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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38560977/ Intercession]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter''/''Literature/{{Worm}}'' {{Crossover}} fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/VigoGrimborne/pseuds/VigoGrimborne VigoGrimborne]]. After the events of Worm, Taylor is taken by Contessa to another world, where she is promised, "No powers, no entities, no knowledge that either ever existed. I am going to leave you here, and no parahuman will ever return to this dimension." And, as part of the Path, Taylor is given baby Harry to raise, taken from the Dursleys' doorstep and with all appropriate paperwork forged to make Taylor his mother. Until, years later, she discovers that this world is not quite as mundane as she was led to believe...
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38560977/ Intercession]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter''/''Literature/{{Worm}}'' {{Crossover}} fanfiction fanfiction, posted and {{completed|Fic}} on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/VigoGrimborne/pseuds/VigoGrimborne VigoGrimborne]]. VigoGrimborne]].
After the events of Worm, Taylor is taken by Contessa to another world, where she is promised, "No powers, no entities, no knowledge that either ever existed. I am going to leave you here, and no parahuman will ever return to this dimension." And, as part of the Path, Taylor is given baby Harry to raise, taken from the Dursleys' doorstep and with all appropriate paperwork forged to make Taylor his mother. Until, years later, she discovers that this world is not quite as mundane as she was led to believe...
After the events of Worm, Taylor is taken by Contessa to another world, where she is promised, "No powers, no entities, no knowledge that either ever existed. I am going to leave you here, and no parahuman will ever return to this dimension." And, as part of the Path, Taylor is given baby Harry to raise, taken from the Dursleys' doorstep and with all appropriate paperwork forged to make Taylor his mother. Until, years later, she discovers that this world is not quite as mundane as she was led to believe...
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* BatmanGrabsAGun: Dumbledore [[spoiler:sees Leviathan in Taylor's memories, and reluctantly states that if he had been there, he might have cast the Killing Curse for the first time. Though it likely wouldn't have helped.]]
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* UnequalPairing: Defied by Sirius, who recognises that he gets along well with Taylor but refuses on principle to try dating her, because [[spoiler:he's paying her medical bills and legally has custody of Harry, giving him too much power over her]].
--> There was a difference between roguish and rapey, and he prided himself on knowing exactly where that line was so he didn't cross it.
--> There was a difference between roguish and rapey, and he prided himself on knowing exactly where that line was so he didn't cross it.
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* OnlySaneMan: Harry finds himself in the position of being the rock his friends come to for advice, and decides that if he's going to fill that role, he should get used to it. Unless Luna can do it.
--> "I'm learning to cast a ghost octopus," Luna informed the group. "It can't open jars, though."\\
Yes, it was probably going to have to be him.
--> "I'm learning to cast a ghost octopus," Luna informed the group. "It can't open jars, though."\\
Yes, it was probably going to have to be him.
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* ApologyGift: Taylor doesn't think Sirius can come with anything suitable, but he insists he has a lot of experience with making mistakes that he needs to apologise for, and she agrees to let him try.
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* TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler:Sirius adds a sleeping potion to Taylor's tea so he can question her about her passenger. He hates doing it, but Dumbledore's warnings about summoning entities that don't belong in the world have him thoroughly spooked.]]
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* ApologeticAttacker: Sirius apologises to [[spoiler:Taylor, just before she loses consciousness from the potion he [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink slipped into her tea]]]].
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--> '''Sirius:''' Dear Albus 'three middle names I can never remember' Dumbledore. I'd love to apply for a job I have absolutely no interest in taking, in a position that we all know is cursed, especially when you specifically do not say what's happened to Moody that made him unable to continue teaching, unless he's just smarter than your average Defense Professor and getting out while he can. I, as we both know, am entirely suited to a position of authority over mischievous children, and am fully capable of stuffing their impressionable heads with useful and age-appropriate magical knowledge. I have even spent the last few months tutoring a sadistic, disturbingly violent and creative woman in how to best exploit magic to her own ends, so I have some experience! Rest assured that the meager salary Hogwarts can offer to compensate me is unnecessary, as I will in the event of taking the job require my payment in Snape's tears and mandatory nude lessons for the seventh-year students–\\
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--> '''Sirius:''' Dear Albus 'three middle names I can never remember' Dumbledore. I'd love to apply for a job I have absolutely no interest in taking, in a position that we all know is cursed, especially when you specifically do not ''not'' say what's happened to Moody that made him unable to continue teaching, unless he's just smarter than your average Defense Professor and getting out while he can. I, as we both know, am entirely suited to a position of authority over mischievous children, and am fully capable of stuffing their impressionable heads with useful and age-appropriate magical knowledge. I have even spent the last few months tutoring a sadistic, disturbingly violent and creative woman in how to best exploit magic to her own ends, so I have some experience! Rest assured that the meager salary Hogwarts can offer to compensate me is unnecessary, as I will in the event of taking the job require my payment in Snape's tears and mandatory nude lessons for the seventh-year students–\\
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* PowerAtAPrice: The more affordable magical prosthetic arms come with limitations on safe amounts of usage, per day or per month, or even require sacrifices. Top-end models aren't limited in that way, but are very expensive to purchase.
--> '''Pavlova:''' If you want a clean, ethical, and ''safe'' arm, an arm that connects to your will but does not have any chance of side effects… Four hundred galleons.
--> '''Pavlova:''' If you want a clean, ethical, and ''safe'' arm, an arm that connects to your will but does not have any chance of side effects… Four hundred galleons.
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* RedHerring: Moody [[spoiler:is seen drinking from a flask that he claims to be water but doesn't smell like it, leading readers to suspect that, like canon, he's Barty Crouch Jr disguised with Polyjuice. It's actually just alcohol.]]
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* DrowningMySorrows: Sirius' excuse for being a heavy drinker mid-Hogwarts is a combination of his disappointed family, having to watch James chase after Lily when she wasn't interested, and being stuck in Transfiguration classes. Taylor isn't impressed.
--> If ''that'' was the minimum agony level needed to become an alcoholic, Taylor herself would have died from alcohol poisoning long before getting her powers, along with half the population of Earth Bet. "Sure. Such agony."
--> If ''that'' was the minimum agony level needed to become an alcoholic, Taylor herself would have died from alcohol poisoning long before getting her powers, along with half the population of Earth Bet. "Sure. Such agony."
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* BloodMagic: Sirius knows a bit about the magical uses of blood, though all he tells Taylor is that tossing forcibly taken blood into a cauldron will have ExplosiveResults, unless the recipe actually wants blood, in which case it's extremely dark magic.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: To cover up the pain of her curse-based transformation to and from a moose (which wouldn't be painful if she were a true Animagus), Taylor tells the registration staff that "Going from having a rack to not having one is really uncomfortable." It takes her several minutes to realise why the clerk blushed.
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* HumanSacrifice: The curse that Taylor uses to transform into an animal can only be undone by the original caster, or by a nasty process that involves sacrificing virgins. Sirius mentions that the curse fell out of favour because it had such a high body-count for something that was supposed to be non-lethal.
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* BoobyTrap: Sirius warns Taylor not to touch the books in his family library, since she might count as a Muggle for the purposes of the protective enchantments, and the results would likely be messy. He's intrigued when she suggests using bugs, though.
--> '''Sirius:''' I've always wanted to see what some of those traps do.
--> '''Sirius:''' I've always wanted to see what some of those traps do.
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* AdaptationalUpbringingChange: Taylor, transported to the ''Harry Potter'' world, takes baby Harry in and raises him as her son instead of his uncaring aunt and uncle. Harry grows up with a loving mother, becomes more self-assured and questions authority like Taylor, makes different friends, and is less interested in his birth parents compared to canon.
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: When Sirius asks Taylor [[spoiler:under Veritaserum]] about her feelings on Dumbledore, she replies that she'd like to strangle him with his beard.
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** Bugs are very useful for making over-the-top threats that are actually credible.
---> '''Taylor:''' I will stop shoving flies in your eyes and nose if you lie still. If you attack me again, I will set them to ''eating'' your eyes, and even if you kill me they won't stop until they're done. Are we clear?
** When Sirius asks Taylor [[spoiler:under Veritaserum]] about her feelings on Dumbledore, she replies that she'd like to strangle him with his beard.
** Bugs are very useful for making over-the-top threats that are actually credible.
---> '''Taylor:''' I will stop shoving flies in your eyes and nose if you lie still. If you attack me again, I will set them to ''eating'' your eyes, and even if you kill me they won't stop until they're done. Are we clear?
** When Sirius asks Taylor [[spoiler:under Veritaserum]] about her feelings on Dumbledore, she replies that she'd like to strangle him with his beard.
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* GiantSpider: Taylor's bug control power tries hard to take control of the Acromantula colony in the Forbidden Forest, but eventually gives up in disgust. They're just too big, too magical, too intelligent, or all three.
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--> "You've got an enthusiastic one," the woman behind her commented. ''Her'' son was still clinging to her side, silently refusing to let go. "What's your secret?"\\
Being so overly careful out of worry that she had turned out to be a halfway decent mother through overcorrection, maybe. Taylor smiled as she watched her son claim a half-dozen crayons and paper. "I don't think there is one."
Being so overly careful out of worry that she had turned out to be a halfway decent mother through overcorrection, maybe. Taylor smiled as she watched her son claim a half-dozen crayons and paper. "I don't think there is one."
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* SymbioticPossession: In Scion's absence, the Queen Administrator shard has latched onto Taylor and wants to help and protect her. It still has [[BlueAndOrangeMorality alien values]], but it can understand rage and cooperation and protecting what is hers, which is enough for them to work together.
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* PercussiveTherapy: Taylor avoids punching the walls after [[spoiler:realising her memories had been erased]], because they're Harry's, but many of her bugs kill each other to vent her frustrations.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Taylor immediately recognises the signs of Harry having a parahuman power, and starts blaming herself for overlooking something going so wrong that he could have a trigger event. She's baffled when questioning him doesn't reveal anything.[[note]]It's actually bouts of accidental magic, of course, which works by totally different rules.[[/note]]
