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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: In chapter 2, Lori does this when she tells Lana how Lynn Jr. fought for the remote when she was a toddler.
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* FromBadToWorse: Starting in chapter 1, Lincoln is only throwing up from overeating but it gets worse in chapter 3 when things start literally going south. It gets even worse in chapter 6 when it is revealed Lincoln has Salmonellosis and things will be going south for him a lot for a week or at worst, 10 days.
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* FromBadToWorse: Starting in chapter 1, Lincoln is only throwing up from overeating but it gets worse in chapter 3 when things start literally going south. It gets even worse in chapter 6 when it is revealed Lincoln has Salmonellosis and things will be literally going south for him a lot for a week or at worst, 10 days.
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* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Chapter 6 reveals all the deep-fried food Lincoln ate gave him Salmonellosis, most likely one of his corn dogs or burgers wasn't properly cooked before being served to him.
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* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Chapter 6 reveals all TwoLinesNoWaiting: This story has an A plot about Lynn Jr. doing whatever it takes to get the deep-fried food Jumbo plush and a B plot about Lincoln ate gave him Salmonellosis, most likely one dealing with a nasty case of his corn dogs or burgers wasn't properly cooked before being served to him.Salmonellosis.
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* GrowlingGut: This often happens to Lincoln throughout the story due to being sick.
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* NutritionalNightmare: Everything Lincoln ate at the Royal Woods County Fair in chapter 1.
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* PungeonMaster: Luan makes a pun at every opportunity, even when it is not the right time.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Chapter 2 reveals Lynn Jr.'s older sisters got rid of all her Jumbo merch and never brought him up again after she made the transition to playing sports.
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* RejectingTheConsolationPrize: In chapter 1, Lynn Jr. won a tier 4 prize from playing ring toss, but she does not want it because she just wants the Jumbo plush.
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* SweetsOfTemptation: In chapter 3, Rita tells Lincoln she does not want him eating the funnel cake Lynn Jr. got him, but he gives in and eats it later.
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Misuse of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome. A character getting sick from overeating hardly counts as "surprising."
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Lincoln overeats in chapter 1, he gets sick instead of just magically being fine.
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* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Chapter 6 reveals all the deep-fried food Lincoln ate gave him Salmonellosis, most likely one of his corn dogs or burgers wasn't properly cooked before being served to him.
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* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Chapter 6 reveals all the deep-fried food Lincoln ate gave him Salmonellosis, most likely one of his corn dogs or burgers wasn't properly cooked before being served to him.him.
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* NeverGetsFat: Even with everything Lincoln eats in chapter 1, he never gains any visible weight.
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* RunningGag: Every time Lynn Jr. plays ring toss to try to win the Jumbo plush, she always lands every ring except the last one or two.
* SimpleSolutionWontWork:
** In chapter 3, Rita offers to buy Lynn Jr. a Jumbo plush online, but she refuses to accept it because she wants to win it.
** In chapter 4, Lisa offers to synthesize a cure for Lincoln but her parents forbid it after she tried to cure Luan's hiccups because according to Luna, she still occasionally neighs in her sleep.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: In chapter 6, Lynn Sr. tells his daughters they can just go use the bathroom in the garage they forgot about if Lincoln is using the bathroom upstairs.
* SimpleSolutionWontWork:
** In chapter 3, Rita offers to buy Lynn Jr. a Jumbo plush online, but she refuses to accept it because she wants to win it.
** In chapter 4, Lisa offers to synthesize a cure for Lincoln but her parents forbid it after she tried to cure Luan's hiccups because according to Luna, she still occasionally neighs in her sleep.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: In chapter 6, Lynn Sr. tells his daughters they can just go use the bathroom in the garage they forgot about if Lincoln is using the bathroom upstairs.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Lynn Jr. is easily distracted when it comes to anything Jumbo related
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Lynn Jr. is easily distracted when it comes to anything Jumbo relatedrelated.
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* BigNo:
** This happens in chapter 1 when the ring toss attendant tells Lynn Jr. she only won a tier 4 prize instead of the Jumbo plush she wanted.
** A long version of this happens in chapter 4 when Lynn Jr. tells her sisters she has plans.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: A few chapters in this story end in suspenseful cliffhangers.
* DeepFriedWhatever: Chapter 1 reveals the Royal Woods County Fair has some crazy deep-fried menu items.
* {{Determinator}}: Lynn Jr. will do whatever it takes to win the Jumbo plush at the Royal Woods County Fair.
** This happens in chapter 1 when the ring toss attendant tells Lynn Jr. she only won a tier 4 prize instead of the Jumbo plush she wanted.
** A long version of this happens in chapter 4 when Lynn Jr. tells her sisters she has plans.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: A few chapters in this story end in suspenseful cliffhangers.
* DeepFriedWhatever: Chapter 1 reveals the Royal Woods County Fair has some crazy deep-fried menu items.
* {{Determinator}}: Lynn Jr. will do whatever it takes to win the Jumbo plush at the Royal Woods County Fair.
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* {{Determinator}}: EdutainmentShow: Chapter 2 reveals Jumbo from Jumbo's Jungle Gym taught Lynn Jr. will do whatever it takes to win the Jumbo plush at the Royal Woods County Fair.everything when she was a toddler.
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* GoodLuckCharm: In chapter 1, Leni uses Lily as a good luck charm to win prizes.
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* LieDetector: Lisa uses her lie detector on Lynn Jr. to see if she is lying about being done with Jumbo. Lynn Jr. beats the lie detector.
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''Jumbo Fan'' is a fanfic where after spying a plush of her childhood icon at the county fair, Lynn Jr. becomes obsessed with winning him. But how far will she go and how long until it drives her bananas?
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''Jumbo Fan'' is a fanfic where after spying a plush of her childhood icon at the county fair, Lynn Jr. becomes obsessed with winning him. But how far will she go and how long until it drives her bananas?bananas?
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!!The story provides examples of:
* AnxietyDreams: Lynn Jr.'s dream in chapter 3.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Lynn Jr. is easily distracted when it comes to anything Jumbo related
* BigEater: In chapter 1, Lincoln ate three corn dogs, two chocolate churros, an order of mac-n-cheese bites, an order of bacon-wrapped jalapeño poppers, six pickles, a pretzel, a large order of BBQ nachos, twelve Oreos, an extra large cherry cola slushy, an extra large funnel cake, and a double-stacked donut-cheeseburger, all deep-fried to perfection, and he did not get any bigger.
* DungFu: Chapter 2 reveals Lynn Jr. did this to her sisters when they tried to stop her from watching Jumbo's Jungle Gym when she was a toddler.
* {{Determinator}}: Lynn Jr. will do whatever it takes to win the Jumbo plush at the Royal Woods County Fair.
* FromBadToWorse: Starting in chapter 1, Lincoln is only throwing up from overeating but it gets worse in chapter 3 when things start literally going south. It gets even worse in chapter 6 when it is revealed Lincoln has Salmonellosis and things will be going south for him a lot for a week or at worst, 10 days.
* GoodNewsBadNews: The bad news is Lincoln has Salmonellosis. The good news is he is not contagious, so he can leave the house and go out in public whenever he wants.
* PottyEmergency: In chapter 3, Lincoln barely made it to the toilet after all the deep-fried food he ate just started going south.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Lincoln overeats in chapter 1, he gets sick instead of just magically being fine.
* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Chapter 6 reveals all the deep-fried food Lincoln ate gave him Salmonellosis, most likely one of his corn dogs or burgers wasn't properly cooked before being served to him.
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!!The story provides examples of:
* AnxietyDreams: Lynn Jr.'s dream in chapter 3.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Lynn Jr. is easily distracted when it comes to anything Jumbo related
* BigEater: In chapter 1, Lincoln ate three corn dogs, two chocolate churros, an order of mac-n-cheese bites, an order of bacon-wrapped jalapeño poppers, six pickles, a pretzel, a large order of BBQ nachos, twelve Oreos, an extra large cherry cola slushy, an extra large funnel cake, and a double-stacked donut-cheeseburger, all deep-fried to perfection, and he did not get any bigger.
* DungFu: Chapter 2 reveals Lynn Jr. did this to her sisters when they tried to stop her from watching Jumbo's Jungle Gym when she was a toddler.
* {{Determinator}}: Lynn Jr. will do whatever it takes to win the Jumbo plush at the Royal Woods County Fair.
* FromBadToWorse: Starting in chapter 1, Lincoln is only throwing up from overeating but it gets worse in chapter 3 when things start literally going south. It gets even worse in chapter 6 when it is revealed Lincoln has Salmonellosis and things will be going south for him a lot for a week or at worst, 10 days.
* GoodNewsBadNews: The bad news is Lincoln has Salmonellosis. The good news is he is not contagious, so he can leave the house and go out in public whenever he wants.
* PottyEmergency: In chapter 3, Lincoln barely made it to the toilet after all the deep-fried food he ate just started going south.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Lincoln overeats in chapter 1, he gets sick instead of just magically being fine.
* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Chapter 6 reveals all the deep-fried food Lincoln ate gave him Salmonellosis, most likely one of his corn dogs or burgers wasn't properly cooked before being served to him.
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''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14261368/1/Jumbo-Fan Jumbo Fan]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfic by [[https://m.fanfiction.net/u/15840828/ IronGhost828]].
''Jumbo Fan'' is a fanfic where after spying a plush of her childhood icon at the county fair, Lynn Jr. becomes obsessed with winning him. But how far will she go and how long until it drives her bananas?
''Jumbo Fan'' is a fanfic where after spying a plush of her childhood icon at the county fair, Lynn Jr. becomes obsessed with winning him. But how far will she go and how long until it drives her bananas?
