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** Chloe's journey and some of the things she did aren't kept a secret at all; in fact, it's being celebrate by the very beginning of the first proper chapter.
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* LegendaryInTheSequel: Chloe and the Red Lotus Quarto are praised and celebrated as heroes for slaying the Apex.
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* FramingDevice: The prologue is written as Chloe sending a message to Mallow, recapping everything that has happened since the end of Blossoming Trail.
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* FramingDevice: FramingDevice:
** The prologue is written as Chloe sending a message to Mallow, recapping everything that has happened since the end of BlossomingTrail.Trail.
** Chapter 4 is framed as a flashback as to Goh's first day on the Infinity Train.
** The prologue is written as Chloe sending a message to Mallow, recapping everything that has happened since the end of Blossoming
** Chapter 4 is framed as a flashback as to Goh's first day on the Infinity Train.
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* DrivingQuestion: One that doesn't involve the focus character but rather a previous protagonist: [[spoiler:What did Gladion do in his trip that it had to be ''erased'' from the Train?]]
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** Chloe still is having time letting go of her friends: she briefly sees Yamper as Atticus when he gets hit by Team Rocket's cannon and giving him a red handkerchief to wear is similar to the red dome on Atticus's crown.
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* BackForTheDead: Satou and Shio are among the first Passengers from ''Blossoming Trail'' to make a return [[spoiler: only to be killed in their first scene by Ogami.]]
* DeathOfAChild: [[spoiler: Shio is one of the first casualties of the stories, alongside Satou, by the hand of Ogami.]]
* DeathOfAChild: [[spoiler: Shio is one of the first casualties of the stories, alongside Satou, by the hand of Ogami.]]
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Where do we begin?
** Chloe's journey and some of the things she did aren't kept a secret at all; in fact, it's being celebrate by the very beginning of the first proper chapter.
** The Apex is blatantly stated to be gone.
** Not only does the Red Lotus Quarto keep being one, but one of its members is Hazel.
** Goh's circumstances, and the damage Parker and Zeno did to him, is made clear.
** Parker's atrocities are pointed out when he and Chloe meet, as well as the fact that, in a way, she's responsible for them.
** The climax of ''Blossoming Trail'' is not kept a secret, as not only is Mrs. Turner mentioned, but Vermillion International School has been closed down and Vermillion City itself has become a shell of its former self.
** Chloe's journey and some of the things she did aren't kept a secret at all; in fact, it's being celebrate by the very beginning of the first proper chapter.
** The Apex is blatantly stated to be gone.
** Not only does the Red Lotus Quarto keep being one, but one of its members is Hazel.
** Goh's circumstances, and the damage Parker and Zeno did to him, is made clear.
** Parker's atrocities are pointed out when he and Chloe meet, as well as the fact that, in a way, she's responsible for them.
** The climax of ''Blossoming Trail'' is not kept a secret, as not only is Mrs. Turner mentioned, but Vermillion International School has been closed down and Vermillion City itself has become a shell of its former self.
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** When Chloe gets a video call from Goh, she can't see Atticus on his lap, enforcing how she can never see him, Lexi or Hazel again.
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** When Chloe gets a video call from Goh, she can't see Atticus on his lap, enforcing how she can never see him, Lexi or Hazel again. The fact that she can't even see ''anything on the Train'' besides Goh likewise represents how she needs to stop thinking about the Train, and focus on getting help for her childhood friend.
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* WhamEpisode: The Canals of Fondue Car is set up to be this as it reveals that Gladion was hiding a ''lot'' more to his adventures when Amelia suddenly remembers something about the [[spoiler:White Gestalt]], Goh is found with something involving Satou and Shio and Chloe gets an Eevee and a Boltund as her partners.
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* WhamEpisode: The Canals of Fondue Car is set up to be this as it reveals that Gladion was hiding a ''lot'' more to his adventures when Amelia suddenly remembers something about the [[spoiler:White Gestalt]], Goh is found with something involving Satou and Shio [[spoiler:when it was revealed they were '''murdered''' on his first day]] and Chloe gets an Eevee and a Boltund as her partners.
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** ''Blossoming Trail'' begins with Chloe shy and withdrawn without a dream of her own while Goh is happily leaving her behind and with Ash. By the time this story starts, ''Goh'' is completely broken and has no dream on her own while Chloe's the one finding Pokémon with Ash.
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** ''Blossoming Trail'' begins with Chloe shy and withdrawn without a dream of her own while Goh is happily leaving her behind and with Ash. By the time this story starts, ''Goh'' is completely broken and has no dream on her his own while Chloe's the one finding Pokémon with Ash.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The prologue reveals that while communication does work on the Train, denizens are unable to talk to the other worlds as proven when Lexi's attempt turned out badly.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The prologue reveals that while communication does work on the Train, denizens are unable to talk to the other worlds as proven when Lexi's attempt turned out badly. When Chloe talks to Goh via the screen, she's unable to clearly see Atticus sitting on Goh's lap.
* ExpyCoexistence: Of a sort. Gladion briefly mistakes Lexi for Specter whom he met in ''Knight of the Orange Lily''.
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** The story ''Blossoming Trail'' begins with Chloe shy and withdrawn without a dream of her own while Goh is happily leaving her behind and with Ash. This time, Goh By the time this story starts, ''Goh'' is completely broken and has no dream on her own while Chloe's the one finding Pokémon with Ash.
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** The story begins with Chloe shy and withdrawn without a dream of her own while Goh is happily leaving her behind and with Ash. This time, Goh is completely broken and has no dream on her own while Chloe's the one finding Pokémon with Ash.
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* HypocrisyNod: Delia Ketchum admitted to Talia Cerise that she is afraid Ash and Chloe will forgive her for her role in Goh's departure, despite refusing to give Chloe any kind of forgiveness. She acknowledged the hypocrisy in her being forgiven. At the same time, she refuses to do the same. Delia even refuses to use the parent's card to justify her hypocrisy by pointing out she did that before, and she afraid that her son Ash will start second-guessing everything she says and does.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Now with its own page.]]
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: [[InnocentlyInsensitive/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Has its own page.]]
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Chloe tries to reassure Goh's parents that he'll be fine under the care of the Red Lotus Quarto. Of course, she fails to realize they're more concerned about the fact he got Trainnapped in the first place, to the point Kurune has to tell the Cerises to leave so they can rest.
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* [[Foreshadowing/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Foreshadowing]]
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* [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Unwitting Instigator Of Doom]]
* [[WhatTheHellHero/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail What The Hell Hero]]
* [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Unwitting Instigator Of Doom]]
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The formal sequel to Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail. ''Unmarked spoilers for Blossoming Trail ahead!''
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The formal sequel to Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail.''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail'' by Green Phantom Queen, crossoverpairinglover and [=ShadyMissionary=]. ''Unmarked spoilers for Blossoming Trail ahead!''
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But while the Apex may have been disbanded, that doesn't make the Train safe. Not even -- or maybe especially not -- for the ChildhoodFriend of the heroine who helped take down Grace and Simon's cult of murderous children. And safety might not be what Goh's looking for, anyway...
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But while the Apex may have been disbanded, that doesn't make the Train safe. Not even -- or maybe especially not -- for the ChildhoodFriend of the heroine and her friends who helped take down Grace and Simon's cult of murderous children. And safety might not be what Goh's looking for, anyway...
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Chloe has finally come home...just in time for Goh to hit his limit and board the train himself. While the former heroine of the Infinity Train tries to put her new life back together, Goh is having an adventure of his own...but even though the Apex is no longer a concern, that doesn't make the train safe.
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Chloe has finally come home... just in time for Goh to hit his limit and board heed the train himself. While the former heroine call of the Infinity Train tries himself. While he departs on his own 'therapy adventure' riding the rails, she's left trying to put navigate the world she's returned to. For much has changed in her new life back together, Goh absence, and for better or worse, Chloe Cerise is having an adventure not merely the overshadowed and overlooked daughter of his own...but even though Vermillion City's Pokémon Professor anymore.
But while the Apexis no longer a concern, may have been disbanded, that doesn't make the train safe.
Train safe. Not even -- or maybe especially not -- for the ChildhoodFriend of the heroine who helped take down Grace and Simon's cult of murderous children. And safety might not be what Goh's looking for, anyway...
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* RuleOfSymbolism: Despite its cracked screen, Goh's phone functions well enough that Chloe can use it to contact Amelia through the cell she inadvertently left behind on the Train.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The author reveals that Chloe will be getting her Eevee much earlier than in canon[[note]]''Blossoming Trail'' ended sometime after Journeys Episode 34, Chloe's Eevee debuted in Episode 49[[/note]]
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The author reveals that Chloe will be getting her Eevee much earlier than in canon[[note]]''Blossoming Trail'' ended sometime after Journeys Episode 34, Chloe's Eevee debuted in Episode 49[[/note]]
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* HourglassPlot: Natch. Goh is on the train, and Chloe is the one scared for him. As if to highlight this, they'll be communicating through each other's phone, with Chloe's cell on the train and Goh's broken screen on Chloe's side.
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* HourglassPlot: Natch. Goh is on the train, and Chloe is the one scared for him. As if to highlight this, they'll Amelia and Chloe will be communicating through each other's phone, with Chloe's cell on the train and Goh's broken screen on Chloe's side.
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Chloe has finally come home...just in time for Goh to hit his limit and board the train himself. While the former hero of the Infinity Train tries to put her new life back together, Goh is having an adventure of his own...but even though the Apex is no longer a concern, that doesn't make the train safe.
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Chloe has finally come home...just in time for Goh to hit his limit and board the train himself. While the former hero heroine of the Infinity Train tries to put her new life back together, Goh is having an adventure of his own...but even though the Apex is no longer a concern, that doesn't make the train safe.
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* FramingDevice: The first chapter is written as Chloe sending a message to Mallow, recapping everything that has happened since the end of Blossoming Trail.
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* FramingDevice: The first chapter prologue is written as Chloe sending a message to Mallow, recapping everything that has happened since the end of Blossoming Trail.
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!!''General trope examples(shared with Blossoming Trail):''
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Currently shares a [[Recap/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Recap page]] with its prequel.
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* HourglassPlot: Natch. Goh is on the train, and Chloe is the one scared for him. As if to highlight this, they'll be communicating through each other's phone, with Chloe's cell on the train and Goh's broken screen on Chloe's side.
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* FramingDevice: The first chapter is written as Chloe sending a message to Mallow, recapping everything that has happened since the end of Blossoming Trail.
* GetOut: Kurune tells this to the Cerises, but primarily Chloe, once the fact their son has been taken by the Train is starting to become too much for them.
* HourglassPlot: Natch. Goh is on the train, and Chloe is the one scared for him. As if to highlight this, they'll be communicating through each other's phone, with Chloe's cell on the train and Goh's broken screen on Chloe'sside.side.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Chloe tries to reassure Goh's parents that he'll be fine under the care of the Red Lotus Quarto. Of course, she fails to realize they're more concerned about the fact he got Trainnapped in the first place, to the point Kurune has to tell the Cerises to leave so they can rest.
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* GetOut: Kurune tells this to the Cerises, but primarily Chloe, once the fact their son has been taken by the Train is starting to become too much for them.
* HourglassPlot: Natch. Goh is on the train, and Chloe is the one scared for him. As if to highlight this, they'll be communicating through each other's phone, with Chloe's cell on the train and Goh's broken screen on Chloe's
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Chloe tries to reassure Goh's parents that he'll be fine under the care of the Red Lotus Quarto. Of course, she fails to realize they're more concerned about the fact he got Trainnapped in the first place, to the point Kurune has to tell the Cerises to leave so they can rest.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: In his anger at Goh's disappearance, Ikuo gives one to Chloe.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: In his anger at Goh's disappearance, Ikuo gives one to Chloe.Chloe.
* HourglassPlot: Natch. Goh is on the train, and Chloe is the one scared for him. As if to highlight this, they'll be communicating through each other's phone, with Chloe's cell on the train and Goh's broken screen on Chloe's side.
* HourglassPlot: Natch. Goh is on the train, and Chloe is the one scared for him. As if to highlight this, they'll be communicating through each other's phone, with Chloe's cell on the train and Goh's broken screen on Chloe's side.
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Can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31208180/chapters/77133005 here]]
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Can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31208180/chapters/77133005 here]]here]].
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!!''General trope examples(shared with Blossoming Trail):''
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* [[AdultFear/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Adult Fear]]
* [[AllForNothing/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail All For Nothing]]
* [[BittersweetEnding/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Bittersweet Ending]]
* [[CentralTheme/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Central Theme]]
* [[ContinuityNod/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Continuity Nod]]
* [[DeconstructedCharacterArchetype/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Deconstructed Character Archetype]]
* [[DeconstructionFic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Deconstruction Fic]]
* [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Does This Remind You Of Anything]]
* [[DoubleStandard/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Double Standard]]
* [[Foil/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Foil]]
* [[ForWantOfANail/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail For Want Of A Nail]]
* [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Freudian Excuse Is No Excuse]]
* [[HiddenDepths/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Hidden Depths]]
* [[PoorCommunicationKills/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Poor Communication Kills]]
* [[RealityEnsues/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail Reality Ensues]]
* [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail The Reason You Suck Speech]]
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: In his anger at Goh's disappearance, Ikuo gives one to Chloe.
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The formal sequel to Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail. ''Unmarked spoilers for Blossoming Trail ahead!''
Chloe has finally come home...just in time for Goh to hit his limit and board the train himself. While the former hero of the Infinity Train tries to put her new life back together, Goh is having an adventure of his own...but even though the Apex is no longer a concern, that doesn't make the train safe.
!!Tropes in this story include:
Chloe has finally come home...just in time for Goh to hit his limit and board the train himself. While the former hero of the Infinity Train tries to put her new life back together, Goh is having an adventure of his own...but even though the Apex is no longer a concern, that doesn't make the train safe.
!!Tropes in this story include:
