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* TranquilFury: Luna's only reaction to nearly getting bitten by Lana's rattlesnake is to coldly and quietly tell her to get it out of the house, all the while grabbing Lana by the overalls and glaring at her.
-->'''Lola:''' "Huh. And here I thought 'whispering' wasn't in Luna's vocabulary."
-->'''Lola:''' "Huh. And here I thought 'whispering' wasn't in Luna's vocabulary."
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome : Lily actually isn't that bad a roommate since babies aren't much trouble as long as their needs, including attention, are being met. Conversely several of the other swaps run into issues like Lana's animals getting into Luna's equipment, Lucy growing progressively more annoyed with Luan's jokes (especially [[TalkingInYourSleep her sleep punning]]) and Leni upsetting Lynn by washing her lucky clothes.
** Related to the above, all the canon roommates turn out to have some way of dealing with the above annoyances like Lana's animals being terrified of Lola's temper so they don't get into her things and Luna being unaffected by Luan's [[TalkingInYourSleep sleep puns]] because she listens to music all night. On the flip side, Lisa has actually gotten hurt [[BigBrotherInstinct making sure Lily didn't come to harm]] when the baby got interested in what Lisa was doing or wanted to play when Lisa was in the middle of an experiment (this is incidentally why Lisa's brain glows; Lily wanted to play at exactly the wrong moment and Lisa shielded her) so while Lincoln's old room is smaller than she's used to, she enjoys the solitude because it allows her experimental freedom.
** One of the results of Lincoln getting his own room when Lily was born was him feeling lonely since he had never had his own room before and for a while, he slept with former roomie Lynn in her room at the time.
** Lynn's [[GoodLuckCharm lucky clothes]] were so filthy no one could come near her from the stench when she wore them and when Leni washes them, Rita isn't remotely sympathetic and forces her athletic daughter to wash all of her sportswear regularly so as not to be a health hazard; her other siblings are in agreement with Mom on the matter.
** Lincoln was given his own room. A hastily repurposed linen closet because he was going to start going through puberty soon and his parents didn't want any of the awkwardness that comes with a growing boy sharing a room with girls.
** Lincoln isn't the only sibling to have a "I lost X" story; most of his older sisters have one as well, with Luan's having a realistic moment within a realistic moment with Lucy's lifelong tendency to be so quiet making Luan lose track of her; Lucy doesn't remember the incident due to having been a toddler, which means she wasn't making clear memories at the time. Of course, they all make a pact to never tell their parents because said parents would probably ground them for life.
** Related to the above, all the canon roommates turn out to have some way of dealing with the above annoyances like Lana's animals being terrified of Lola's temper so they don't get into her things and Luna being unaffected by Luan's [[TalkingInYourSleep sleep puns]] because she listens to music all night. On the flip side, Lisa has actually gotten hurt [[BigBrotherInstinct making sure Lily didn't come to harm]] when the baby got interested in what Lisa was doing or wanted to play when Lisa was in the middle of an experiment (this is incidentally why Lisa's brain glows; Lily wanted to play at exactly the wrong moment and Lisa shielded her) so while Lincoln's old room is smaller than she's used to, she enjoys the solitude because it allows her experimental freedom.
** One of the results of Lincoln getting his own room when Lily was born was him feeling lonely since he had never had his own room before and for a while, he slept with former roomie Lynn in her room at the time.
** Lynn's [[GoodLuckCharm lucky clothes]] were so filthy no one could come near her from the stench when she wore them and when Leni washes them, Rita isn't remotely sympathetic and forces her athletic daughter to wash all of her sportswear regularly so as not to be a health hazard; her other siblings are in agreement with Mom on the matter.
** Lincoln was given his own room. A hastily repurposed linen closet because he was going to start going through puberty soon and his parents didn't want any of the awkwardness that comes with a growing boy sharing a room with girls.
** Lincoln isn't the only sibling to have a "I lost X" story; most of his older sisters have one as well, with Luan's having a realistic moment within a realistic moment with Lucy's lifelong tendency to be so quiet making Luan lose track of her; Lucy doesn't remember the incident due to having been a toddler, which means she wasn't making clear memories at the time. Of course, they all make a pact to never tell their parents because said parents would probably ground them for life.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The manager from "Cereal Offender" is revealed to be named Mr. Williams. This means [[{{Tuckerization}} he's named after]] his voice actor, Creator/GaryAnthonyWilliams.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to the writer's other stories, which mostly focus on drama, ''Lil' Roomie'' is a heartwarming story mostly focusing on Lincoln's and Lily's bond.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to the writer's other stories, which mostly focus on drama, ''Lil' Roomie'' is a heartwarming story mostly focusing on Lincoln's Lincoln and Lily's bond.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 2 makes a reference to the ''UsefulNotes/{{Wii}}'' and ''VideoGame/MarioKart''.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 2 makes a reference to the ''UsefulNotes/{{Wii}}'' and ''VideoGame/MarioKart''.''VideoGame/MarioKart''.
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** Turns out that, in this universe at least, Lana's story about Seymour actually happened; it's how Lola gets Lana's other pets to stay out of her things.
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** Turns out that, in this universe at least, Lana's story about Seymour Lola actually happened; it's killed Seymour, and that's how Lola she gets Lana's other pets to stay out of her things.
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* BigBallOfViolence: The siblings get into one in chapter 8
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* BigBallOfViolence: The siblings get into one in chapter 88.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Title by {{MrTyeDye}}; [=MrTyeDye=]; Cover art by Heterow.]]
