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** InexplicableTreasureChests: Taylor can put these in her dungeon. She initially has no interest in adding them, since they are an enormous drain on mana. Since dungeons get extra mana by killing adventurers, it's generally assumed the chests are meant as bait. [[spoiler: After she decides to allow a nearby village to move closer to her, she begins adding some loot chests in for them.]]

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** InexplicableTreasureChests: Taylor can put these in her dungeon. She initially has no interest in adding them, since they are an enormous drain on mana. Since dungeons get extra mana by killing adventurers, it's generally assumed the chests are meant as bait. [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After she decides to allow a nearby village to move closer to her, she begins adding some loot chests in for them.them, in trade for them regularly delving to supply her with mana.]]
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* CreepyGood: Even when the village is firmly satisfied that Taylor is an ally, her bugs remain frightening, by design.
--> The wasp's mandibles opened. Its wings buzzed rhythmically. It was a chuckle, but the overall effect was freaky enough to make him shudder. Wasps had a resting 'I'mma rip your face off' face, and having one doing that within arm grab of himself was… unsettling.

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* OrganDrops: When Taylor eventually gets some actual information about her pixie, it includes mention of the things a defeated pixie might drop. Taylor, who is very attached to her cute little contracted creature, immediately resolves to murder anyone who tries to kill it and take its wings.

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* NoodleIncident: Cirys and his friends have ended up in several scrapes as they explore their home city, but "the less said about the noodle shop incident, the better".
* OrganDrops: When Taylor eventually gets some actual information about her pixie, it includes mention of the things a defeated pixie might drop. Taylor, who is very attached to her cute little contracted creature, immediately resolves to murder anyone who tries to kill it and take rip its wings.wings off.
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** Deconstructed. Taylor was (apparently) given something that allows her to understand the language of the natives, as well as their writing. It works so well that she can't even see their written language as the words simply translate into English. It doesn't work both ways, though, which makes communication a problem.

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** Deconstructed. Taylor was (apparently) given something that allows her to understand the language of the natives, as well as their writing. It works so well that she can't even see their written language as the words simply translate into English. It doesn't work both ways, though, which makes communication a problem.problem; Taylor literally can't learn their language, because she never sees it.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Monsters who contract with a dungeon form a mutually beneficial relationship, where the contractors extend the dungeon's reach, and in turn they are strengthened when they complete its tasks. However, it is also possible for humans to form such contracts -- which allows both the human and dungeon to grow very quickly. Ulfric insists that contracts are not meant for humans and that the power invariably drives them mad. The official term is "warlock" and it carries an automatic death sentence.
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* WizardNeedsFoodBadly: Adding a room increases Taylor's mana capacity by 4, but also increases her daily expenses by 1. As a result, she becomes increasingly dependent on the villagers regularly challenging her monsters and topping her up, just to survive each dawn. Fortunately, since her growth and expansion also means she can provide them with more resources, they don't mind investing in her.
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** Taylor can change around her rooms, minions, and features, but only while there are no adventurers inside; she can't remake the dungeon while people are in it. However, see LoopholeAbuse below.

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* LoopholeAbuse: As Taylor finds out, there is an easy way for her to generate extra mana without fighting/killing people - kill the random beasties that lurk around her dungeon, then take their corpses into the said dungeon, which eats them and turns them into mana. [[spoiler:She also finds out that just sparring with adventurers gets her a fair amount of mana.]]
** A room has to have at least one entrance/exit open or the system takes action, but Taylor notes, and takes advantage of, that doesn't mean that she can't use her bugs to put fake walls over a door that someone is near as long as the other entrance is open. And the system only checks at certain intervals, so Taylor ''can'' briefly block all entrances to a room if need be.
*** Hallways do not have to be accessible on foot as long as the rooms they connect have a valid path for access. This lets Taylor make "bug chutes", hallways near the ceiling of select rooms that she stuffs with bugs, allowing her to rapidly redeploy her bugs or to attack from the rear or sides in a way not easily counterable.
*** [[spoiler:Once she figures out how to make wax-and-web walls, she also realizes she can selectively force people down certain paths by ensuring that there's always more than one way to get to a room, but then blocking the ones she doesn't want them to take. Because there is always ''a'' path to the room, the system doesn't punish her]].
*** [[spoiler:A room has to be accessible, but Taylor figures out that the entrance/exit can be a ''shortcut'' that leads to an '''entirely different floor'''. This lets her create a single disjointed room that can be accessed by the third floor, while her core is only accessible by a room on the ''second'' floor, hidden by illusions, and since her fourth four doesn't have a specialization, there's no clue to tell where the shortcut is]].

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As Taylor finds out, there is an easy way for her to generate extra mana without fighting/killing people - kill the random beasties that lurk around her dungeon, then take their corpses into the said dungeon, which eats them and turns them into mana. [[spoiler:She also finds out that just sparring with adventurers gets her a fair amount of mana.]]
** A room has to have at least one entrance/exit open or the system takes action, but as Taylor notes, and takes advantage of, that doesn't mean that she can't use her bugs to put fake walls over a door that someone is near as long as the other entrance is open. And the system only checks at certain intervals, so Taylor ''can'' briefly block all entrances to a room if need be.
*** Hallways do not have to be accessible on foot as long as the rooms they connect have a valid path for access. This lets Taylor make "bug chutes", hallways near the ceiling of select rooms that she stuffs with bugs, allowing her to rapidly redeploy her bugs or to attack from the rear or sides in a way not easily counterable.
*** [[spoiler:Once Once she figures out how to make wax-and-web [[spoiler:wax-and-web walls, she also realizes she can selectively force people down certain paths by ensuring that there's always more than one way to get to a room, but then blocking the ones she doesn't want them to take. Because there is always ''a'' path to the room, the system doesn't punish her]].
*** [[spoiler:A A room has to be accessible, but Taylor figures out that the [[spoiler:the entrance/exit can be a ''shortcut'' that leads to an '''entirely different floor'''. This lets her create a single disjointed room that can be accessed by the third floor, while her core is only accessible by a room on the ''second'' floor, hidden by illusions, and since her fourth four doesn't have a specialization, there's no clue to tell where the shortcut is]].
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* IShallTauntYou: Raffaa uses his Howling Rage ability to make a dire boar single him out and furiously charge at him -- right through a prepared field of magical ice, where the group is able to disrupt its footing and [[AttackItsWeakPoint reach its vulnerable underbelly]].
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If she hadn't realized 'fighting clean' wasn't exactly my thing, nor was it the thing of anyone who wanted to win, then she clearly needed more training.

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If she hadn't realized 'fighting clean' wasn't exactly my thing, nor was it the thing of anyone who wanted to win, ''win'', then she clearly needed more training.

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* CombatPragmatist: As far as Taylor is concerned, good sportsmanship gets hit on the head and dragged into an alley to have its throat cut and its pockets emptied.
--> Glancing up at the ceiling, she said, "That was ''dirty'', Taylor!"\\
If she hadn't realized 'fighting clean' wasn't exactly my thing, nor was it the thing of anyone who wanted to win, then she clearly needed more training.



* CrazyPrepared: Peotyr Medyrsjn, the King of Central, is stated to have "twenty contingency plans at all times, in case the first ten fail". [[spoiler:Fittingly, what ends up killing him is a chance encounter with a half-dead mercenary killing anyone he encounters]].



* CrazyPrepared: Peotyr Medyrsjn, the King of Central, is stated to have "twenty contingency plans at all times, in case the first ten fail". [[spoiler:Fittingly, what ends up killing him is a chance encounter with a half-dead mercenary killing anyone he encounters]].
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* DueToTheDead: When the villagers relocate to live near Taylor, she's taken aback to learn that many of them have held onto their loved ones' remains, waiting to feed them to a dungeon, which is apparently their custom. While the bodies are certainly valuable resources to her, she's unsure how she feels about eating their families.
--> '''Kamella:''' I prefer to look at this way: all these people who cared for and loved us are doing all they can to protect us, even in death.
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* OrganDrops: When Taylor eventually gets some actual information about her pixie, it includes mention of the things a defeated pixie might drop. Taylor, who is very attached to her cute little contracted creature, immediately resolves to murder anyone who tries to kill it and take its wings.

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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Pretty much every variety of pixie is considered a nuisance at worse, only a threat if they distract you from other monsters. The ones that cast illusions can only do so for a quarter of a second every four seconds and casting larger illusions tires them quickly. Meanwhile the ones that can control people by touch can only do so extremely briefly, are functionally mindless and wander aimlessly, and die upon using their ability. Taylor quickly figures out how to chain illusions to keep them up longer and that tiny illusions directly over someone's eyes aren't remotely tiring. As for the others, she can control them remotely to set traps, make people wander into traps, or simply attack their allies.

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Pretty much every variety of pixie is considered a nuisance at worse, only a threat if they distract you from other monsters. The ones that cast illusions can only do so for a quarter of a second every four seconds and casting larger illusions tires them quickly. Meanwhile the ones that can control people by touch can only do so extremely briefly, are functionally mindless and wander aimlessly, and die upon using their ability. Taylor quickly figures out how to chain illusions to keep them up longer and that tiny illusions directly over someone's eyes aren't remotely tiring. As for the others, she can control them remotely to set traps, make people wander into traps, or simply attack their allies.allies.
** She also suspects that she can get more than the usual mileage from mobile grasses.
---> To hear Ulfric talk, grasses were mostly good at incapacitation, and not much else. My own experience with powers that disabled or hindered opponents told me they were amongst the most dangerous that existed, if they were used properly. I had a feeling most dungeons weren't able to bring out the best from them.\\
I was not 'most dungeons'.
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* FertileFeet: The effect of a dungeon on local mana is such that Taylor's mere presence causes a desert wasteland to steadily turn into lush grassland.
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* {{Determinator}}: Taylor's situation as a dungeon is precarious, but that won't stop her from persevering.
--> In terms of strength, I was already beaten.\\
In terms of information, I knew nothing, and they knew everything.\\
In terms of stealth, I was a giant green blot in a desert.\\
In terms of evasion, I was completely immobile.\\
By most standards, it was hopeless.\\
Like I said earlier, familiar territory.
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* VictoriasSecretCompartment: One of the useful aspects of Maryk pretending to be a woman is the ability to carry small items inside a brassiere.
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* RedHerring: The king lights three out of five candles in his room in an unusual pattern, to give any foreign agents the impression that he's sending a message. In fact, the message is based on the position he leaves the matchbox in.

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* ATasteOfDefeat: Taylor is on both the giving and receiving end.
** Early on, a group of adventurers complete demolish her ants and easily reach her core, only sparing her because dungeons are valuable and she isn't a threat. A short while later, [[OurFairiesAreDifferent a pixie]] does the same thing ''on its own''. Fortunately, it just wants to make a contract with her.
** When the adventurers come back, [[spoiler:Taylor easily defeats one of them (Gwen) in a mock battle. Gwen is grateful that Taylor didn't kill her]].
** [[spoiler:In Exploit 4.5, Ulfric leads a team of experienced adventurers in utterly ''annihilating'' Atlas, showing Taylor just what kind of opposition she'll face in the future]], and how far she has to go before she can reliably stop even a single party of elite adventurers.

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* ATasteOfDefeat: Taylor AssassinationAttempt: The king is pragmatic enough to keep his living chambers securely on both the giving ground, instead of higher up.
--> According to tradition, it should have been at the top of the central tower, the highest point of the building, a beautiful
and receiving end.
** Early on, a group of adventurers complete demolish her ants and easily reach her core, only sparing her because dungeons are valuable and she isn't a threat. A short while later, [[OurFairiesAreDifferent a pixie]] does the same thing ''on its own''. Fortunately, it just wants to make a contract
luxurious room with her.
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an incomparable view of the adventurers come back, [[spoiler:Taylor easily defeats one countryside, but as his predecessor had fallen to his death after a mysterious failure of them (Gwen) in a mock battle. Gwen is grateful that Taylor didn't kill her]].
** [[spoiler:In Exploit 4.5, Ulfric leads a team of experienced adventurers in utterly ''annihilating'' Atlas, showing Taylor just what kind of opposition she'll face in
the future]], and how far she has thaumaturgic elevator, Medyrsjn thought it wise to go before she can reliably stop even relocate his sleeping quarters to a single party of elite adventurers.more ''grounded'' location.


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* ATasteOfDefeat: Taylor is on both the giving and receiving end.
** Early on, a group of adventurers complete demolish her ants and easily reach her core, only sparing her because dungeons are valuable and she isn't a threat. A short while later, [[OurFairiesAreDifferent a pixie]] does the same thing ''on its own''. Fortunately, it just wants to make a contract with her.
** When the adventurers come back, [[spoiler:Taylor easily defeats one of them (Gwen) in a mock battle. Gwen is grateful that Taylor didn't kill her]].
** [[spoiler:In Exploit 4.5, Ulfric leads a team of experienced adventurers in utterly ''annihilating'' Atlas, showing Taylor just what kind of opposition she'll face in the future]], and how far she has to go before she can reliably stop even a single party of elite adventurers.
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--> That the children and toddlers they put to the flame had nothing to do with the vast armies that had once conquered their lands was an insignificant detail.
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* FemmeFatale: The Velthian ambassadress has an impressive and attractive figure, with an outfit designed more to accentuate it than cover it, but the king "wouldn't bed her for all the wealth in Velthia." In fact, he has already refused such an offer, considering her "A beautiful poisonous flower".
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Duke Geilr makes a plea for more aid to be sent to his people, but he doesn't actually know anything about it himself.
--> He would have been more convincing, the king told himself, if he hadn't been calling out famine with a protruding belly and complaining about poverty while covered in gold and jewels.

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* CueTheFlyingPigs: Ulfric declares that if Kamella can actually convince the dungeon to coexist peacefully instead of murdering all comers, then he'll shave his beard off. By the time Tyr returns to the village, Ulfric is beardless.
--> "Wait, it ''worked''?" Tyr asked in disbelief.\\
Ulfric just grunted.



* PuppyDogEyes: Taylor's first pixie unleashes the full force of its oversized eyes ''becoming sad'' in an effort to persuade her to build a Pixie Fountain. Unfortunately Taylor just doesn't have the necessary resources yet.
--> ...but I swore I would, as soon as I could.


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* PuppyDogEyes: Taylor's first pixie unleashes the full force of its oversized eyes ''becoming sad'' in an effort to persuade her to build a Pixie Fountain. Unfortunately Taylor just doesn't have the necessary resources yet.
--> ...but I swore I would, as soon as I could.
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* ZergRush: Despite Taylor having only weak monsters, Ulfric is intimidated by her ability to control all of them at once, which dungeons don't normally do.
--> '''Ulfric:''' There's strength in numbers, and whoever goes in there hoping to hurt this dungeon isn't just going to be facing numbers, they'll be facing an organized ''army'', working on terrain specially prepared to fight in by a single mind that has perfect awareness of every movement they're trying to make. They'd have a chance only because it doesn't have anything stronger than a lesser insect right now, but the moment it starts growing stronger…
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** The InternalReveal that [[spoiler:the dungeon has a human mind and memories]] is quite unsettling.

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** The InternalReveal that [[spoiler:the dungeon has a human mind and memories]] is quite unsettling.unsettling, prompting a round of swearing followed by a decision that INeedADrink.

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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: When Taylor loses her first three ants in moments and is left defenceless, "I was pretty sure the language I was using would have caused Skidmark to blink. And possibly give me pointers."

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When Taylor loses her first three ants in moments and is left defenceless, "I was pretty sure the language I was using would have caused Skidmark to blink. And possibly give me pointers.""
** The InternalReveal that [[spoiler:the dungeon has a human mind and memories]] is quite unsettling.
---> Ulfric's curses this time were in low Khanite, a vernacular far too vulgar for Kamella to have paid much attention to.
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* DungeonBypass: During her experimentation, Taylor creates a small passage connecting one of her rooms directly to her core hallway, which she recognises would normally be a bad idea -- but in this case, the point is to provide a storage area plus shortcut for her own minions.
--> That's why I would cram it ''full of wasps and spiders''.
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* PuppyDogEyes: Taylor's first pixie unleashes the full force of its oversized eyes ''becoming sad'' in an effort to persuade her to build a Pixie Fountain. Unfortunately Taylor just doesn't have the necessary resources yet.
--> ...but I swore I would, as soon as I could.
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* ARareSentence: Being a dungeon brings Taylor a lot of new experiences.
--> If they were going to use my magical fertilizer powers, then I was at least allowed to steal a few chickens.\\
And that line went straight in the list of 'things I'd never expected to say, ever'.
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* HappinessInSlavery: Taylor is bemused by her pixie being keen on a contract of servitude, to the point of being willing to fight to get it.
--> As I watched it toil from the entrance of my dungeon, I mused that for an intruder who had just made its way into my dungeon, threatened my existence and forced a contract out of me, that pixie was an awfully earnest worker.

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