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* DeadpanSnarker: After rediscovering his youth [[spoiler:via being magically de-aged to his prime]], Ozpin does his best to embrace modern generational slang instead of worrying about [[spoiler:the long-term implications of his sudden youth]]. Glynda, for her part, doesn't appreciate his nonchalance.

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* DeadpanSnarker: After [[spoiler:After rediscovering his youth [[spoiler:via via being magically de-aged to his prime]], prime, Ozpin does his best to embrace modern generational slang instead of worrying about [[spoiler:the the long-term implications of his sudden youth]].youth. Glynda, for her part, doesn't appreciate his nonchalance.]]

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* AdaptationalBadass: While Jaune's Semblance does nothing for his combat ability (and thus for most of the day he's still useless in combat), [[spoiler:once his Semblance gains the ability to affect the real world, he becomes godlike every night; it starts with being able to heal an ordinary sparring wound Nora gets in class, and eventually escalates to returning Ozpin to his physical and magical prime]].



* AmbiguouslyBi: Thanks to a rather unique dream scenario, Jaune ends up having to kiss [[spoiler:Adam Taurus]] and can't help but note that he's an even better kisser than Yang.

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* AmbiguouslyBi: Thanks to a rather unique dream scenario, Jaune ends up having to kiss [[spoiler:Adam Taurus]] and can't help but note that he's an even better kisser than Yang. Later on, he can't help but agree that [[spoiler:Oswald, or rather the de-aged Ozpin]] is hot when Yang points it out.



* ClingyJealousGirl: Completely averted with Yang. She's not just doesn't get jealous over possibility of Jaune cheating on her, but she is the one who teases him about this.

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* ClingyJealousGirl: Completely averted with Yang. She's not just She doesn't just not get jealous over the possibility of Jaune cheating on her, but she is the one who teases him about this.the possibility.


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* DeadpanSnarker: After rediscovering his youth [[spoiler:via being magically de-aged to his prime]], Ozpin does his best to embrace modern generational slang instead of worrying about [[spoiler:the long-term implications of his sudden youth]]. Glynda, for her part, doesn't appreciate his nonchalance.
--> '''Glynda''': Please stop. You sound awful.\\
'''Ozpin''': Big yikes if true.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Completely averted with Yang. She's not just doesn't get jealous over possibility of Jaune cheating on her, but she is the one who teases him about this.
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* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler:Due to [[RealityWarper nature of his power]], Jaune accidently reverts Ozpin back into his first body when he was an 20 year old.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Conventional wisdom states that students won't respect a Combat Instructor unless they can prove better at combat than said students. [[spoiler:New professor Oswald -- that is, Ozpin after having been transformed into a long-past previous incarnation of himself thanks to Jaune -- takes this to its logical conclusion in his first day as Combat Instructor, where the first thing he does it invite any student who wants to to all attack him at once. He then proceeds to prove he's not just the WorldsBestWarrior anymore, he's also the WorldsStrongestMan again. And by the time Jaune and the other first years get their time with him, he's been doing it all day to the entire student body (plus endurance running) and isn't even winded]].
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** Chapter 44: Ozpin, having been alerted and made lucid by Jaune, asks him a favor: [[spoiler:pushing his dream in the direction of him realizing his mistake, repairing his relationship with Salem before it's too late, and getting to live happily ever after like he'd always imagined. Ozpin wakes up satisfied, only to find in the morning that he no longer sees the aging Professor Ozpin in the mirror, but instead the young face of the same early, long-dead reincarnation he had just been dreaming about]].
** Chapter 46: [[spoiler:Ozpin, or Oswald as he's now called as a cover story, lays down the pecking order as Combat Instructor and stretches his newly-young legs by effortlessly thrashing huge groups of students all day with easy displays of incredible power. A video of this gets back to Salem, who immediately starts panicking because not only is Ozma somehow back in a form that he lived and died in thousands of years ago, but he somehow has [[WorldsStrongestMan all the magic power he had at that time but had since given up]], demanding the Grimm Queen's full attention]].
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* BewareTheQuietOnes: Velvet may seems like shy and harmless girl, but when Coco's ex cheated on her, Velvet broke her arm during sparring and made it look like an accident.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Adam points out how Huntsmen mostly spend their time working as mercenaries for the rich, instead of fighting Grimm. Jaune himself admits that Adam has a point.
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* AdaptationalFriendship: Whereas Jaune and Amber the Fall Maiden in canon didn't know each-other at all on account of Amber's coma, Jaune's [[AdaptationalSuperpowerChange dream-walking Semblance]] in this fic leads him to repeatedly enter Amber's coma dreams and make them easier for her. Amber in the dreams becomes extremely close to Jaune as a result, [[spoiler:and Jaune in turn is devastated when Amber finally passes. Getting justice for Amber's death is Jaune's main motivation for helping Ozpin's group find Amber's attackers]].
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** As per usual for Creator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] works, Salem is treated more sympathetically in her StartOfDarkness than her canon self. It's pointed out that she was never explicitly forbade from going to the God of Darkness to get her wish granted after the God of Light turned her down, the event which led Light to curse her with immortality. Ozma's canon reasons for falling out with Salem -- she'd gained an appetite for total warfare and was plotting a FinalSolution of all magic-less humans -- are retconned, and her and Ozma's falling out was a slow affair which took centuries to boil over and which Ozma is portrayed as sharing fault for. Finally, unlike her canon self, whose possible remorse for OffingTheOffspring when they were caught in the crossfire of her lashing out at Ozma is ''at best'' only hinted at; in this fic, Salem explicitly broke down the moment that she realized she and Ozma had killed their own children, and Ozpin believes that the trauma completely broke her and caused her present day self's evil.
** In "The Lost Fable", the monarchs who allied with Salem's rebellion against the Brother Gods did so for ultimately self-centered reasons like attaining immortality for themselves and their immediate loved ones. In this version, Ozma states that was only ''one'' of the reasons -- in truth, many of the wishes that the God of Light had granted worshippers based on his BlueAndOrangeMorality, such as a child wishing to be queen and political rivals being wished dead or defeated, had de-stabilized and jeopardized entire kingdoms, and Salem's monarch allies wanted to put a stop to the God of Light's reckless wish-granting to secure their own kingdoms' existential safety.

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** As per usual for Creator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] works, Salem is treated more sympathetically in her StartOfDarkness than her canon self. It's pointed out that she was never explicitly forbade from going to the God of Darkness to get her wish granted after the God of Light turned her down, the event which led Light to curse her with immortality. Ozma's canon reasons for falling out with Salem -- she'd gained an appetite for total warfare and was plotting a FinalSolution of all magic-less humans -- are retconned, and her and Ozma's falling out was a slow affair which took centuries to boil over and which Ozma is portrayed as sharing fault for. Finally, unlike her canon self, whose possible remorse for OffingTheOffspring when they were caught in the crossfire of her lashing out at Ozma is ''at best'' only hinted at; in this fic, Salem explicitly broke down the moment that she realized she and Ozma had killed their own children, noticed what she'd done, and Ozpin believes that the trauma completely broke her and caused her present day self's evil.
** In "The Lost Fable", the monarchs who allied with Salem's rebellion against the Brother Gods did so for ultimately self-centered reasons like attaining immortality for themselves and their immediate loved ones. In this version, Ozma states that was only ''one'' of the reasons -- in truth, many of the wishes that the God of Light had granted worshippers based on his unpredictable BlueAndOrangeMorality, such as a child wishing to be queen and political rivals being wished dead or defeated, had de-stabilized and jeopardized entire kingdoms, and Salem's monarch allies wanted to put a stop to the God of Light's reckless wish-granting to secure ensure their own kingdoms' existential safety.kingdoms weren't constantly one bad wish away from being wiped out.

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*** As per Coeur's other fics, the Brother Gods only succeeded in wiping out a majority of the first human race rather than every single one before they left, and the survivors are the current human race's ancestors; and rather than the second human race already having a moderate civilization before he and Salem set themselves up as rulers, Ozma and Salem were entirely responsible for dragging humanity back from the stone age.
*** Whereas canon indicates that the Relics only came to Remnant at the same time the God of Light resurrected Ozma, in this fic, the Brothers sent the Relics to Salem sometime ''before'' that, and the main reason why the God of Light resurrected Ozma was because none of the surviving humans on Remnant wanted to use the Relics to bring the Brothers back at all.
*** Whereas "The Lost Fable" states that Salem instantly recognized Ozma in his first reincarnation when he sought her out, Ozpin mentions in this version that he had to prove to her it was really him. Unlike the canon version where Ozma and Salem's reunion, rule and falling out all occurred within Ozma's first reincarnation's lifetime, and they fell out because Salem had gained an insatiable appetite for destruction and was plotting mass genocide against the magic-less humans; in this version, Ozma and Salem were together for several centuries, and their falling out was a gradual affair which started with Salem growing frustrated at the static of their royal life, and Ozma turning down her pleas that they take one of his lives free of their royal duties.
*** Lastly, whereas Salem showed no remorse in "The Lost Fable" for her and Ozma's daughters dying in their crossfire before she spitefully ended Ozma's life too; Ozpin recalls in this fic that she completely broke down as soon as she realized that they'd killed their own children, and that it was the last straw which drove her to her present day evil on top of everything else she'd endured up to that point.

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*** As per Coeur's other fics, the Brother Gods only succeeded in wiping out a majority of the first human race rather than every single one before they left, and the survivors are the current human race's ancestors; and rather than the second human race already having a moderate civilization before he Ozma and Salem set themselves up as rulers, Ozma and Salem were entirely responsible for dragging humanity back from the stone age.
*** Whereas canon indicates that the Relics only came to Remnant at the same time the God of Light resurrected Ozma, in this fic, the Brothers sent the Relics to Salem Remnant sometime ''before'' that, and the main reason why the God of Light resurrected Ozma to gather the Relics was because none of the surviving humans on Remnant wanted to use the Relics to bring the Brothers back at all.
*** Whereas "The Lost Fable" states that Salem instantly recognized Ozma in his first reincarnation when he sought her out, Ozpin mentions in this version that he had to prove to her it was really him. him.
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Unlike the canon version where Ozma and Salem's reunion, rule and falling out all occurred within Ozma's first reincarnation's lifetime, and they fell out because Salem had gained an insatiable appetite for destruction and was plotting mass genocide against the magic-less humans; in this version, Ozma and Salem were together for several centuries, and their falling out was a gradual affair which started with Salem growing frustrated at the static of their royal life, life after several lifetimes, and Ozma turning down her pleas that they take spend one of his next lives free of their royal duties.
*** Lastly, whereas Salem showed no remorse in "The Lost Fable" for her and Ozma's daughters dying in their crossfire before she spitefully ended Ozma's life too; Ozpin recalls in this fic that she completely broke down as soon as she realized that they'd killed their own children, and that it was the last straw which drove her to her present day evil on top of everything else she'd endured up to that point.



** Salem in her and Ozma's backstory. Whereas the canon version of Salem showed no immediate remorse when she killed her and Ozma's daughters in the crossfire of their falling out, and any remorse she had afterwards is at best only hinted at; Ozpin states in this fic that Salem broke down as soon as she realized she'd killed them and that this was the final straw which drove her into madness and made her the genocidal monster that she is in the present.

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** Salem in her and Ozma's backstory. Whereas the canon version of Salem showed no immediate remorse when she killed her and Ozma's daughters in the crossfire of their falling out, and any remorse she had afterwards is at best only hinted at; Ozpin states in this fic that Salem broke down as soon as she realized she'd killed them and that this was the final straw which drove her into madness and made her the genocidal monster that she is in the present.



** As per usual for Creator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] works, Salem is treated more sympathetically in her StartOfDarkness than her canon self. It's pointed out that she was never explicitly forbade from going to the God of Darkness to get her wish granted after the God of Light turned her down, the event which led Light to curse her with immortality. Ozma's canon reasons for falling out with Salem -- she'd gained an appetite for total warfare and was plotting a FinalSolution of all magic-less humans -- are retconned, and her and Ozma's falling out was a slow affair which took centuries to boil over and which Ozma is portrayed as sharing fault for. Finally, unlike her canon self, whose possible remorse for OffingTheOffspring when they were caught in the crossfire of her lashing out at Ozma is ''at best'' only hinted at; in this fic, Salem explicitly broke down the moment that she realized she and Ozma had killed their own children, and Ozpin believes it completely broke her and caused her present day self's evil.
** In canon, the monarchs who allied with Salem's rebellion against the Brother Gods did so for ultimately self-centered reasons like attaining immortality for themselves and their immediate loved ones. In this version, Ozma states that was only ''one'' of the reasons -- in truth, many of their kingdoms had been de-stabilized and were under existential threat from many of the wishes which the God of Light was granting his visitors, and they wanted to put a stop to the God of Light's reckless wish-granting and the chaos it sowed.

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** As per usual for Creator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] works, Salem is treated more sympathetically in her StartOfDarkness than her canon self. It's pointed out that she was never explicitly forbade from going to the God of Darkness to get her wish granted after the God of Light turned her down, the event which led Light to curse her with immortality. Ozma's canon reasons for falling out with Salem -- she'd gained an appetite for total warfare and was plotting a FinalSolution of all magic-less humans -- are retconned, and her and Ozma's falling out was a slow affair which took centuries to boil over and which Ozma is portrayed as sharing fault for. Finally, unlike her canon self, whose possible remorse for OffingTheOffspring when they were caught in the crossfire of her lashing out at Ozma is ''at best'' only hinted at; in this fic, Salem explicitly broke down the moment that she realized she and Ozma had killed their own children, and Ozpin believes it that the trauma completely broke her and caused her present day self's evil.
** In canon, "The Lost Fable", the monarchs who allied with Salem's rebellion against the Brother Gods did so for ultimately self-centered reasons like attaining immortality for themselves and their immediate loved ones. In this version, Ozma states that was only ''one'' of the reasons -- in truth, many of their kingdoms the wishes that the God of Light had been granted worshippers based on his BlueAndOrangeMorality, such as a child wishing to be queen and political rivals being wished dead or defeated, had de-stabilized and were under existential threat from many of the wishes which the God of Light was granting his visitors, jeopardized entire kingdoms, and they Salem's monarch allies wanted to put a stop to the God of Light's reckless wish-granting and the chaos it sowed.to secure their own kingdoms' existential safety.



* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Ozpin states in Chapter 44 that during the time when the Brother Gods dwelled on Remnant, the criteria by which the God of Light decided whether to grant or deny a request that his visitors made of him was completely incomprehensible to humans -- some times he granted wishes to end wars, famines or diseases, and other times he granted wishes to kill rivals, take away free will, gain riches and force love onto an unwilling person. Ozpin comments that the chances of him granting a request felt like a complete coin toss to those who approached him.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Ozpin states in Chapter 44 that during the time when the Brother Gods dwelled on Remnant, the criteria by which the God of Light decided whether to grant or deny a request that his visitors made of him was completely incomprehensible to humans -- some times he granted wishes to end wars, famines or diseases, and other times he granted wishes to kill rivals, take away free will, gain riches and force love onto an unwilling person. Ozpin comments that the chances of him granting to human beings, it was basically a request felt like a complete coin toss to those who approached him.whether the God of Light would grant or deny a request.

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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Creator/CoeurAlAran usually incorporates updates to ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' canon's worldbuilding such as character backstories as they come into his later fics' mythos (it's even exemplified in this fic by Cinder and Neo's backstories in this fic being mostly canon-adherent) -- but in the case of Roman Torchwick, Coeur in this fic made an exception, as he keeps his pre-''Literature/RWBYRomanHoliday'' backstory for Roman (as a [[FallenHero fallen ex-huntsman from Beacon]] instead of a Mistralian ascended pickpocketer who was still on the streets when he was 18) intact.

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Creator/CoeurAlAran usually incorporates updates to ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' canon's worldbuilding such as character backstories as they come into his later fics' mythos (it's even exemplified in this fic by Cinder and Neo's backstories in this fic being mostly canon-adherent) -- but in the case of Roman Torchwick, Coeur in this fic made an exception, as he keeps his pre-''Literature/RWBYRomanHoliday'' backstory for Roman (as a [[FallenHero fallen ex-huntsman from Beacon]] instead of a Mistralian ascended pickpocketer who was still on the streets when he was 18) intact.intact.
** Ozma, Salem and Remnant's backstory has several alterations in Chapters 43-44 compared to the canon version.
*** As per Coeur's other fics, the Brother Gods only succeeded in wiping out a majority of the first human race rather than every single one before they left, and the survivors are the current human race's ancestors; and rather than the second human race already having a moderate civilization before he and Salem set themselves up as rulers, Ozma and Salem were entirely responsible for dragging humanity back from the stone age.
*** Whereas canon indicates that the Relics only came to Remnant at the same time the God of Light resurrected Ozma, in this fic, the Brothers sent the Relics to Salem sometime ''before'' that, and the main reason why the God of Light resurrected Ozma was because none of the surviving humans on Remnant wanted to use the Relics to bring the Brothers back at all.
*** Whereas "The Lost Fable" states that Salem instantly recognized Ozma in his first reincarnation when he sought her out, Ozpin mentions in this version that he had to prove to her it was really him. Unlike the canon version where Ozma and Salem's reunion, rule and falling out all occurred within Ozma's first reincarnation's lifetime, and they fell out because Salem had gained an insatiable appetite for destruction and was plotting mass genocide against the magic-less humans; in this version, Ozma and Salem were together for several centuries, and their falling out was a gradual affair which started with Salem growing frustrated at the static of their royal life, and Ozma turning down her pleas that they take one of his lives free of their royal duties.
*** Lastly, whereas Salem showed no remorse in "The Lost Fable" for her and Ozma's daughters dying in their crossfire before she spitefully ended Ozma's life too; Ozpin recalls in this fic that she completely broke down as soon as she realized that they'd killed their own children, and that it was the last straw which drove her to her present day evil on top of everything else she'd endured up to that point.


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* AdaptationalJerkass: A [[DownplayedTrope slight]] case with the God of Darkness. "The Lost Fable" made his reasons for granting Salem's request to resurrect Ozma out to be because he was hungry for a human worshipper in Salem (something he lacked). In this fic, Ozpin states that the God of Darkness's reasons for granting Salem's request were that he simply wanted to one-up the God of Light by doing something that he thought was beyond his brother's power.


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** Salem in her and Ozma's backstory. Whereas the canon version of Salem showed no immediate remorse when she killed her and Ozma's daughters in the crossfire of their falling out, and any remorse she had afterwards is at best only hinted at; Ozpin states in this fic that Salem broke down as soon as she realized she'd killed them and that this was the final straw which drove her into madness and made her the genocidal monster that she is in the present.


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* AdaptationalSympathy:
** As per usual for Creator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] works, Salem is treated more sympathetically in her StartOfDarkness than her canon self. It's pointed out that she was never explicitly forbade from going to the God of Darkness to get her wish granted after the God of Light turned her down, the event which led Light to curse her with immortality. Ozma's canon reasons for falling out with Salem -- she'd gained an appetite for total warfare and was plotting a FinalSolution of all magic-less humans -- are retconned, and her and Ozma's falling out was a slow affair which took centuries to boil over and which Ozma is portrayed as sharing fault for. Finally, unlike her canon self, whose possible remorse for OffingTheOffspring when they were caught in the crossfire of her lashing out at Ozma is ''at best'' only hinted at; in this fic, Salem explicitly broke down the moment that she realized she and Ozma had killed their own children, and Ozpin believes it completely broke her and caused her present day self's evil.
** In canon, the monarchs who allied with Salem's rebellion against the Brother Gods did so for ultimately self-centered reasons like attaining immortality for themselves and their immediate loved ones. In this version, Ozma states that was only ''one'' of the reasons -- in truth, many of their kingdoms had been de-stabilized and were under existential threat from many of the wishes which the God of Light was granting his visitors, and they wanted to put a stop to the God of Light's reckless wish-granting and the chaos it sowed.


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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Ozpin states in Chapter 44 that during the time when the Brother Gods dwelled on Remnant, the criteria by which the God of Light decided whether to grant or deny a request that his visitors made of him was completely incomprehensible to humans -- some times he granted wishes to end wars, famines or diseases, and other times he granted wishes to kill rivals, take away free will, gain riches and force love onto an unwilling person. Ozpin comments that the chances of him granting a request felt like a complete coin toss to those who approached him.
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* TakeThat: One of Blake's books, featuring "[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga sparkly vampire erotica]]", gets destroyed by Atlas during their second attempt to arrest Jaune. Yang considers it to be not that great of a loss and Ruby chimes in that even ''she'' thought the movie sucked.

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One of Blake's books, featuring "[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga sparkly vampire erotica]]", gets destroyed by Atlas during their second attempt to arrest Jaune. Yang considers it to be not that great of a loss and Ruby chimes in that even ''she'' thought the movie sucked.sucked.
** When Jaune learns about [[spoiler:Gods, relics and whole secret war between Ozpin and Salem ]],he says that it sounds like [[spoiler:"a bad TV show plot".]]
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* RealityWarper: When he's in a dream, Jaune has the powers of a god, being effectively invulnerable and capable of completely changing the landscape and story of a dream by expending his Aura. [[spoiler:Once his Semblance evolves, he ends up able to change the real world as well; among other things, he burns half of Cinder's face off, repairs Ironwood's missing arm, and de-ages Ozpin back down to his 20s; on the other hand, injuries inflicted on him carry to real life as well]].
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Jaune previously landed in one of Ozpin's dreams in an earlier chapter. The dream ended with Ozpin remembering when his and Salem's children died.


** Chapter 43: After ending up in just about everyone's dream at one point or another, Jaune finally lands in one of Ozpin's dreams. [[spoiler:It's of one of his past lives, showing a time when his relationship with Salem was beginning to degrade because of their different desires in life. Given how many secrets Jaune can accidentally stumble on, Ozpin decides to tell Jaune the truth of his past, beginning with the fact that he's thousands of years old]].

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** Chapter 43: After ending up in just about everyone's dream at one point or another, Jaune finally once again lands in one of Ozpin's dreams. [[spoiler:It's of one of his past lives, showing a time when his relationship with Salem was beginning to degrade because of their different desires in life. Given how many secrets Jaune can accidentally stumble on, Ozpin decides to tell Jaune the truth of his past, beginning with the fact that he's thousands of years old]].
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** The first rule that Jaune makes when he realizes what is Semblance is is that he'll never use it to make sexual advances on anyone.

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* RedRightHand: Jaune invokes this idea when [[spoiler:he's chasing down Cinder in her dream. Because she's wearing a hood, he doesn't know her identity even though he knows she killed Amber, so he uses his power in the dream to burn half of her face to a crisp. When Cinder wakes up, the injury carries over to real life, and since he'll know what he did to her, she has little choice but to try to kill Jaune to silence him before he can identify her]].

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* RedRightHand: Jaune invokes this idea when [[spoiler:he's chasing down Cinder in her dream. Because she's wearing a hood, he doesn't know her identity even though he knows she killed Amber, so he uses his power in the dream to burn half of her face to a crisp. When Cinder wakes up, the injury carries over to real life, and since he'll know recognize what he did to her, her once her injuries are seen, she has little choice but to try to kill Jaune to silence him before he can identify her]].


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* BrutalHonesty: This is how Jaune decides to handle [[spoiler:revealing the full extent of his Semblance to his team (and clarifying/clearing the air with Pyrrha who only got the basics). He leads with the bluntest description possible, spells out that yes, he has been in their dreams and seen what they dream about... and immediately heads off the issue of him seeing their secrets by countering that he saw basically nothing in any of their heads that was a secret to anybody because everybody can see them a mile away ''without'' needing to invade dreams. Ren and Nora ''do'' have a traumatic past, they ''do'' like each other but are too insecure to go for it, Pyrrha ''is'' resentful of her fame and she ''does'' like Jaune and the only reason he couldn't see it is because he was hung up on Weiss -- none of this is news to anyone, and they don't get to be distrustful of him just because he knows a little more detail than everyone else. In turn, they get the opportunity to be forward with all the frustrations they've had with his and each other's behavior that they've been too tactful to bring up before. Brute-forcing through the awkwardness and uncertainty sure to come from the reveal gets the team through the drama intact a lot faster than wishy-washy avoidance would]].

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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Instead of HealingHands, Jaune's Semblance is [[DreamWalker dreamwalking]] and [[DreamWeaver dream weaving]], although he can only activate it while asleep and thus far he can't control whose dream he enters.

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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Instead of HealingHands, Jaune's Semblance is [[DreamWalker dreamwalking]] and [[DreamWeaver dream weaving]], although he can only activate it while asleep and thus far he can't control whose dream he enters. [[spoiler:His semblance soon evolves to gain this quality as well, where wounds and injuries he heals (or causes) in a dream are echoed in the waking world, to extent of even regrowing lost limbs.]]



* INeverToldYouMyName: After Pyrrha has a nightmare about the time she accidentally ended a friend’s career on the tournament scene, [[spoiler:Jaune accidentally says too much when he’s trying to comfort her; he says Ashley’s name, which he only learned in the dream because Pyrrha spent the whole conversation dancing around it. The chapter ends with [[{{Cliffhanger}} Pyrrha asking him how he knew Ashley's name]]]].

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* INeverToldYouMyName: After Pyrrha has a nightmare about the time she accidentally ended a friend’s career on the tournament scene, [[spoiler:Jaune accidentally says too much when he’s trying to comfort her; he says Ashley’s name, which he only learned in the dream because Pyrrha spent the whole conversation dancing around it. The chapter ends with [[{{Cliffhanger}} Pyrrha asking This ultimately forces him how he knew Ashley's name]]]].to reveal his semblance to her, and soon after, Nora and Ren]].



* TemptingFate: After [[spoiler:Jaune ends up in Ironwood's dream]], he tells the rest of his team that he's probably going to get arrested at breakfast since he's undoubtedly pissed off the Atlas military once again. Pyrrha insists that he's probably worrying over nothing, only for Team JNPR to leave the room and immediately be held at gunpoint.
-->'''Nora''': "''I'm sure he's overreacting.'' Oh yeah, it sure looks like it, Pyrrha."



* YourMindMakesItReal: Jaune's semblance quickly evolves to have this effect. [[spoiler:While in a dream of Amber's killer, Jaune conjures a weapon of pure Aura and hurls it towards the killer before they wake up. Cinder jolts awake with a real injury corresponding to the one in the dream, and she realizes that Jaune needs to be taken care of. Later on, when a vision of Cinder slashes Jaune's neck during one of Neo's nightmares, he wakes up with a real injury as well. On the flipside, healing Nora in one of her nightmares heals a real injury she got earlier in the week from sparring]].

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* YourMindMakesItReal: Jaune's semblance quickly evolves to have this effect. [[spoiler:While in a dream of Amber's killer, Jaune conjures a weapon of pure Aura and hurls it towards the killer before they wake up. Cinder jolts awake with a real injury corresponding to the one in the dream, and she realizes that Jaune needs to be taken care of. Later on, when a vision of Cinder slashes Jaune's neck during one of Neo's nightmares, he wakes up with a real injury as well. On the flipside, healing Nora in one of her nightmares heals a real injury she got earlier in the week from sparring]].sparring and later manages to even regrow Ironwood's arm]].
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* AnArmAndALeg: In a dream, Jaune unwillingly gets to see in explicit detail [[spoiler:how Ironwood lost at least one of his biological limbs. Way back when he was just a soldier, he was involved in a skirmish where the enemy was employing elemental Dust ammunition and was struck in the shoulder by an ice bullet. It would be one thing if it was just a chunk of ice embedded in his flesh, but ice Dust is a reactive substance that generates much larger quantities of ice through constantly emitting temperatures near absolute zero. Having that thing inside him for more than a few seconds instantly flash-froze and destroyed all surrounding tissue and was continuing to sap the heat from other parts of his body at not instant but still deadly speed after the bullet was removed. There was no choice but to roughly and without anesthetic amputate Ironwood's arm from the shoulder down to stop the super-frostbitten and dead limb from continuing to freeze him or poison him with necrosis]].
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* TakeThat: One of Blake's books, featuring "[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga sparkly vampire erotica]]", gets destroyed by Atlas during their second attempt to arrest Jaune. Yang considers it to be not that great of a loss and Ruby chimes in that even ''she'' thought the movie sucked.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: Jaune entering Ironwood's dream [[spoiler:and accidentally repairing his missing arm]] prompts Ironwood to have armed soldiers arrest Jaune at his dorm, provoking a fight that ends with errant shots going into other students dorms (and which would have killed Sky Lark if he had still been sleeping). [[spoiler:Ozpin is so furious that he kicks Ironwood and all of his forces out of Beacon on the spot, and to the end Ironwood is threatening to take Jaune to court over it]].



** Ozpin is willing to put up with a lot of Ironwood's military-first mentality, but when it eventually escalates to the point that [[spoiler:his students are actually put in danger, he kicks Ironwood and Atlas off the campus and promises far worse troubles if any of his students were hurt]].



* JerkassHasAPoint: Ironwood is prone to overreacting in potentially violent manners, and his attempt to arrest Jaune for [[spoiler:healing his arm]], an act that ends up putting innocent students in danger from errant gunfire, is proof of that. Nevertheless, Jaune does acknowledge that, taking the fact that it was all a giant uncontrollable accident out of the equation, what Jaune did to Ironwood could essentially be described as nonconsensual experimentation and he does apologize for that.



* MythologyGag: When Ozpin tells Jaune that it's best that they keep the [[spoiler:potential healing properties of his Semblance]] a secret because others may try to take advantage of it, Pyrrha says that if it got out he could end up being as famous as her. This was all a key premise of Coeur's previous fic ''Fanfic/{{Raise}}''.



* PetTheDog: Though Jaune refuses to tell Winter what he saw in any of Weiss's nightmares so as to not violate her privacy any more than he already had, he does tell her that she was never in any of them, which gives Winter some relief.

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Though Jaune refuses to tell Winter what he saw in any of Weiss's nightmares so as to not violate her privacy any more than he already had, he does tell her that she was never in any of them, which gives Winter some relief.relief.
** When Sky Lark is almost killed by an errant shot from Ironwood's second attempt to arrest Jaune, Ozpin gives all of Team CRDL the day off and lets them go to Vale if it would help.



* PsychicSurgery: Chapter 28 reveals that Jaune's Semblance can heal others. When he heals the wounded hand of Nora's dream self, the real Nora wakes up to discover that a wound she got during training (which, by Nora's estimation, should've taken her a week to recover from) had completely healed overnight.

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* PsychicSurgery: Chapter 28 reveals that Jaune's Semblance can heal others. When he heals the wounded hand of Nora's dream self, the real Nora wakes up to discover that a wound she got during training (which, by Nora's estimation, should've taken her a week to recover from) had completely healed overnight. [[spoiler:It gets to the point that Jaune regrows Ironwood's missing arm without having any idea it was missing to begin with]].


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* SkewedPriorities: After Ironwood's second attempt to arrest Jaune goes pear-shaped thanks to his teammates' intervention, Ozpin [[spoiler:furiously exiles James and his forces from Beacon until further notice, saying that it's time he go into Vale to search for the missing active terrorist instead of pick a fight with one of the lowest performing first years on campus]].


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* SoProudOfYou: After [[spoiler:Ozpin effectively exiles Ironwood and Atlas from Beacon]], Ozpin tells Team JNPR that he's proud of the way they handled themselves during the incident, specifically citing that they non-lethally fought through the hostile forces to reach him for help.
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* DesignatedLoveInterest: Yang can come across as this. Despite her and Jaune starting to date early on in the story, there are rarely any prolonged interactions between the two after that first date at the school dance; anything beyond Yang's occasional teasing is alluded to have happened offscreen. Even Jaune himself admits that they didn't do much since dances and he's not sure if he actually in love with her.
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* DesignatedLoveInterest: Yang can come across as this. Despite her and Jaune starting to date early on in the story, there are rarely any prolonged interactions between the two after that first date at the school dance; anything beyond Yang's occasional teasing is alluded to have happened offscreen. Even Jaune himself admits that he's not sure if he actually in love with her.

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* DesignatedLoveInterest: Yang can come across as this. Despite her and Jaune starting to date early on in the story, there are rarely any prolonged interactions between the two after that first date at the school dance; anything beyond Yang's occasional teasing is alluded to have happened offscreen. Even Jaune himself admits that they didn't do much since dances and he's not sure if he actually in love with her.
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* DesignatedLoveInterest: Yang can come across as this. Despite her and Jaune starting to date early on in the story, there are rarely any prolonged interactions between the two after that first date at the school dance; anything beyond Yang's occasional teasing is alluded to have happened offscreen. Even Jaune himself admits that he's not sure if he actually in love with her.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler:While watching Professor Port's dream in Chapter 37, Jaune wishes he could understand how his stories are supposed to relate to killing Grimm. He even notes that Ren once spent hours analyzing Port's stories in search of some kind of hidden meaning behind them. By the end of the dream, he learns that rather than secretly explaining how to kill Grimm, the stories are traumatic anecdotes about his failed missions. He's forbidden by the Council to properly prepare students for the horrifying reality of being a huntsman, because telling people that they're more likely to perform a MercyKill on a dying child than heroically save a village would hurt recruitment rates. So he tells grandiose versions of these stories with happy endings in hopes that, eventually, a student will be able to figure out the {{Hard Truth Aesop}}s behind his boring stories ''before'' graduating. The following day, Jaune realizes that the story of Port valiantly protecting a "puppy" from a Grimm horde is a cleaned-up retelling of another story; in reality, the "puppy" was a child and the last survivor of a village, but despite Port's best efforts to protect him, the child got scared, ran away, and was killed by the Grimm. When class ends and Jaune sees Professor Port sitting on his chair staring at the ceiling, he realizes that Ren was right that their teacher's stories had hidden meanings - and he wishes he never knew about them.]]

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler:While watching Professor Port's dream in Chapter 37, Jaune wishes he could understand how his stories are supposed to relate to killing Grimm. He even notes that Ren once spent hours analyzing Port's stories in search of some kind of hidden meaning behind them. By the end of the dream, he learns that rather than secretly explaining how to kill Grimm, the stories are traumatic anecdotes about his failed missions. He's forbidden by the Council to properly prepare students for the horrifying reality of being a huntsman, because telling people that they're more likely to perform a MercyKill on a dying child than heroically save a village would hurt recruitment rates. So he tells grandiose versions of these stories with happy endings in hopes that, eventually, a student will be able to figure out the {{Hard Truth Aesop}}s behind his boring stories ''before'' graduating. The following day, Jaune realizes that the is finally able to decode another story of about Port valiantly protecting a "puppy" from a Grimm horde is a cleaned-up retelling of another story; horde; in reality, the "puppy" was a child and the last survivor of a village, but despite Port's best efforts to protect him, the child got scared, ran away, and was killed by the Grimm. When class ends and Jaune sees Professor Port sitting on his chair staring at the ceiling, he realizes that Ren was right that their teacher's stories had hidden meanings - and he wishes he never knew about them.]]



* CannotSpitItOut: Deconstructed in regards to Pyrrha’s inability to confess her feelings for Jaune. Jaune suspects that Pyrrha might have a crush on him, but given what just happened with Weiss, he doesn't want to presume anything and potentially ruin their friendship if he’s mistaken. So he just starts heavily hinting to her that he’s interested in going out to the Beacon Dance with her instead, but Pyrrha's timidity causes her not to act on said hints. [[PoorCommunicationKills This convinces him he misread the situation and he should ask out someone else]], to Pyrrha’s consternation. Ren does confirm that Pyrrha has a crush on him when asked, but since he's already started a relationship with Yang by that point, he reasons it's not fair to him, Yang, or their teams to openly acknowledge Pyrrha's feelings until she finally does.

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* CannotSpitItOut: Deconstructed in regards to Pyrrha’s inability to confess her feelings for Jaune. Jaune suspects that Pyrrha might have a crush on him, but given what just happened with Weiss, he doesn't want to presume anything and potentially ruin their friendship if he’s mistaken. So he just starts heavily hinting to her that he’s interested in going out to the Beacon Dance with her instead, but Pyrrha's timidity causes her not to act on said hints. [[PoorCommunicationKills This convinces him he misread the situation and he should ask out someone else]], to Pyrrha’s consternation. Ren does confirm that Pyrrha has a crush on him when asked, but since he's already started a relationship with Yang by that point, he reasons it's not fair to him, Yang, or their teams to openly acknowledge Pyrrha's feelings until she finally does. [[spoiler:The fact that he knew already finally comes out after Jaune is forced to reveal his Semblance to her, which drives a wedge between them]].


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** The first rule that Jaune makes when he realizes what is Semblance is is that he'll never use it to make sexual advances on anyone.


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** [[spoiler:Professor Port's dream reveals that he's still traumatized from a mission he was in charge of that led to the deaths of two of his students]].


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* RedRightHand: Jaune invokes this idea when [[spoiler:he's chasing down Cinder in her dream. Because she's wearing a hood, he doesn't know her identity even though he knows she killed Amber, so he uses his power in the dream to burn half of her face to a crisp. When Cinder wakes up, the injury carries over to real life, and since he'll know what he did to her, she has little choice but to try to kill Jaune to silence him before he can identify her]].
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Creator/CoeurAlAran usually incorporates updates to ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' canon's worldbuilding such as character backstories as they come into his later fics' mythos (it's even exemplified in this fic by Cinder and Neo's backstories in this fic being mostly canon-adherent) -- but in the case of Roman Torchwick, Coeur in this fic made an exception, as he keeps his pre-''Literature/RWBYRomanHoliday'' backstory for Roman (as a [[FallenHero fallen ex-huntsman from Beacon]] instead of a Mistralian ascended pickpocketer who was still on the streets when he was 18) intact.

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* AdaptationalContextChange: One of Qrow's nightmares implies that he was present at the fall of Kuroyuri but arrived too late to actually save anyone.

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** In canon, it's implied that Pyrrha's loneliness came about because her strength and fame isolated her from everyone else from the get-go. Here, the story is slightly different. She actually had a best friend named Ashley who was by her side in their first tournaments, but at some point before she arrived in Beacon, Pyrrha accidentally [[CareerEndingInjury ended Ashley's career]] by slicing her leg while her Aura was down. To avoid damaging Pyrrha's reputation, her agent made Ashley sign a settlement that included a clause that she never contact Pyrrha again in any way, which Pyrrha only discovered long after it was too late to change it.



* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler:While watching Professor Port's dream in Chapter 37, Jaune wishes he could understand how his stories are supposed to relate to killing Grimm. He even notes that Ren once spent hours analyzing Port's stories in search of some kind of hidden meaning behind them. By the end of the dream, he learns that rather than secretly explaining how to kill Grimm, the stories are traumatic anecdotes about his failed missions. He's forbidden by the Council to properly prepare students for the horrifying reality of being a huntsman, because telling people that they're more likely to perform a MercyKill on a dying child than heroically save a village would hurt recruitment rates. So he tells grandiose versions of these stories with happy endings in hopes that, eventually, a student will be able to figure out the {{Hard Truth Aesop}}s behind his boring stories ''before'' graduating. The following day, Jaune realizes that the story of Port valiantly protecting a "puppy" from a Grimm horde is a cleaned-up retelling of the nightmare he saw. In reality, Port and a team of Beacon students were called to a village destroyed by the Grimm, wherein the only survivor was a child with both of their legs missing. When one of the students walks into Port putting the child out of their misery, her shock and horror ends up attracting a swarm of Grimm. The student is killed, and one of her teammates runs into the woods in a panic, [[KilledOffscreen unarmed and followed by several Grimm.]] When class ends and Jaune sees Professor Port sitting on his chair staring at the ceiling, he realizes that Ren was right that their teacher's stories had hidden meanings - and he wishes he never knew about them.]]

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* BaitAndSwitch: Chapter 38 opens with Pyrrha in a tournament, having severely injured and potentially killed her opponent. After the body is described as "bent and broken", calling Penny's first canon death to mind, it's revealed that it's actually Ruby, and then Jaune realizes that it's all a nightmare anyway.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler:While watching Professor Port's dream in Chapter 37, Jaune wishes he could understand how his stories are supposed to relate to killing Grimm. He even notes that Ren once spent hours analyzing Port's stories in search of some kind of hidden meaning behind them. By the end of the dream, he learns that rather than secretly explaining how to kill Grimm, the stories are traumatic anecdotes about his failed missions. He's forbidden by the Council to properly prepare students for the horrifying reality of being a huntsman, because telling people that they're more likely to perform a MercyKill on a dying child than heroically save a village would hurt recruitment rates. So he tells grandiose versions of these stories with happy endings in hopes that, eventually, a student will be able to figure out the {{Hard Truth Aesop}}s behind his boring stories ''before'' graduating. The following day, Jaune realizes that the story of Port valiantly protecting a "puppy" from a Grimm horde is a cleaned-up retelling of the nightmare he saw. In another story; in reality, Port and a team of Beacon students were called to a village destroyed by the Grimm, wherein the only survivor "puppy" was a child with both of their legs missing. When one of and the students walks into Port putting last survivor of a village, but despite Port's best efforts to protect him, the child out of their misery, her shock got scared, ran away, and horror ends up attracting a swarm of was killed by the Grimm. The student is killed, and one of her teammates runs into the woods in a panic, [[KilledOffscreen unarmed and followed by several Grimm.]] When class ends and Jaune sees Professor Port sitting on his chair staring at the ceiling, he realizes that Ren was right that their teacher's stories had hidden meanings - and he wishes he never knew about them.]]



* CareerEndingInjury: Pyrrha reveals that she once had a friend named Ashley who was by her side as she was climbing the tournament scene, but a fight between them ended that when Pyrrha accidentally sliced Ashley's knee. Though the accuracy of the nightmare is [[UnreliableNarrator questionable]], it has Ashley say that while doctors think she'll eventually walk like normal after physical therapy, they agree she'll never compete again.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ironwood [[spoiler:arresting Jaune just for entering Penny's dream when he clearly learned no classified information in the process]] pisses Oobleck off so much that he threatens to ensure Ironwood is either arrested or loses his job. Glynda notes that normally she'd be betting on Ironwood, but Oobleck is personally invested in this one, and he tends to find a sneaky way to win once he's invested. [[spoiler:That night, he reveals in his dream that he called in powerful friends, presumably the [[Fanfic/InTheKingdomsService VSS]], to make sure the Vale Council doesn't go along with any extradition if Ironwood even follows through]].

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ironwood [[spoiler:arresting Jaune just for entering Penny's dream when he clearly learned no classified information in the process]] pisses Oobleck off so much that he threatens to ensure Ironwood is either arrested or loses his job. Glynda notes that normally she'd be betting on Ironwood, but Oobleck is personally invested in this one, and he tends to find a sneaky way to win once he's invested. [[spoiler:That night, he reveals in his dream that he called in powerful friends, presumably the [[Fanfic/InTheKingdomsService VSS]], to make sure the Vale Council doesn't go along with any extradition if Ironwood even follows bothers to follow through]].



** Chapter 35: [[spoiler:After waking up from Cardin's nightmare, Jaune wakes up to find Neopolitan - who, as far as Jaune knows, is on the run with Amber's murderer - perched atop him and holding his mouth shut, making Jaune unable to cry for help]].
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** Chapter 36 (which Coeur himself admits to being somewhat of a filler chapter) is another example. After witnessing Cardin's nightmare and [[spoiler:waking to Neo sitting on his bed]], nothing too crazy happens to Jaune, and he gets to hang out with his friends. Yang, Weiss, Blake and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Pyrrha]] do decide to pay Junior a visit that results in the four of them getting detention (and some AmusingInjuries in Pyrrha's case) but the whole thing is largely PlayedForLaughs.

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** Chapter 36 (which Coeur himself admits to being somewhat of a filler chapter) is another example. After witnessing Cardin's nightmare and [[spoiler:waking up to Neo sitting on his bed]], nothing too crazy happens ends up happening to Jaune, and he gets to hang out with his friends.Jaune. Yang, Weiss, Blake and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Pyrrha]] do decide to pay Junior a visit that results in the four of them getting detention (and some AmusingInjuries in Pyrrha's case) but the whole thing is largely PlayedForLaughs.
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** Chapter 36 (which Coeur himself admits to being somewhat of a filler chapter) is another example. After witnessing Cardin's nightmare and [[spoiler:waking to Neo sitting on his bed]], nothing too crazy happens to Jaune, and he gets to hang out with his friends. Yang, Weiss, Blake and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Pyrrha]] do decide to pay Junior a visit that results in the four of them getting detention (and some AmusingInjuries in Pyrrha's case) but the whole thing is largely PlayedforLaughs.

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** Chapter 36 (which Coeur himself admits to being somewhat of a filler chapter) is another example. After witnessing Cardin's nightmare and [[spoiler:waking to Neo sitting on his bed]], nothing too crazy happens to Jaune, and he gets to hang out with his friends. Yang, Weiss, Blake and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Pyrrha]] do decide to pay Junior a visit that results in the four of them getting detention (and some AmusingInjuries in Pyrrha's case) but the whole thing is largely PlayedforLaughs.PlayedForLaughs.

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