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* LethalHarmlessPowers: Max's ability to bring objects back with her when she reverses was mostly just to make certain parts of the game less annoying (though there are a couple puzzles that rely on it). Here, it's pointed out that if Max killed someone and soaked up all their blood in something she owned and then reversed time, her victim would suddenly be exsanguinated without a mark on them. The first hint that Future Max killed Jefferson in one timeline is that he suddenly feels anemic (because about a pint of his blood got soaked into Max's hoodie).
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* LethalHarmlessPowers: Max's ability to bring objects back with her when she reverses was mostly just to [[AntiFrustrationFeatures make certain parts of the game less annoying annoying]] (though there are a couple puzzles that rely on it). Here, it's pointed out that if Max killed someone and soaked up all their blood in something she owned and then reversed time, her victim would suddenly be exsanguinated without a mark on them. The first hint that Future Max killed Jefferson in one timeline is that he suddenly feels anemic (because about a pint of his blood got soaked into Max's hoodie).
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* ActionGirl: Chloe's baddassery is significantly increased in this fic; apparently Future Max somehow managed to improve her relationship with her step-father David, who has been taking her shooting and giving her combat training as a bonding experience. Chloe utterly demolishes Victoria in a fight (despite Victoria having some martial arts training), she gets a perfect headshot on Nathan in several timelines, and one of the reasons she was expelled from Blackwell is because she defenestrated a football player.
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* ActionGirl: Chloe's baddassery is significantly increased in this fic; apparently Future Max somehow managed to improve her relationship with her step-father stepfather David, who has been taking her shooting and giving her combat training as a bonding experience. Chloe utterly demolishes Victoria in a fight (despite Victoria having some martial arts training), she gets a perfect headshot on Nathan in several timelines, and one of the reasons she was expelled from Blackwell is because she defenestrated a football player.
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** David, Chloe's step-father, is much calmer here than in the original game and has a much better relationship with Chloe. It's mentioned that he's going to therapy and taking medication for his PTSD. Once again, it's implied that this was one of future Max's manipulations. Not only is he helpful directly in the course of the story, but he helped train Chloe into becoming the badass she needed to be.
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** David, Chloe's step-father, stepfather, is much calmer here than in the original game and has a much better relationship with Chloe. It's mentioned that he's going to therapy and taking medication for his PTSD. Once again, it's implied that this was one of future Max's manipulations. Not only is he helpful directly in the course of the story, but he helped train Chloe into becoming the badass she needed to be.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In the game, Chloe hates David's guts while David is trying and failing to discipline her. Here, David has had therapy and pharmaceutical treatment for his PTSD and is much more patient with her. Not only that, but teaching her how to fight and use a gun at the gun range has served as effective bonding time for them. Chloe still doesn't completely respect him - calling him more toned down nicknames like "step-dork" - but she's clearly trying not to start anything, even providing advice to hire female staff for more efficient security and getting him signatures from Max and Victoria when he asked for them. [[spoiler: This is all implied to be because of Future Max's meddling.]]
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In the game, Chloe hates David's guts while David is trying and failing to discipline her.her only to keep crossing the line into abuse. Here, David has had therapy and pharmaceutical treatment for his PTSD and is much more patient with her. Not only that, but teaching her how to fight and use a gun at the gun range has served as effective bonding time for them. Chloe still doesn't completely respect him - -- calling him more toned down nicknames like "step-dork" - -- but she's clearly trying not to start anything, even providing advice to hire female staff for more efficient security and getting him signatures from Max and Victoria when he asked for them. [[spoiler: This is all implied to be because of Future Max's meddling.]]
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Incorruptible Pure Pureness has been renamed to The Incorruptible and redefined to be about characters who are portrayed in-universe as untemptable/incorruptible. Removing for not fitting the definition.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: When the Max/Victoria video is released, Victoria is utterly gobsmacked when Kate shows sympathy for her, despite Victoria having released a much worse video of Kate recently.
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* PhysicalGod: Victoria's first thought when witnessing Max's time travel powers is that Max is a goddess who could erase her from existence with a wave of her hand. She has a panic attack when Max just politely waves at her... which is exactly what future Max intended.
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* PhysicalGod: Victoria's first thought when witnessing Max's time travel powers is that Max is a goddess who could erase her from existence with a wave of her hand. She has a panic attack when Max just politely waves at her... which is exactly what future Future Max intended.
