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** Adrien's worst personality traits, such as his irresponsibility, coddling of Chloé, and self-destructive obsession with romancing Ladybug, are brought to the fore here.

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** Adrien's worst personality traits, such as his irresponsibility, coddling of Chloé, and self-destructive obsession with romancing Ladybug, are brought to the fore forefront here.
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* DisappointedByTheMotive: Ondine and Kim think it the zookeeper is pettier than Chloé for getting akumatized over some kid making fun of a panther.

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* DisappointedByTheMotive: Ondine and Kim think it the zookeeper is pettier than Chloé for getting akumatized over some kid making fun of a panther.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Chat gets mad at Ladybug because she didn't show up the celebration in honor of the two heroes of Paris, Ladybug fires back that she didn't even know it was happening. When Chat tries to say that Chloé was talking about it all week, Ladybug has to point out that she isn't around Chloé and never heard this.
** Nadja's screwup on ''Face to Face'' meant that the interview series was cancelled and she was chewed out by her boss, since she did annoy one of the biggest celebrities in Paris to the point where she walked out on them on live television.

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''Leave for Mendeleiev'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' fanfic written by imthepunchlord on tumblr. They co-created the AU along with zoe-oneesama and miraculouscontent.

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''Leave ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17900039 Leave for Mendeleiev'' Mendeleiev]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' fanfic written by imthepunchlord on tumblr. They co-created the AU along with zoe-oneesama and miraculouscontent.



This fanfic can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17900039 here]].
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Chapter 9 gives several instances by itself:
** Not too many people are concerned about the aftermath of Akuma attacks except [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone perhaps the person who was Akumatized themselves]] BECAUSE of how [[WorldHealingWave the Miraculous Cure]] works. Nino and Adrien even consider it a glorified ResetButton where [[KarmaHoudini they don't have to face the consequences of their actions]] during said Akuma attack (especially Adrien who as a superhero [[ComesGreatResponsibility should be more careful]]), and aren't as concerned for the safety of others as they should be, and both want to exploit Mylène's akumatizations for their own purposes (Nino [[SkewedPriorities for his monster movie]] when [[EveryoneHasStandards even Alya's not willing to risk her and everyone else's lives for a short film]], and Adrien in an ill-timed attempt to [[spoiler:unmask Marinette as Ladybug]]). Marinette, however, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is appalled that she (as Ladybug)]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero unintentionally created this mentality]], and considers asking Tikki to limit how much the Cure restores in hopes of forcing people to wise up.
** Kim took the previous chapter's events [[JerkassRealization much harder]], as he realizes that [[LoveMakesYouDumb he ignored Chloé's bullying due to his crush]], [[AccompliceByInaction letting Marinette suffer]] in the process. He swears to [[MustMakeAmends become a better friend]] and starts working to make things up to her, starting with standing up for her against [[AlphaBitch Chloé]] and [[AcquiredSituationalNarcissism Nino]].
** In the previous chapter, Nino had [[ThePromise personally promised]] Marinette that [[TheBully Chloé]] wouldn't be involved in the movie project. The second Marinette sees Chloé (who had blackmailed Nino to get in on the project when she heard Adrien was involved), she [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere almost quits on the spot]], and [[StrawHypocrite Nino]] attempts to pin Chloé's hostility on Marinette for not standing up to her. This, and Nino's firm grip of the JerkassBall for the rest of the chapter, [[BrokenPedestal drives an even deeper wedge between Marinette and Nino's friendship]] than Marinette's class transfer, [[WeUsedToBeFriends if not outright ruins it]]. She at least declares she's not doing him any more favors.
** Due to being in Mendeleiev's class, Marinette doesn't have close connections to some of her other canon classmates. She doesn't even know Juleka's and Natheniel's names off the top of her head, and she doesn't know Adrien properly outside of him being Aurore's LoveInterest.
** When Nino writes in a kissing scene between Adrien and Mylène's characters, Alya, Ivan, and Marinette [[WhatTheHellHero naturally have concerns]]. Alya's upset that her script was rewritten without her consent for the sake of cheesy romance, Ivan is borderline furious that Nino never cleared it with either him or his girlfriend, and Marinette just genuinely [[DefiedTrope cannot believe]] [[LoveAtFirstSight that two people who just met suddenly want to kiss each other]].
*** Chloé and Adrien are both shocked to the core when Marinette states that she ''wouldn't'' want to kiss the latter 'in the heat of the moment'. While she acknowledges that his looks are aesthetically pleasing, she doesn't ''know'' him at all; they're barely acquainted, and she mostly knows him as Chloé's ChildhoodFriend who [[ExtremeDoormat refuses to reign her in or stand up for Mylène]].
*** In response to the above, [[EntitledBastard Chloé]] and [[EntitledToHaveYou Adrien]] attempt to guilt an apology out of Marinette, with Adrien [[WoundedGazelleGambit acting hurt by her rejection]]. Not only does she refuse to be cowed, she almost curses them out in Mandarin for being a pair of {{Spoiled Brat}}s.
** Once Marinette confirms Mylène [[MonsterOfTheWeek has been Akumatized]], she stops Tikki from transforming her because Ivan's right outside and knows she's in the bathroom looking to comfort Mylène, and informs him and the rest of Bustier's class of the situation, [[FromBadToWorse who eventually name her the leader of their escape party]].
** After the battle, Marinette returns home, ranting at [[WhatTheHellHero how callously Nino behaved]], and [[ExplainExplainOhCrap starts to tear into Chat Noir's late arrival when she stops and remembers that only she and Bustier's class were in the school that day.]] From there, she [[SherlockScan concludes that due to Principal Damocles allowing only her and Bustier's class access to the school for the project]], and with [[BottleEpisode Horrificator sealing them all in the school and there was no Cataclysm used on one of the entrances]], [[spoiler:[[InternalReveal Chat Noir HAS to be one of the boys in Bustier's class]]]]. She's [[PullingTheThread only stopped from going any further by]] [[ComesGreatResponsibility Tikki insisting on Marinette not being allowed to know]], but the damage has been done and makes Marinette question her partner's competence even more before Tikki insists on them dropping the conversation.
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* RantInducingSlight: Marinette is ''deeply offended'' by the notion that Lady Wifi/Alya could ''ever'' think that [[SpoiledBrat Chloé]] could be Ladybug.

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* BlamingTheVictim:
** Mme Bustier pressures the victims of Chloé's bullying to TurnTheOtherCheek rather than resisting, and claims that she doesn't recall there being any problems when Marinette was one of her students.
** Nino snaps at Marinette that she wouldn't have had to deal with Chloé's cruelty if she 'just stood up to her'. He also blames ''Mylène'' for being cowed by Chloé's badgering.



** In the previous chapter, Nino had [[ThePromise personally promised]] Marinette that [[TheBully Chloé]] wouldn't be involved in the movie project. The second Marinette sees Chloé (who had blackmailed Nino to get in on the project when she heard Adrien was involved), she [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere almost quits on the spot]], and [[StrawHypocrite Nino]] [[UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming attempts to pin Chloé's hostility on Marinette for not standing up to her]]. This, and Nino's firm grip of the JerkassBall for the rest of the chapter, [[BrokenPedestal drives an even deeper wedge between Marinette and Nino's friendship]] than Marinette's class transfer, [[WeUsedToBeFriends if not outright ruins it]]. She at least declares she's not doing him any more favors.

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** In the previous chapter, Nino had [[ThePromise personally promised]] Marinette that [[TheBully Chloé]] wouldn't be involved in the movie project. The second Marinette sees Chloé (who had blackmailed Nino to get in on the project when she heard Adrien was involved), she [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere almost quits on the spot]], and [[StrawHypocrite Nino]] [[UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming attempts to pin Chloé's hostility on Marinette for not standing up to her]].her. This, and Nino's firm grip of the JerkassBall for the rest of the chapter, [[BrokenPedestal drives an even deeper wedge between Marinette and Nino's friendship]] than Marinette's class transfer, [[WeUsedToBeFriends if not outright ruins it]]. She at least declares she's not doing him any more favors.



* UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming:
** Mme Bustier pressures the victims of Chloé's bullying to TurnTheOtherCheek rather than resisting, and claims that she doesn't recall there being any problems when Marinette was one of her students.
** Nino snaps at Marinette that she wouldn't have had to deal with Chloé's cruelty if she 'just stood up to her'. He also blames ''Mylène'' for being cowed by Chloé's badgering.
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** Nathaniel assumes that because Marc's sketchbook is labeled 'Diary of Ladybug', it actually ''IS'' Ladybug's diary. Upon seeing Marc waiting to meet up with him instead, he accuses Jean setting everything up to prank him and rips the book apart.

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** Nathaniel assumes that because Marc's sketchbook is labeled 'Diary of Ladybug', it actually ''IS'' Ladybug's diary. Upon seeing Marc waiting to meet up with him instead, he accuses Jean of setting everything up to prank him and rips the book apart.

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** Aurora still loses the Weather Girl competition; however, the circumstances surrounding her loss are different, with [[EvilGloating Chloé taking the credit]].

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** Aurora Aurore still loses the Weather Girl competition; however, the circumstances surrounding her loss are different, with [[EvilGloating Chloé taking the credit]].



* InnocentlyInsensitive: While praising Marinette's work, Audrey mentions in passing that "My daughter could learn a lot from you." Marinette reflexively flinches, reminded of how much she's been pressured to 'set a good example' for her long-time bully.

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** Marinette still falls for a blond classmate, only it's [[spoiler:Aurore]] instead of Adrien.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: While praising Marinette's work, Audrey mentions in passing that "My daughter could learn a lot from you." Marinette reflexively flinches, reminded of how much she's been pressured to 'set a good example' for her long-time bully. To her credit, Audrey does notice this and clarifies what she meant by that.
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** When Plagg comments that the Black Cat Ring isn't really ''necessary'', as other Miraculi could fill the same role, Adrien misinterprets this as Plagg saying that ''he's'' replaceable.

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** When Plagg comments that the Black Cat Ring isn't really ''necessary'', as other Miraculi could fill the same role, Adrien misinterprets this as Plagg saying that ''he's'' replaceable.
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** Chat Noir warns Ladybug when she's about to detransform after the Stormy Weather fight, rather than taking advantage of her distraction to learn who she is.

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** Chat Noir warns Ladybug when she's about to detransform after the Stormy Weather fight, rather than taking advantage of her distraction to learn who she is. Justified, because he wasn't as entitled to her as the later chapters.
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** Nathaniel assumes that because Marc's sketchbook is labeled 'Diary of Ladybug', it actually ''IS'' Ladybug's diary. Upon seeing Marc waiting to meet up with him in red, he accuses Jean setting everything up to prank him and rips the book apart.

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** Nathaniel assumes that because Marc's sketchbook is labeled 'Diary of Ladybug', it actually ''IS'' Ladybug's diary. Upon seeing Marc waiting to meet up with him in red, instead, he accuses Jean setting everything up to prank him and rips the book apart.

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** Canon Nathaniel is generally a NiceGuy, and while he picks up the JerkassBall in "Reverser" he makes amends with Marc offscreen by the end of the episode. Here, he has gotten Jean thrown out of the art room, is never indicated to have apologized to Marc for destroying his notebook, and creepily fantasizes about Marinette after he is chewed out by Ladybug.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In canon, Audrey Bourgeois is an unrepentant emotionally abusive HateSink who is personally responsible in no small part for making Chloé the way she is today. Here, she's a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.

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** Canon Nathaniel is generally a NiceGuy, and while he picks up the JerkassBall in "Reverser" he quickly realizes he was out of line and makes amends with Marc offscreen by at the end of the episode. Here, he has gotten Jean thrown out of the art room, is never indicated to have apologized to Marc for destroying his notebook, and creepily fantasizes about Marinette after he is chewed out by Ladybug.
** Nadja Chamack's portrayal here is far less sympathetic in canon; not only does she insist on Marinette's parents working on their anniversary to make her a cake, she shows up ''hours'' before she was supposed to pick it up and still gets upset when Marinette isn't there to give it to her. Later, during her live interview with Ladybug and Chat Noir, she keeps pushing about their relationship despite Ladybug's clear discomfort and Aurore's efforts to redirect the conversation.
** Subverted by Nino. His first major appearance shows him suffering a serious case of AcquiredSituationalNarcissism, but he later has a HeelRealization and works to make amends for his behavior. [[spoiler:Later still, he joins Team Miraculous and is the one who revives Emile from her coma using the repaired Peafowl Miraculous.]]
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In canon, Audrey Bourgeois is an unrepentant unrepentant, emotionally abusive HateSink who is personally responsible in no small part for making Chloé the way she is today. Here, she's a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.ReasonableAuthorityFigure who approves of Marinette's talent, passion, and work ethic and openly acknowledges that Chloe is a SpoiledBrat who needs taking in hand.



** Adrien and Nino: While Nino disagrees with Adrien's defense of Chloé, both are willing to stand up for their respective {{Childhood Friend}}s... provided it doesn't personally inconvenience ''them''. Both display manipulative streaks and expect others to go along with their demands, dismissing the impact of their actions as 'no big deal'.

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** Adrien and Nino: While Nino disagrees with Adrien's defense of Chloé, both are willing to stand up for their respective {{Childhood Friend}}s... provided it doesn't personally inconvenience ''them''. Both display manipulative streaks and expect others to go along with their demands, dismissing the impact of their actions as 'no big deal'. However, when confronted with the consequences of their mistakes, Adrien digs his heels in and refuses to admit he was in the wrong while Nino has a JerkassRealization and begins working to make up for his actions.


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** During Frozer's attack, Aurore starts chewing the villain--and, by extension, Hawkmoth--out rather than try to take shelter. When Ladybug shows up, she's less worried about Hawkmoth trying to take vengeance for the insults than about him actually listening to Aurore's advice and doing something competent for once.
** Following the pevious confrontation, Gabriel is more concerned about his bruised ego than trying to glean any useful ideas from Aurore's rant.

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* MirrorCharacter: Chloé and Adrien are both [[ItsAllAboutMe self-absorbed]] {{Spoiled Brat}}s who expect the world to bend around their every whim. Chloé is simply far more ''overt'' about this, whereas Adrien [[BitchInSheepsClothing acts nicer than he really is]], showing his entitlement more openly while transformed into Chat Noir.



* NotSoDifferent: Chloé and Adrien are both [[ItsAllAboutMe self-absorbed]] {{Spoiled Brat}}s who expect the world to bend around their every whim. Chloé is simply far more ''overt'' about this, whereas Adrien [[BitchInSheepsClothing acts nicer than he really is]], showing his entitlement more openly while transformed into Chat Noir.



*** In response to the above, [[EntitledBastard Chloé]] [[NotSoDifferent and]] [[EntitledToHaveYou Adrien]] attempt to guilt an apology out of Marinette, with Adrien [[WoundedGazelleGambit acting hurt by her rejection]]. Not only does she refuse to be cowed, she almost curses them out in Mandarin for being a pair of {{Spoiled Brat}}s.

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*** In response to the above, [[EntitledBastard Chloé]] [[NotSoDifferent and]] and [[EntitledToHaveYou Adrien]] attempt to guilt an apology out of Marinette, with Adrien [[WoundedGazelleGambit acting hurt by her rejection]]. Not only does she refuse to be cowed, she almost curses them out in Mandarin for being a pair of {{Spoiled Brat}}s.
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** Adrien only accepts the notion that Lady Wifi was wrong about Chloé being Ladybug when he witnesses her outside the hotel, knowing that the real Ladybug is still instead. Later on, a similar situation arises when [[spoiler:he sees the Ladybug who hitched a ride with Timebreaker with Marinette and Ondine, convincing him that his suspicions about her were wrong]].

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** Adrien only accepts the notion that Lady Wifi was wrong about Chloé being Ladybug when he witnesses her outside the hotel, knowing that the real Ladybug is still instead.inside. Later on, a similar situation arises when [[spoiler:he sees the Ladybug who hitched a ride with Timebreaker with Marinette and Ondine, convincing him that his suspicions about her were wrong]].

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** Rather than being an IgnoredEnamoredUnderling, Nathalie is a SassySecretary willing to snark about Gabriel's more unreasonable or ridiculous demands.

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** Rather than being an IgnoredEnamoredUnderling, Nathalie is a SassySecretary willing to snark about Gabriel's more unreasonable or ridiculous demands. Gabriel makes a fatal error in overestimating Nathalie's loyalty to him and his plans after he [[SuicideMission sends her to be Style Queen's first victim]], as she betrays his hideout to Team Miraculous the moment she's surrounded and leaves to contact her lawyer rather than fight for him.



* KarmaHoudini: Nathalie, primarily because she [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere voluntarily gives up her boss and leaves to contact her lawyer]], either gets no punishment for working with Gabriel or gets a lighter sentence.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Nathalie combines this with MistreatmentInducedBetrayal. After [[SuicideMission Gabriel sends her]] [[ShootTheMessenger to deliberately set Audrey off]], she loses all loyalty to him. She [[KnowsWhenToFoldThem immediately surrenders when surrounded by Team Miraculous]], volunteers Hawk Moth's location and goes to lawyer up so she either doesn't go down when Hawk Moth does or gets a lighter sentence.

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Nathalie combines this with MistreatmentInducedBetrayal. After [[SuicideMission Gabriel sends her]] [[ShootTheMessenger to deliberately set Audrey off]], she loses all loyalty to him. She [[KnowsWhenToFoldThem [[KnowWhenToFoldEm immediately surrenders when surrounded by Team Miraculous]], volunteers Hawk Moth's location and goes to lawyer up so she either doesn't go down when Hawk Moth does or gets a lighter sentence.
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* AdaptationalBadass: The heroes frequently receive a bevy of new powers which demolish the limits of their miraculouses in canon. (For instance, other kwami besides Tikki are able to purify akumas and clean up their damage). This makes a lot of akuma who were very challenging in the show much easier to defeat, since the heroes can simply bury them with all their new powers.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Nathalie combines this with MistreatmentInducedBetrayal. After [[SuicideMission Gabriel sends her]] [[ShootTheMessenger to deliberately set Audrey off]], she loses all loyalty to him. She [[KnowsWhenToFoldThem immediately surrenders when surrounded by Team Miraculous]], volunteers Hawk Moth's location and goes to lawyer up so she either doesn't go down when Hawk Moth does or gets a lighter sentence.
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* AdaptedOut: [[WordOfGod The author]] has stated on their [[https://imthepunchlord.tumblr.com/post/643915335556284416/morning-so-i-know-that-felix-and-amber-are-no Tumblr]] [[https://imthepunchlord.tumblr.com/post/648360862043799552/will-luka-be-introduced-in-lfm-and-will-he-still account]] a handful of times when asked that Felix, Kagami, and Luka won't appear.

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* AdaptedOut: [[WordOfGod The author]] has stated on their [[https://imthepunchlord.tumblr.com/post/643915335556284416/morning-so-i-know-that-felix-and-amber-are-no Tumblr]] [[https://imthepunchlord.tumblr.com/post/648360862043799552/will-luka-be-introduced-in-lfm-and-will-he-still account]] a handful of times when asked that Felix, Félix, Kagami, and Luka won't appear.



** Felix and Amber are based off of characters from the earliest concepts for ''Miraculous Ladybug'', with the latter being based off of Chloé's concept art.

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** Felix Félix and Amber are based off of characters from the earliest concepts for ''Miraculous Ladybug'', with the latter being based off of Chloé's concept art.



* OrwellianRetcon: After a hiatus, the author began a rewrite of the fic which eliminated the characters of Amber and held off on debuting Felix, in favour of introducing a TruerToTheText version later on.

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* OrwellianRetcon: After a hiatus, the author began a rewrite of the fic which eliminated the characters of Amber and held off on debuting Felix, Félix, in favour of introducing a TruerToTheText version later on.
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* BittersweetEnding: Not for the heroes, but for the Agrestes: [[spoiler:Emilie is restored, but hospitalized, while Gabriel is publicly exposed as Hawk Moth and goes to jail. Adrien stays by his mother's side, refusing to see anyone but Chloe]].

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* BittersweetEnding: Not for the heroes, but for the Agrestes: [[spoiler:Emilie is restored, but hospitalized, while Gabriel is publicly exposed as Hawk Moth and goes to jail. Adrien stays by his mother's side, refusing to see anyone but Chloe]].Chloé]].



** PlayedForLaughs when Aurore takes Marinette to the ice rink, only for them to arrive while Mayor Andre is there harassing the owner. Neither is particularly surprised when this sparks an akuma.

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** PlayedForLaughs when Aurore takes Marinette to the ice rink, only for them to arrive while Mayor Andre André is there harassing the owner. Neither is particularly surprised when this sparks an akuma.



** Chat Noir still lies to Ladybug about ''why'' Theo was akumatized, blaming her for not knowing about the ceremony.
** Alix's pocketwatch is still broken during the race, leading to her akumatization into Timebreaker [[spoiler:and Ladybug unintentionally throwing Chat Noir off her trail via TimeTravel]].

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** Chat Noir still lies to Ladybug about ''why'' Theo Théo was akumatized, blaming her for not knowing about the ceremony.
** Alix's pocketwatch pocket watch is still broken during the race, leading to her akumatization into Timebreaker [[spoiler:and Ladybug unintentionally throwing Chat Noir off her trail via TimeTravel]].



** Adrien lies to Theo, falsely claiming that he and Ladybug are already in a relationship and riling him up enough to attract Hawkmoth's attention. He then proceeds to blame ''Ladybug'', chiding her for not attending the ceremony and making her apologize to Theo while he slinks off to keep feeling sorry for himself.

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** Adrien lies to Theo, Théo, falsely claiming that he and Ladybug are already in a relationship and riling him up enough to attract Hawkmoth's attention. He then proceeds to blame ''Ladybug'', chiding her for not attending the ceremony and making her apologize to Theo Théo while he slinks off to keep feeling sorry for himself.



* InternalReveal: Ladybug learns the truth about the Copycat incident when [[spoiler:Nadja brings Theo onto her show as a surprise guest in an attempt to ambush her and Chat with 'proof' of their relationship]]. This does '''not''' go over well.

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* InternalReveal: Ladybug learns the truth about the Copycat incident when [[spoiler:Nadja brings Theo Théo onto her show as a surprise guest in an attempt to ambush her and Chat with 'proof' of their relationship]]. This does '''not''' go over well.



** Chat Noir lying to Ladybug and making her think ''she'' was responsible for Theo becoming Copycat blows up in his face after she finds out what really happened.

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** Chat Noir lying to Ladybug and making her think ''she'' was responsible for Theo Théo becoming Copycat blows up in his face after she finds out what really happened.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Ladybug storms out of the ''Face to Face'' interview after [[spoiler:Theo's brought in]].

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Ladybug storms out of the ''Face to Face'' interview after [[spoiler:Theo's [[spoiler:Théo's brought in]].
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Note: Following a hiatus, the fic was [[ReTool rebooted and rewritten]], with [[OrwellianRetcon chapters slowly being uploaded to replace the original work]].

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* DiscontinuityNod: Rather than Adrien guilt-tripping Marinette into throwing a party for Chloé when it looks like she's going to transfer out, Chloé throws a party for ''Adrien'' after [[spoiler:convincing Gabriel to let him return to school]]. Adrien proves to be just as [[UngratefulBastard ungrateful for her efforts]] as she was towards Marinette, [[spoiler:ditching her for Kim's pool party]].

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Rather than Adrien guilt-tripping Marinette into throwing a party for Chloé when it looks like she's going to transfer out, Chloé throws a party for ''Adrien'' after [[spoiler:convincing Gabriel to let him return to school]]. Adrien proves to be just as [[UngratefulBastard ungrateful for her efforts]] as she was towards Marinette, [[spoiler:ditching her for Kim's pool party]]. party]].
** After seeing [[spoiler:Daylily]] in action, Gabriel contemplates the possibility of somebody using multiple Miraculi at once, but is unable to [[spoiler:use the Peafowl Pin to turn into Shadow Moth]], since [[spoiler:it was already liberated from his safe]].
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* AstralProjection: Astral Flight, one of the Peafowl's powers, grants the user this ability. [[spoiler:Emilie got lost outside of her body; Tempavo is able to bring her back safely.]]


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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Oudragon uses a ParasolOfPain, which completely catches Hawk Moth off guard when he [[spoiler:grabs her weapon to use himself, only for it to pop open, distracting him as he angrily declares that it should be a sword]].


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* JerkassHasAPoint: PlayedWith; after learning that Adrien [[spoiler:was Chat Noir]], Gabriel calmly dresses him down, pointing out how he refused to take things seriously and wasted the opportunity he was given, and that [[spoiler:Ladybug has every right not to trust him]]. Of course, part of the reason he's saying all of this is in order to exploit his son's emotional state and [[spoiler:akumatize him into Chat Blanc]].

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* BittersweetEnding: Not for the heroes, but for the Agrestes: [[spoiler:Emilie is restored, but hospitalized, while Gabriel is publicly exposed as Hawk Moth and goes to jail. Adrien stays by his mother's side, refusing to see anyone but Chloe]].



* EmpoweredBadassNormal: Aurore gets to be this, when [[spoiler:she is loaned the Dragon Miraculous and gets to help Ladybug defeat Syren as Oudragon.]]

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Marinette finds her confidence, is surrounded by people she trusts, [[spoiler:takes down Hawk Moth and is able to retire her Ladybug persona in favor of Marigold, with Oudragon/Aurore by her side]].
* EmpoweredBadassNormal: Aurore gets to be this, when [[spoiler:she is loaned the Dragon Miraculous and gets to help Ladybug defeat Syren as Oudragon.]]Oudragon]].
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* TheRestShallPass: In the finale, [[spoiler:Fauxy splits off from the group to distract Chat Blanc with his illusions]]. Also PlayedWith in that [[spoiler:Oudragon lets the rest of the team take the elevator down while she splits off and attacks Hawk Moth directly]].

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** In canon, the Fox Miraculous' ByThePowerOfGrayskull phrases are "let's pounce" and "let's rest". Here, they're "showtime" and "breaktime". The former is the one used by the Monkey Miraculous in canon; when the Monkey is fielded against Style Queen, its phrase is changed to "playtime".
** The Rabbit Miraculous is given a complete retool, going from TimeTravel to teleportation and healing magic. Its kwami is renamed Luuna, and its activation phrases are changed to "full moon" and "new moon".


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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange:
** All of the Miraculi are retooled, given multiple abilities in order to make them more versatile.
** Several of the [[ByThePowerOfGrayskull transformation phrases]] are altered -- the Turtle's become "Guard Up/Down", the Fox's become "Showtime/Breaktime", while the Monkey (which originally had 'Showtime') switches to "Playtime".
** The Rabbit Miraculous is completely retooled from TimeTravel to teleportation and healing magic. Its kwami is renamed Luuna rather than Fluff, and their activation phrases are "Full Moon" and "New Moon".
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: During the finale, when [[spoiler:Tempavo]] expresses sympathy for Hawk Moth, Ladybug bluntly reminds them that he ''chose'' to terrorize Paris rather than seeking help.


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** During the finale, Hawk Moth [[EvilGloating gloats over the notion that]] [[spoiler:Tempavo will fall into a coma just like Emilie]], only to lose his smirk upon learning that [[spoiler:the Peafowl Pin was repaired]].


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** After learning that Adrien sees the Miraculous Cure as a magical ResetButton, Marinette considers discussing the matter with Tikki to see if there's any way of working around that power in order to make people less reliant upon Ladybug. Following the finale, [[spoiler:she decides to retire Ladybug and continue leading the team as Marigold, protecting the Earrings and taking them out of the public eye]].


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** Combined with BreakingSpeech in the finale, when [[spoiler:Gabriel bluntly calls out his son for 'having the time of his life' as Chat Noir rather than being a reliable partner, all so he can akumatize him]].

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* SuicideMission: Audrey's akumatization is one for Nathalie, who has the misfortune of having to be the one to deliver the news that drives her berserk and is thus the first one in the line of fire when she falls under Hawk Moth's sway.



* SuicideMission: Audrey's akumatization is one for Nathalie, who has the misfortune of having to be the one to deliver the news that drives her berserk and is thus the first one in the line of fire when she falls under Hawk Moth's sway.

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** Most notably, Aurore Beaureal. In canon, she was an akuma in two episodes, but otherwise remains in the background. Here, though, she becomes Marinette's new best friend, standing up to Chloé and Alya for her. She also models clothes and accessories for Marinette. Marinette, in return, supports her at the Weather Girl competition, designs clothes and accessories for her, and helps her try to win Adrien's affections.

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** Most notably, Aurore Beaureal.Beauréal. In canon, she was an akuma in two episodes, but otherwise remains in the background. Here, though, she becomes Marinette's new best friend, standing up to Chloé and Alya for her. She also models clothes and accessories for Marinette. Marinette, in return, supports her at the Weather Girl competition, designs clothes and accessories for her, and helps her try to win Adrien's affections.



** ZigZagged with Nino. While he initially promises Marinette that Chloé isn't involved with the movie he's making, he doesn't warn her when that changes, and insists that the promise ''she'' made to help is more binding than the one ''he'' made. He also forced Mylene into the lead role in his movie, and wrote a kissing scene into the script without the permission of anyone involved.

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** ZigZagged with Nino. While he initially promises Marinette that Chloé isn't involved with the movie he's making, he doesn't warn her when that changes, and insists that the promise ''she'' made to help is more binding than the one ''he'' made. He also forced Mylene Mylène into the lead role in his movie, and wrote a kissing scene into the script without the permission of anyone involved.



** Instead of akumatizing Lila into Volpina, Hawkmoth learns about her supposedly being 'Ladybug's best friend' when he akumatizes Mylene's father into the Mime, and promptly sends him after her. This effectively ensures that she's not interested in working with him in the future; why would she be, when he nearly killed her?

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** Instead of akumatizing Lila into Volpina, Hawkmoth learns about her supposedly being 'Ladybug's best friend' when he akumatizes Mylene's Mylène's father into the Mime, and promptly sends him after her. This effectively ensures that she's not interested in working with him in the future; why would she be, when he nearly killed her?



* LoopholeAbuse: When Chloé throws a party and expects everybody at Francoise Dupont to attend, Ms. Mendeleiev states that everybody in her class should attend... but they don't have to ''stay'' for the duration.

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* LoopholeAbuse: When Chloé throws a party and expects everybody at Francoise Françoise Dupont to attend, Ms. Mendeleiev states that everybody in her class should attend... but they don't have to ''stay'' for the duration.



** {{Deconstructed}}. Knowing about [[WorldHealingWave Miraculous Cure]] makes Adrien complacent, as he latches onto it to excuse his misbehavior; since Ladybug's going to fix everything anyway, it doesn't ''matter'' how much he screws around and goofs off, right? When Nino uses similar logic to excuse his plan to exploit Mylene's akumatization, Adrien leaps to back him up, much to Marinette's horror.

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** {{Deconstructed}}. Knowing about [[WorldHealingWave Miraculous Cure]] makes Adrien complacent, as he latches onto it to excuse his misbehavior; since Ladybug's going to fix everything anyway, it doesn't ''matter'' how much he screws around and goofs off, right? When Nino uses similar logic to excuse his plan to exploit Mylene's Mylène's akumatization, Adrien leaps to back him up, much to Marinette's horror.



** Nino cares more about making his movie than the comfort of anyone involved with its production; this escalates to the point that he wants to exploit Mylene's akumatization for his own ends.

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** Nino cares more about making his movie than the comfort of anyone involved with its production; this escalates to the point that he wants to exploit Mylene's Mylène's akumatization for his own ends.



** Not too many people are concerned about the aftermath of Akuma attacks except [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone perhaps the person who was Akumatized themselves]] BECAUSE of how [[WorldHealingWave the Miraculous Cure]] works. Nino and Adrien even consider it a glorified ResetButton where [[KarmaHoudini they don't have to face the consequences of their actions]] during said Akuma attack (especially Adrien who as a superhero [[ComesGreatResponsibility should be more careful]]), and aren't as concerned for the safety of others as they should be, and both want to exploit Mylene's akumatizations for their own purposes (Nino [[SkewedPriorities for his monster movie]] when [[EveryoneHasStandards even Alya's not willing to risk her and everyone else's lives for a short film]], and Adrien in an ill-timed attempt to [[spoiler:unmask Marinette as Ladybug]]). Marinette, however, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is appalled that she (as Ladybug)]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero unintentionally created this mentality]], and considers asking Tikki to limit how much the Cure restores in hopes of forcing people to wise up.

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** Not too many people are concerned about the aftermath of Akuma attacks except [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone perhaps the person who was Akumatized themselves]] BECAUSE of how [[WorldHealingWave the Miraculous Cure]] works. Nino and Adrien even consider it a glorified ResetButton where [[KarmaHoudini they don't have to face the consequences of their actions]] during said Akuma attack (especially Adrien who as a superhero [[ComesGreatResponsibility should be more careful]]), and aren't as concerned for the safety of others as they should be, and both want to exploit Mylene's Mylène's akumatizations for their own purposes (Nino [[SkewedPriorities for his monster movie]] when [[EveryoneHasStandards even Alya's not willing to risk her and everyone else's lives for a short film]], and Adrien in an ill-timed attempt to [[spoiler:unmask Marinette as Ladybug]]). Marinette, however, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is appalled that she (as Ladybug)]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero unintentionally created this mentality]], and considers asking Tikki to limit how much the Cure restores in hopes of forcing people to wise up.



** When Nino writes in a kissing scene between Adrien and Mylene's characters, Alya, Ivan, and Marinette [[WhatTheHellHero naturally have concerns]]. Alya's upset that her script was rewritten without her consent for the sake of cheesy romance, Ivan is borderline furious that Nino never cleared it with either him or his girlfriend, and Marinette just genuinely [[DefiedTrope cannot believe]] [[LoveAtFirstSight that two people who just met suddenly want to kiss each other]].
*** Chloé and Adrien are both shocked to the core when Marinette states that she ''wouldn't'' want to kiss the latter 'in the heat of the moment'. While she acknowledges that his looks are aesthetically pleasing, she doesn't ''know'' him at all; they're barely acquainted, and she mostly knows him as Chloé's ChildhoodFriend who [[ExtremeDoormat refuses to reign her in or stand up for Mylene]].

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** When Nino writes in a kissing scene between Adrien and Mylene's Mylène's characters, Alya, Ivan, and Marinette [[WhatTheHellHero naturally have concerns]]. Alya's upset that her script was rewritten without her consent for the sake of cheesy romance, Ivan is borderline furious that Nino never cleared it with either him or his girlfriend, and Marinette just genuinely [[DefiedTrope cannot believe]] [[LoveAtFirstSight that two people who just met suddenly want to kiss each other]].
*** Chloé and Adrien are both shocked to the core when Marinette states that she ''wouldn't'' want to kiss the latter 'in the heat of the moment'. While she acknowledges that his looks are aesthetically pleasing, she doesn't ''know'' him at all; they're barely acquainted, and she mostly knows him as Chloé's ChildhoodFriend who [[ExtremeDoormat refuses to reign her in or stand up for Mylene]].Mylène]].



** Once Marinette confirms Mylene [[MonsterOfTheWeek has been Akumatized]], she stops Tikki from transforming her because Ivan's right outside and knows she's in the bathroom looking to comfort Mylene, and informs him and the rest of Bustier's class of the situation, [[FromBadToWorse who eventually name her the leader of their escape party]].

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** Once Marinette confirms Mylene Mylène [[MonsterOfTheWeek has been Akumatized]], she stops Tikki from transforming her because Ivan's right outside and knows she's in the bathroom looking to comfort Mylene, Mylène, and informs him and the rest of Bustier's class of the situation, [[FromBadToWorse who eventually name her the leader of their escape party]].



** Nino snaps at Marinette that she wouldn't have had to deal with Chloé's cruelty if she 'just stood up to her'. He also blames ''Mylene'' for being cowed by Chloé's badgering.

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** Nino snaps at Marinette that she wouldn't have had to deal with Chloé's cruelty if she 'just stood up to her'. He also blames ''Mylene'' ''Mylène'' for being cowed by Chloé's badgering.



** Alya and Ivan are ''furious'' with Nino when he rewrites her script in order to insert a kiss scene ''without warning anyone'', expecting Mylene and Adrien to just roll with it because he decided on a whim that 'people like romance'.
** Nino gets another one when he declares that the newly akumatized Mylene could become the monster in his film, justifying his lackadaisical attitude by claiming that Ladybug will just fix everything anyway.

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** Alya and Ivan are ''furious'' with Nino when he rewrites her script in order to insert a kiss scene ''without warning anyone'', expecting Mylene Mylène and Adrien to just roll with it because he decided on a whim that 'people like romance'.
** Nino gets another one when he declares that the newly akumatized Mylene Mylène could become the monster in his film, justifying his lackadaisical attitude by claiming that Ladybug will just fix everything anyway.



* RealityEnsues: When Chat gets mad at Ladybug because she didn't show up the celebration in honor of the two heroes of Paris, Ladybug fires back that she didn't even know it was happening. When Chat tries to say that Chloé was talking about it all week, Ladybug has to point out that she isn't around Chloé and never heard this.
** Nadja's screwup on ''Face to Face'' meant that the interview series was cancelled and she was chewed out by her boss, since she did annoy one of the biggest celebrities in Paris to the point where she walked out on them on live television.


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Chat gets mad at Ladybug because she didn't show up the celebration in honor of the two heroes of Paris, Ladybug fires back that she didn't even know it was happening. When Chat tries to say that Chloé was talking about it all week, Ladybug has to point out that she isn't around Chloé and never heard this.
** Nadja's screwup on ''Face to Face'' meant that the interview series was cancelled and she was chewed out by her boss, since she did annoy one of the biggest celebrities in Paris to the point where she walked out on them on live television.

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