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* HilariousInHindsight: ''Implacable Phase'' had Implacable!Taylor complain that, unlike Fanfic/JustAPhase!Taylor, she couldn't just call the Youth Guard on the Protectorate.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: In "In the Wind: Squaring Accounts", Flechette happily tells Pisces that Legend wants to take her to New York, not realizing that Taylor is mourning her father's death and that she's completely burnt out, nevermind that Flechette did not choose the best way to tell her the news.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: In "In the Wind: Squaring Accounts", Flechette happily tells Pisces that Legend wants to take her to New York, not realizing that Taylor is mourning her father's death and that she's completely burnt out, nevermind never mind that Flechette did not choose the best way to tell her the news.
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** Helena Troy also has at least one moment with each Ward she interviews in chapter 8, except Gallant- when Aegis mentions he's the one doing Wards assignments, when Clockblocker mentions Aegis works overtime regularly, when Kid Win mentions he's not seeing his Tinker Mentor (Armsmaster) regularly, when Shadow Stalker [[spoiler: gets herself arrested mid-interview]], and when Vista mentions off-hand that Piggot passes her fines onto the Wards by docking their pay for infractions.
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** Aegis, Clockblocker, Gallant, Kid Win, and Vista after [[spoiler: Wards ENE is disbanded by the Youth Guard]].
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** Aegis, Clockblocker, Gallant, Kid Win, and especially Vista after [[spoiler: Wards ENE is disbanded by the Youth Guard]].
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** The national head of the Youth Guard (and Helena Troy's boss) is named [[Franchise/XMen Charles Zavier]].
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* "The Eagle Has Landed": Crossover with future work ''Eagle's Wings'' (itself a crossover with ''TabletopGame/{{Pathfinder}}''). An immortal Taylor Hebert with the powers of a Mythic Hierophant shows up in ''Implacable'''s Brockton Bay to help people - among them her counterpart.
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* "The Eagle Has Landed": Crossover with future work ''Eagle's Wings'' ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/eagles-wings.1085169/ Eagle's Wings]]'' (itself a crossover with ''TabletopGame/{{Pathfinder}}''). An immortal Taylor Hebert with the powers of a Mythic Hierophant shows up in ''Implacable'''s Brockton Bay to help people - among them her counterpart.
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The omake's title was misspelled, so I corrected the entry to mirror the omake's title, and added "sic" to it and one other misspelled omake
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** "Brocton Bay late night show": The fight against Leviathan reveals some surprising things about the Endbringers.
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** "Brocton Bay late night show": show" (sic): The fight against Leviathan reveals some surprising things about the Endbringers.
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** "Hostile Work Environment": Amy testifies to what she did for Pisces.
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** "Hostile Work Environment": Enviroment" (sic): Amy testifies to what she did for Pisces.
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** "Hostile Work Enviroment": Environment": Amy testifies to what she did for Pisces.
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** ''Fanfic/IncenseAndPowderedDiamond'' would end up [[RecursiveFanfiction becoming it's own fic, derived from this Omake]].
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* ExtremelyEasyExam: To legally hinder the PRT from making her participate in the Wards program, Taylor manages to fail the exam required for Wards to be certified for patrols. The exam is open-book and considered by everyone to be a mere formality -- Vista passed without difficulty on her first try at age eleven -- but technically it's still a requirement, so Taylor exploits it.
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* AcceptableTargets: Nazis, particularly in "Tolkien Was Half Right".
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** She uses the fact that her shields activate automatically if she feels in danger to avoid having to go to Winslow, since she can't feel safe there by any means even with her primary bullies gone.
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** She uses the fact that her shields activate automatically if she feels in danger to avoid having to go to Winslow, since she can't feel safe there by any means even with her primary bullies gone.gone, so attending would automatically reveal her identity.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: The exam that allows Wards to become certified for patrols and detainment is open book. Taylor deliberately flunks the exam. She also likes to "get lost", claiming she doesn't know the PRT building.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: The exam that allows Wards to become certified for patrols and detainment is open book. Taylor deliberately flunks the exam.exam so she can't be required to participate. She also likes to "get lost", claiming she doesn't know the PRT building.
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** Glory Girl when she realizes Taylor cannot discuss her Trigger Event due to being barred from talking about ongoing PRT investigations.
** Mrs. Woods and Aegis when they - independently of each other - realize that Pisces was forced onto the same Wards team as the girl who caused her Trigger Event.
** Mrs. Woods and Aegis when they - independently of each other - realize that Pisces was forced onto the same Wards team as the girl who caused her Trigger Event.
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** Glory Girl when she realizes Taylor cannot discuss her Trigger Event due to being barred from talking about ongoing PRT investigations.
investigations. What that means in practice is that since the PRT is supposedly investigating the crimes committed against Pisces, she is not able to properly take action to protect herself from her alleged attacker, such as, for example, ''not being placed on the same team''. And Glory Girl's mother is a lawyer, so she has some idea of how messed up that is.
** Mrs. Woods and Aegis when they- -- independently of each other - -- realize that Pisces was forced onto the same Wards team as the girl who caused her Trigger Event.
** Mrs. Woods and Aegis when they
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* BotheringByTheBook: Taylor explicitly uses Malicious Compliance.
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* BotheringByTheBook: Taylor explicitly uses Malicious Compliance.Compliance to retaliate against her forced recruitment.
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* MinorCrimeRevealsMajorPlot: Piggot's attempts to bury Shadow Stalker's role in Pisces's trigger event so she can keep both of them in the Wards leads to it being revealed that [[spoiler: the Brockton Bay Wards team is being so badly mismanaged that the Youth Guard calls an all-hands-on-deck situation and ultimately revokes the charter because of it]].
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* MinorCrimeRevealsMajorPlot: Piggot's attempts to bury Shadow Stalker's role in Pisces's trigger event so she can keep both of them in the Wards leads to it being revealed that [[spoiler: the Brockton Bay Wards team is being so badly mismanaged that the Youth Guard calls an all-hands-on-deck situation and ultimately revokes the charter because of it]].it. Piggot herself ends up under investigation as well]]. This apparently leads to increased oversight as [[spoiler:other Wards departments are shut down for their own scandals and the entire program is likely to be removed from Protectorate control]].
