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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10375537/1/Ice-Fury Ice Fury]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4728222/Piero217 Piero217]] is an AU crossover bringing together ''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' and ''Franchise/{{Frozen}}'', starting during the second season of ''WesternAnimation/DragonsRidersOfBerk'' and shortly after the events of the original ''Frozen'' film. When Arendelle is visited by a group of warriors looking for an unnamed beast that has caused snow to settle across the kingdom, Elsa is initially suspicious, but even she could never have anticipated that the creature would be a dragon, the last of the Ice Furies (the female counterpart to Night Furies, capable of generating ice rather than firing plasma shots). Taming this dragon and naming her ‘Wintergale’, Elsa eventually [[spoiler:joins Valka Haddock at her nest to defend Valka’s rescued dragons from the forces of Drago Bludvist, just in time for Valka to be reunited with her son]]…
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10375537/1/Ice-Fury Ice Fury]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4728222/Piero217 Piero217]] is an AU crossover bringing together ''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' and ''Franchise/{{Frozen}}'', starting during the second season of ''WesternAnimation/DragonsRidersOfBerk'' and shortly after the events of the original ''Frozen'' film. When Arendelle is visited by a group of warriors looking for an unnamed beast that has caused snow to settle across the kingdom, Elsa is initially suspicious, but even she could never have anticipated that the creature would be a dragon, the last of the Ice Furies (the female counterpart to Night Furies, capable of generating ice rather than firing plasma shots). Taming this dragon and naming her ‘Wintergale’, Elsa eventually [[spoiler:joins Valka Haddock at her nest to defend Valka’s rescued dragons from the forces of Drago Bludvist, just in time for Valka to be reunited with her son]]…
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** A few years after Elsa sends Wintergale away [[spoiler:to live in Valka’s dragon sanctuary]], the dragon returns to Elsa for safety, setting in motion Elsa’s involvement in the war against Drago Bludvist
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** A few years after Elsa sends Wintergale away [[spoiler:to live in Valka’s dragon sanctuary]], the dragon returns to Elsa for safety, setting in motion Elsa’s Elsa's involvement in the war against Drago Bludvist
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* CrossoverRelatives: It's mentioned that [[WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel]] is Elsa and Anna's cousin.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: It's mentioned that [[WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel]] is Elsa and Anna's cousin.
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* TookALevelInBadass: While Elsa wasn't exactly a slouch in canon, through training with Valka and Wintergale she learns how to use her powers more offensively, and even creates a staff like Valka's that allows her to engage in battle without just using her powers to overwhelm everything.
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* TookALevelInBadass: While Elsa wasn't doesn't exactly start off a slouch in canon, to begin with, through training with Valka and Wintergale she learns how to use her powers more offensively, and even creates a staff like Valka's that allows her to engage in battle without just using her powers to overwhelm everything.
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* EvilCounterpart:
** Drago and Hiccup, as in the film.
** Also used for Eret and Sigurd; where Eret was a dragon trapper who reformed to join the riders, Sigurd is the hunter who came to Arendelle looking for Wintergale who proves to be a particularly ruthless member of Drago’s army, [[spoiler:nearly killing Elsa in the final battle before Wintergale returns and bites his head off]].
** Drago and Hiccup, as in the film.
** Also used for Eret and Sigurd; where Eret was a dragon trapper who reformed to join the riders, Sigurd is the hunter who came to Arendelle looking for Wintergale who proves to be a particularly ruthless member of Drago’s army, [[spoiler:nearly killing Elsa in the final battle before Wintergale returns and bites his head off]].
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* EvilCounterpart:
** Drago and Hiccup, as in the film.
** Also used forEvilCounterpart: Eret and Sigurd; where Eret was a dragon trapper who reformed to join the riders, Sigurd is the hunter who came to Arendelle looking for Wintergale who proves to be a particularly ruthless member of Drago’s army, [[spoiler:nearly killing Elsa in the final battle before Wintergale returns and bites his head off]].off]].
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%%Administrivia/ZeroContextExample** Drago and Hiccup, as in the film.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Fishlegs mentions a poem written by 'B. Blake' (''Film/TheSorcerersApprentice'') that appears to describe the mating dance of the Night Furies.
** As she [[spoiler:concludes her independent journey]], Elsa encounters an invisible spirit of snow (Jack Frost of ''WesternAnimation/RiseOfTheGuardians'').
** Fishlegs mentions a poem written by 'B. Blake' (''Film/TheSorcerersApprentice'') that appears to describe the mating dance of the Night Furies.
** As she [[spoiler:concludes her independent journey]], Elsa encounters an invisible spirit of snow (Jack Frost of ''WesternAnimation/RiseOfTheGuardians'').
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:
**{{Foreshadowing}}: Fishlegs mentions a poem written by 'B. Blake' (''Film/TheSorcerersApprentice'') that appears to describe the mating dance of the Night Furies. \n Later, [[spoiler: Toothless and Wintergale perform one together]].
%%Needs more context about how this fits in with later events.** As she [[spoiler:concludes her independent journey]], Elsa encounters an invisible spirit of snow (Jack Frost of ''WesternAnimation/RiseOfTheGuardians'').
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%%Needs more context about how this fits in with later events.** As she [[spoiler:concludes her independent journey]], Elsa encounters an invisible spirit of snow (Jack Frost of ''WesternAnimation/RiseOfTheGuardians'').
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* ShipperOnDeck: Elsa, Valka, and Hiccup all demonstrate their support for a relationship between Toothless and Wintergale, [[spoiler:with the rest of Berk expressing their own support for the idea of Toothless finding someone]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: ShipperOnDeck:
** Elsa, Valka, and Hiccup all demonstrate their support for a relationship between Toothless and Wintergale, [[spoiler:with the rest of Berk expressing their own support for the idea of Toothless finding someone]].
** Elsa, Valka, and Hiccup all demonstrate their support for a relationship between Toothless and Wintergale, [[spoiler:with the rest of Berk expressing their own support for the idea of Toothless finding someone]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: While Elsa wasn't exactly a slouch in canon, through training with Valka and Wintergale she learns how to use her powers more offensively, and even creates a staff like Valka's that allows her to engage in battle without just using her powers to overwhelm everything.
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* TookALevelInBadass: While Elsa wasn't exactly a slouch in canon, through training with Valka and Wintergale she learns how to use her powers more offensively, and even creates a staff like Valka's that allows her to engage in battle without just using her powers to overwhelm everything.everything.
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* ShoutOut: As well as the events of ''WesternAnimation/{{Frozen}}'' being tied in to the ''Defenders of Berk'' [[Recap/DragonsRidersOfBerkS2E14Frozen episode of the same name]], chapter 28 [[spoiler:has Hiccup restore Toothless' artificial tail-fin from ''WesternAnimation/GiftOfTheNightFury'' so that he can go on a mating flight with Wintergale]].
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* ShoutOut: As well as the events of ''WesternAnimation/{{Frozen}}'' ''WesternAnimation/Frozen2013'' being tied in to the ''Defenders of Berk'' [[Recap/DragonsRidersOfBerkS2E14Frozen episode of the same name]], chapter 28 [[spoiler:has Hiccup restore Toothless' artificial tail-fin from ''WesternAnimation/GiftOfTheNightFury'' so that he can go on a mating flight with Wintergale]].
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: It's mentioned that [[Disney/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel]] is Elsa and Anna's cousin.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: It's mentioned that [[Disney/{{Tangled}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel]] is Elsa and Anna's cousin.
