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* IGotBigger: All of the male characters, notably
**Makomo notes that Sabito, Giyuu, and Kyojuro are all very large and tall once they reach mid-to-late teen years, and even bigger as adults.
**Makomo notes that Sabito, Giyuu, and Kyojuro are all very large and tall once they reach mid-to-late teen years, and even bigger as adults.
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* Reincarnation: It's a self-insert OC fic. What were you expecting?
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*VagueAge: Urokodaki. Even his kids don't know how old he is.
**[[spoiler: when Urokodaki tells Makomo about his life story, he mentions having fought against the shogunate. This implies that he had been a soldier during the 1860s.]]
**[[spoiler: when Urokodaki tells Makomo about his life story, he mentions having fought against the shogunate. This implies that he had been a soldier during the 1860s.]]
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Despite Makomo's battle IQ and general intelligence, she is dense when it comes to romance. She doesn't understand why Sabito and Giyuu get upset when she keeps talking about Kyojuro's testicles, and explicitly asks why two teenagers would want to sneak away to be together.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Despite Makomo's battle IQ and general intelligence, she is dense when it comes to romance. She romance.
**She doesn't understand why Sabito and Giyuu get upset when she keeps talking about Kyojuro's testicles, and explicitly asks why two teenagers would want to sneak away to betogether.together.
**Shinobu says that the Butterfly Mansion stores condoms, and Makomo is confused over the wording of "rubbers" and asks what rubber has to do with a relationship
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**Makomo is heavily synesthetic. Her narration relies heavily on metaphor because that's how she sees the world, which also relates to her vision-based metapowers. The 1st Person POV assists in the narrative voice.
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* Coming of Age Story: All the kids at the beginning of the story grow up, in their bodies and in maturity.
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''I See the Ocean''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36097459/chapters/89986465]] by lulu_lisbon[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lulu_lisbon/pseuds/lulu_lisbon]] is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/DemonSlayerKimetsuNoYaiba?from=Anime.DemonSlayerKimetsuNoYaiba]] involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki Sakonji.
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* Link to the author's tumblr page, which contains Makomo art.[[https://i-hate-mushrooms.tumblr.com/]]
* Link to the author's "rambling" page, which contains Makomo short stories.[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39214545/chapters/98115846]]
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com/ Here]] is the author's tumblr page, which contains Makomo art.
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* {{Adaptational Badass}}:
** In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' Makomo has enhanced eyesight.
*** In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]]
*** Makomo can see through thin materials like shoji doors and eye masks.
* {{An Arm and a Leg}}:
** [[spoiler:Douma rips off Makomo's right arm.]]
** In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' Makomo has enhanced eyesight.
*** In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]]
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* {{Art Attacker}}:
** Synesthetic imagery and other literary devices are used to supplement Makomo's enhanced vision and predictive ability.
* {{Awesomeness by Analysis}}:
** Makomo learns by watching. By observing natural weather phenomena, this leads to the creation of [[spoiler:storm breathing]].
* {{Badass Family}}:
** The Urokodaki family currently consists of Makomo, Sabito, and Giyuu, who are all noted to be very strong within the demon slayer community.
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* {{Face on the Cover}}:
** Makomo's face is drawn a lot.
*** Makomo's late teenage/early adult looks are inspired by K-pop idol Minji of NewJeans, as proclaimed by the author.
* {{Fatal Flaw}}:
** Makomo is consistently overconfident and a paranoid coward at the same time. This results in her keeping her foreknowledge a secret from mission planning, which then directly results in [[spoiler:her losing an arm]].
* {{First-Name Basis}}:
** Sabito and Giyuu panic over the fact that Makomo and Kyojuro are on a first-name basis. Hijinks ensue.
* {{Gone Horribly Wrong}}:
** Tengen and Kanae lead a mission with Makomo and Shinobu as their support to verify rumours of Upper Moon activity. However, [[spoiler:Douma]] takes an unexpected deviation in the route and confronts the two girls instead of the two Hashiras.
* {{Gut Punch}}:
** Makomo [[spoiler:loses an arm]] and thus loses the ability [[spoiler:to raise her arm above the shoulder or move it fast, despite it being reattached]]. This deviates from common self-insert tropes, as most of them do not mess with a standard self-insert formula.
* {{Its Personal}}:
** Shinobu becomes outwardly emotional and aggressive in chapter 11 due to [[spoiler:Douma scarring her sister's face and almost killing her]] and [[spoiler:when he dismembers her best friend]]
* {{Living Weapon}}:
** The demons are not to be messed around with.
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*** [[spoiler:Douma]] is implied to enjoy hunting women in more than one way.
** Medical gore and violation, with extreme detail
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** Makomo tells cringey jokes to Sabito.
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** Makomo misses the 21st century's internet because of porn access.
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**Ex-Thunder Hashira Kuwajima Jigoro lost his leg in battle many years ago.
*{{Awesomeness by Analysis}}:
**Makomo learns by watching. By observing natural weather phenomena, this leads to the creation of [[spoiler:storm breathing]].
**Makomo learns by watching. By observing natural weather phenomena, this leads to the creation of [[spoiler:storm breathing]].
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**Makomo jokingly flirts with Zenitsu to get him to train under Kuwajima.
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**Uzui and Kanae's tag teaming, holding off Douma during [[spoiler:when Kanae was supposed to die in canon]].
**Makomo's two year training hiatus.
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''I See the Ocean''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36097459/chapters/89986465]] by lulu_lisbon[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lulu_lisbon/pseuds/lulu_lisbon]] is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki Sakonji.
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''I See the Ocean''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36097459/chapters/89986465]] by lulu_lisbon[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lulu_lisbon/pseuds/lulu_lisbon]] is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba Yaiba[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/DemonSlayerKimetsuNoYaiba?from=Anime.DemonSlayerKimetsuNoYaiba]] involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki Sakonji.
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art.[[https://i-hate-mushrooms.tumblr.com/]]
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stories.[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39214545/chapters/98115846]]
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''I See the Ocean'' by [[LuluLisbon]] is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki Sakonji.
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''I See the Ocean'' Ocean''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36097459/chapters/89986465]] by [[LuluLisbon]] lulu_lisbon[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lulu_lisbon/pseuds/lulu_lisbon]] is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki Sakonji.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki Sakonji.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon [[LuluLisbon]] is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki Sakonji.