid challenge to Ranko, who otherwise would individually outclass them.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12401978/1/Lost-Together Lost Together]]'' is a ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'' fanfic written on Website/FanfictionDotNet by [=DaisukiFox=].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12401978/1/Lost-Together Lost Together]]'' is a ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'' fanfic written co-written on Website/FanfictionDotNet by [=Dr Facer=] and [=DaisukiFox=].
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* AscendedExtra: Since Ranko never left China, there's much more emphasis on minor characters from there such as Nekonron, the herborist twins Pink and Link and the Musk Dynasty.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Ranko first wishes to regain her memory to remember her family, but when she starts suspecting they might be less than loving to her, she grows unsure.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor:
** Ranko first wishes to regain her memory to remember her family, but when she starts suspecting they might be less than loving to her, she growsunsure.unsure.
** Lychee dreams of a PrinceCharming marrying her. When she's finally introduced to Prince Kirin, that's because he was seeking her friend Ranko under the assumption she's a thief, and his agents happened to stumble upon Lychee when they decided to ''abduct'' her for pulling an IHaveYourWife gambit.
** Ranko first wishes to regain her memory to remember her family, but when she starts suspecting they might be less than loving to her, she grows
** Lychee dreams of a PrinceCharming marrying her. When she's finally introduced to Prince Kirin, that's because he was seeking her friend Ranko under the assumption she's a thief, and his agents happened to stumble upon Lychee when they decided to ''abduct'' her for pulling an IHaveYourWife gambit.
* DemotedToExtra: The Tendo dojo only gathers a mention by Genma -- justified since the story never left China, so the Japanese cast has no reason to get involved in the action.
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* SuspectIsHatless: The Musk Dynasty is hell-bent on finding the "redhaired girl" who stole the Dragon Prince's heirloom ring. Unfortunately for Ranko, she happens to fulfill the description.
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* SuspectIsHatless: The Musk Dynasty is hell-bent on finding the "redhaired girl" who stole the Dragon Prince's heirloom ring. Unfortunately for Ranko, she happens to fulfill fit the description.
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* DotingParent: Bishamonten was ready to skimp on his duty to go and look for Ranko because it would have prevented from being there for his pregnant wife's labour, and when he has to duel against Ryoga, he declares he won't allow a loss to ruin the day of his daughter's birth.
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* TheDreaded:
** The Amazons and Nekonron tread carefully when they interact with the Musk Dynasty, as they're very aware of the strength and power wielded by the Dragon ruling bloodline.
** For all his power, even Herb is wary of the Phoenix King and does his best to stay away from his lands.
** The Amazons and Nekonron tread carefully when they interact with the Musk Dynasty, as they're very aware of the strength and power wielded by the Dragon ruling bloodline.
** For all his power, even Herb is wary of the Phoenix King and does his best to stay away from his lands.
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* AllAmazonsWantHercules:
** Regarding the Amazons in the setting, Cologne mentions some of them might be alright with losing if the Musk Dynasty attacks the village, since the warriors take the conquered women as brides and give them the opportunity to bear strong children.
** Chervil grew infatuated with Herb as she spied on his harsh training, and actually became as much of an ActionGirl as she could to be deemed worthy of becoming his bride. Even after he insulted her and drove her to steal his ring, she cannot help but admire his strength and power.
** Regarding the Amazons in the setting, Cologne mentions some of them might be alright with losing if the Musk Dynasty attacks the village, since the warriors take the conquered women as brides and give them the opportunity to bear strong children.
** Chervil grew infatuated with Herb as she spied on his harsh training, and actually became as much of an ActionGirl as she could to be deemed worthy of becoming his bride. Even after he insulted her and drove her to steal his ring, she cannot help but admire his strength and power.
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* BeautifulDreamer: How Ryoga meets Ranko, as she stumbled upon his camp while he was absent and fell asleep in his tent. He immediately falls under her spell.
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* BeautifulDreamer: BeautifulDreamer:
** How Ryoga meets Ranko, as she stumbled upon his camp while he was absent and fell asleep in his tent. He immediately falls under herspell.spell.
** Chervil takes a few moments to admire Herb's handsome features when he's sleeping after exhausting training. Since she's currently on the run, that's the only moment in which she ''can'' approach him.
** How Ryoga meets Ranko, as she stumbled upon his camp while he was absent and fell asleep in his tent. He immediately falls under her
** Chervil takes a few moments to admire Herb's handsome features when he's sleeping after exhausting training. Since she's currently on the run, that's the only moment in which she ''can'' approach him.
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* DramaticIrony: Ranko and Ryoga's relationship on two levels -- the first is that Ryoga came to China chasing after Ranma whom he resents and despises, only to unknowingly fall in love with the female version of the guy and save her several times. For the second level, Ranko is ''terrified'' by cats but she trusts Ryoga to care for her, and he's implied to descend from a feline Musk warrior.
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* RescueRomance: Ryoga and Ranko were already having romantic tension, but what finally pushes them to acknowledge the matter and kiss after the lost boy saves her from Pantyhose Taro.
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* RescueRomance: Ryoga and Ranko were already having romantic tension, but what finally pushes them to acknowledge the matter and kiss after is the lost boy saves saving her from Pantyhose Taro.
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* AdaptationalAngstDowngrade:
** Ryoga never falls in a Jusenkyo spring so is spared the curse of turning in a small helpless piglet and slowly bonds with Ranko, who unlike Akane fully reciprocates his romantic feeling.
** Zigzagged with Herb. Sure, he's not stuck with a ShapeshifterModeLock, but the price for it is the loss of a very important royal heirloom he just cannot find in spite of whipping his subjects into a frenzy.
** Ryoga never falls in a Jusenkyo spring so is spared the curse of turning in a small helpless piglet and slowly bonds with Ranko, who unlike Akane fully reciprocates his romantic feeling.
** Zigzagged with Herb. Sure, he's not stuck with a ShapeshifterModeLock, but the price for it is the loss of a very important royal heirloom he just cannot find in spite of whipping his subjects into a frenzy.
* BlessedWithSuck: The Musk Dynasty's enhanced smell sense is very much an advantage when they're tracking a fugitive, but not so much when they're visiting Nekonron courtesy of the many hot springs stinking the air. They need to plug their noses to be comfortable there.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Royal Advisor Sumac mentions a Musk warrior from the Lion clan abandoned the country long ago because he disagreed with their way of training. Now, a few people familiar with the Musk Dynasty have commented on his CuteLittleFangs and qi signature, and he's carrying an heirloom locket in the shape of a lion head...
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Royal Advisor Sumac mentions a Musk warrior from the Lion clan abandoned the country long ago because he disagreed with their way of training. Now, a few people familiar with the Musk Dynasty have commented on his Ryoga's CuteLittleFangs and qi signature, and he's carrying an heirloom locket in the shape of a lion head...
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: Kirin confesses he's helping the Musk Dynasty to look for their stolen treasure because Nekonron also suffered the loss of an important cultural heirloom, so he naturally sympathizes with Herb's plight.
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* CuteLittleFangs: Musk Dynasty warriors often have these, as a reminder of their beastly ancestry. Several people actually comment on Ryoga having a similar dentition...
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Royal Advisor Sumac mentions a Musk warrior from the Lion clan abandoned the country long ago because he disagreed with their way of training. Now, a few people familiar with the Musk Dynasty have commented on his CuteLittleFangs and qi signature, and he's carrying an heirloom locket in the shape of a lion head...
* MisplacedRetribution: Herb declares he will raze the Amazon village after learning Ranko now has his royal heirloom ring, claiming she wouldn't be a problem if the Amazons hadn't let her escape. Even his royal advisor is aghast and thinks the prince is going too far.
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* {{Unperson}}: After being banished from the Amazon village, Lotion stopped being mentioned by them. Her great-grandson isn't even allowed to speak her name.
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* {{Unperson}}: After being banished from the Amazon village, Lotion stopped being mentioned by them. Her great-grandson isn't even allowed to speak her name.name.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Prince Herb is not impressed when he learns the royal heirloom ring stolen by Chervil has been picked up by Ranko who's currently impossible to track.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Prince Herb is not impressed when he learns the royal heirloom ring stolen by Chervil has been picked up by Ranko who's currently impossible to track.
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* DamselInDistress: Ranko discovers she ''really'' doesn't like being one when Pantyhose Taro kidnaps her to have rematch against Ryoga, tying her with pantyhose and splashing her with hot tea.
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* IHaveYourWife: Molon kidnaps Ranko's friend Lychee to force the redhead to surrender herself to Nekonron's forces as their prisoner. Of course, it becomes a tad complicated when Lychee is revealed as their prince's fated bride.
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* IHaveYourWife: IHaveYourWife:
** Pantyhose Taro uses Ranko as a hostage to have a rematch against Ryoga over the Corly Weed.
** Molon kidnaps Ranko's friend Lychee to force the redhead to surrender herself to Nekonron's forces as their prisoner. Of course, it becomes a tad complicated when Lychee is revealed as their prince's fated bride.
** Pantyhose Taro uses Ranko as a hostage to have a rematch against Ryoga over the Corly Weed.
** Molon kidnaps Ranko's friend Lychee to force the redhead to surrender herself to Nekonron's forces as their prisoner. Of course, it becomes a tad complicated when Lychee is revealed as their prince's fated bride.
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* RescueRomance: Ryoga and Ranko were already having romantic tension, but what finally pushes them to acknowledge the matter and kiss after the lost boy saves her from Pantyhose Taro.
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* BeautifulDreamer: How Ryoga meets Ranko, as she stumbled upon his camp while he was absent and fell asleep in his tent. He immediately falls under her spell.
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** Since the Musk Dynasty stopped turning beasts into women for them to marry, one of their tactics to bring fresh blood in the country is to find strong female martial artists, subdue them and marry them. Lotion acknowledges a possible for Ranko if the Musk warriors chasing her manage to capture her is becoming the bride of the one who did the deed.
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** Since the Musk Dynasty stopped turning beasts into women for them to marry, one of their tactics to bring fresh blood in the country is to find strong female martial artists, subdue them and marry them. Lotion acknowledges a possible fate for Ranko if the Musk warriors chasing her manage to capture her is becoming the bride of the one who did the deed.
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* RescueRomance: Ryoga stumbles upon Ranko when he saves her from drowning, and they gradually grow closer and closer until they have fantasies about living together as a married couple with children.
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** Both Ranma and Shampoo are nothing but hostile at the prospect to marry each other and act hostile as a consequence. Inversely, Mousse being ready to help Shampoo to break the betrothal convinces her to see him in a romantic light.
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* BestHerToBedHer:
** An Amazon tenet that Shampoo and Ranma swiftly deconstruct -- just because he can beat her, that doesn't mean he wants to marry her, and she's pretty furious and humiliated about the venture.
** Since the Musk Dynasty stopped turning beasts into women for them to marry, one of their tactics to bring fresh blood in the country is to find strong female martial artists, subdue them and marry them. Lotion acknowledges a possible for Ranko if the Musk warriors chasing her manage to capture her is becoming the bride of the one who did the deed.
** An Amazon tenet that Shampoo and Ranma swiftly deconstruct -- just because he can beat her, that doesn't mean he wants to marry her, and she's pretty furious and humiliated about the venture.
** Since the Musk Dynasty stopped turning beasts into women for them to marry, one of their tactics to bring fresh blood in the country is to find strong female martial artists, subdue them and marry them. Lotion acknowledges a possible for Ranko if the Musk warriors chasing her manage to capture her is becoming the bride of the one who did the deed.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: By having NoSenseOfDirection whatsoever, Ryoga allows Ranko to escape Shampoo and the Musk Dynasty warriors -- because he's getting so lost that his trail is impossible to follow.
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* EnemyWithin: Ranko has a nightmare in which she's assaulted by male Ranma telling her she's ruining everything and he needs to prevent her from going too far -- implying that male Ranma is aware of Ranko growing more and more into an independent alter and worrying about her potentially becoming the dominant persona.
* EntertaininglyWrong:
** Genma cheerfully assumes his son is bidding his time until he gets strong enough to come back to the Amazon village and break his father out of captivity. Ranko actually lost her memory, wants to stay as far away from any Amazon courtesy of Shampoo trying to murder her on sight and is currently more focused on her own troubles.
** Ranko assuming she's a girl -- to be fair, she didn't know about Jusenkyô and is currently mode-locked so cannot suspect any trickery on this front. She also believes she has a loving family, and when she starts doubting that after having a dream in which male Ranma assaults her, she wonders if the angry black-haired boy is her brother.
* EntertaininglyWrong:
** Genma cheerfully assumes his son is bidding his time until he gets strong enough to come back to the Amazon village and break his father out of captivity. Ranko actually lost her memory, wants to stay as far away from any Amazon courtesy of Shampoo trying to murder her on sight and is currently more focused on her own troubles.
** Ranko assuming she's a girl -- to be fair, she didn't know about Jusenkyô and is currently mode-locked so cannot suspect any trickery on this front. She also believes she has a loving family, and when she starts doubting that after having a dream in which male Ranma assaults her, she wonders if the angry black-haired boy is her brother.
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* RescueRomance: Ryoga stumbles upon Ranko when he saves her from drowning, and they gradually grow closer and closer until they have fantasies about living together as a married couple with children.
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* FirstPeriodPanic: After spending enough time in a ShapeshifterModeLock, Ranko is horrified when she starts bleeding down there and needs Lotion to explain her how normal it is, and that it means her body is ready for motherhood. After that, Ranko has several daydreams about having Ryoga's children.
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* GirlinessUpgrade: Immediately after losing her memory, Ranko displays male mannerisms out of habit. It gradually changes as she interacts with people who encourages her to dress as a woman and enjoy female activities such as sewing and cooking.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Invoked -- since Ranko has a female body, she goes along with people encouraging her to be more feminine because hey, she's a girl, so that's not really weird, is it?
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* DamnYouMuscleMemory: Ranko notices she's quite unused to care for her body and wonders why is that so -- but since she wasn't actually born female, of course she would be clumsy and awkward in her new body.
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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Justified since Ranko is amnesiac, and Ryoga isn't suspecting the pretty redhaired girl from being his black-haired, ''male'' rival.
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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: ForgottenFirstMeeting:
** Justified since Ranko is amnesiac, and Ryoga isn't suspecting the pretty redhaired girl from being his black-haired, ''male''rival.rival.
** Also justified with Herb not remembering Chervil -- when she dared to approach him in spite of the strict gender-segregation in their country, he was so exhausted from training that he had his eyes closed and couldn't see her, plus he believed she was a little boy because of her high voice.
** Justified since Ranko is amnesiac, and Ryoga isn't suspecting the pretty redhaired girl from being his black-haired, ''male''
** Also justified with Herb not remembering Chervil -- when she dared to approach him in spite of the strict gender-segregation in their country, he was so exhausted from training that he had his eyes closed and couldn't see her, plus he believed she was a little boy because of her high voice.
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* IdentityAmnesia
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* IdentityAmnesiaIdentityAmnesia: After falling into a river, Ranma cannot remember anything and decides to adopt a female persona because, well, she's in a female body so she ''has'' to be a girl.
* MacGuffin: The royal heirloom ring stolen by Chervil and later picked up by Ranko. The Musk Dynasty ''really'' wants to bring it back to their country.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDoneMyGodWhatHaveIDone: Chervil very much regrets stealing her betrothed's heirloom ring in a fit of spite -- now the Musk Dynasty as a whole is angry at her, she lost an important royal artefact and an innocent girl is chased all around China for her mistake.
* ParentalSubstitute: After opening her door to Ryoga and Ranko, Lotion finds herself acting as a maternal reference for Ranko.
* ParentalSubstitute: After opening her door to Ryoga and Ranko, Lotion finds herself acting as a maternal reference for Ranko.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Ranko and Lychee's growing friendship falls under this domain -- Ranko is a very energetic and confident martial artist who used to be a boy (even if she doesn't remember it and gains in femininity with time) and proactively looks for a way to regain her lost memory, while Lychee is a gentle waitress who relies on her pet elephant to fight in her stead and ThinksLikeARomanceNovel, waiting for a PrinceCharming to come and sweep her off her feet.
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* AdaptationalRelationship
* ArrangedMarriage
* ArrangedMarriage
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* AdaptationalRelationship
AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul:
** Both Ranma and Shampoo are nothing but hostile at the prospect to marry each other and act hostile as a consequence. Inversely, Mousse being ready to help Shampoo to break the betrothal convinces her to see him in a romantic light.
** Ryoga treats Ranko with the same gentleness as he gives to other girls, ultimately leading him to nurse a crush on her.
*ArrangedMarriageArrangedMarriage:
** Having beaten Shampoo in a fight, Ranma is supposed to marry her according the Amazon custom. He decides he would rather run away, and Shampoo isn't too happy either about the prospect to marry a "fake woman".
** The Dragon Prince Herb of the Musk Dynasty is currently preparing for his own wedding to a woman from the Musk feline clans. Unfortunately, his lack of eagerness led him to accidentally insult his bride who retaliated by stealing his heirloom ring -- and causing a great mess for everyone.
** When Lychee is discovered to bear the missing half of the Scroll of Luck from Nekonron, she's immediately proclaimed Prince Kirin's fated bride. The girl is slightly floored by this turn of events but not really opposed to marry such a sweet prince.
** Both Ranma and Shampoo are nothing but hostile at the prospect to marry each other and act hostile as a consequence. Inversely, Mousse being ready to help Shampoo to break the betrothal convinces her to see him in a romantic light.
** Ryoga treats Ranko with the same gentleness as he gives to other girls, ultimately leading him to nurse a crush on her.
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** Having beaten Shampoo in a fight, Ranma is supposed to marry her according the Amazon custom. He decides he would rather run away, and Shampoo isn't too happy either about the prospect to marry a "fake woman".
** The Dragon Prince Herb of the Musk Dynasty is currently preparing for his own wedding to a woman from the Musk feline clans. Unfortunately, his lack of eagerness led him to accidentally insult his bride who retaliated by stealing his heirloom ring -- and causing a great mess for everyone.
** When Lychee is discovered to bear the missing half of the Scroll of Luck from Nekonron, she's immediately proclaimed Prince Kirin's fated bride. The girl is slightly floored by this turn of events but not really opposed to marry such a sweet prince.
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* IHaveYourWife: Molon kidnaps Ranko's friend Lychee to force the redhead to surrender herself as their prisoner. Of course, it becomes a tad complicated when Lychee is revealed as their prince's fated bride.
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* IHaveYourWife: Molon kidnaps Ranko's friend Lychee to force the redhead to surrender herself to Nekonron's forces as their prisoner. Of course, it becomes a tad complicated when Lychee is revealed as their prince's fated bride.
* ShapeshifterModeLock: As in canon, Cologne uses a pressure point to turn Ranma hypersensitive to hot temperatures, preventing him from regaining his male body. Which means that when the cursed martial artist gets amnesia, there's no easy way for Ranko to learn she wasn't born a girl.
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* {{Unperson}}
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* {{Unperson}}{{Unperson}}: After being banished from the Amazon village, Lotion stopped being mentioned by them. Her great-grandson isn't even allowed to speak her name.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor
* FindTheCure
* ForgottenFirstMeeting
* HereditaryCurse
* FindTheCure
* ForgottenFirstMeeting
* HereditaryCurse
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor
BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Ranko first wishes to regain her memory to remember her family, but when she starts suspecting they might be less than loving to her, she grows unsure.
*FindTheCure
FindTheCure: Ranko wants to cure her amnesia, and Ryoga wants to cure the qi imbalance causing his lack of direction sense.
*ForgottenFirstMeeting
ForgottenFirstMeeting: Justified since Ranko is amnesiac, and Ryoga isn't suspecting the pretty redhaired girl from being his black-haired, ''male'' rival.
*HereditaryCurseHereditaryCurse: Ryoga is horrified when Lotion suggests his lack of direction sense is actually this, since it means he would definitely infect Ranko if they stay together long enough, and becomes even more determined to cure it.
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* IHaveYourWife
* MultiGenderedSplitPersonalities
* MultiGenderedSplitPersonalities
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* IHaveYourWife
IHaveYourWife: Molon kidnaps Ranko's friend Lychee to force the redhead to surrender herself as their prisoner. Of course, it becomes a tad complicated when Lychee is revealed as their prince's fated bride.
*MultiGenderedSplitPersonalitiesMultiGenderedSplitPersonalities: It's strongly implied that Ranko is growing to be a distinct alter, something that male Ranma really doesn't like.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation
* SuspectIsHatless
* SuspectIsHatless
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation
RelatedInTheAdaptation: Ryoga is implied to be a descendant of a feline Musk tribe.
*SuspectIsHatlessSuspectIsHatless: The Musk Dynasty is hell-bent on finding the "redhaired girl" who stole the Dragon Prince's heirloom ring. Unfortunately for Ranko, she happens to fulfill the description.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12401978/1/Lost-Together Lost Together]]'' is a ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'' fanfic written on Website/FanfictionDotNet by [=DaisukiFox=].
Shortly after getting cursed, events at the Amazon village leads Ranma to lose his memory and being stuck in the shape of a teenage girl. Fortunately, she's found by this nice boy Ryoga who seems open to help her regain her memories.
Now, if only their quest wasn't complicated by all these crazy people accusing her of committing some crime or another, that would be awesome.
!Contains the following tropes
* AdaptationalRelationship
* ArrangedMarriage
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor
* FindTheCure
* ForgottenFirstMeeting
* HereditaryCurse
* IdentityAmnesia
* IHaveYourWife
* MultiGenderedSplitPersonalities
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone
* RelatedInTheAdaptation
* SuspectIsHatless
* {{Unperson}}
Shortly after getting cursed, events at the Amazon village leads Ranma to lose his memory and being stuck in the shape of a teenage girl. Fortunately, she's found by this nice boy Ryoga who seems open to help her regain her memories.
Now, if only their quest wasn't complicated by all these crazy people accusing her of committing some crime or another, that would be awesome.
!Contains the following tropes
* AdaptationalRelationship
* ArrangedMarriage
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor
* FindTheCure
* ForgottenFirstMeeting
* HereditaryCurse
* IdentityAmnesia
* IHaveYourWife
* MultiGenderedSplitPersonalities
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone
* RelatedInTheAdaptation
* SuspectIsHatless
* {{Unperson}}
